Luv Finds Its Way PART-22on PG-47 - Page 26

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

varu dear nice part..good going..indeed very interesting...keep up the good work going... so finally arjun had to face the situation where naina tells him her dil kii baat.. very good yaar... you know what varu yaar me seriously very eager,very curious to know what exactly has happened in arjun and naina's life.. me biting my nails with curiosity... you surely know how to keep your readers hooked... really very different and interesting parts... very well written... 👏 vary dear do post the next part soon.. me waiting for it eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

hey suri its soo gud to c u commenting here i really missed ur comments...thx 4 liking my ff ....i will cont really soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey varallika 😊, awesome part yaar 👏 😉 😊 👍🏼 😊 😉 👏!!!!!!!!!! ..so the person was piyush 😡! .....he was talking 2 arjun when he say naina was also there wt him n wanted 2 start a converstion wt naina, but arjun excused saying that they were getting late 😊!!!....next day was rashmi's wedding 😊! everyone was busy with the final arrengment for the wedding 😊! alya n naina were helping rashmi when khushi come to the room saying that rashimi's hero is here 😆 😃 😆...!!!!!!!!!!! abhi aur uski harkate 😉!!!...........the wedding procede and now everyone was busy in dinner, talking, etc. 😊!!! abhi, alya n khushi were teasing vivek (rashmi hero 😉_!!!) while arjun went to naina wt food 😊 (she act's like a kid 😛, n he has to take care of her 😊) ........they went for a walk, but none of them said a word 😕...when they reach the house again, naina hold arjun hand n make hin look at her 😊!!! naina tell arjun that she love him 😳, but he says that she deserve someone better than him 😕 ...........he doesn't with her a valid reason for not been able to marry her 😭 😕 😡 😕 😭!!!!!!!!! he goes inside while naina stand there heart broken 😭 💔 😭 💔 😭!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..............who's was the person wachting them😕? why did arjun reject her 😭? what happened to naina b4 going 2 paris 😕??? when are going to reaveal the mystery 😭 😭 😭......can't wait !!!!!!!!!.........does piyush has smth to do wt it ???????????...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait for the next partt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey varallika 😊, awesome part yaar 👏 😉 😊 👍🏼 😊 😉 👏!!!!!!!!!! thanks sooo much 4 liking it dear..so the person was piyush 😡! .....yeh aur ho bhi kaun sakta hai bolo bolohe was talking 2 arjun when he say naina was also there wt him n wanted 2 start a converstion wt naina, but arjun excused saying that they were getting late 😊!!!....my hero is soo intelligent na😳next day was rashmi's wedding 😊! everyone was busy with the final arrengment for the wedding 😊! alya n naina were helping rashmi when khushi come to the room saying that rashimi's hero is here 😆 😃 😆...!!!!!!!!!!! abhi aur uski harkate 😉!!!...........wo kabhi sudharbhi nahi sakta hai..so lets not ry ha😉the wedding procede and now everyone was busy in dinner, talking, etc. 😊!!! abhi, alya n khushi were teasing vivek (rashmi hero 😉_!!!) while arjun went to naina wt food 😊 (she act's like a kid 😛, n he has to take care of her 😊) ........they went for a walk, but none of them said a word 😕...kuch na kaho kuch bhi na kaho...kya kehna hai kya sunna hai humkopatahaitumko pata😛when they reach the house again, naina hold arjun hand n make hin look at her 😊!!! naina tell arjun that she love him 😳, but he says that she deserve someone better than him 😕 ...........he doesn't with her a valid reason for not been able to marry her 😭 😕 😡 😕 😭!!!!!!!!! humara intelligent hero bhi kabhi kabhi bekufi karta hai..maro uskohe goes inside while naina stand there heart broken 😭 💔 😭 💔 😭!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..............who's was the person wachting them😕? why did arjun reject her 😭? what happened to naina b4 going 2 paris 😕??? when are going to reaveal the mystery 😭 😭 😭......can't wait !!!!!!!!!.........does piyush has smth to do wt it ???????????...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait for the next partt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dear thx soo much for reading it and then taking the pain to comment on it so carefully..next part will answer all your questios so do read i'll update really soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hello ma'am

1st of all m not @ all sorry 4 commenting late (sorry bol k apna janaza thodi nikalwana hai) khair dair aaye durust aaye chalo bakwas bohat hue ab wo kaam kerte hain jis k liye m here...

haan jii to finally aapne part post ker he diya(shukar hai nahe to i thought mere marne k baad he mujhe part milge)& ye bhi koi part tha bhala....itnaaaa chota part plz aagay se dhiyan rahe k jitna lamba w8 aap karati hian ham masoomo ko @lest utna to lamba part hona he chaiye but quantity kitni bhi ho quality to ek dam 1st class thi the part was soper superb isi khuhsi main taliyan..👏so ye piyush wapis aagaya hamesha beech main anaa zaroori hota hai iska??aur kuch zyada he phel raha tha naina se baat kerne laga😡 wo to achha hua k arjun ne usse zyada bakne nahe diya...aur ye abhi ka kuch nahe ho sakta jab dekho tab mazak laga rakha hota hai & wah jii janab arjun mahashay to naina madam ko dekhte he reh gaye 😳😳😳& then naina & arjun ka bahar jana walking in silence wese very unlike of naina wese to arjun k saath itna bolti rehti hai aur ab bhi jab bola to bechare arjun ki bolti band kerdi ussne she finally said "i love u" to him achha he kiya werna agar arjun k kehne ka w8 kerti to wo aglay janam main bhi nahe keh pata chalo kisine to kaha...but ye arjun ko ab kya prblm hai??when he too love her to kehta kyun nahe hai?? now m desperate to know k us one year main aakhir hua kya hai??plz plzz try to cont soon will be w8ng 4 the next part.

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Posted: 17 years ago
continue soon na varu dear... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

PART-18

Arjun goes in leaving Naina in the lawn who after some times goes in..she was still not able to believe that Arjun had said all that to her..how can he not love her…she knew that he loves her..she had seen that in his eyes…no he loved her she knew that he loves her….but then why did he said that he doesn't love her…..thinking all this she moves in…there she sees Arjun who looks at her and then moves ahead….she keeps staring at him….

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan

Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan

Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

After some time even Naina goes in….waha she sees Arjun talking with some one..she keeps looking at him….he moves on but Naina's eyes follows him every where…it was not that Arjun was not aware of this..but he was purposely avoiding her….coz he knew agar is bar wo uske samne aya to jhut nahi bol payega….

Kaisa Hai Safar Wafa Ki Manjil Ka

Na Hai Koi Hal Dilon Ki Mushkil Ka

Dhadkan Dhadkan Bikhri Ranjishein

Saansein Saansein Tooti Bandishein

Kahi To Har Lamha Honton Pe Fariyaad Hai

Kisi Ki Duniya Chaahat Mein Barbaad Hai

Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

It was now vidai time…every body was ready ..rashmi was brought down….she cries a lots and then finally she was sent with vivek….sare log rashmi ko vida karke ander jate hai….then every body heads toward their respective rooms as all were very tired….Naina was completely broken because of Arjun's attitude towards her….she was not talking to any one properly and was a bit lost in herself…..abhi notices this…..he tries to talk to Naina but she was hostile towars him so he decides to talk to Arjun….even Arjun needed some one whith whom he could share this as it was killing him from inside so he tells abhi all that had happened

Abhi: why did you do this?

[Arjun says nothing he simply looks at him and then turns opposite to him..]

Arjun mai tujhse kuch pooch raha hun…[Arjun didn't say anything] tell me god dammit kyou kiya tune ye???

Arjun: to kya karta mai [turns towards abhi]bata mujhe… kya karma chahiye tha mujhe

Udhar Naina enters in her room..tabhi usko ehsas hota hai ki shayad uske room me koi hai…she was about to shout when someone puts hands on her mouth and turns her towards him..

Naina: tum yaha

Person: tumse hi milne aya tha…

Naina: tumhe mujhse kya kam hai…wo bhi is tarah..

Person: are tumse kam nahi hoga to aur kise hoga…pyra karta hoon tumse

Naina: ye kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum… chee…main abhi Arjun ko bulati hu….ab wahi tumhe dekega…

Person: are wo mujhe kya dekhega…pehle apni gunah to sudharle phir mujhe dekhega…

Naina: mind your language Mr,Piyush…

Piyush: bahut bharosa hai na uspe….to jao poocho usko ke tum paris me uske sath kya kar rahi thi….

Naina: obviously I know main waha treatment ke liye gai thi…

Piyush:[laughs loudly] this is what he has told you hadn't he….but am really sorry to say lekin ye jhooth hai…aur agar mujhpe yakeen nahi ata to jao pooch usse ke sacchai kya hai…

Naina: tumko kya lagta hai mai tumhari ghatiya baton me a ke Arjun se kuch bhi poochoongi…mujhe uspe khud se jyada bharosa hai….so bettery you leave my room right now mr piyush else I will be forced to call police…

Piyush: are tum to gussa ho gai…chill ja raha hu mai..but Arjun se poochna jaroor…

Saying this piyush goes fom her room idhar Naina soch pe par jati hai

Naina: ye piyush kya bakwas kar ke gaya..kya sach me Arjun ne mujhsse jhuth….nahi nahi mai bhi kya iski baton me a gai..magar mujhe Arjun ko iski is harkat ke bare me bata dena chahiye…pata nahi age kya karega…

Now lets see abhi aur Arjun ke kya hal hai…

Abhi: tu bhi achi tarah se janta hai ki tu usse pyar karta hai fir tune usko jhut kyou bola?kyou sach nahi bataya use?

Arjun: main usse pyar nahi karta….

Abhi: jhooth hai ye

Arjun: jhooth to wo bhi hai jo wo dekh samajh rahi hai…tu sach batane ki bat kar raha hai na..kya sach batata mai usko bata? Kya kya sach batata use main…kyouki agar sach batana hi hai to sabse pehle mujhe usko uske bare me sach batana hoga…batana hogi ki wo Naina bishwash hai jo kabhi meri dost meri employee hua karti thi….batana parega ke wo paris accident ke bad ilaj ke liye nahi balki accident se pehle mere sath gai thi….aur ye bhi ke uska koi accident nahi hua tha balki uski ye halat tab hui jab use kuch logo ne usko kidnap kiya tha…and sabse jaruri bat ye batani hogi ki unlogo ko kisi aur ne nahi balki maine bheja tha…ye sab batane ke bad hi main usko kuch aur bata sakta hu…and trust me abhi mujhme usko ye sab batane ki himmat nahi hai..nahi hai himmat mujhme…

Abhi: magar Arjun tu usse…

Arjun: ha karta hu mai pyar usse jis din maine usse pehli bar dekha tha us din se karta hu….uski akhon me ek asu nahi dekh sakta mai…uska har ek asu meri akhon me chubhta hai….magar abhi agar maine usko bataya ke mai usse pyar karta hu to mujhe usko us sach ke sath baki ka sach bhi batana hoga aur uske bad uski akhon me jo nafrat mere liye hogi wo mujhse bardasht nahi hoga…mere mana karne pe jo use takleef hui hai wo waqt ke sath kam ho jayegi aur ek din khatm bhi ho jayegi..magar sara kuch janne ke bad wo mujhse nafrat karne lagegi aur wo nafrat kabhi khatm nahi hogi…puri zindagi wo mujhse sirf nafrat hi karegi…kyou ki mai hi wo insane hun jisne uski zindagi barbd ki,,,,uski khushiya uski zindagi uska pariwar uski yadein sab cheen liya hai usee maine….

Abhi was bt to say some thaing tabhi uski nazar darwaze pe jati hai and he gets hell shocked…Arjun seeing him like that turns towards the door …Naina was standing there….tears were flowing from her eyes…Arjun apni aankh band karta hai and uski ankh se ek aasu girta hai…she comes in…abhi tries to interfere but she indicates him to stop….

Naina: abhi jo maine suna kya wo sach tha???

[Arjun says nothing….Naina slaps him..and faints…abhi usko uske room me leke jata hai where Alya checks her.. ]

Alya: she is in shock…but mujhe samajh nahi raha hai ke aisa kya hua…aur Arjun kahan hai…

Abhi: pata nahi..apne kamre me hoga

Alya: abhi bat kya hai..

Abhi: wo actually Naina ko sab…..

Alya: you don't really mean that do you?[Abhi simply nods his head…] tum yha raho mai use dekh ke…

Alya goes to Arjuns room…he was standing in the balcony..Alya uske pas jati hai and keeps her hand on his shoulder..he closes his eyes..

Alya: are you fine?[Arjun nods]Arjun wo Naina…

Arjun: ye to hona hi tha Alya…..aj nahi to kal usko sab pata to chalna hi tha…

Alya: magar Arjun…

Arjun: kaisi hai wo???

Alya: abhi to thik hai magar jab tak hosh ayega I guess wo puri tarah se thik ho jayegi..

Arjun: matlab…

Alya: mujhe umeed hai ki uske hosh ke sath uski yaddasht bhi wapas a jayegi…

Arjun:[sighs] chalo acha hi hai..meri jimmedari puri ho jayegi…

Alya: to kya ye tumhare liye sirf jimmedari thi?

Arjun:[laughs sarcastically] life has never given me options Alya…

Thori der bad Naina ko hosh a jata hai …Naina and Arjun had a sleepless night….ane was in grief of his lost love while other was in grief of loving a wrong person….Naina was still not able to believe that it was Arjun who had ruined her life….. flashes of her past was now playing infront of her eyes…her mom her dad her bro her sis…every body seemed to be standing infront of her…the moments spent with them….her childhood…..her teen…her youth every thing was flashing….all the happy and sad memories she had with her family was driving her crazy…

She could still remember how unhappy was her dad with the idea of her doing a job…he never wanted her daughter to work but the needs of the family was hard to be fulfilled by his income….so he had to allow her to work…

She could still remember the happiness of the face of her mom when ria topped in her college…

She could still feel the happiness she had had when aatish got job…she was missing them…she was missing all of them..she was missing all those small moments that they had cried together..she was missing all those small happiness which had made them laugh…

She was missing every thing she had a year before..her mom dad aatish rashi and most of all she was missing her friend…she was missing the warmth of his love and care…she was missing the shoulder she used to support her whenever she was sad…she was missing the arms that held her whenever she cried….

Yes she was missing Arjun…she wanted to run back to him…cry in his arms..tell her all that was troubling her…and then get relaxed knowing ke he will make everything alright..and all her problems would be gone soon…this was something she had god used to of in last one and half years… this was something she never had before.. she had spent all her time efforts and emotions playing the role of elder daughter of the family… She never had any friend on whom she could trust on..

Yes she had love in her life..she did love sahil but even that was one sided…she had every relation in life…but never had any shoulder to cry on never had any arm to comfort her…she never had anyone to depend on…none of her relations have given her surety to be with her in all ups and downs of her life…she never had the feeling of being loved cared and protected… untill she met Arjun…she was so happy to have him as a friend…she had started enjoying her life… loving her life….time spent with him was always a beautiful memory…but once again the reality of life had struck her..why did he do this? Why did he turned all those dreames into nightmare….today she regrets the relation she once cherished…

She regrets the day she met him…she regrets the time she had spent with him..she regrets the feeling she had unknowingly developed for him and above all she regrets knowing him…she still remembers the day he had propsed her in paris…

Flash back…

In a hotel suit in Paris..we see a beautiful girl busy in writing something….yeh it was Naina who was busy in writing letter to sahil…she had just finished reading his latest book and as always she had started writing to him as it was now a habit for her…

Tabhi there was a knock on her door…she rushes towards the door cursing the person behind it for disturbing her….she opens the door..it was Arjun…

Naina: tum…tum taiyar ho gaye?

Arjun: ha magar lagta hai tumhara taiyar hone ka mood nahi hai…

Naina: are ab tum itti jaldi taiyar ho gaye to meri kya galati hai isme…I told you to be here by 6:30 aur abhi to[she takes Arjun ka wrist to show him time in his watch] oppss!! 7:30 ho rahe hai….are to isme meri kya galati hai..you should have toldme to hurry up na….

Arjun: hmmm yeh right but how was I supposed to do that?

Naina: as far as I remember I do have a cell phoneand tumhari company ne mujhe international card bhi provide kiya hai

Arjun: really?? I don't believe this…our company doesn't provide its employees with international card..its against our policy,…

Naina: I think you hav lost it

Arjun: no I think you have lost it…

Naina: okay you wait here I will bring my cell…

Naina takes her cell phone and without looking at it gives it to Arjun…wo looks at it for a second and then smiles…

Arjun: see I told you na its not working…

Naina:[taking away the cell from him]what rubbish abhi to maine ma se bat ki hai[ looking at the cell which showed it had 20 missed calls] I seriously think you need to consult a doc as it seems ke you are ot well..just look at my cell it has 20 missed calls and you are saying ke its not in service..if its not working then how can there be[slowing down a bit]20 missed calls[looks up at Arjun] ye sare tumne kiye hai[bits her tongue and then makes a cute puppy face] are to isme meri kya galati hai...mujhe laga abhi 3 ghante hai to mai wo book parhne lagi phir pata nahi kab wo khatam bhi ho gai and tumko to pata hai na ke uske bad mujhe sahil ko letter likhna hi hota hai…

Arjun: yeh yeh I know you and your stupid sahil….

Naina: aeeee mere sahil ko kuch mat bolo ha….

Arjun: okay baba nai bolta kuch..ab ap please jake jaldi se taiyar hongi..we are getting late..

Naina:mai bas 2 min me aii but tab tak do me a favour na…

Arjun: hmm give me I'll tell hotel staff to post it..

Naina: you know what I love you..

[ saying this she goes in to change]

Arjun:I love you to..

He goes out of room blushing…

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part. But wat is this kidnapping of naina by arjun. This is becoming confusing. Pls post the next part soon just cant wait for it
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Awesome part. But wat is this kidnapping of naina by arjun. This is becoming confusing. Pls post the next part soon just cant wait for it

thx for liking the part golu...nd to rest of ur question i'll say just stick on the ff n u will gt ur ans soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

thx 4 liking it i'll update asap

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Posted: 17 years ago
wen r u continuing this fic??? pls cont soon

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