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thanks every one for liking and commenting on part 8...
here is part 9 enjoy...
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*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 9

a bright new sunny day...

aise hi 3 din beet gaye...sab ki life normal chal rahi thi... rajveer ko ek tender ke kaam se aagra jana tha... so wo by road gaya... aur dusri taraf is baar is project ki jimmedari naina ko di naveen ne... aur naina bhi by road hi agra gayi thi... naina is baat se anjaan thi ki rajveer wahan pahunchne wala hai... par rajveer ko pata tha ki is baar alhuwalia's ko naina represent kar rahi hai... use pata tha ki wo hi RV hai aaj is baat ka pata naina ko sayad chal jaaye... par wo bekhauf sa chala gaya...pura din aise hi tender ke kaam me chala gaya... abhi tak rajveer naina mile bhi nahi... shaam ko project ki annoucement honi thi ki jiske liye party hotel me hi organise ki gayi thi... rajveer apne black armaani me pahucha... sabhi ki nazar uspe thi... thodi der baad naina bhi ek black gown me pahunchi she is looking stunning... uske daimond ke earings uske bare soulder ko kiss kar rahe the... no doubt rajveer is staring her... naina ki nazar rajveer par padi aur wo bahut khush ho gayi... wo sheedha rajveer ke pas gayi...

naina:- hello... mr balc...ah... raj...veer...

rajveer:- hii... naina... aap bhi yahan...

naina:- wahi to, maine aapko yahan expect nahi kiya tha...

rajveer:- maine bhi... tender ke liye aayi hai yahan...?

naina:- yup...you too na...? ( rajveer nods in yes...) lets have a seat...

rajveer:- ya... ( both sat down at a table...)

a man from stage:- hello ladies and gentle man... a very warm welcome to all of you... abhi tender announce ment me thoda waqt hai... so lets enjoy the night... plzz come on to the dance floor... ( he came to rajveer).. mr shekhawat... and you ( to naina) miss aluhwalia... you both make a great pair... plzz join the dance floor...

rajveer:- ji wo...

naina:- sure why not... ( the man left from there)...hey raj...veer common lets dance...

rajveer:- naina no...wo...

naina:- common... (naina rajveer ko dance floor pe le jati hai... sabhi dance kar rahe the... light bahut dim kar di gayi... raj ne apna ek hath naina ke bare soulder pe rakha... which make naina to close her eyes... aur dusra naina ke waist pe rakha... aur usne naina ko apne thoda kareeb pull kiya... naina ne rajveer ke soulder me apne hath rakhe... dono hi music ki rythem me move kar rahe the... dono hi sirf ek dusre ki aakhon me dekh rahe the...

for naina:-

pal bhar theher jaao...dil yeh sambhal jaaye...
kaise tumhe roka karun...
meri taraf ata...har gum fisal jaaye..
aakhon me tumko bharun...
bin bole baaatein...tumse karu...
agar tum sath ho...agar tum sath ho...
agar tum sath ho...agar tum sath ho...
( naina bas rajveer ki aankhon me mano doob si gayi thi... uske dil me jo chal raha tha... wo khud use naam nahi de paa rahi thi...par ha yeh bhi sach tha ki rajveer ka sath use pasand tha... use rajveer pasand tha... wo rajveer ke sath rehna chahti thi... par kyun iska jabaab uske pass nahi tha...)

for rajveer:-

teri nazro mein hai...tere sapne...
tere sapno mein hai naraazii...
mujhe lagta hai ki...baatien dil ki...
hoti lafzo ki...dhokeee baazi...
tum saath ho... ya naa ho...
kya fark hai...
bedard thi yeh zindagi...
bedard hai...
agar tum sath ho...
agar tum sath ho...
(rajveer bhi naina ki aankhon me dekh raha tha... use naina ki aankhon me sachhai aur masumiyat nazar aai... par yeh wahi rajveer hai... jo pyar me yakeen nahi karta hai... jiska dard itna jyada hai ki... use zindagi hi bedard lagne lagi hai... ab kisi ka sath uske liye koi mayne hi nahi rakhta hai... wo sirf is liye jee raha hai... kyuki uski saansien chal rahi hai... baki aur kuchh bhi nahi...)

for Rajveer and naina:-

agar tum sath ho...
agar tum sath ho...
agar tum sath ho...
agar tum sath ho...
(naina kuchh talaash rahi thi rajveer ki aankhon me... jo use mil nahi raha tha... bechain si ho rahi thi naina... aur rajveer wo to na jaane kyun... naina ki aankhon me doob raha tha... kyun naina ki aakhien rajveer ko attract kar rahi thi... yeh rajveer khud nahi samajh pa raha tha... par jo bhi tha... dono ko kisi ki khabar nahi thi... tabhi clapping ki awaaj se dono apni soch se bahar aaye...)

rajveer naina apni table pe jakar baith gaye... thodi der baar tender ki annoucement hui...

a man:- and this project goes to... aluhwaalia's... ( naina was too happy...) conratulations miss aluhwalia...

naina:- thankyou...

rajveer ( frwded his hand):- conratulations naina... ( naina shakes hand with him... but feeling bad for him bcz he lost...)...

naina:- thankyou... and i m sorry...

rajveer:- sorry for what...? ( naina makes a puppy face...) oh common naina... its a business... yeh daily ka hai... but i m very happy that... u won...( naina smiles... rajveer ka cell ring hua usne naina ko excuse kiya aur bahar gaya... naina bas usi direction me dekh rahi thi jahan se rajveer gaya tha... fir sabko excuse karke bina kuchh soche wo rajveer ke peeche gayi...)

outside...

a man to rajveer:- sir aapne aisa kyun kiya... aapne jaan bujh kar yeh tender aluhwalia's ko dilwa diya... kyun... wo to...

rajveer:- nahi maine yeh aluhwalia's ko nahi dilaya hai... maine yeh tender Naina ko dilaya hai... aaj uski is level pe pehli jeet hai...

man:- par kyun sir... aise business nahi hota...

rajveer:- yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata ki maine aisa kyun kiya but main chahta tha ki naina jeete... forget it... is baat ki khabar kisi ko nahi honi chahiye...and thanks...

man:- ur welcome sir... ( that man left... and rajveer also left... but he was not aware of that naina was listening his entire convo with that man... she has tears... and a sweet smile on her lips... she wiped out her tears and went back to hall...)

naina:- mujhe dhoondh rahe hai...?

rajveer:- nahin to... y should i...? achha naina... i think i should leave to my room... byee good night...

naina:- par dinner...?

rajveer:- nahi...

naina:- kyun...?

rajveer:- actually mujhe yeh shor sharaba jyada pasand nahi hai... so...

naina:- may i join u for dinner... at your place...?

rajveer:- what...?

naina:- ya... actually main yahan kisi ko jayada janti nahi hu... jis kaam ke liye aai thi wo to gaya... so i also thought to go back to my room... but i m hungry also... so we can have dinner together...

rajveer:- no naina... koi dekh lega to... u dont know these people...

naina:- aapko sach me inki parwaah hai...?

rajveer:- mujhe kabhi bhi duniyaan ki parwaah nahi hoti... mujhe to tu... i mean...

naina( smiles as she is getting everything):- go change and come to my room main khana order karke rakhungi...

rajveer:- are par...

naina:- aaj meri pehli jeet hai... is level pe... plzz... ( rajveer nods... and naina left from there...)

after some time rajveer got changed and reached naina's room... in the meanwhile naina also got changed in her night ware and ordered dinner... rajveer pressed the bell... naina opened both were at sofa for the dinner...

naina:- mujhe nahi pata... apko kya pasand hai... so mujhe jo pasand tha wahi order kar diya... actually i like indian spicey food so...( rajveer just smiles... naina serves him... both start to eat...) waise aapko kya pasand hai...?

rajveer:- waise to main sab kha leta hu... but i love continental...

naina:- continental...? but wo to... matalab aapko spicey food nahi pasand...

rajveer:- no... a not like that but...

naina:- aapne mujhe bola kyun nahi... ab chhodiye ise... yeh bahut spicey hai... aap kha nahi paoge...

rajveer:- no naina... its ok.. tumhe to pasand hai na... i will manage...

naina:- par...

rajveer:- no means no... main to yahi khaunga... waise yummy hai...( naina just looking at him...) kya hua tum bhi khaao na...

naina:- ya...( after some time they have done with their food...) coffee...?

rajveer:- ya... but black one without sugar...

naina:- black wo bhi bina chini ki... kadvi...

rajveer:- but i like it... (naina oreders coffee)...

after some time...

both are sitting at the woindow pane of naina's room facing the outside view or u can say the sky... having coffee...

naina:- ek baat puchhu...?

rajveer:- hmm puchho...

naina:- aap itane shakht hone ka dikhawa kyun karte hai...?( rajveer looks at naina and then at the sky...)...

rajveer:- main koi dikhawa nahi karta... i m like that...

naina:- no aap waise bilkul nahi hai...

rajveer:- tumhe kisne kaha...?

naina:- maine mehsoos kiya hai...

rajveer:- jaruri nahi ki aankhon dekha sach ho naina... kabhi - kabhi aankhon dekha bahut bada juth bhi ban jata hai...

naina:- ha sahi kaha aapne... mana ki aankhon dekha ek dokha ho sakta hai... par jo dil ki aankhon se mehsoos kiya jata hai... wo humesha har ek juth aur har ek dokhe se pare hota hai... aur maine mehsoos kiya hai... aapke is shakht mizaaz ke peeche chhipe achhe insaan ko...( rajveer smiles with smrik..)...

rajveer:- achha insaan... you know what... u are the first one jisne mujhe ACHCCHA insaan kaha... some thing different...

naina:- ha kyuki aap achhe ho... aur ek baat... kabhi - kabhi khul kar has lena chahiye... hasi par tax nahi lagta... ( rajveer looks at her...like worst joke...)...i know bad joke hai... par its true... try karke dekhiyega...

rajveer(looking at sky):- juthi muskaan ka kya fayda naina... hasi aur khushi to wo mayne rakhti hai... jo dil ko sukun de... aapke ander chhipe dard ko bahar nikaal de... wo ek pal jab aap sach me dil se khush ho... wo muskaan mayne rakhti hai... dikhawa to sabhi karte hai par wakai kaun khush hai aur kaun nahi... iska andaza lagana bahut jyada muskil hai...

naina( looks at rajveer):- aisa kya hai... jo aap apne ander chhipa rahe hai..? aisa kya hai... jo aapki aankhon me itna dard hai...?( rajveer looks at naina... naina looks down...)...

rajveer:- aisa kuchh nahi hai... its getting late i got to go... (rajveer turns to go...)...

naina:- rajveer...( he looks at her...)... thankyou... ( he looks at her like for what...).. un sabhi cheezo ke liye jo aapne mere liye kiya hai... ( he again gives her a questioning look...)... kahan se suru karu...? sabse pehle us din baarish ki raat mei car bana kar meri help karne ke liye... uske baad mujhse jhadga karke mujhe yeh samjhaane ke liye ki carelessly driving nahi karni chahiye... uske baad... meri izzat bachane ke liye... uske baad mujhe lift dene ke liye... aur...

rajveer:- bas naina... maine jo kiya... wo waqt aur haalaat ki maang thi,... isiliye... plzz dont say thanks...

naina:- ok... nahi kahungi thanks... par kya main aapse kuchh mang sakti hun... ( rajveer with his eyes...what... naina streched her hand infront of him...) Frnds... (rajveer looks at her then to her hand...)...

rajveer:- i m sorry i cant... ( he left...)...

naina wahi khadi rahi... aur bas usi ore dekh rahi hai... jahan se abhi rajveer gaya...uski aankhon se aanshun behne lage... wo kuchh samajh nahi paa rahi thi... haalat ko nahi samajh pa rahi thi... ya sayad... rajveer ko...

naina:- kyun rajveer... akhir kyun... kya kuchh jyada mang liya maine...? maine aapse is baat ka jabaab mang ke rahungi ki aakhir kyun aap mujhse dosti nahi karna chahte...akhir... kyunnn...???

next day...

naina apne room me hi thi... aur kal raat uske aur rajveer ke beech hui saari baaton ko yaad kar rahi thi... kahin na kahin... rajveer ka uski dosti ko na accept karna naina ko bahut takleef de raha tha... wo itna to janti hai ki wo rajveer ko pasand karne lagi hai... par kis had tak is baat ka andaza to abhi khud naina ko nahi tha... par kyun rajveer ka ek chhota sa inkaar naina ko itani takleef de raha tha...? is baat ka jabaab bhi naina ko abhi dhundhna tha... naina apne inhi khayaalon me khoyi hui thi ki... uske room me knock hua...

naina:- come in...

rajveer:- good morning naina... ( naina turns and find rajveer there...)...

naina;- mr shekhawat aap yahan... ( rajveer ko naina ka use mr shekhawat kehna achha nahi laga...)...

rajveer:- wo main nikal raha tha... to socha aapko puchh lun ki...

naina:- no thanks mr shekhawat i will manage...

rajveer:- oh common naina... plzz just call me rajveer...

naina:- why should i ? u are not my frnd... so why should i...? main sirf apne dosto ko unke naam se bulati hu... ajnabiyon ko nahi...

rajveer:- look naina... i m really sorry... i know i was rude yesterday... par main.. naina meri zindagi me bahut hi kam loge hai... even aalekh aur pooja ke siwa mera koi dost nahi hai... janti ho kyun...? ( naina is just looking in his eyes... she is desperately wanted to know why he is like that...?..) kyuki mujhe dar lagta hai... rishte jodne se... in sab ke siwa jo bhi meri zindagi me aaya hai... usne sirf dhokha diya hai... chahe wo mujhe ho ya meri family ko... darta hu ki ek naya rishta jodunga aur... takleef ke siwa kuchh nahi milega... darta hu ki fir koi aayega aur mere jajbaaton ke sath khel kar chala jayega... darta hu ki... ( naina puts her hand on his mouth... both are just looking at each other eyes...)...

naina:- mujhe nahi pata ki aapke sath kya hua hai RAJ...aur mujhe janna bhi nahi hai... par har ek insaan ek sa nahi hota... jab tak aap kisi ko ek mauka nahi deinge tab tak wo kaise aapki is galatfehmi ko door kar payega ki... har ek rishta dard nahi deta... har ek apna chhod ke nahi jata... kyun aap aisa sochte hai... jabki aap khud kisi ko dard nahi dete... jitna maine aapko jana hai...aapne sirf dena sheekha hai... aapka dil jo kahe aap wahi karo... mat karo mujhse dosti... mat rakho mujhse koi bhi rishta... par apni zindagi to jee sakte hai na aap...? atleast itna hi kar dijiye... (naina apna hath uske muh se hatati hai...najane kyun naina ki baaton se rajveer ki aankhien num ho gayi thi...) i m sorry i think maine kuchh jyada hi bol diya...

rajveer:- nahi kuchh bhi jyada nahi bola hai...(after a big pause..) naina... dosti karogi mujhse...?( naina gave him a astonished look...) aise kya dekh rahi ho... jaan nahi mangi hai... sirf dosti ka hanth manga hai... par ha ek shart hai.. jo mere dost hote hai... unhe mujhse dosti marte dum tak nibhaani padti hai... ( naina have a sweet smile...)...

naina:- ok manzoor hai... par meri bhi ek shart hai...( rajveer gave her kya look)... jo bhi mere dost hote hai na... wo muskuraate hai... aur main unhe unke pure naam se kabhi nahi bulati...

rajveer:- ok matalab ki i have to smile whenever i m with u right...(raises his one brow in typical rajeev style...) but naam...?

naina:- not only with me... but all the time... u have to smile...

rajveer:- what... loge mujhe paagal kaheinge...

naina:- better hai... abhi sadu aur khadush kahte hai... mr arrogant...

rajveer:- naina...

naina:- leave it... to ha... aaj se main aako RAJ kehke bulaungi... bolo manzoor hai...?

rajveer:-raj hnnn... (kuchh yad aaya use but he controlled) ok... so agar aapki shari sharte puri ho gayi ho to kya... hum ab chale...

naina:- sorry i cant go with you main khud bhi car se aayi hun...

rajveer:- oh then its ok... main nikalta hun... delhi me meri meeting bhi hai...

naina:- wait main bhi chalti hun... atleast bahar tak to chal hi sakti hun... ( dono check out karte hai aur bahar ki taraf chale jate hai... ki tabhi koi rajveer ko awaaz deta hai... jise sun kar naina shocked ho jati hai...)...

A man:- hey mr. RV... ( rajveer looks at naina then to that man... both shakes hands...)...

rajveer:- hello mr malhotra... so how's you...?

mr malhotra:- i m fine mr. RV is baar to aapke hath se contract nikal gaya... sorry for that...

rajveer:- its ok... its a business yeh sab to chalta hi rehta hai..haar jeet to lagi hi rehti hai... i m geeting late... i shall take leave now...

mr malhotra;- ok bye...

naina in her mind:- iska matalab raj hi RV hai...

rajveer:- kya hua naina...?

naina:- nothing... wo main kuchh saman bhul gayi hu... aap niklo... bye...

rajveer:- are u sure...?

naina:- ya... (naina apne room me wapas chali gayi...)...

mr malhotra:- sir aapne miss aluhwalia ke saamne yeh sab kehne ko kyun kaha...?

rajveer:- nothing serious mr malhotra... u may leave now...

mr malhotra...:- ok sir...

rajveer in his mind:- bas ab tum dekhte jaao naveen singh alhuwalia... ki tumhari is behen ko hathiyaar bana kar main tumhe kaise todta hu... maine andhere me ek teer chhoda hai... dekhte hai... nishana sahi lagta hai ya nahi... ( a negative music of rajveer is playing in background...)

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Edited by rkchandni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh god rajveer ka revenge shuru
all the best naina
amazing and awesome update dear
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm updat...par Raj aisa kar kyun rha h...jaldi revl
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing part...
Waiting to see Naina's reation...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Amazing part...

Waiting to see Naina's reation...



thanks dear..
naina's reaction will get to see in next part...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vssdp

oh god rajveer ka revenge shuru

all the best naina
amazing and awesome update dear
continue soon and thanks for the pm



thanks dear..
ha ab raj lega apna badla...😆😆😆😆
n u r welcm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gargy4u

Awsm updat...par Raj aisa kar kyun rha h...jaldi revl




thanks gargy..
have some patience dear... jaldi hi sab pata chalega... sab reveal hoga 😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing & very beautifull update
rajveer is srk of movie baazigar waise grey shade wale character & angrey young man look attitude rajeev ko bahut suit karta hai
thanks for pm keep smiling keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome part

loved raj naina convo...

hmmm to raj khud apna sach naina k samne la rha h ye dekhne k liye ki naina ye jan'ne k bad kaise react krti h...raj is so honest😉

waiting for next part...pls update soon😊 n tc

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