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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#251

It's beautiful and lovely update

But what will be Arnav's reaction on Khushi's action

Waiting for next update eagerly

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#252

Awesome update.

waiting for arnav's reaction.

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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#253

Thank you for the update. WOW bravo Khushi, that's so brave of you to give back to the great ASR

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#254

Nice one
Khushi trying on her dress because model didn't turn up
Seems like she's went through a lot of hurt in past
Her defensive mode kicked in seeing arnav comin close
Can't wait to see Arnavs reaction
N what happens next
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#255

Wonderful part Yagya😊

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Awesome update

Khushi is not able to meet her daughters now...further arnav's gaze on her made her more upset and angry ...

Exicted to read further

Update soon !

Thnxx for pm 😊

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#257

WOW!! Outstanding update...

loved it dear

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#258

WOW!! Outstanding update...

loved it dear...

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#259

Hi there!!

I just completed reading your story. It was just soo alluring, it gripped me from the first para that I read it was just that beautifully written. There was never a scene in all the chapters where I felt that the characters that you u have built so far are acting aur saying something out of their character (which is tough!!)... The plot itself is very gripping bt tough to narrate and you have done it real well. I could feel the pain and struggle of khushi. If anything that I felt to see more was arnav's personality. so far I don't know who or what kind of person is he that's it bt then you are the writer n it's your decision. Eagerly waiting for more updates !!

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#260

nice one...

but it feels so bad tht she is not able to notice his kind side just see wht she wanted to see in his eyes n whtvshe think abt tht... she missed her dautrs to much hope somethibg happen n she n arnav will get a chance to recognised their true feelins