Kuchh Rang Pyar ke Aise bhii - RaiNa ff thread 1

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

Raj Part was so Cute.😊

The Brother and Sister Bonding was so Nice.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

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Prasanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Raj hates naina so much.wat hpnd wid shalu?cntn soon...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
Raj Part was so Cute.😊
The Brother and Sister Bonding was so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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thanks priya😊😊

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rainalover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Thnx for pm dear, superb part,now can,t wait for the next update as i m eager to know raj next move,bt bt i m a fan of naveen,can't see him like this, just hope that he is not responsible for shalini condition,there,is some other story with her,bt all it was an,superb update raj,and naina scenes were awesome, plz continue soon, u r such a superb suspense creator,

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: prasannakamila
Raj hates naina so much.wat hpnd wid shalu?cntn soon...

thanks prasu...😊

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

thanks everyone for liking and commenting on part 6... here is part 7... enjoy...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

***Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***
Part 7
(naina aasmaan ko dekh kar apni aankhien band karke yunhi gol - gol ghum rahi thi... aur rajveer bas naina ko door khada dekh raha hai... fir palat kar wapas chala gaya... ki tabhi kisi ki awaaz se naina hose me aati hai...)...

man:- kyun madam akele achha nahi lag raha ho to hum saath de de... (naina palat kar dekhti hai... aur dar jati hai... saamne 3 gunde type aadmi hote hai... naina apna duppatta sahi karke apni car ki taraf jane lagti hai... unme se ek gunda uska rasta block kar leta hai...)...

naina ( gusse se):- mera rasta chhodo...

man 2:- aise kaise... itani raat ko.. is jagah tum jaisi ladki agar saamne ho to kisi ka bhi khoon khaul uthega... phir hum to chote mote aashique hai... (naina ghabra jati hai,... unke intentions wo samajh rahi thi...)

naina:- dekho mere pass mat aana warna... i will... ( shouts) plzzz some one help me... koi hai...

man 3:- tujhe kya lagta hai ki... tu aise chillayegi... aur koi tujhe bacha lega... jaisa filmo me hota hai... hero aakar apni heroine ko bachata hai... (they all laugh... wo naina ka hath pakad leta hai...)

naina:- you... ( naina dusre hath se use thappad marti hai...)...

man 3;- saali... ( wo naina ka duppata kheech leta hai aur fek deta hai... naina gabra jati hai... aur bhagne ki kosis karti hai... ki dusra aadmi uski sleeves ko fad deta hai...naina rone lagti hai... wo naina ko pakad kar uske chehre ke pass jata hi hai ki kisi ka punch uske muh pe padta hai... aur wo aadmi gir jata hai... naina apne saviour ki taraf dekhti hai... wo koi aur nahi rajveer tha... jo sayad naina ki awaaj se wapas aa gaya tha...)

man 1 :- saale... kaun hai be tu... chal fut yahan se... warna tera woh haal kareinge zindagi bhar yaad rakhega...

man 3:- teri toh tune mujhe mara... chal nikal yahan se... ( rajveer unhe ghoor raha tha... naina rajveer ke peeche khadi thi... usne rajveer ka hath pakad lia...)

man 2:- oye hero... yeh koi hindi picture nahi hai... chal nikal yahan se...are ab samjha... are dosto... hum is ladki ke sath maje kareinge toh... ise bhi kuchh... sunn be sauda karte hai... ek baar hum iske sath maje karle phir tu bhi jee bhar ke iske sath... ( rajveer ka gusaa saatve aasmaan me pahunch gaya... usne naina se apna hath chhudaya... aur us aadmi ko maarne laga... sabhi rajveer ko marne ki kosis kar rahe the... par rajveer ka gusaa un par bhari pad raha tha...)

rajveer ( marte hue):- kya kaha... saale... sabhi ko apne jaisa samajh rakha hai kya...? tum jaiso ki wajah se koi ladki safe nahi hai... kameene...

rajveer un sabko maar raha tha... naina bas rajveer ko dekhe ja rahi thi... rajveer unko bahut marta hai... wo loge behaal hokar bhaag jate hai... rajveer gusse se hi palatata hai... to naina ko dekhta hai... jo apni fati sleeve ko sahi karne ki kosis kar rahi thi... rajveer yahan wahan dekhta hai... naina ka duppatta wahan nahi tha... sayad hawa ki wajah se ud gaya tha... wo apni jacket utaar kar naina ko pehna deta hai...)

rajveer:- dont worry u r safe now... (naina hugs him...)

naina:- thankyou... (dono ko hi ek azeeb sa ehsaas hua... naina realised what she did so she separates...) i m sorry...

rajveer:- aapko nahi lagta yeh jante hue bhi ki loge kaise hai... phir bhi aap itani raat ko bahar ghoom rahi hai...sahi nahi hai...

naina:- actually mujhe kya pata tha ki... par har koi un jaisa bhi to nahi hota na...

rajveer:- aap chali jaogi ya main apko aapke ghar tak...?

naina:- ji wo aap... ( tabhi rajveer ka phone ring karta hai... he picked it up...)..

rajveer:- ji mom... ha... sorry mom... bas abhi aata hun... ( he cuts the call...) chaliye main aapko...

naina:- ji thankyou... i will manage... main chali jaungi... aapko bhi late ho raha hoga... & again thankyou...

dono bas ek - dusre ki aankhon me dekh rahe the...rajveer apni aakhien jhuka leta hai... aur jakar naina ki car ka darwaja khol deta hai... naina jakar baith jati hai... aur gadi start karti hai...aur nikal jati hai... rajveer use jata hua tab tak dekhta hai... jab tak uski gadi rajveer ki aakhon se ojhal nahi ho jati... phir rajveer bhi jaldi se taxi leta hai aur apne ghar jata hai...yahan naina ghar pahunchti hai... chupke se ghar ke ander jati hai... taki koi use dekhe na... par ritu dekh leti hai...

ritu:- naina... ( naina closed her eyes...)... kitna late kar diya aur... yeh kya... salwaar kameez ke upar boys jacket... ha... tera duppata kaha hai... ?

naina:- bhabhi... shhh... chalo ander... ( naina ritu ko kheech kar apne room me laati hai... aur door lock karke apni jacket utarti hai... ritu ghabra jati hai...)...

ritu:- naina yeh... tere sath... yeh...

naina;- bhabhi calm down i m fine... wo actually hua yeh ki...( then she told ritu what had happend with her)...

ritu:- tu na... tujhe pata hai na jamana kitna kharaab hai... hazaar bar mana kiya hai raat me mat jaya kar par tu hai ki... thankgod wo ladka aagaya... usne tujhe bacha lia...warna pata nahi... chalo kuchh loge aaj bhi hai jo kisi ka fayda uthane ka nahi sochte...

naina( thinking about rajveer):- ha bhabhi he is a nice guy...

ritu:- tu sach batana... tu theek to hai na...?

naina:- ha bhabhi i m fine usne bas meri sleeve kheechi ki wo mr black shirt aa gaya aur...

ritu:- black shirt...?

naina:- ha wahi... jisne mujhe bachaya...

ritu:- matalab tune uska naam nahi puchha...?

naina:- nahi...

ritu:- tu bhi na... chal koi baat nahi... change karke soja... aur darna mat...(turns to...)...

naina:- bhabhi... bhaiya ya papa ko kuchh mat batana...

ritu:- hmmm... Gn...( she left)...

Shekhawat vila...

rajveer aakar shalini ke room me jata hai... to dekhta hai ki shalini baithe - baithe hi so gayi thi... wo use sahi se lita deta hai... aur use blanket se cover karta hai...aur usi ke bagal me baith jata hai...aur uska hath pakad kar uske hanth ko kiss karta hai...

rajveer:- i love u di... plzz mere liye theek ho jaao...plzz... dekho na di... aap aise ho gayi ho to aapka veer bhi badal gaya hai... plzz di...

tabhi pooja aakar uske soulder pe hath rakhti hai... aur na me ishara karti hai... rajveer wipes his tears... aur shalini ke forehead pe kiss karke chala jata hai... pooja bhi uske peeche uske room me jaati hai... rajveer khidki ke pass khada tha.. pooja aati hai... rajveer ki aankhon se aanshun beh rahe the... par wo unhe nahi pochta kyuki is duniyaan me sirf pooja aur aalekh hi hai... jinke saamne rajveer ro sakta hai... jinke saamne use kabhi dikhawa nahi karna padta hai...

pooja ( teary eyes);- veer tune bilkul sahi kaha sab kuchh badal gaya hai... di badal gayi... tu badal gaya... main aalekh... sab... kuchh bhi pehle jaisa nahi raha... kitne khush the na hum teeno... di apni zindagi me khush thi... tu main aur aalekh humari alag duniya thi... par na tu sydney jata... na di ke sath wo hadsa hota... na yeh sab hota... sach humare is ghar ko agar koi bahar se dekhega... to khushiyan - hi khushiyaan payega... par jitna humare kareeb aayega... unhe hi gum payega... ( she hugs him,... both are crying...)... veer mujhe tujhse kuchh chahiye... main teri behen hu na...? ( rajveer nods in yes...)... plzz veer bhool ja sab kuchh... plz... mat kar apne sath aisa... is tarah tu sirf apne aap ko hi nahi hum sab ko takleef de raha hai... shalu di ko jab theek hona hoga wo ho jayeingi... par tujhe aise dekh kar unhe bhi to takleef hoti hogi na... unka humesha muskuraane wala veer jab tak laut ke nahi aayega... purani wali shalini bhi nahi aayegi... plzz veer...

rajveer:- pooja... tu mujhse bahut pyar karti hai na...? ( she nods in yes...) soch aaj agar mere sath wo sab hota... jo di ke sath hua hai... to kya tu chup rehti... kya tu kuchh nahi karti...? ( pooja apna sir jhuka leti hai...)... mujhe pata hai... tu kabhi chup nahi rehti... main bhi nahi reh sakta... main nahi kar pa raha hu pooja... main bhi apni zindagi jeena chahta hu... khush rehna chahta hun... par nahi ho raha... jab aakhien band karta hun... di ka dard nazar aata hai... jab duniyaan ko dekhta hun... bewafaai nazar aati hai... dhokha nazar aata hai... ab main kya karun tu hi bata...

pooja ( wiping his tears):- tujhe jis cheez me khushi mile wo kar... mujhe humesha apne sath payega... dost bankar behen ban kar humesha tere sath rahungi... chal ab soja...Gn... ( rajveer nods in yes... and pooja left...)...

rajveer ( in his mind):- pooja abhi tujhe meri zindagi ka pura sach nahi pata hai... aur tujhe na pata chale wahi behatar hai...( rajveer left to his bed... wo apni aankhien band karta hai to use abhi thodi der pehle naina se hui mulakaat yaad aati hai... aur phir us din ka accident aur fir us din baarish ki raat... wo apni aakhien khol ke baith jata hai...) main kyun uske baare me soch raha hun... kyun wo baar - baar mere saamne aa jati hai...? akhir hai kaun wo...? khair leave it...

Aluhwalia mansion...

naina apne bed pe baithi hai... uske hath me rajveer ka jacket hai... honthon pe muskaan... use bar - bar rajveer ke sath hui har ek mulaakat yaad aa rahi hai... pehle barish me car ke pass... phir unka road me jhagda... fir aaj ka scene naina ka rajveer ke gale lagna... sab kuchh...

naina:- mr black shirt kaun ho tum... kyun main bar - bar tumse takrati hun... aur aaj to agar tum na hote to...

naina us jacket ko apne gale lagati hai... use rajveer ki khushboo mehsoos hui... uske honthon me ek pyari si muskaan aa gayi... aur us jacket ko liye hue hi wo aise hi so gayi...

next day...

shekhawat''s office...

rajveer:- what...?

sharma:- yes sir... jaisa aapne kaha tha... naveen alhuwalia ne humare sath dhoka kiya hai... usne vikram ke jariye tender k qoute hasil kar liye the... usne kafi badi chaal kheli hai hume haraane ke liye...aap kahe to main abhi us vikaram ko...

rajveer:- nahi aapne jo mujhe bataya hai... wo kisi ko nahi pata chalna chahiye... kisi ko nahi... now u may leave...
(sharma left.. rajveer in his mind)... mr naveen singh aluhwalia...tumhe lagta hai ek tender fraud se haasil karke tum mujhe hara doge to tumhari sabse badi galatfehmi hai... kyuki... jab main waar karunga na... tumhari ruh kaanp jayegi... bas ek baar mujhe wo kadi mil jaaye...

alhuwalia's...

naveen:- naina... bachha mujhe ek meeting ke liye nikalna hai... tu aaj taxi se ja...

naina:- kya taxi...? oh noo...

naveen:- ab main kya karun... kaha tha na ki apni car lekar aa... par tu hai ki... ab jaa... bahut raat ho jayegi... agar main tujhe chhodne jaunga na to meeting ke liye late ho jaunga... papa already ja chuke hai... unhone kaha bhi tha par...

naina:- ok - ok ja rahi hun... jaldi aana... warna meri bhabhi so nahi payegi...(naina winks at him)...

naveen:- nainaaa...

naina:- ok... bye...come soon...

naveen:- sambhal kar... mausam kharaab hai...

naina:- ok... ( she left... naveen also left for the meeting...)

naina taxi lekar apne ghar ki ore nikal jati hai... par raste me hi taxi kharab ho jati hai...

naina:- kya bhaiya... ab main taxi kaha dhundhun ha... yeh lo apne paise... aur is taxi ko bhangaar me bech do...

taxi driver:- kya madam... maine janbujhkar thode na kharaab ki hai...

naina:- theek hai- theek hai...( naina utar gayi... aur yahan wahan taxi dhundhne lagi... kal rat jo hua usse ghabra bhi gayi thi... isiliye jald se jald ghar pahunchna chahti thi... ki tabhi use ek car aati nazar aayi... usne lift k liye ishara kiya... wo car aa kar ruk gayi... naina ne jab driver ko dekha wo happily shocked thi... bcz wo rajveer tha...) aap...?

rajveer:- oh not again... tum phir se... ab kya hua...?

naina:- wo mujhe lift milegi... actually meri taxi kharaab ho gayi hai... aur raat bhi... ( rajveer apni car ka door kholta hai...aur naina baith jati hai...)

rajveer:- mujhe samajh nahi aata aapko ghumne ke liye raat hi kyun milti hai...?

naina;- oh hello... main ghum nahi rahi thi... office se laut rahi thi...

rajveer:- oh to tum kaam bhi karti ho...?

naina:- ha...

rajveer in his mind :- mujhe laga sirf ladna aur dance karna aata hai...

naina:- yahan se left lijiye...( dono chup the... rajveer saamne dekh kar drive kar raha tha... naina apne aap se hi baat kar rahi hai...) yeh kuchh bolte kyun nahi... is duniyaan ka pehla insaan hai... jo itani khubsurat ladki bagal me hai... aur kuchh bol nahi raha hai... hnnn sadu kahi ka... are nahi nahi... itna bhi bura nahi hai... par us din to kaise lad raha tha... ha sorry bolu kya... galti meri bhi to thi... bol hi deti hun... agar kal yeh na hota ho najaane... ( loudly) a woh... sorry... ( he looked at her...)

rajveer:- ji...

naina:- wo i m sorry us din aapse faltu me jhagda kiya na... to...

rajveer:- its ok... par gadi dekh kar chalaya karo... aapki ek chhoti si galti aur kisi ki puri zindagi barbaad ho sakti hai...

naina:- sorry again... bas - bas... mera ghar aa gaya...plzz ander aaiye na... chai ya coffee...?

rajveer:- no thanks... m getting late...

naina:- ok bye... n thanks for the lift... (naina chali gayi... naina ke ander jate hi rajveer ki nazar ghar k name plate par padi... )...

rajveer:- Aluhwaalia mansion... kahin yeh... is ladki ka is ghar ke kya...hmmm pata karna padega...(naina ander aai...)

naina:- oh shit... naina tu pagal hai... fir uska naam nahi puchha... ( wo daud kar bahar gayi... rajveer ki car aage chali gayi thi...) helloo... mr black shirt... shit...

yahan rajveer drive kar raha tha ki uski nazar ek scarf pe gayi... usne wo scarf uthaya...

rajveer;- yeh... kahin usi ka toh... (usne wo scarf apne pocket me rakh lia...aur apne ghar chala gaya...)

naina's room...

naina apne bed pe leti hai... aur saamne cupboard pe latke rajveer ke jacket ko hi dekh rahi hai...

naina:- kya ho gaya hai tujhe naina... kyun har waqt tu uske baare me sochti rehti hai... kyun mr. black shirt har waqt tere khayaalo me rehta hai... har baar jab tujhe help ki jarurat hoti hai... wo kahin na kahin se aa hi jata hai... kyun ho raha hai yeh sab... kahin mujhe usse... nahin - nahin... aisa thode na hota hai... par usme wo har khubi hai... jaisi maine kabhi apne jeevan shathi ke liye sochi thi... ha he is perfect,... use to koi bhi ladki mil jayegi... oh god... kya tu naina... tujhe to uska naam bhi pata... na use tera... aur tu hai ki... ( tabhi naina ka phone ring hota hai...)

naina;- ha ali...

ali:- ek minute naina... hum conference me sabko lete hai...

huda:- hi naina...

naina:- hi huda... bani tu kahan hai...

bani ;- main yahi hu maate... achha suno na... yar humne kitne din se saath enjoy nahi kiya hai... chal na kal sab milte hai... plzz...

huda:- ha naina... plzz maan ja yar...

ali:- plzz naina... humara bhi man hai...

naina:- kya baat hai ali... workoholick ali beg ka man hangout karne ka hai... chal theek hai... kal hum sab milte hai...

ali;- hey naina kal naveen bhaiya aur bhabhi ko bhi bol jyada maza aayega... (huda ka face utar gaya...)...

bani:- right yar...

naina:- ok main puchh lungi... agar we nahi aaye... phir bhi hum char to hai hi na...ok then bye good night all...

ali, huda, baani:- Gn...

Shekhawat vila...

rajveer:- nooo...

pooja:- yes... dekh veer mera mood kharaab mat kar... mera bahut man hai... agar kal tu nahi chala na ti main tujhe phod dungi... ( aur pooja gusse se chali gayi...)

rajveer:- are poo sun to... hey bhagwaan jana hi padega... is aalekh ki to... usi ne aag me ghee dala hai... kal dekhta hun saale ko...

next day...

ishita on phone:- ji mrs arora... thankyou so much... ya sure... ha - ha kyun nahi aakhir aap bata rahi hai to mere bete ke liye achhi ladki hi bataiengi...(rajveer jo ishita ke pass hi aa raha tha ruk gaya...) ji jarur ok byee... are veer aa na... tere liye ek bahut achha rishta aaya hai... kal tak main dekhti hun fir tujhe usse milna hoga ok...

rajveer:- ok mom...

pooja:- gm all... chale veer...aalekh ko bhi pick karna hai...

viren:- are tum sab sath kahin ja rahe ho...?

pooja:- ha papa... hum teeno aaj masti karne ja rahe hai...

viren:- oh woww... enjoy...

rajveer:- bye mom... bye dad...

ishita:- byee beta...

dono hi aalekh ke ghar jaate hai... aur aalekh so raha tha... rajveer jiske pass aalekh ke ghar ki spares keys hai.. wo usse ghar kholta hai... aur dono ander jate hai...

rajveer:- lijiye miss pooja... yeh to ghode gadhe sab bech kar so rahe hai... aalekh uth... aaaleekhhh...

aalekh(sleepy tone):- kaun mar gaya be...?

pooja:- tu... abe saale... uth... hume restra jana hai...

aalekh:- itani subah...

rajveer:- abe gadhe...12 baj gayi hai... ab uth...

aalekh:- itani jaldi 12 baj gayi... abhi main tina ko kiss hi karne wala tha...

rajveer & pooja:- kya...?

aalekh:- ha yaar wo hot ladki jo...

rajveer:- aalekh agar mere 3 ginne tak tu washroom nahi gaya na... to main tujhe peet dunga...1...2...

aalekh:- are ja raha hu... mere romance ka dusman...( aalekh left...)

after some time...

pooja:- kya yaar aalekh jaldi kar... ladki dekhne nahi ja raha hai...

aalekh:- you never know.. kab kiska dil is handsome ke liye dhadak jaaye...(rajveer laughs...) hasa kyun...?

rajveer:- kuchh nahi handsome... chale...

aalekh:- yup... lets go...(all three of them left...)

a big restra...

aalekh, rajveer aur pooja teeno hi casuals me the... like T and jeans...we jakar reserved seat pe baith jate hai... aur bate kar rahe hai... actually rajveer jab dono ke sath hota hai to khush hota hai... tabhi rajveer ko kisi ne awaaz di...

a voice;- hey mr rajveer...hi... ( rajveer turns and found naveen there...with naina, ritu, huda ali, bani... aalekh naina & baani ko pehchaan gaya... rajveer ne naina ko naveen ke sath dekha to shocked tha... wahin naina bhi... use to abhi tak rajveer ka naam bhi nahi pata tha...rajveer apni chair se utha...)

rajveer:- mr. naveen right... nice to meet u again...

naveen:- same here...aap yahan...?

rajveer:- just chilling out with frnds... ( aalekh didnt like naveen presence but he have to co- oporate... uski nazar naina pe gayi... usne rajveer ke kaan me kaha...)...

aalekh:- veer yeh teri chudail iske sath kya kar rahi hai...

naveen to aalekh:- ji aapne kuchh kaha...?

aalekh:- nothing... bas wo aap... ( pointing towards naina)...

naveen:- oh she is my younger sister naina...

rajveer in his mind:- Naina... yeh...naveen singh aluhwalia ki behen hai...?

naveen:- and they are her frnds huda, ali and bani... and she is my wife... Ritu...(rajveer clinched his fist...)... and ritu, naina... he is Rajveer... a very nice man...

Naina in her heart:- Rajveer...nhh... Raj...

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