Kuchh Rang Pyar ke Aise bhii - RaiNa ff thread 1 - Page 66

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks dear but I will update after 20november as my exams are going on
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Arohi6

hmm...it's amazing
please pm me whenever you update..


Thanks dear I will up date n pm u surely
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: senchaitali131

Haii di I just read your another story. Oh this is so heart touching. Please do something to release nainas pain.di please pm me when update


Thanks dear
I will cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Update pl it been very long u have updated.

Love and prayer
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Thanks dear but I will update after 20november as my exams are going on
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Posted: 8 years ago
OK dear will wait till then.

All the best !!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Haii dear chandni,
I missed your ff. Please update soon . Best of luck for your exam
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Avinanda120

Haii dear chandni,

I missed your ff. Please update soon . Best of luck for your exam



thanks dear :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi all my lovely readers... i know maine aap sabko bahut wait karaya hai... maine kaha tha ki i will update my next part after my exams... so my exams are still not over... but kyuki maine time nikal kar kuchh likh liya... so i thought y not to update...
thanks for giving me great response till part 16... here is part 17... keep reading... n keep smiling... dont forget to give ur comment...

love...
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*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***
Part 17

Naina:- Raj...( Rajveer turned and lost in her beauty... he is just looking at her... without blinking his eyes... Naina is just loving the way Rajveer was looking at her...)... raj... raj...

rajveer:- ha... ha... sorry... plzz have a seat... (rajveer khada hota hai aur naina ke liye chair pull karta hai... naina jakar smile ke sath baith jati hai... aur rajveer bhi...)

dono hi azeeb sa mehsoos kar rahe the... this was not the first time ki rajveer kisi ke sath date pe baitha tha... but naina ke sath wo first time aise tha... jahan uski nazare bar - bar naina ko niharna chahti thi... wahi uska dimaag kuchh aur hi soch raha tha... aur jahan tak sawaal tha naina ka toh... she is loving it... this was her first time to have a date with some one special that too with her raj... dono hi apni soch me gum the... kisi ne kuchh nahi kaha ki tab tak waiter aa kar unke saamne wine rakh kar jata hai...

naina:- thanks raj... ( he is serving her... but looking at her with look like, thanks for what... he should thank her for the gift...)...

rajveer:- ahhh...(heading his hand to pass her glass) have it... (naina takes the glass)... thanks to u naina... for the lovely gift... ( he sips from his glass...)... and nice arrangements... thanks for this too...

naina:- kya...

rajveer:- yup... and...

naina:- wait raj... means... kon sa gift... maine aapko koi gift nahi bheja... balki aapne mujhe yeh saaree bheji... aur yeh arrangement to aapne ki hai na...?

rajveer:- what... yeh tum kya...? main kyun karunga...

naina:- what do u mean by main kyun karunga... and wait... kis gift ki baat kar rahe ho aap...( now rajveer is also confused)...

rajveer:- mera yeh outfit...

naina:- oh...( kuchh soch kar...) wait ha main ek call karke aati hu...

naina ek smile dekar side me jaati hai aur turant bani ko call karti hai... aur rajveer bhi confused sa wahi se aalekh ko call karta hai...

naina:- hello bani... sab gadbad ho gayi yar...

bani :- kyun kya hua... rajveer nahi pahucha kya...?

naina:- are wo yahi hai but...( then she told her every thing...)...

rajveer:- kya... aalekh tu mujhe mil i will kill both of u... kya jarurat thi yeh sab nautanki karne ki...

aalekh:- are maine kuchh nahi kia... jo kia baani ne kia... aur usne mujhe abhi thodi der pehle bataya ki usne yeh sab kia... dekh veer... ab use to nahi pata ki tu kaisa hai... wo chah rahi hogi ki tum dono thoda time spend karo... bas...

rajveer:- but...

aalekh:- no if no but... ab thodi der apna revenge bhul ja... aur naina ke sath shaam guzaar... now bye...

rajveer:- aalekh sun to... ( but till then aalekh cuts the call...) iski toh... ahhh...

naina( with sadness):- oh means wo letter aalekh ne likha aur yeh saaree bhi uski pasand ki hai...?

bani:- ha... sorry naina abhi thodi der pehle hi us gadhe ne mujhe bataya... warna main... khair naina leave it na... tere liye yeh mayne rakhta hai ki tune kiski pasand ki dress pehni hai... ya rajveer ka sath...? rajveer ka sath na... so just relax and enjoy ur date byee...

naina:- hmm... bye... ( naina call cut karke aati hai... aur baith jati hai...) wo...

rajveer:- wo... ( both smiles...)...

naina:- bani aur aalekh...

rajveer:- its ok... hota hai...

naina:- ha,... hota hai...

rajveer:- so kya khaogi naina...

naina;- kuchh bhi but...

rajveer:- indian... right...

naina smiles... rajveer naina ke liye indian aur apne liye continental order karta hai... jab tak waiter dinner lata hai... dono hi chup chap baithe the... jahan rajveer ko koi fark nahi pad raha tha... wahi naina ka man udas tha... yeh rajveer ke sath uski first date wo bhi aisi... itane din se rajveer ko janti hai naina... par fir bhi ek azeeb si doorie mehsoos karti hai... wo connection nahi tha unke beech jo hona chahiye... tab tak waiter dinner lata hai... dono dinner kar rahe the...

naina:- so aapko continental food bahut pasand hai na...?

rajveer:- ha... i love continental... but aisa nahi hai ki main kuchh aur nahi khata... i like all type of foods... but teekha nahi kha sakta...

naina:- hmmm... hum dono ek dusre ke bilkul opposite hai...

rajveer:- matalab...?

naina:- ab dekhiye na... aapko yeh feeka khana pasand hai mujhe teekha... aap jyada baat nahi karte... aur main thehri chatter box... aapka fav color black hai mera red...

rajveer:- ha... sahi kaha... tumne wo bhi suna hoga... opposite attracts... ab jab tak feeka nahi hoga... teekhe ki koi value nahi... jab tak koi shant nahi rahega... tumhe chatter box kaun kahega... jab tak koi kala nahi hoga... in rango ka koi mahatava hi nahi...( naina smiles... )

rajveer in his mind :- veer tu pagal ho gaya hai kya...? kya bakwaas kar raha hai...

naina:- raj... raj...

rajveer:- ha... ha...

naina:- kahan kho gaye...

rajveer:- nahi - nahi kahin nahi...

naina:- waise bilkul sahi kaha aapne... do opposite loge milkar hi ek dusre ko pura karte hai... jaise main aur aap... right...( rajveer smiles...) raj adla badli kare...

rajveer:- matalab...?

naina:- means... aaj aap yeh indian khao... aur main yeh continental...

rajveer:- are lekin...

naina( plates exchange karte hue...):- lekin wekin kuchh nahi... plzzz... n dont worry itna teekha bhi nahi hai...

dono hi ek dusre ki plates se kha rahe the... wo bhi dono tarah ke foods... thodi der baad dono hi desert kha rahe the ki naina bolti hai...

naina:- raj...

rajveer:- hmmm...

naina:- aapko bura to nahi laga na ki maine yuh humara khana...

rajveer:- nahi naina... isme bura manne wali kya baat hai...

naina:- thank god... waise aap itna feeka kaise kha sakte ho... future me main continental nahi khane wali...

rajveer:- maine to is baar hi mana kia tha... khair so mam next time aap kya khana pasand kareingi...

naina:- bataun...

rajveer:-hmmm

naina:- gol gappe...

rajveer:- gol gappe...?

naina:- ha gol gappe... teekhi - teekhi chatpati chaat... aur bhel puri... aur dahi puri aur faluda... aur...

rajveer:- bas - bas... itna sab... pehle batati hum yahi order karte...

naina:- yahan...?

rajveer:- toh...?

naina;- no way... raj yeh cheezo ka maza road pe aata hai...

rajveer:- u mean wo unhygenic street food... no way...

naina:- dont tell me ki aapne yeh sab cheeze road me nahi khai...?

rajveer:- ha wo khai hai... but college days me... par tab samajh nahi thi...

naina:- aap to aise bol rahe ho jaise aap budhdhe ho gaye ho...

aise hi dono baatien karte - karte desert khatam karte hai... rajveer bill pay karta hai...

rajveer:- so naina chale... ( rajveer apni chair se uthta hai ki naina uska hath pakad leti hai...)...

abhi na jaao chhod kar...
ke dil abhi bhara nahi...
(rajveer and naina both look at the musician jo yeh song play kar rahe the... naina smiles at this...)

abhi - abhi toh aaye ho...
abhi - abhi toh...
(naina apni chair se uthati hai aur rajveer ke kareeb jaati hai...)

abhi - abhi toh aaye ho...
bahaar ban ke chhaye ho...
hawan zara mehek toh le...
nazar zara behek toh le...
(naina is blushing... and rajveer is some where guilty + uncomfortable naina apna hath rajveer ko deti hai...)

yeh shaam dhal to le zara...
yeh shaam dhal to le zara...
yeh dil sambhal to le zara...
main thodi der, jee toh lun...
nashe ke ghooth, pee toh lun...
nashe ke ghooth, pee toh lun...
( rajveer naina ka hath pakad leta hai... naina rajveer ka hath apni kamar par rakhti hai... rajveer ki chhuan se wo apni aankhien band kar leti hai... aur muskaan ke sath apna hath rajveer ke soulder pe rakhti hai)

abhi toh kuchh kaha nahi...
abhi toh kuchh suna nahi...
bura na maano... baat ka...
pyar hai... gila nahi...
nahi - nahi... nahi - nahi...
ke dil abhi bhara nahi...

(both are moving step by step... both were looking at each other eyes... naina ki aankhon me sirf besumaar pyar tha... kahin na kahin jo rajveer ko kamzor bana raha tha...)

adhuri aashhh...
adhuri aash chhod ke...
adhuri pyash chhod ke...
( rajveer naina ko chhod deta hai... aur door jane lagta hai ki naina fir se uska hath pakad leti hai...)

jo roz yunhi jaaoge...
toh kis tarah, nibhaoge...
ke zindagi ki raah me...
jawaan dilon ki chah me...
kai makaam aayeinge...
jo humko aazmayeinge...
bura na maano... baat ka...
pyar hai... gila nahi...
( naina uske kareeb jati hai... aur uske cheek pe ek peck deti hai... aur use hug kar leti hai... apna sir rajveer ki chest pe rakh deti hai... apni aankhon ko band kar leti hai...)

nahi - nahi... nahi - nahi...
ke dil abhi bhara nahi...
abhi na jaao chhod kar...
ke dil abhiii bharaaa nahiii...
( rajveer bhi us hug me kho sa jata hai... aur naina ko hug kar leta hai... dono hi usi position me khade hai... rajveer ke hug se naina ke face pe badi wali smile aa jati hai...)

thodi der baad dono alag hote hai...

rajveer;- chale... its getting late...

naina( not meeting her eyes):- hmm...

in car... rajveer is driving...

naina:- raj wo mujhe aapko kuchh batana tha...

rajveer:- hmm kaho...

naina:- wo main parso paris jaa rahi hun...

rajveer:- oh kuchh kam...?

naina:- ha wo... new project hai... to ek month ke liye jana hoga...

rajveer:- oh achha hai... kaam jyada jaruri hai...

naina:- what isme kya achha hai... aapko koi problem nahi hai...

rajveer:- mujhe kya problem hogi...?

naina:- ya right... ( in her mind) hey bhagwaan... aapko mere liye yahi mile the... naina tereko bahut mehenat karni padegi...

rajveer:- naina...

naina:- hmm...

rajveer:- apna khayaal rakhna... ( naina smiles...)

naina:- aap bhi... ( tabhi rajveer ka phone ring karta hai... bcz rajveer drive kar raha tha wo phone speeker me dal ka baat karne lagta hai...)

rajveer:- hello...

naveen:- main naveen bol raha hun...

rajveer:- ji bhaiya...

naveen:- wo naina kaha hai...

naina:- bhaiya main yahin hu...

naveen:- what is this naina... tumhara phone kyun nahi lag raha hai... aur itani raat hi gayi hai... tum loge ho kaha...

naina:- bhaiya woh...

rajveer:- bhaiya woh main bas naina ko ghar hi drop karne aa raha hun...

naina:- theek hai,... but jaldi...

rajveer:- ji... ( both cuts the call)... tumne unhe bataya nahi tha...?

naina ( head down):- bataya tha but... wo mera phone switch off ho gaya hai...toh...

rajveer:- isme unki koi galati nahi hai... har bhai ko apni behen ki chinta hoti hai... yeh mujhse behtar kaun jaan sakta hai...

naina:- raj... mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhaiya ne aise kyun react kiya... but u dont worry.. main hun na...

rajveer:- ha tum ho na... mujhe kya fikra... ( achanak se barish suru ho jati hai...)... oh no... i hate rains...

naina:- i love rains... raj gadi rokiye... na plzz...

rajveer:- no naina...

naina:- raj gadi rokiye warna main kood jaungi...

rajveer:- what are u mad...?

naina:- raj plzz...

rajveer:- ok... ok...( raj stops the car...)...

naina car se bahar aati hai... aur barish me khelne lagti hai...

rajveer:- naina what are u doing plzz come inside...

naina:- nooo... mujhe enjoy karne dijiye plz...

naina apni baahien fayla kar barish ko apni bahon me samet rahi hai... rajveer ko na jaane kya hua... wo bhi car se bahar nikal gaya... aur gadi ke take laga kar khada ho gaya... aur naina ko dekhe ja raha tha... dono hi puri tarah se barish me bheeg chuke the... jaise hi naina yeh dekhti hai ki rajveer bahar hai... wo rajveer ke saamne jakar apna hath aage karti hai... rajveer naina ke hath me apna hath automatically de deta hai... wo ab bhi bas naina ki aankhon me hi dekh raha tha... naina aur raj us sunsaan road par kareeb 1 minute tak couple dance karte hai... ki achanak se bijli ki awaaz aati hai... aur naina dar jati hai... aur rajveer ko hug kar leti hai... rajveer ko hose aata hai... wo na chahte hue bhi naina ko consol karne ke liye use apni bahon me chhipa leta hai...

naina:- raj mujhe bijali ki awaaz se bahut dar lagta hai...

rajveer:- its ok naina main hun na...

naina rajveer se thoda se door hoti hai... aur rajveer ki aankhon me dekhti hai...

naina:- ha aap ho na... mujhe har ek muskil se bachaane ke liye.. hai na...?..( rajveer just smiles a little...)...

rajveer:- chale...?... ( raj turns to open the door... but naina held his one hand...)...

naina:- raj aap humesha mera sath doge na...? yunhi har ghadi meri hifazat kareinge na...?

rajveer:- naina...

naina:- kya hua... boliye na...?

rajveer:- kabhi - kabhi kuchh batien bina kahe samajh jaani chahiye... kuchh batien shabdo ki mohtaaz nahi hoti... ab chale we are getting late... ( rajveer driving seat par baith jata hai...)...

naina in her mind:- ha sahi kaha aapne... par kuchh baton ko izhaar ki aur shabdo ki zarurat padti hai raj... kyunki... kabhi - kabhi... izhaar na karne par bahut kuchh adhura reh jata hai... ( rajveer presses the horn jisse naina apne hose me aati hai... aur aakar front seat pe baith jati hai... and rajveer drove away...)...

rajveer aur naina, naina ke ghar ke bahar khade the...

naina:- raj ander chaliye... coffee pi ke jaiyega...

rajveer:- nahi naina... its really getting late... mom wait kar rahi hogi...

naina:- plzz...

rajveer:- naina next time... promise...

naina:-ok...( naina utar kar jaane lagti hai... )

rajveer:- naina... ( naina turns)...

naina:- ji... ( rajveer bhi car se neeche utarta hai... aur naina ke kareeb jata hai... aur apni jacket utaar kar naina ko pehna deta hai...)...

rajveer ( nazre zukar kar):- woh... tum kafi bheegi ho... aur tumhari saaree bhi transparent hai... bye gn ( he left... aur naina bas usi direction me dekhe ja rahi hai... jahan se abhi rajveer gaya... naina ko naveen ka yaad aaya... aur daud kar ander gayi... jahan naveen aur ritu uska wait kar rahe the...)...

naina:- bhaiya woh... mere phone ki battery discharge ho gayi thi na... toh...

ritu:- are koi baat nahi... waise humare jija ji kahan hai...

naina:- ji...

ritu:- are raj... ab bhale hi tu naveen se chhoti hai... par rajveer to jijaji hua na...

naina:- woh... unhe late ho raha tha na... toh... sorry bhaiya...

ritu:- waise yeh jacket... tu bheegi kaise...

naina(jhuth bolti hai ab yeh nahi bol sakti ki apne would be ke sath romance kar rahi thi...):- woh raste me car kharab ho gayi thi... aur barish hone lagi toh...

naveen:- koi baat nahi... jaa apne kamre me ja... ( naina nods left...)...

ritu:- kya hua naveen... itani badi baat bhi nahi thi...

naveen:- ha par... kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai... ki kahin yeh dono apni hade na par karde...

ritu ( from behind wicking smile):- are aisa kuchh nahi hoga... we bachhe nahi hai,... achha main room me ja rahi hun... ( ritu left...)

naveen:- ab main tumhe kaise samjhaau ritu... ki jab pyar me hota hai toh kuchh hose nahi rehta... kuchh nahi... kuchh aise kadam utha leta hai... jo zindagi bhar use jeene nahi dete...

yahan rajveer ghar pahunchta hai ishita uska wait hi kar rahi thi... wo ishita ko apne aur naina ke dinner ke bare me batata hai... ishita smile ke sath apne room me chali jati hai... wahin rajveer shalu ke room me jata hai... shalu so chuki thi... wo uske forehead pe kiss karke use achhe se cover karke apne room me chala jata hai... agla din aise hi kamo me beet gaya... aur aaj naina ko paris jana hai... rajveer naveen ritu aalekh aur bani aaye the use drop karne...

airport...

naveen:- bachha apna khayaal rakhna...

ritu( with tears):- ha naina plzz take care... tujhe pata hai na ki tu mere liye kya hai... main naveen ke bina toh reh sakti hun par tere bina... khair time se khana khana... aur jyada kaam mat karna...

rajveer ( in his mind):- jab hazaar kamine mare honge tab yeh paida hui hai... hnnn... this world is full of fake people...

bani:- achha naina tu rajveer se baat karle... hum sab wahan hai...( sabhi rajveer naina ko akela chhod kar chale jate hai...)

naina:- apna khayaal rakhna... khana time pe khana... aur shalu di ke bare me batate rehna...

rajveer:- hmm... tum bhi take care... ( naina hugs rajveer just for a second aur apna bag lekar ander chali jati hai... rajveer usi direction me dekh raha tha jahan se naina gayi... tabhi aalekh aata hai...)...

aalekh:- oh wo gayi...

rajveer:- hmm... chale... ( sabhi apni apni destination ko nikal jate hai...)...

next day... paris...

naina paris pahuch chuki hai... aur aate hi so gayi... uthne ke baad usne apne ghar aur apne raj ko call kiya... fir apne project ki taiyari me lag gayi... aur yahan delhi me sab normal chal raha hai... ritu abhi shant thi wahin rajveer aur aalekh bhi ek project me busy the... aise hi dekhte - dekhte 15 din beet gaye... rajveer roz naina se baat kar leta tha... actually kahin na kahin wo naina aur uski utpatang baton ko miss bhi karta tha... aur sath me delhi ka ek high profile project rajveer ko mila aur naveen har gaya tha... but its just a business keh kar naveen aur rajveer gale mil gaye... par rajveer hi janta hai... ki usne is project ko hasil karne ke liye kitne papad bele hai...

naina yunhi time pass karne ke liye mall me ghoom rahi thi... wo yahan par sabse anjaan thi... fir bhi akele hi ghumne nikal jati thi,... naina resturant main baithi coffee pi rahi thi... ki kisi ne uske soulder me hath rakha... naina turn hui... sath me surprise bhi...

naina:- TUM yahan... what a pleasent surprise...

End of Part 17
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Edited by rkchandni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks a lot for such a nice update

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