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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: yoginisahakari
Pl update

updating in few minutes dear

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sorry for being late... updating in few minutes...

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Pls try n update by tonight... waiting eagerly dear...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hii every one...
hope so u all are enjoying some thing new on RAina...
first of all thans alot for liking and commenting on part 15...
here is part 16...
a biggg sorry for being late...
enjoyyy...
do comment...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

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*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 16

Rajveer ( with stern voice):- kyun bulaya mujhe yahan...?( that lady turned arround and she was none other than

Ritu...)

Ritu:- yeh sab kya hai ha... tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aata jo tumhari harkate hai na... saf -

saf samajh aa raha hai ki tum natak karne ki kosis to kar rahe ho par kar nahi pa rahe ho...

Rajveer:- just shut up... tameez se baat karo mujhse... naukar nahi hun main tumhara...yeh mat bhoolo ki mujhe

tumhari nahi tumhe meri jarurat hai... ( Ritu calms herself down)...

Ritu:- ok Rajveer.. look m sorry... main thoda gusse me thi... par Rajveer tum hi socho... mere itane dino ki mehnat

me pani fir jayega... tumahara ek galat kadam... aur... tum samajh rahe ho na...

Rajveer :- ha...

Ritu:- to phir mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki tum badal rahe ho... tum wo Rajveer nahi ho jiski aankhon me sirf

aluhwAliia's ko barbaad karne ka junoon hua karta tha... jo sirf aur sirf apni sunta tha... mujhe aisa kyun lag raha

hai ki kahin tumhe Naina se pyar to nahi ho gaya...( he is looking at her with shocked expression)... kahin tum

bhool to nahi rahe ki us Naveen ne tumhari behen ke sath kya kiya tha... kahin tum yeh to nahi bhool gaye ki us

Rishabh ne tumhare dad ke sath kya kiya tha,,,,,

Rajveer:- aisa kuchh nahi hai... kuchh nahi bhoola hun main... na hi kabhi bhool sakta hun... jitane dard aur

takleefe... mere pariwaar ne sahi hai... un sabka badla mujhe lena hai... any how...

Ritu:- to phir mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki tum kamzor pas rahe ho... Naina ka pyar tumhe kamzor bana raha

hai... mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki tum use...

Rajveer:- dekhiye Ritu ji... aisa aapko lag raha hai... par yeh sach nahi hai... main kamzor nahi hun... koi fark

nahi padta mujhe... ki Naina jiye... ya mare...

Ritu:- good... aisa hi hona chahiye...

Rajveer:- ek baat kahu... jo kuchh bhi main kar raha hun... wo sab karte hue mujhe saram aati hai... pyar jaise

shabd ko main dhoka de raha hu... par jab aapko dekhta hun na... to mehsoos hota hai... ki kameene pan me to aap

mujhse 4 kadam aage ho...

Ritu( smiling):- oh really... yeh meri taarif hai ya gaAlii...

Rajveer:- jo aapko sahi lage... ab aap meri koi sage wAlii to hai nahi ki mujhe koi fark padega... waise ek baat

puchhni thi... aap jo Naveen ke sath kar rahi ho... wahi sab aapne mujhe Naina ke sath karne ko kaha... isme

Naina ki kya galti hai... aapne hi mujhe Naina ke baare me sari information di... wo kya sochti hai... kya feel karti

hai... sab kuchh... kyun.. Naina hi kyun...?

Ritu:- pehle to tumne yeh nahi puchha fir ab kyun...?

Rajveer:-kya hai na... achhi lagne lagi hai wo mujhe... ( dhamaake on Ritu's face... n Rajveer smiles

sarcastically...)... agar aap aisa soch rahi hai na... to aisa to bilkul bhi nahi hai...

Ritu:- tumne mujhe dara dia tha... mera sara plan dhara ka dhara reh jata...

Rajveer:- cool... aapne jabab nahi dia...?

Ritu:- us Rishabh aluhwalia ke kiye ki saza maine aur meri behen ne bhugti... mere dad ke sath, tumhare aur mere

papa ke sath jo dhoka usne kia tha... usse aaj tak nahi ubhar paai hu main... maine apni behen ko to sambhal lia...

uspe in sab ka koi asar padne nahi dia... par main... maine apne dad ki chita ki kasam khaai thi ki unki barbaadi

aur unki maut ke zimmedar Rishabh singh aluwAliia ko barbaad kar dungi... isi liye maine Naveen se shadi ki...

aur jahan tak sawaal Naina ka hai... to wo un dono ki sabse badi kamzori hai... jise hume... sabse jyada tumhe

apni taakat banani hogi...

Rajveer:- jab aapne mujhe praposal dia tha... to aapko dar nahi laga ki kahin maine aapka raz Naveen ke saamne

khol dia toh...?

Ritu:- ha dar laga tha... actually jab us din formally Naveen ne hume tumse aur tumhare frnds se introduce karaya

tha... tab tumhare expression dekh kar laga hi tha ki kahin main pakdi na jaaun... par phir yeh bhi laga ki...

nahi... meri nazare tumhe pehchanne me dhokha nahi kha sakti... tumme... jo junoon tha Naveen aur uske

pariwaar ko barbaad karne ka... wahi mujhe tum tak kheech laya... par ab wo tumhari aakhon se gayab sa ho gaya

hai...

Rajveer:- aisa aap ko lagta hai... i dont care... to aapne mujhe yahan yeh lecture dene ke liye bulaya tha...? oh

common... thak gaya hun main... mujhe pata hai ki mujhe kya karna hai aur kya nahin... waise ha,... mujhe aapse

milna to tha... aapko itani jaldi kya hai ha... itani jaldi kya padi hai aapko meri aur Naina ki shadi ki... ki kal - ki

kal bula lia hume... look... m not yet ready...

Ritu:- not ready for what... tum to aise behave kar rahe ho ki tum real me Naina se shadi karne wale ho... yeh uski

shadi hai... par tumhare liye sirf ek khel... bhool rahe ho kya...

Rajveer:- ji nahi... mere pariwaar ke sentiments jude hai is shadi se... aur meri behen abhi...

Ritu:- achha... to yeh sab kaand karne se pehle apne pariwaar ke sentiments ka khayaal nahi aaya... oh common

Rajveer... ok theek hai... kitna time chahiye tumhe main kuchh karti hun... waise tum sayad jo chah rahe ho wahi

hoga... humare ghar ke jo kul pandit hai... unhe main nahi kharid paungi... kyuki un par meri saasu ma ko bahut

trust tha... aur Rishabh unhi ka kaha maanega... aur mujhe pata chala hai ki kuchh graho ki dasha sahi nahi hai

to ek hafte baad se kuchh mahino tak koi muhurat nahi hai shadi ka... so chill bas kal officially tumhara aur Naina

ka sagun aur roka hoga bas... tab tak enjoy... fayda uthaao Naina ka... jis tarah chaaho...

Rajveer:- shut up... ek aurat ho kam se kam is baat ka khayaal rakho... anyways... ab main chalta hun...

Ritu:- hmm... waise... bhool kar bhi mere khilaaf jaane ki sochna mat...

Rajveer:- yeh dhamki hai...?

Ritu:- nahi chetawani hai... kyuki agar main doobi... to tumhe bhi le doobungi... ( Rajveer Ritu ko disgusting look

dekar wahan se chala jata hai...)... iska koi bharosha nahi hai... mujhe koi backup plan taiyaar karna hi hoga...

waise bhi tum sirf mera ek mohra ho Rajveer...(then she remembers some thing... and gave a evil smile... and

left...)...

next day...
aaj ka din bahut hi achha tha Naina ke liye... par wo kal rat ko lekar upset bhi thi... usne socha tha ki Rajveer use

call karega par Rajveer ne nahi kia... par in sab baaton ko bhool kar subah se kitchen me thi... aur special lunch

ki taiyaari kar rahi thi... ki tabhi Ritu aati hai... aur sath me baani bhi...

Ritu;- are Naina... chhod yeh sab aur jakar ready ho ja... kuchh der me sab loge aate honge...

Naina:- ha bhabhi... bas do minute...

Bani:- bhabhi... aapko nahi lag raha ki koi aaj bahut khush hai...

Ritu:- ha bhaai wo toh hai...( to Naina...) Naina m so happy for u...

Naina:- bhabhi... thanku... aap humesha mere sath khadi rahi... ma hoti to sayad wo bhi mera itna sath na de

pati... jitna aap ne diya hai... ( she hugs her...) thanku bhabhi... aur ha... main bahut - bahut khush hu...

Ritu;- main bhi bahut khush hun...

Bani:- oho... emotional characters... ab kaam kare... Naina chal tu main tujhe ready kar deti hun... bhabhi aap

yeh sab...

Ritu;- ha tum dono jaao... main dekh lungi... ( both baani and Naina left... and Ritu got busy in her stuff like a

perfect bahu...)

thodi der baad... Rajveer apne parents Pooja aur Aalekh ke sath aluhwaliia house ata hai... Rajveer ne cream

coloure ka suit pehna tha aur bahut hi jyada achha lag raha tha... Rishabh ji aur Naveen unka swagat karte hai...

sabhi sofe pe baithe the... ab tak Huda aur Ali bhi aa gaye the... Ritu sabke liye chai nasta laati hai...

Pooja:- bhabhi... Naina kaha hai...?

Ritu:- wo apne room me hai... Bani use ready kar rahi hai...

Pooja:- main jau uske paas...?

Ritu;- ha - ha kyun nahi...

Naina's room...

Bani Naina ko ready kar rahi thi... Naina ne skyblue aur golden color ki saree pehni thi... wo bahut khubsurat lag

rahi thi...

Bani( making her hair):- Naina... main tere liye bahut khush hun... finally tere saare sapne pure ho rahe hai... ab

jab bhi main tujhe aur Rajveer ko sath dekhti hun... to aisa lagta hai jaise... ha sachha pyar hota hai... aur sachhe

pyar ke aage bhagwaan bhi jhuk jata hai... kash mujhe bhi koi Rajveer jaisa mil jaaye...

Naina:- nhhh...

Bani ( siting infront of her..):- kyun...?

Naina:- kyuki raj to sirf ek hai... jo is Naina ke ho chuke hai...

Bani ( being sad);- ha wo bhi hai...

Naina:- par koi hai... raj to nahi hai... but unki parchhaai hai... perfect for you...

Bani( happy happy):- kaun kaun...?

Naina:- Aalekh...

Bani ( shocked):- wo gadha...

Naina:- chup... wo bahut achha hai... aur khabardar jo mere dewar ko kuchh kaha toh...

Bani:- Naina abhi se.. aur wo alekh tujhe kis angle se achha lagta hai... ( then they heard a voice...)...

Pooja:- har angle se...

Bani:- are tum...?

Pooja:- ha main... hi Naina... ( she came inside)... bahut pyari lag rahi ho...

Bani:- ha raj behose ho jayega...

Pooja:- ha... par tum bhi apna dil sambhal kar rakhna... kyuki... mera veer bhi kuchh kam nahi lag raha hai... (

Naina blushed...)... oye hoye... meri zara...

Naina:- zara...

Pooja:- ha mera veer... aur tum zara... Naina bhabhi... by the way... koi mere Aalekh ko gadha keh raha tha... (

Bani bites her lips...)... are nahi - nahi baani ji.. abhi aapne use pehchana nahi hai... waise he is hot na...?

Bani:- wo... wo... wo...

Pooja:- cool... cool... waise aap bhi kuchh kam nahi lag rahi... kaho to baat chalaun... ek ke sath ek muft.. muft...

muft... mujhe meri do - do bhabhiya ek sath...

Bani:- aisa kuchh nahi hai Pooja...

Pooja:- i know m just kidding yar... achha ab main chalti hun... Naina ko lekar neeche aao... ( Pooja left.. and

Naina starts laughing...)...

Bani:- tu kyun has rahi hai...

Naina:- apni sakal dekhi thi... jab Pooja Aalekh ka naam le rahi thi... tu blush kar rahi thi...

Bani:- kya... pagal ho gayi hai kya...

Naina:- nahi par tera bharosha nahi...

Bani:- Naina... ab chal...

Bani Naina ko neeche lekar aati hai... Rajveer aur Naina dono bas ek dusre ko dekh rahe the... Bani jakar

Rajveer ke bagal me Naina ko bitha deti hai... sabse pehle Ishita Naina ka sagun karti hai... phir Naveen aur

Ritu, Rajveer ka... then Ishita aur Pooja Naina ka roka karti hai... all were very happy... ki tabhi aluhwalia's ke

kul pandit aate hai... Rajveer Naina unka aashirwaad lete hai...

Ritu:- to Pandit ji... ab jaldi se... humari Naina ki shadi aur mangni ka subh muhurat nikaal dijiye... aur ha

muhurat sabse jyada subh hona chahiye.. kyuki ma ko in sab baaton me bahut vishwaash tha... kyun papa sahi

kaha na maine...?

Rishabh:- ha beta... Pandit ji... ab aap in dono ki kundli dekh kar achha sa muhurat nikal dijiye...

Pandit ji:- jarur...( Pandit ji Rajveer aur Naina dono ki hi kundaliyaan dekhte hai...)...

Ishita:- kya baat hai Pandit ji... kaun sa muhurat hai...

Pandit ji:- ha... beta... main bas inke nakshatro ki gadna kar raha tha... bahut hi achhi kundalia hai dono ki...

inka sath bhagwaan ne banaya hai... par...

Ishita:- par kya Pandit ji... sab theek toh hai na...?

Pandit ji:- baki sab to theek hai... par grah aur nakshatra yeh bata rahe hai ki bahut si muskile aayeingi in dono ke

jeevan me...( dhamaake on all's face except Ritu's)...

Naveen:- kya lekin... kya yeh shadi nahi...?

Pandit ji:- nahi Naveen beta... yeh shadi to hoke rahegi... niyati ne inka sath likha hai... inhe ek dusre ke liye

banaya hai... par yeh bhi sach hai ki inke milan me badha hai... bahut se imtehaan dene honge inhe... par agar yeh

dono sath rahe to har ek muskil kat jayegi... aur sabse jyada Naina beta tumhe sayyam aur shradha rakhni hogi...

tumhe apne har parishthati me Rajveer ka sath dena hoga... tum hi ho jo Rajveer ko pura karogi... jo ise aane wali

har musibat se bachaogi... waise bhi, yeh to har patni ka dharm hota hai ki apne pati ki har musibat ko door kar

dena... Ishita ji...apne bete ke liye bilkul sahi kanya chuni hai aapne... aapke bete ki kundalii kuchh aisa hi keh

rahi hai...

Ishita:- sukriya Pandit ji... abhi aapne kaha ki inki zindagi me mushibat ayegi... kaisi musibat aur...

Pandit ji:- bilkul sahi kaha maine... musibat Rajveer ki kismat me hai... jiska niwaran Naina hai... jab tak Naina

Rajveer ke sath rahegi inka sath har ek muskil ko par kar jayega... par Rajveer ke sath - sath Naina ki kundali me

bhi kuchh kathinaiaa likhi hai... iske liye... inki shadi se pehle... ek Pooja karani hogi... aur sath hi sath Naina ko

shadi se pehle apna pehla teej ka brat rakhna hoga... taki ishwar apni kripa in par barsha sake aur inki shadi -

shuda zindagi me pareshania kam aaye...

Ritu:- to iska matalab inaki shadi abhi nahi ho sakti...?

Pandit ji:- ho sakti hai... agle hi hafte achha muhurat hai... par meri rai maniye to yeh sadi abhi na kare yeh Pooja

aur teej ka brat hone ke baad agar kareinge to Rajveer ki aayu me bradhi hogi... baki aap jo sahi samjhe...

Naina:- Pandit ji yeh shadi mere teej ke brat ke baad hi hogi... main yeh Pooja aur yeh brat jarur karungi...

Ishita:- Pandit ji to aap teej ke baad hi koi sabse subh muhurat bata dijiye... waise bhi agle hafte bahut jaldi ho

jata... hum waise bhi yeh shadi itani jaldi nahi kar paate...

Pandit ji:- abhi teej me kafi waqt hai... in 4 mahino me inki grah dasha badal sakti hai... to main inke vivaah ka

muhurat teej ke baad hi bataunga... aur waise agle hafte sirf ek hi subh muhurat hai... aur uske baad 3 mahine tak

ashubh kaal chalega... jisme koi bhi subh karya nahi hote... aur teej hone ke baad achhe muhurat suru ho

jaayeinge... tab hi main sabhi tithiyan bata dunga... unhi ke hisaab se saare karya kram kariyega... Rishabh...

Rishabh:- ji Pandit ji...

Pandit ji:- chinta na karo... jo ho raha hai... sab achhe ke liye ho raha hai... achha ab main chalta hun...

Rishabh:- dhanyawaad Pandit ji... aap humare in bachho par apna ashirwaad bana kar rakhiyega...

Pandit ji:- mera ashirwaad in dono ke sath humesha rahega... ab main chalta hun... ( Pandit ji left...)...

Rajveer in mind:- what the crap lagta hai... is pandit ko bhi Ritu ji ne paise khila hi diye... kya faltu ka fek raha

tha... but achha hai... agar possible hua to main in char mahino me hi apna kaam nikaal lunga... jo hai... Naveen

ki barbaadi...

Naina in her mind:- oh noo... 4 mahine... itane din ab aapse kaise door reh paungi main...

Ritu in her mind:- oh shit... maine socha tha... Rajveer ke mutabit ek ya 2 mahine baat aage jayegi... par char

mahine... koi baat nahi... in madam ke nakhare 4 mahine aur jhel le Ritu... aur waise bhi Rajveer aur Naina ke

beech duri badhaane ke liye jo maine socha hai... uske liye bhi achha khasha time mil gaya hai...

Naveen:- Ritu... ( he placed his hand on her soulder)... Ritu...

Ritu:- ha ji... ji...

Naveen:- kab se awaaz de raha hun... kaha kho gayi...

Ritu:- nahi kahin nahi... kahiye...

Naveen:- wo lunch ki taiyaari karo...

Ritu:- ha - ha... Bani... ( both Bani and Ritu left to kitchen...)...

Ishita:- bhai shaab yeh jo Pooja ke liye bol rahe the.. to kyun na yeh Pooja teej ke ek din pehle hi rakhi jaaye... subh

rahega...

Rishabh:- ji jaisa aap sahi samjhe... humare kul mandir main Rajveer aur Naina jakar Pandit ji se mil leinge... wo

sab kuchh bata dienge ki kya aur kaise karna hai...

after lunch...

Viren:- achha to ab hum chalte hai... baki ki baatien baad me hoti hi raheingi... namaste...

Rishabh:- manasate... ( Rajveer, Ishita Viren Pooja and Aalekh left...)...

Night time...

Naina's room...

Naina is thinking about the entire things happened with her... aur bahut kuchh soch bhi rahi thi...

Naina in her heart:- oh god... itane din... Bani teri kaalii zabaan lag gayi... meri train to ab maal gadi se bhi dheere

chalegi... ahhh... par koi baat nahi... at least ab main wo pal jee sakungi... jo main raj ke sath jeena chahti

thi... par yeh raj bhi na azeeb hai... aaj humara roka hua hai... mujhse baat tak nahi ki... yeh nahi ki ek call kar

le... kal bhi call nahi kia tha unhone... main unse naraaz hun... yeh bhi nahi pata unhe... hey bhagwaan yeh kaise

namune pe dil aa gaya hai mera...

Aalekh's house...

Aalekh apne room me baitha coffee pi raha tha... aur kuchh soch raha hai...

Aalekh to himself:- hmmm... sahi hua hai jo hua... atleast ab mujhe time mil gaya hai... mujhe kuchh to karna

padega jisse... main veer ki feelings ko change kar saku... i m very happy ki Naina veer ki zindagi me hai... aur jo

kuchh bhi Pandit ji ne kaha hai... i know veer un baaton pe yakeen nahi karta hai... par... pata nahi kyun mujhe

aisa lag raha tha... unka kaha sach hai... hmmm sach hi to hai... aakhir inki zindagi me musibat aane hi wali

hai... jo khud veer creat karega... par main aisa kya karun ki... oh ha idea... par us bandariyaan ki help leni

padegi... hmmm its ok Aalekh... veer ke liye kuchh bhi... par uska number... ha Naina se mangta hu... ( he

dails Naina's number...)

Naina:- ha Aalekh kaho...

Aalekh:- hi Naina kaisi ho... kya baat hai... low - low sa sound kar rahi ho...

Naina:- nahi aise hi... ek baat batao Aalekh... yeh tumhara dost kis planet se aya hai... ( Aalekh starts laughing...)

has kya rahe ho...

Aalekh:- kya kar dia veer ne... are nahi - nahi maine galat sawaal puchha... kya nahi kia veer ne...?

Naina:- wahi to... yaar jab kisi couple ki shadi tai hoti hai... to we phone pe ghanto baatien karte hai... aur yeh hai

ki ek call nahi karte mujhe...

Aalekh:- ab main kya kahu... tumhare pass itna achha option tha... ab tumhe wo namuna pasand aaya to main kya

karun...

Naina:- aisa kuchh nahi hai... wo bahut achhe hai... wait... option...? which option...?

Aalekh:- main aur kaun... mana ki main veer ka best frnd hun... par ladkiyon ke maamle me veer se bilkul alag

hun... i know how to treat a girl... par wo to ullu hai...

Naina:- ha ha ha very funny... achha batao..kyun call kia...

Aalekh:- are ha... Bani ka number chahiye tha...

Naina:- kya... Bani ka... kyun... hey kahin meri best frnd to pasand nahi aa gayi aapko...

Aalekh:- oh common Naina... wo to aywai kuchh kaam tha... warna us billi se mujhe kya lena dena...

Naina:- aywai ha... chalo koi nahi... likho number... ( then Naina use Bani ka number deti hai aur dono ek dusre

ko bye kehte hai...).. main hi laga leti hun...( Naina Rajveer ka number dail karti hai... Rajveer wash room me

hota hai... so pick nahi karta...)... omg abhi se yeh haal... inke nakhare... ahhh... mujhe bhi nahi karni aapse

baat... good night...( aur muh bana kar late jati hai...)

yahan Aalekh Bani ko call karta hai... Bani so rahi hoti hai... to neend me hi Aalekh ka call leti hai...

Bani ( sleeping tone):- hello...

Aalekh:- hii...

baani;- kaun bol raha hai...?

Aalekh:- its me Aalekh... Rajveer ka dost... aur aapki best frnd Naina ka hone wala dewar... ( Bani ko 440 bolt ka

shock laga aur wo uth kar baith gayi...)...

baani:- tummm...

Aalekh:- ha kyun...

Bani in her mind:- kahin ise Pooja ne kuchh keh to nahi diya... ( loudly)... ji kahiye...

Aalekh:- Bani.. tum so gayi thi kya...

Bani:- time kya ho raha hai... ( Aalekh looks at wall clock...)...

Aalekh:- its about 12 in the night...

Bani:- to is time normal loge sote hi hai...

Aalekh(muh bana ke):- ha - ha samajh gaya... wo mujhe tumse ek help chahiye thi isiliye call kia...

Bani:- mujhe nahi karni tumhari help...

Aalekh:- are azeeb item ho yar... pehle sun to lo...

Bani:- bako...

Aalekh:- pehle aap tameez se baat kijiye.. bhuliye mat Naina ka dewar hu...

Bani:- to uske dewar ho pati nahin... khair batao kya kaam hai...

Aalekh:- Bani meri baat dhyaan se suno... tumhe nahi lagta ki veer aur Naina ki shadi me kafi gap hai... i mean

almost 3 - 4 months...

Bani:- ha wo to hai... uska chehra hi utar gaya tha yeh sun kar...

Aalekh:- wahi to veer ka bhi... kitna upset hai wo janti ho tum... wo to bechara soch raha tha ki is month hi uski

Naina uske sath hogi... par ab dekho... itna lambaaa intezaar...

Bani:- ha wo bhi hai... how sweet of him... Naina is so lucky... kash mujhe bhi koi raj jaisa mil jaye...

Aalekh:- main hun na...

Bani:-kyaa...

Aalekh:- are mere kehne ka matalab yeh hai ki main hun na... tumhare liye koi veer jaisa dhoondh kar laa dunga...

Bani:- achha... raj jaise ladke sabji mandi me milte hai kya... jo tum dhoondh kar laa doge...

Aalekh:- achha meri ma... veer aur Naina ki baat kare...

Bani:- ha bolo.. maine kaha kuchh bol rahi hun...

Aalekh:- oh really... thank to god... aap kuchh nahi bol rahi... to main yeh keh raha tha ki unhe hum date par

bheje to... aur wo bhi surprise date... aur fir baad me kuchh plan karte hai... jisse... we dono jyada se jyada waqt

sath rahe...

Bani:- ha yeh to achha idea hai... ( phir kuchh sochti hai...) i have a plan...

Aalekh:- kya...?

Bani:- phone pe nahi... kal milo.. phir batati hun...

Aalekh:- ok then kal sham 7 baje lake avenue...

Bani:- done...

Aalekh:- good night...

Bani- hmm good night... late mat hona... i hate late comers...

Aalekh:- ji jo aagya...

Bani:- kya...

Aalekh:- ji kuchh nahi... so jaao... ( both cuts the call... Aalekh to god..).. koi dhang ka nahi mila tha aapko...

Bani( looking at phone):- gadha... ( both slept...)...

yahan Rajveer wash room se bahar aata hai... to Naina ka miss call dekhta hai...

Rajveer:- Naina ne is waqt kyun call kia... kahin kuchh... ( he dails her number...)...

Naina:- hello...

Rajveer:- ha Naina tumne call kia tha sab theek to hai na...?

Naina:- ji aap kaun...

Rajveer:- Naina main Rajveer...

Naina:- oh ha... wahi Rajveer... jiske sath aaj meri shadi fix hui hai...

Rajveer:- ofrcz wahi... aur kitne Rajveer ko janti ho tum...

Naina:- wo kya hai na... aaj meri shadi us insaan se tai hui hai... jisse main pyar karti hun... aur kal se main uske

call ka wait kar rahi thi... ki ek baar wo mujhe call karle... par kya hai na... mere fiance to price of india hai...

unke paas itna kaam hai ki apni hone wali biwi ko ek call karne ka time nahi hai... aur aap jante hai... unka naam

bhi Rajveer hi hai... so mujhe laga ki aap koi aur hai... kyuki mere raj ke pass to time hi nahi hai mujhse baat

karne ke liye...hnnn... ( Rajveer smiles...)...

Rajveer:- Naina you know what tum pagal ho... are agar maine call nahi kia... to tum to kar sakti thi na...

Naina:- wahi to kia tha... par aapne uthaya hi nahi...

Rajveer:- are wash room me tha...

Naina;- kal se...?

Rajveer:- Naina... ok sorry... ab boliye... kya baat karni thi...

Naina:- hey bhagwaan... raj kya main aapko aise hi call nahi kar sakti... koi kaam hona jaruri hai...?

Rajveer:- nahi kar sakti ho... anytime...( phir dono Rajveer Naina kafi der tak baat karte hai... actually bol to sirf

Naina rahi hai,... Rajveer to sirf sun raha tha... aur kareeb ek baje dono so jaate hai...)...

next day...

poora din aise hi nikal gaya... sabhi apne - apne kaam me busy the... Naina bhi office me thi... sham ka waqt

hua...

shekhawat's office...

Aalekh:- achha veer main nikal raha hun... bye...

Rajveer:- ruk abhi to 7 bhi nahi baje hai... itani jaldi jake kya karega...

Aalekh:- aa gaya na apni aukaat pe...

Rajveer:-matalab...

Aalekh:- ban gaya na mera boss...

Rajveer:- matalab...

Aalekh;- sab ki tarah ab mere bhi jaldi jaane pe rok tok... veer tu badal gaya hai...

Rajveer:- chup kar... (tabhi Aalekh ka cell ring karta hai..)...

Aalekh( on phone):- ha aa raha hun...

Rajveer:- oho... kaha ja raha hai... ab to main tujhe bilkul jaane nahi dunga...

Aalekh:- abe ek important kaam hai yaar...

Rajveer:- fek mat... kisse milne ja raha hai... aur agar tune mujhse jhooth bola toh...

Aalekh:- woo... wo... ek ladki hai...

Rajveer:- ladki... girl frnd...?

Aalekh:- ha... veer main usse bahut pyar karta hun...

Rajveer:- jhuth... samajh gaya... ja yahan se...

Aalekh:- are sach me...i love her...

Rajveer:- tu har ladki ke liye yahi kehta hai...

Aalekh:- are...

Rajveer:-ja... ja...( Aalekh muh bana kar chala jata hai...) nautanki...

aluhwalia's office...

Naina:- kya... 1 month... par bhaiya...

Naveen:- Naina... samajhne ki kosis kar beta... main nahi ja sakta... aur rahi baat teri toh tu iske alawa sirf ek

project dekh rahi hai... to main Huda ko keh dunga wo sambhal lega... par is project ke liye tujhe paris jana hi

hoga...

Naina( sadly):- ok bhaiya... ( Naveen smiles...)...

Naveen:- itna sada sa muh mat bana... main Rajveer ko keh dunga tujhe roz call karega...

Naina( blushing);- kya bhaiya aap bhi... ( she huged him...)...

Naveen:- Naina tu khush hai na...?

Naina:- ha bhaiya... main bahut khush hun... bahut - bahut... aur yeh sab aapki aur bhabhi ki wajah se... aur

aap to khush hai na...?

Naveen:- ha agar tu khush hai... to main bhi bahut khush hun... so its final aap paris ja rahi hai...

Naina:- hmmm...

Lake avenue... coffee shop...

Bani ek table pe baithi Aalekh ka kafi der se wait kar rahi hai,... aur use gali bhi de rahi hai...

Bani:- sare boys ek jaise hote hai... khud mujhe bulaya aur khud gayab... monkey... donkey... chimpanzee...

Aalekh:- kyun apne rishtedaron ko yaad kar rahi ho...

Bani:- what... to aa gaye aap...

Aalekh( baithte hue);- ji ha... yeh mera bhoot nahi hai...

Bani:- kash hota...

Aalekh:- leave it... bolo kya plan hai...

Bani:- itna late kyun aaye...?

Aalekh:- ab kya karun aapke jo hone wale jija ji hai na... wo mujhse itna kaam karata hai ki main kya karun...

Bani:- oh really... tum kisi kaam ke bhi ho...

Aalekh:- oh hello... tumhe mujhse problem kya hai...?

Bani:- tum... tum khud hi ek bahut badi chalti firati problem ho... aur kuchh...

Aalekh:- ahhh... u are... u are...

Bani:- shabd nahi mil rahe hai na meri taarif me to jaane do...

Aalekh:- nahi actually... main na achhe school me padha hun... jahan mujhe galian nahi sikhaai gayi...

Bani:- you... (glass utha ke use marne ko bathti hai... Aalekh uska hath rok leta hai...)...

Aalekh;- hold it... khubsurat ladkiyon ke hanth pyar karne ke liye bane hai... waar karne ke liye nahi... ( Bani

was taken a back...)...

Bani:- what... what did u say...?

Aalekh:- yeh dailouge... maine apni 17vi girlfrnd ko mara tha... aur wo agle hi pal pat gayi thi...

Bani:- tumhara kuchh nahi ho sakta... come to the topic... so plan yeh hai ki... ( then Bani told him some

thing...)...

Aalekh:- nice... waise Naina saree pehen kar aaye toh ...? actually red saree... wo saree me bahut achhi lagti

hai...

Bani:- ok... and Rajveer looks hot in black... so...

Aalekh:- done... wait... bagal me mall hai... chale...?..

Bani:- yup lets go...

mall...

Bani:- waise Rajveer ke pass kafi se black outfit honge... so bas Naina ke liye select karte hai...

Aalekh:- dumbo... veer ke clothes hum use kaise gift kareinge...?

Bani:- ya right... lets go...

dono hi pehle Rajveer ke liye ek bahut achha black outfit lete hai...jisme trouser, polo neck T and Jacket hota hai...

fir dono Naina ke liye ek bahut hi khubsurat half netted red saree dekhte hai...

Aalekh:- jao ise try karo...

Bani:- kya par main kyun...?

Aalekh:- are pata chal jayega ki yeh saaree actual me achhi lagegi ya nahi... dekho... red is very bright color kabhi

kabhi negative effect bhi pad sakta hai... samjho na... abhi tum mujhe pehen kar dikhao... agar tum par mujhe

achhi lagi to samjho veer ko bhi pasand aayegi...

Bani:- ok... ( Bani saaree lekar trial room me jati hai... aur kuchh der baad change karke aati hai...)

oh tora saajan... aayo tore desh...
badli badra...badla sawaan...
badla jag ne bhesh...ree...
tohra saajan aayon tore desh...
(yahan Aalekh clean bold... wo muh khula karke Bani ko dekhta reh jata hai...)

Bani kabse Aalekh ka kuchh bolne ka wait kar rahi thi... fir uske pass ja kar use hilaati hai...

Bani:- Aalekh... kya hua...

Aalekh:- u r hot...

Bani( shocked):- what...

Aalekh:- ahh... i mean... bahut achhi lag rahi ho... Naina bhi bahut achhi lagegi...

Bani:- hmmm... ( jakar change karke aati hai...).. yeh tumhe kya hua tha...

Aalekh;- nothing... tumhe saree me dekha toh...

Bani:- toh...?

Aalekh:- toh... toh... toh... waise hi lag rahi thi... jaise daily lagti ho... bandariyaa... ab chale...

Bani:- oh.. ha... what...teri toh... (Aalekh hasta hua aage bhaga... peeche uske Bani...)...

next day...

Naina apne office me kuchh kam kar rahi hoti hai... wahi Rajveer bhi... dono ke pass ek - ek parcel pahunchta

hai... Naina jab parcel kholti hai to usme wahi saree hoti hai... jo Bani aur Aalekh ne purchase ki thi... aur

Rajveer ke pass bhi wahi outfits hote hai... dono hi surprised the ki unhe kisne kapde bheje... fir dono ki hi nazar

ek letter pe padti hai... dono hi letter read karna start karte hai...

Rajveer:-yeh ek chhota sa tohfa us khas insaan ke liye... jisne mujhe jaisi aam insaan ko khaash banaya hai...

hope so aapko pasand aayega... ek shaam aapke sath aapke naam... rat 9 baje... hotel pinkvilla... yours... and

only yours Naina...

Rajveer:- yeh kya naya natak hai,... but these are my fav clothes Naina ko kaise pata chala ki yeh mujhe pasand

hai... khair jana to padega...

other side...

Naina( blushing):- tum mujhe har tarah pasand ho... tumhari khubsurati se nahi tumse pyar kia hai maine... par

jab saree me hoti ho to aur bhi jyada khubsurat lagti ho... yeh ek chhota sa tohfa... humare pyar ko celebrate

karne ke liye... hope so tumhe pasand aaye... pehenna jarur... rat 9 baje.. hotel pinkvilla... yours Rajveer nhhh...

Raj... ( then she heard a voice...)...

Bani ( coming to her):- la la la la la la ... he he he he he ... lala la la la ... he he heee...

Naina:- kya...?

Bani:- koi bahut jyada blush kar raha hai... pyar ka pehla khat hai kya...

Naina:- shut up aisa kuchh nahi hai...

Bani:- achha... to yeh saaree... ha... wow Naina kya saaree hai yaar... means raj be bheji...?

Naina:- hmmm...

Bani;- kya hot saaree hai yaar...

Naina:- ha wo aaj rat me date pe bulaya hai...

Bani:- oye hoye... meri soniyon... sambhal kar ha,... kahi kadam behek na jaaye...

Naina:- shut up...

Bani:- ya ya... waise main to yahan yeh puchhne aai thi ki... bhabhi ne bataya tu paris ja rahi hai...

Naina:- ha wo kaam hai...

Bani:- raj ko bataya...?

Naina:- nahi... aaj bata dungi...

Bani:- chal achha hai... Naina yeh jo pal tujhe mile hai na... unhe dil se jeena... ok...

Naina:- hmmm...( both hugs...)...

Bani:- chal abhi bye... mujhe kuchh kaam hai...

Naina:- bye... ( Bani left...par in dono ko hi nahi pata tha ki koi tha jo inaki baatein sun raha tha...)...

outside aluhwalia's office...

Bani;- is ghadhe ne aisa kya likha tha ki Naina itna blush kar rahi thi... abhi puchhti hun... ( she calls Aalekh)...

Aalekh:- ha... bolo...

Bani:- tumne letter me aisa kya likha tha ki Naina to the core blush kar rahi thi...

Aalekh:- tumhe nahi samajh aayega...

Bani:- oye... kyun...

Aalekh:- romatice sa tha kuchh...

Bani:- achha to mujhe kyun nahi samajh aayega... mujhme koi probolem hai...?

Aalekh:- yeh tum jaano... waise tumne bhi aisa kya likha tha ki veer ko itna gussa aa gaya...

Bani:- are nahi yar... maine kuchh aisa waisa nahi likha tha... kuchh gadbad likh diya kya maine...?

Aalekh;- mujhe kya pata... byeee sweet heart... ( he cuts the call...)...

Bani( shocked):- sweet heart...

hotel pink villa...

Rajveer unhi oufits jo Bani aur Aalekh ne use send kiye the... me ander aata hai... bahut hi jyada handsome lag

raha tha... jakar reception par apne reservation ka puchta hai... ek hotel boy use reserved place pe le jata hai...

pool side... well decorated table for two... Rajveer ko thoda sa awkward sa bhi feel ho raha tha... wo Naina ka

wait karne lagta hai... after about 10 minutes Naina bhi wahan pahunchti hai... jab wo ander jaane lagti hai...

almost sabhi ki nazare uspar thi... kyuki Naina us half netted red saree me bahut jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi...

wo table ka puchhti hai... aur Rajveer ke pass jati hai... jakar Rajveer ke peeche khadi hoti hai...

Naina:- Raj...( Rajveer turned and lost in her beauty... he is just looking at her... without blinking his eyes...

Naina is just loving the way Rajveer was looking at her...)...

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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

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It was Awesome Part.😊

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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Happy to see your Update.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
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