virika scene after virika fight of swamini bua!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is my first fanfiction so i hope u like it and ideas are accepted!

It was the night when Swamini bua got a mini heart attack, Viren had told Jeevika to get out of this house because he didn't want to see her face after telling his bua the truth even thought he said not to. But little did he know what was the reason why Jeevika was forced to tell.

V- just get lost jeevika mein tumhari shakal tak nahi dekh na chata.
J-Virenji meri baat to suno
V-there is nothing left to listen you told bua after u promised you wouldn't and you broke the promise. Viren insulted and said very bad things to Jeevika when she was at no fault.
J-Bas Virenji Bas. bahut bol liya apne ab mein bolungi aur ap sonuge meri majburi yeh ti ke swamini bua ne mere parents ki insult ki. Aur to aur unhe meri upbringing pe ungli uthai isliye mein ne bol diya. Jeevika went running out the room with leaving a shocked viren behind. He was thinking how he doubted his jeevika. He ran behind then he saw her getting in the car and driving very fast. He took the other car and went behind her. he tried calling her but she kept rejecting. she wasn't looking ahead only at the ringing phone when a big truck was coming she noticed when the headlight came on her face viren screamed JEEVIKAAA!!!! she tried controlling the brake but the brake wouldn't work so she turned the steering wheel and hit a big tree with a great bang. Viren ran out the car seeing jeevika bleeding on her head badly but he didn't notice the foot had a big fracture. He put her in the car and drove to the hospital.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2:
At city hospital
Jeevika was admitted into the hospital and evey second seemed like a day for Viren he called Virat and told him what happen Virat came running to the hospital with the family swamini bua felt disgusted that evwryone went to check on her son's murder and decided to punish jeevika. Everyone were waiting while the doctor came out of o.t and told everyone that jeevika was fine just a head injury and a foot injury. At that time swamini came in and pretended to apologize to everyone and told everyone she wantes to meet jeevika alone everyone agreed. As soon as swamini opened the door ahe saw jeevika with a oxygen mask and a glucose drip on jeevika. First swamini made sure there was no one looking then she took off the mask jeevika started breathing heavily and then swamini stopped the drip which viren saw and tried running to jeevika but swamini stopped him and said if he went to jeevika she would kill jeevika viren not caring screamed the doctors name the doctor came running fixing her mask and drip. Viren asked how is jeevika and doctor said her bp went down we need to monitor her tonight if her bp comes to normal then she could go home next week.


Tell me how it was give me ideas tell me if i should update!!likes and comments please thanks!!!!
Edited by Ritika_101 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3:
While the doctor was fixing jeevika's drip and oxygen mask viren dragged Swamini bua out the room and told her that Jeevika was at no fault. As he showed her the video Swamini felt bad that all this happent because of her. She was about to say sorry when her ego came in the way and said jeevika was a murder and she will never forgive her. Saying that Swamini left the hospital and went home. As soon as she left the docrtor came out.

Viren: Doctor jeevika kaise hai??? Woh thik toh hojaigye na??
Doctor: relax Mr.Vadhera apki wife bilkul thik hai aur in a hour or so she will regain conscious.
Everyone thanked god and viren asked if he could meet jeevika and doctor gave him permission not even wasting a second viren ran in the room. Everyone could see how tensed he was for jeevika after all she was his life.

As soon as viren entered he saw a big band-aid on jeevika's head and a cast on her left foot. He felt really bad he was blaming himself for this accident he sat there and a few tears escaped through his eyes. after a few minutes viren fell asleep while he was sitting but his head was on the bed and his hand holding her hand in a hour and a half virat came in and checked on viren and jeevika he went and sat on the other side of the bed he started speqking to jeevika even though she wasn't listening.

Virat: bhabi bhai ki halat toh dekhye kitne weak hain unhe kuch nahi kahya jabse accident hua hai. Babhi dekhiye manvi ka phone tha kal raat ko wo hospital aap ko dekh ne aayri hai aur wo apki favorite dish la rhi hai guess karo chalo mein baata detha hoon woh la rhi hai apka favorite... dosa apke favorite restaurant se jo hrihikesh mein hai. Virat couldn't control himself and started crying he saw a movement in her hand and yelled for the doctor because of the noise viren woke up with a jerk.

PRECAP:virika sweet and cute conversation <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4:
Recap: virat was talking to jeevika then felt a movement in her hand.

Virat:Doctor Doctor Bhabhi ne abhi apna haat hilaya.
by that time viren was already awake and was only looking at jeevika she opened her eyes but when the doctor came by her she closed them again.
Viren:Doctor abhi abhi jeevika ne abhi abhi apni ankhe (eyes) kholi liken wapes band kar di trust me she just opened them.
Doctor: i know what your trying to say i saw her opening and closing her eyes. After checking her the doctor said as i thought. Viren got even more scared.

Virat: Doctor aap bolna kya chathe hain?
Doctor: Mr. Vadhera mere pas ek question hai kabhi Apki wife ka pehle accident hua tha ke unke ankle mein kuch hua tha?
Viren remembered when jeevika fell in the jungle and said yes her foot got stuck in a animal trap aur uspe injury ayi thi.
Doctor:Hmmm...
virat:kya hua doctor?
Doctor: Mujhe lagta hai foot pe phir se injury ayi na toh usse unka foot paralyzed ho gya lekin hosh anke bad pata chalega agar inka foot thik ho sakta hai ya nai.
After 30 minutes jeevika's eyes opened again and this time she said vir... viren ji. viren was not there but a nurse was who came to check on jeevika the nurse asked who is viren and viren said me the nurse said your wife regained conscious nad you could meet her. Viren thanked her and went inside.he saw jeevika and she smiled but when she remembered what he said to her at home her smile faded and she looked away. Viren felt so bad he went to her and said:

Viren: IM SORRY Mrs. Jeevika Viren Singh Vadhera she still didn't look at him.Jeevika im sorry please don't look away i know i don't deserve you but still im sorry i should have listened to you. i hope that i was in the car instead of you. Jeevika covered his mouth and said mafi (apologize) ke liye aap bahut acting kar lete hain. its okay Mr.vadhera Mrs. Jeevika Viren Singh Vadhera has decided to forgive Mr. Viren Singh Vadhera. and smiled.

Jeevika tried getting up but her foot wasn't moving viren remembered why she asked virenji why cant i move my foot? Viren's voice cracked while telling her the story but he told her the doctor has to check if it could be cured. And what if it can't am i going to be a burden for you? jeevika be quiet be positive and you will never be a burden for me ever do you understand me? Jeevika said yes and felt so happy to have a life partner like viren .


Please tell me how it was comment actually im having a competition with my sister and my sister is doing her ff on ishra named "Ishra milan: after seven years 5 shots" her username is Cjuneja99 so she has views 2,884 and i have 115 so please tell other people and i will continue my story until u tell me to thank you!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
omg such a nice ff. i so hope that virika come back on tv. your a amazing writer please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
it was nice
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Part 5:
The doctor came inside the room and made jeevika do some therapy for her foot to see if her foot could be cured. After completing the phases of the therapy the doctor told virika something shocking...

Doctor:Mr and Mrs.Vadhera humhe pata chala hai ke operation kar ke inka foot theek ho saakta hai.

viren let out a sigh and jeevika thanked god.

Doctor: we will make the arrangements of the operation and the operation will start in a hour or so.

Jeevika: Virenji mein baata nahi sakte ki mein kitni kush hoon. Mujhe laga ke mein kabhi nahi chal paungi.

Viren: Jeevika tum kese nahi chal paugi jab koi kuch ganda kam karta hai to bhagvan unhe punishment detehain.

Jeevika: Aur meri galti thi ke I told buaji the truth and broke your promise.

Viren: Jeevika agar tumne firse apne aap ko blame kia tou mein tumshe kabhi baat nahi karunga.

Jeevika: Nahi Virenji im sorry while holding her ears.
viren found that very cute but decided to tease her more. he said no im not forgiving you and she starting crying. Viren didn't know she would start crying and then said im sorry jeevika i thought of teasing you but you took it seriously im sorry im sorry. Jeevika forgave him and hugged him before going in the o.t

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