Kuchh Rang Pyar ke Aise bhii - RaiNa ff thread 1 - Page 71

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Amazing!!

I feel so sad for Ragini..
Waiting for Naina's return to india..
Pls cont soon



Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waoo chandu ...
Too good yr ...
Sorry late read krne k liye but u know na health ki thori fight chal rai hai mere sath . . . aj thori better thi toh apki story read kr li. ...
I hope u understand ...
Waiting for next ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Komalbubly

Waoo chandu ...

Too good yr ...
Sorry late read krne k liye but u know na health ki thori fight chal rai hai mere sath . . . aj thori better thi toh apki story read kr li. ...
I hope u understand ...
Waiting for next ...
Continue soon ...


Thanks komu
N yes I know firstly take care of ur self :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Haii dear,
Back to back two update.
Finally u are back. Well done dear.
Two updates were awesome.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome updates.. Loved it.. Continue soon & thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome. Too good to comments.
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thanks everyone for liking and commenting on part 18... here is part 19 enjoy...
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*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***
Part 19

ragini:- naina... tum theek ho na...?

naina( looking in front):- ragini... yeh ek tarfa pyar bahut azeeb hota hai na... yeh auro ki tarah do logon me nahi bat- ta... iski hasi... iski khushi... iske gum.. iske aanshu... har ek cheez pe sirf usi insaan ka haq hota hai... jisne pyar kiya hai... (ragini naina ko apni ore turn karti hai...)...

ragini:- yeh tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho naina... mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki... ( tabhi kitty aati hai...)...

kitty:- hey naina... r u ok baby...?

naina:- i m ok kitty... ( wiping her tears... n smiles...) bas kisi ki yaad aa gayi thi...

kitty:- must be your love right...?( naina smiles)

naina:- achha ists getting very late yar... kal mujhe bahut kaam hai... day after tom i have to leave to india... so lets go...

kitty:- naina... we will miss u baby... mujhe apni shadi pe invite karogi na,,,?

naina:- ofcrz kitty tum dono aa rahe ho... ( ragini smiles...) so chale...?

teeno chali jati hai... pehle dono kitty ko uske ghar drop karti hai... fir ragini naina ko uske hotel then apne ghar jati hai... raat bhar ragini sirf naina ke bare me soch rahi thi... naina ki un baton ne uski aankhon ne ragini ke ander kai sawaal chhod diye the... kyuki aaj ragini ne naina ki aankhon me wahi ehsaas dekha tha... waisa hi mehsoos kia tha... jo kabhi usne rajveer ki aankhon me dekha tha... yahi sab sochte - sochte ragini so gayi...

next day...

agla din bhi aise hi beet gaya... rajveer apne kaam me busy tha... to shalu aur yudi shalu ki treatment me... aalekh bani ko lekar pareshan tha... to bani bhi apne dil aur dimaag ki ladai me busy thi... ritu ka din to sirf yeh soch kar beeta ki naina ke wapas aane par use kya karna hai... to naina ka pura din last proceedings of work aur shopping me beet gaya...

next day,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

kuchh ghanto ke baad naina ki flight thi... kitty nahi aa pai... but ragini aai thi naina ko airport drop karne ke liye... abhi dono hi naina ke room me baithi hai... bas kuchh hi der me dono ko nikalna tha... dono hi bed me agal bagal baithi thi...

ragini:- naina if u dont mind mujhe tumse kuchh puchhna tha...?

naina:- ha puchho na...

ragini;- kya raj tumse pyar nahi karta...?

naina:- ragini yeh tum...

ragini;-bolo naina mujhe aisa kyun mehsoos ho raha hai ki...

naina:- ragini raj ki life me mujhse pehle koi aur tha... he loved some one... par ab wo ladki raj ki life me nahi hai.. unhe time lagega... aaj tak unhone mujhse nahi kaha ki that he loves me...

ragini:- naina... par tum toh...?

naina(uth kar window ke pass chali gayi...):- ha ragini main karti hun... bahut pyar karti hu main unhe... par yakeen mano ragini main karna nahi chahti thi... par pata nahi kab aur kaise unhe chahne lagi... ab to itna ki unke begair kuchh soch hi nahi sakti... kab meri zindagi... meri hasi... meri khushi... unki hasi aur khushi ki mohtaaz ho gayi mujhe pata hi nahi chala...( naina turns n find ragini in tears...) are ragini... tumhe kya hua...

ragini:- kitani azeeb baat hai na naina... jise tum chahti ho... wo tumhe nahi chahta par phir bhi tum dono sath ho... wo tumhare pyar ki izzat karta hai.,... par maine to apne pyar ko thukraya tha... jab wo meri zindagi me tha... maine uski aur uske pyar ki koi kadra nahi ki... aur ab sab kuchh kho chuki hun... ( naina ragini ke pass akar uske bagal me baith jati hai... aur uska hath apne hath me leti hai...)

naina:- ragini yeh jo pyar hota hai na... bahut hi paagal hota hai... jitna mujhe pata hai... agar usne sachhe dil se tumhe chaha tha toh aaj bhi uske dil me tum hogi...

ragini( with sarcas smile):- maine use dard ke siwa kuchh nahi dia naina... woh mujhe nafarat karta tha,,, aur aaj bhi karta hoga...

naina:- phir bhi ho to tum hi na... ( ragini looks at naina with confused expressions)... aise mat dekho... tum hi ne kaha na ki sayad aaj bhi wo tumse nafarat karta hoga... to nafarat ban kar hi sahi aaj bhi uske dil ke kisi kone me tum hogi... kya pata kab uski yeh nafarat wapas pyar me badal jaaye... kosis karo use paane ki... pyar aur nafart sikke ke do pehlu hai... jinse hum pyar karte hai... unhi se nafarat bhi karte hai...( ragini kuchh sochte hue... window ke pass chali jati hai)...

ragini:- nahi naina itna asaan nahi hai... kya pata ab wo apni zindagi me aage badh gaya ho... uski shadi ho gayi ho... uski familyho... aur jahan tak uska sawaal hai... toh ha maine bahut pehle ek bar pata karne ki kosis ki thi... wo badal gaya hai naina... puri tarah badal gaya hai... jis chehre pe kabhi sirf muskaan hua karti thi... ab wo hasta nahi... zindagi ko jeeta nahi hai...

naina:- toh tum use jeena sikhaao... apne pyar se use pehle ki tarah bana do... maine pehle bhi kaha tha... abhi bhi wahi kahungi tumhe apni galati ka ehsaas hai... wahi kafi hai ragini... wo tumhe manf kar dega... aur tumhe aisa lagta hai... ki wo aage badh chuka hoga... ek baar kosis toh karo ho sakta hai... wo aaj bhi wahi khada ho... jahan barso pehle tum use chhod kar chali gayi thi...

ragini:- kya itna asaan hoga uske liye... naina farz karo kabhi aisa mauka ya lamha tumhari zindagi me aaye... tumhara raj tumse manfi mange... to kya tum manf kar paogi... agar raj meri jagah hota... kya tum raj ko manf kar pati...

naina (kuchh soch kar):- ha ragini... main manf kar deti... kyuki main pyar karti hu unse... ha agar raj ko apni galati ka ehsaas na hota to sayad na kar paati... but raj ko apni galti ka ehsaas hai... to main unhe manf kar dungi... kyuki pyar jo hai... ( ragini smiles)...

ragini:- tum kabhi umeed nahi chhodti na...

naina:- nahi kyuki yeh ek ummeed hi toh hai... jo hume zinda rakhe hai... main isi umeed par to aaj zinda hu ki ek din raj mujhe kahenge ki naina i love u... main nahi jee sakta tumhare bina... aur agar wo din meri zinadagi ka aakhiri din bhi hua na... to bhi mujhe koi afsos nahi hoga... kyuki main puri hokar is duniyaan se jaa paaungi...

ragini( naina ka hath pakad kar):- thanks naina... main apne pyar ko paane ki puri kosis karungi... aur bhagwaan se dua karungi ki tumhe sari khusiyaan mile... tumhe tumahara pyar mil jaye... jispe sirf tumhara haq hoga... ( both smiles n hugs...)

naina:- achha ab chale... i m getting late... ( ragini naina ko airport drop karti hai... aur naina india laut aati hai...)...

next day morning...

naina airport par rajveer aur naveen ka intezaar kar rahi thi... thodi der baad naveen aur rajveer dono aate hai... dono ko dekh kar naina ki aankh num ho gayi thi...kyuki uske saamne uski zindagi ke do sabse jyada important loge the...dono naina ka welcome karte hai... rajveer dil se khush tha naina ko itane din baad dekh kar.. use ajeeb bhi laga... but as usual he ignored... aur office chala gaya... naveen naina ko ghar drop karke... apne office chala gaya... ghar aakar naina sabse milti hai... ritu ko ragini ke bare me bhi batati hai... ki how they spend good quality time... phir sabko gifts deti hai... aur rest karke sham ko shekhawat vila chali jati hai...jahan ishita living room me thi... aur yudi shalu se kuchh bate kar raha tha...

naina:- hi all...

ishita;- are naina... tum kab aai beta... ( naina aakar ishita ke pair chhuti hai...)... aur kaisi hai meri bahu...?

naina:- main aaj subah hi aai... aur main bilkul theek hu aunty... aap kaise hai...?

ishita;- main bhi bilkul theek... aur yeh kya... abhi bhi aunty... veer mujhe mom kehta hai...

naina:- ok but main aapko mom nahi... balki ma kahungi... jo main apni ma ko kehti thi... ( ishita smiles,,, and both hugs...)... ( to shalu.) hi di kaisi hai aap ab... n hello dr sahni... raj ne mujhe aapke bare me bataya tha... ab di ki kya progress hai.,...

yudi:- hello naina ji... shalini physically bilkul theek hai... aur mentally pehle se 40% recovery hui hai... m 100% sure kuchh dino me shalini bilkul theek ho jayegi...

naina:- sach dr bas aap di ko theek kar dijiye... aap nahi jaante yeh mere liye kya hai... ( shalu ka hath pakad kar...) di maine aapko raj ki nahi apni badi behen mana hai... plzz hum sab ke liye jaldi theek ho jaao... ( ishita naina ke soulder pe hath rakhti hai...)...

ishita:-jabse... yudi shalu ka treatment kar rahe hai... mujhe pura yakeen hai ki humari shalu jaldi theek ho jayegi...

yudi:- ofcrz... she has to... achha aunty main abhi chalta hun... wo mujhe hospital me kuchh kam hai... wo ek patient ko dekhna hai... aage ka main kal continue karunga...

ishita;- ok beta...

yudi:- bye naina ji...

naina:- bye... ( yudi left) achha ma... yeh lijiye... maine sabke liye gifts liye hai...

ishita:- are iski kya jarurat thi...

viren ( ander aate hue...):- are kyun jarurat nahi thi... humari bahu pehli baar humare liye kuchh lekar aayi hai... main to bahut excited hu janne ke liye ki kya hai... ( naina smiles aur jakar viren ke pair chhuti hai...)

naina:- kaise hai aap papa...?

viren:- kaisa dikh raha hun...?

naina:- hmm... pehle se aur bhi jyada smart,fit aur handsome...

viren:- dekha ishu... maine pehle hi kaha tha.. ki i m absolutly fit n fine... aur tum ho ki...

ishita:- naina yeh kya keh dia tumne ab yeh apne cholestrol ka bilkul bhi dhyaan nahi rakhenge... kuchh bhi khayeinge...

viren:- aisa kuchh nahi hai... meri bahu ne keh dia na ki main bilkul fit hu to m fit...

ishita:-aap na... achha aap akele... veer kaha hai...?

viren:- aapke sahab jaade meeting me busy the... to main akela hi aa gaya... waise thodi der me aata hi hoga... yeh kaka kaha hai... humari bahu aayi hai... kuchh pakode sakode ho jaaye...

ishita:- wo market gaye hai... main banati hu...

viren:- are waah aaj to maja hi aa jayega... naina beta tum daily aaya karo mujhe ishu ke hath ke pakode khane ko milenge... (naina smiles...)...

ishita;- achha aur aapka cholestrol aur bp...

naina:- right... and no way papa... aur rahi baat aapke cholestrol ki to shadi ke baad aapke diet ka full khayaal main rakhungi... kuchh bhi galat khaane ko nahi milne waala... kyun ma...

ishita:- right...

ishita aur naina kitchen me chale jate hai... viren shalu ko uske room me leke jata hai... ki thodi der baad rajveer aata hai... aur kisi ko hall me na dekh kar apne room me chala jata hai... thodi der baad ishita naina ko rajveer ke room me pakode leke bhejti hai... aur khud shalu ke room me chali gayi...

viren:- naina kahan hai...?

ishita:- wo veer aa gaya hai to usi pass bheja hai... itane din dono sath nahi the to maine socha kuchh waqt sath me bita lenge... yeh lijiye aap khaiye... aur shalu yeh le tere fav capsicum ke pakode...

viren:- achha kia... smart mom... ( both smiles)

rajveer's room...

rajveer apne bed me baitha ek file dekh raha tha ki naina aake usse wo file le leti hai...

rajveer:- are mom... naina tum...?

naina:- main aapko ma dikh rahi hun...?

rajveer:- are nahi woh... achha tum kab aayi...

naina:- bahut time ho gaya hai... achha yeh sab chhodiye aur yeh lijiye aapke fav pakode aur chai... ( dono jakar sofe pe baithte hai... raj pakode ki ek bite leta hai..)

rajveer:- hmm its tastey mom ne banaye na...?

naina:- ha... ma ne hi banaye hai...

rajveer:- achha yeh batao paris kaisa laga...

naina:- hmm.. bahut achha... aur kaam bhi achhe se ho gaya... i won the contact too...

rajveer:- hmm nice... m happy u enjoyed it...

naina:- ha... par agar ragini aur kitty nahi hote na to main pak jati... wahan koi apna tha hi nahi na... (ragini naam sunte hi raj chai peete - peete ruk jata hai...)...

rajveer:- yeh ragini kaun hai...?

naina (with smiling face...):- ragini aur kitty... wahan mere bahut achhe frnds ban gaye the... waise ragini ko to main pehle se jaanti thi... wo na bhabhi ki cousin sister hai... par jyada baat nahi hoti thi... par yeh time unke sath bahut achha guzra... bahut achhi hai dono... specially ragini kisi ka dard pal me pehchaan leti hai... sabki khushi ka khayaal hai use... but uske sath bahut bura hua...

rajveer ( rajveer ko azeeb lag raha tha... but fir chai ki sip lete hu bola):- aisa kya hua hai uske sath...?

naina:- u know what raj... i felt really bad for her... wo kisi se bahut pyar karti hai... but uska pyar uske sath nahi hai... maine kaha bhi bhool kar aage badho... to usne kaha ki uske bas me nahi hai... sach hi to kaha hai usne... pyar sach me kisi ke bas me nahi hota... hai na...??

rajveer:- hmm... ( in his mind) main bhi na... yeh wo ragini ho hi nahi sakti... wo to sirf dard aur nafarat dena janti thi... kisi ke jajbaato ki use kadra kaha thi...

naina:- accha raj... yeh sab chhodiye... aur yeh bataiye ki aapne mujhe miss kiya...?

rajveer ( smiles):- ha...

naina:- kitani azeeb baat hai na... raj... humare beech,,, humare baare me kabhi baat karne ko kuchh hota hi nahi hai...

rajveer :- aisi baat nahi hai naina...( to change the topic...)... achha yeh batao mera room kaisa laga...

naina:- bahut khubsurat hai... ma keh rahi thi ki pure ghar me sabse khubsurat kamra di ka hai... aur fir aapka haina...?

rajveer:- ha... achha yeh batao... bani se baat ki aalekh ke baare me...?

naina:- abhi nahi... wo main usse kal milne wali hu to achhe se baat karungi... aap chinta na karo main hoon na... ab bani agar meri frnd hai to aalekh ke sath to mere teen - teen rishtey hai... wo mera dost hai... mera hone wala dewar hai... aur pata nahi kyun jab bhi use dekhti hu to bhaiya ki chhavi nazar aati hai usme... jaise wo mera bhai ho... to hue na teen - teen rishtey... ( rajveer smiles... tabhi they heard a voice from the door n looked at that side...)...

pooja:- oye hoye...

naina:- hi pooja...

pooja:- kya baat hai naina BHABHI... aate hi sirf veer se baatein ha... hume to koi yaad hi nahi karta...

naina( blushing);- are aisa kuchh nahi hai... jab main aai tab tum ghar me nahi thi... toh...

pooja:- are koi baat nahi... wow... pakode...

rajveer ( pooja ki taraf plate karte hue..):- le thus le...

pooja:- wo to thusungi hi... par yeh bata bhabhi ko khilaya...

rajveer:- kya..?

pooja:- pakode...

rajveer:- are maine mana kia hai kya... naina khao...

pooja:- ha ha naina... khao- khao... bahut kismat wali ho ki sakshaat veer ji apne pakode khane ko de rahe hai... ( naina laughs...)

rajveer;- tujhe bhi to diya na...?

pooja:- ha- ha ehsaan kia... achha main chalti hun... main kabab me haddi nahi banna chahti... ( pooja uth kar jane lagti hai ki naina ko bolti hai...)... achha naina... wo... bani theek hai na...?

naina:- ha pooja.. kyun...

pooja:- nahi maine, ali aur huda hum teeno ne notice kia hai... kuchh dino se bani bahut shant - shant rehti hai... khoyi - khoyi si... humne kai bar puchha bhi par kuchh batati hi nahi hai... aap puchna na...

naina:- ha tum chinta na karo main baat karungi.. dont worry...

pooja:- ok achha bye ha... tum dono lage raho... ( pooja naina ko wink karke chali gayi...)...

naina:- achha raj itne dino me yahan aur kya - kya hua...?

rajveer:- kuchh khash nahi naina... aalekh aur bani ka to bata hi diya tha...

naina:- oh shit main bhool hi gayi... aapka gift...

rajveer:- mera gift...?

naina:- ha... ( naina neeche jaati hai... aur apna handbag lekar aati hai... aur usme se ek box nikal kar rajveer ko deti hai...) are kholiye toh... (rajveer box open karta hai... usme ek gold bracelate hota hai.. simple but very elegent...)... kaisa laga...

rajveer:- its really beutiful... thanks... but iski kya jarurat thi...?

naina:- jarurat thi... omg... its late... main chalti hun...

rajveer:- wait main tumhe drop kar deta hun...

naina:- nahi raj its ok u take rest.. abhi to office se aaye hai aap... main chali jaungi...

rajveer:- main car me wait kar raha hun...

pyar me lipte kitne... rang mile...
dekhe... kabhi wo rang...
jo... kabhi na mile...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
aiseee... bhiii...
(rajveer chala jata hai... naina smile ke sath usi direction me dekh rahi thi... jahan se raj gaya hai...)

naina smile ke sath shalu ke room me jati hai... sabko bye karti hai...aur bahar chali jati hai... jahan rajveer car se take laga kar khada tha... aur naina ka wait kar raha tha...

naina:- raj chale... ( rajveer car me jakar baithta hai... naina bhi aur dono aluhwalia house ke liye nikal jate hai... pure ratse dono chup the... jab finally naina broke the ice...)... raj ek baat pucchu...?

rajveer:- ha bolo...

naina:- aap khush toh ho na...?

rajveer:- khush kis liye naina...?

naina:- raj i know u dont love me... but.. woh main... actually...

rajveer:- naina tum khush ho...? jaisa main hun... jis tarah ka hun...

naina:- ha... raj maine aapse pyar kia hai... aap kya hai... aur kya nahi mujhe koi fark nahi padta... jante hai meri ma kehti thi... ki naina ek din koi aisa insaan teri zindagi me aayega.. jise tu apni zindagi saup degi... teri zindagi me... tujhse jyada uska haq hoga... tab tera sabse bada rishta usse hoga... baki sab peeche... tab main puchhti thi... ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai... to ma kehti thi ki yeh pati - patni ka rishta bahut azeeb hota hai... jitna yeh kachhe dhage se bandha hota hai.,.. utani hi ishaki jade (routes ) mazboot hoti hai... yeh har rishtey se pare hota hai... jis din teri shadi ho jayegi us din sirf tera pati hi tera sabkuchh hoga... uski khushi sabse pehle... aur ha meri ek baat humesha yaad rakhna... pati ke ghar me bhale hi kam jagah ho par uske dil me tujhe jagah banani hogi... jis din tune aisa kar lia... tujhe jannat mil jayegi... pati bhagwaan hota hai... ( naina looks him... he was looking at her...) kya hua...?

rajveer:'- tum yeh sab manti ho...

naina:- ofcrz...

rajveer:- tum aurton ka azeeb hai... acche khashe insaan ko bhagwaan bana deti ho...

naina:- baat bhagwaan ki nahi hai raj.. baat wishwaash ki hai... yeh vishwas hi to hai jisse umeed zinda rehti hai... aur isi umeed se to hum zinda hai... aur zinda hone ka matab zindagi katna nahi hota... balki jeena hota hai... aur agar jeena hai, to umeed kaise chhod sakte hai...

rajveer:- ok i lost... lijiye aapka ghar bhi aa gaya...

naina:- aap bhi aaiye...

rajveer:- nahi naina aaj nahi fir kabhi... bye tc...

naina:- bye tc... ( naina ander chali jati hai... aur rajveer nikal jata hai...)...

in car...
rajveer ko bas naina ki hi baatien yaad aa rahi thi... uska vishwaas uska pyar rajveer ko kamzor bana raha tha... but fir bhi humesha ki tarah usne ignore kia aur apne ghar chala gaya...

next day...

baani's house...

naina:- achha to aise kyun behave kar rahi hai... dekh maine notice kia hai... bhale main tere saamne nahi thi... but phone me hi sahi... tu badal gayi hai baani... tu wo purani baani nahi rahi... aur mujhe is badlaav ki wajah bhi pata hai... sabko dikhta hai... siwaay tere...

baani(uth kar khadi ho gayi):- aisa nahi hai naina...

naina:- achha to tujhe pyar nahi ho gaya hai...?

bani:- nahi aisa kuchh nahi hai... main teri tarah nahi hun... pyar wyar mere bas ka nahi hai...

naina:- achha yehi baat tu mujhse nazare mila ke bhi keh sakti hai na... (naina uth kar gayi usne bani ko turn kia to dekha ki bani ki aankhien surkh lal thi...)... baani.. yeh... plzz... bani mat kar apne sath aisa pyar ek bahut khubsurat ehsaash hai... yeh tu bhi jaanti hai... to fir... ( bani hugs naina,... and cried alot...)

bani ( stiiling hugging):- main kya karun naina... tu hi bata.. tujhe kaisa lagega... agar raj tujhse yeh kahe ki wo tujhe sirf use karna chahta tha... ( dhamake on naina's face...) tujhe kaisa lagega.. jab tere hi saamne raj duniyaan bhar ki ladkiyon ke sath flirt kare... aur tujhse kahe ki.. tu bhi uske liye unme se ek hai... ( naina has no answer...)... tujhe kaisa lagega naina agar raj ko sabki fikra ho siwaay tere...

naina:- bani.. yeh tu...

bani:- ha naina... ha... wo aalekh usne mujhse kaha ki woh mujhe use karna chahta tha... but sorry feel kar raha hai... aur main pagal mujhe uski utpatang harkaton se kab pyar ho gaya mujhe pata hi nahi chala...

naina( angry);- uski himmat kaise hui aisa karne ki... main use chhodungi nahi... main use... abhi baat karti hun main use... (naina apne phone se aalekh ka number dail karne wali hoti hai ki bani uska hath pakad leti hai...)...

bani:- tu aisa kuchh nahi karegi...

naina:- but kyun how could he...? use ehsaas hona chahiye ki usne kitani badi galti ki hai... aur raj mujhse kehte hai ki aalekh tujhse pyar karta hai... agar karta hota to aisa na karta...

bani ( instantly);- kya aalekh mujhse pyar...? tu sach keh rahi hai...

naina:- ha wo raj ne mujhe kaha tha... ki jabse wo tujhse mila hai badal gaya hai... aur sudhar bhi gaya hai...

bani:- kya aalekh ne raj se kaha hi ki he loves me..?

naina:- nahi... but raj ko pura yakeen hai... ki aalekh tujhe pyar karta hai... but mujhe aalekh se yeh umeed nahi thi... (bani soch me pad jati hai...)...

bani:- naina.. yeh sab chhod aur yeh bata main kya karun... tu meri jagah hoti kya karti...

naina:- dekh main to yeh kahungi... waqt de... agar raj jo keh rahe hai bilkul sahi hai to i will be very happy for both of u... tu meri best frnd hai baani teri khushi mere liye aur aalekh ki khushi raj ke liye bahut mayne rakhti hai... tu samajh rahi hai na... ( bani hugs her...)...

bani:- main kosis karungi naina...

naina:- achha main chalti hun...

bani:- wo aalekh ko kuchh mat kehna...

naina:- hm... chal.. achha wo huda ko kya hua hai...

bani:- huda ko...?

naina:- yar bahut azeeb behave kar raha tha aaj office me...

bani:- yar mujhe koi idea nahi hai...

nain:- ok bye... ( naina left...)...

naina's room...

naina window me khadi hai... aur rajveer se phone pe baat kar rahi thi...

rajveer:- agar aisi baat hai to m very happy naina... m really very happy for aalekh... (rajveer ki awaaz bhari ho gayi thi...)... tum mera yakeen karo aalekh bani ko bahut khush rakhega... use ehsaas nahi hai... but i know he loves her... m just praying ki inke beech sab sahi ho aur mere aalekh ki khud ki family ho... i m really happy... naina... naina tum sun rahi ho na...?

naina:- ha sun rahi hun... aapki awaz me chhipi khushi ko sun rahi hu... kash aap jo keh rahe hai sach ho jaaye... aur in dono ko apna pyar mil jaye...

rajveer:- achha naina sayad mom bula rahi hai... main bad me baat karta hu...

naina:- ok bye... ( rajveer phone cut karke neeche chala jata hai...)... kash mujhe bhi mera pyar mil jaaye raj... (tears flows down to her cheeks)...

2 months later...

End of Part 19
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Superb ud
Naina kitna pyaar karti hai rajse but raj as usual ignore kar rahe hai
Omg yeah kya ho gaya naina ragini ko pyaar ka gyaan de rahi hai
Ab is ragini raj ki life Mae vapis na aaye
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