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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: hello64



😆 true imma not gunna tell u soooooo soon 😆 but not toooooo long cuz there is another big twist in the story. My story opens and closes many doors 😆 😉

kanwer 😳

wow kool man...a door opens and another closes👏😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525


wow kool man...a door opens and another closes👏😊



ya yo juss gunna have to keep reading and opening

btw whats ur name? cuz i can't juss keep calling u hot girl 😆

kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
~*MERA PYAR*~
I am soooooooooo sorry but i can't continue till the weekend 😭 you have to wait for the next part and check for it this friday,saturday or sunday

I am really sorry but my laptop isn't working and my other computer is sooooooo slow so you have to wait 😭 I am on my cusions computer right now so i'm sooo sorri once again 😭 but i'll give you guyz 2 parts or simply just a super duper extra long part 😳 plz forgive me😭

sorri agian,
kanwer 😭

plz forgive me 😭

Edited by hello64 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
Its ok!!! Cnat wait for da nxt part tho!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Its ok!!! Cnat wait for da nxt part tho!!! 😊



thankz luv 😊

next part is VERY LONG 😆

imma post in a short while so stay tuned to Mera pyar 😉

kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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we'll wait for u to continue. no worriez. thats wat hapend iwth me too.. but now its okay
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Mera Pyar - Part 2
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Kripa walked out of the airport and looked around on the busy streets of Mumbai. It was around 6:30 pm but the sun was still up. The streets of Mumbai were filled with laughter, yelling, screaming but beyond all that she saw love between the Indians. She smiled to herself and instantly her smile faded when a question popped into her mind. "How am I going to get to daddy's house?" Kripa had the address but she had no escort to take her. She thought of taking a taxi or the bus but she had no money on her… just her credit cards. She stood there tired as hell when her eyes fell upon a bench. She walked over to the bench and sat down. She had so much luggage that she couldn't even walk to the house.
She closed her eyes and one name popped into her head, Alliaya. Alliaya's massi's house was right beside Josh and her father's house. She decided to call Alliaya and ask her to come pick her up. She called Alliaya but no one picked up. She tried again and no one picked up even though the bell was ringing. She kept trying but no one picked up. Kripa cursed herself for not asking Alliaya to pick her up from the airport yesterday and now there was only one way …. Walk. Kripa went into the airport and left her luggage there and explained her situation. She went outside and started to walk. During her walk home she kept trying to call Alliaya but she wouldn't pick up. "ALLIAYA WHERE ARE YOU!" she thought
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A girl is jumping up and down screaming "ANGAD, ANGAD,ANGAD" along with the rest of the crowd her cell is ringing but she can't hear it so she isn't picking up.

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"Alliaya!" Kripa screams out loud. People look at her and she instantly turns a light color of pink but keeps walking. "Alliaya I'm going to kill you" she thought.

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"ANGAD,ANGAD,ANGAD" the girl chants jumping up and down with the crowd.

We see her eyes


Her lips


And her face


It's none other than our pyari Alliaya. She keeps chanting that sensational name Angad. Then we see the camera zoom onto the stage. We see a guy on a motorcycle from afar.
He starts singing:

Andeki Anjanni kya ye mohaabat hai


The crowd instantly goes wild

Do you want more? I'll get u more!
Jo tum nahin saath phir paas ho kaisa (yeah yeah yeah yeah)
Jo tum nahin saath phir paas ho kaisa

Tera bina aur kuch baat ho kaisa
Ho shaam ya ho savera

Har waqt hai waqt tera
Meri kahaani mein har lavz tera hai
Karna ye izhaar hai

Kaisa ye pyar hai
Kaisa ye pyar hai
Kaisa ye pyar hai
Kasia ye pyar hai

Tundi hawaieen hai jadoo ka masum hai (yeah yeah yeah yeah)
Tundi hawaien hai jadoo ka masum hai
Har showk bijlee hai har phool roshan hai
Aisa mein ajab ka samay hai
Aisa mein dil sochtha hai
Shayad isi pal mein meri mohbaat ka hona ko deedar hai
Kaisa ye pyar hai
Kaisa ye pyar hai
Kaisa ye pyar hai
Kaisa ye pyar hai


The crowd goes wild and starts screaming "WE WANT MORE!"
Angad starts his next song Ya Ali from gangster.

ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi
ishq pe mita doon luta doon
main apani khudi
yaar pe haan luta doon mita doon
main yeh hasti
ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi

mujhe kuchh pal de purvat ke
faki hampe chahat ke
rahe bechain dil kab tak
milen kuchh pal toh raahat ke
chahat pe ishq pe haa mita doon luta doon
main apani khudi
yaar pe ha luta doon mita doon
main yeh hasti
ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi

bina tere na ek pal ho na bin tere kabhi kal ho
yeh dil ban jaaye pathhar ka na ismein koi hulchul ho
sanam pe ha ishq pe ha mita doon luta doon
main apani khudi
kasam se ha luta doon mita doon
main yeh hastii
ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi.....


He goes over to his drums and makes a 10 second beat and ends off his concert with those 4 magical words that touched our hearts

Kaisa ye pyar hai
Kasia ye pyar hai


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"Alliaya ki bachi! That idiot won't pick up the phone!" Kripa thought. Kripa wanted to cry her eyes out. She wasn't even near her house. She had no clothes, no car, no nothing. She couldn't take it anymore. She looked inside her purse and got an idea. She was rich! How could she forget? She asked someone for the nearest car dealership place. They told her where to go and she went over there about a 5 minute walk and she chooses the hottest car there:

She thought to herself how she could be so dumb. She should have just bought the car hours ago she got into her beauty and drove back to the airport to get her things.
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"Bhai!" Alliaya yelled and gave Angad the biggest bear hug. "That was a great concert! You're a rock star!" Alliaya exclaimed. "No, I'm a superstar!" Angad correct and gave her a killer smile. "Bhai you're so cute" Alliaya told him and gave him another hug.
When she let go she saw all these girls running towards them. Her eyes widened and Angad turned around to see around 40 hot girls running his way. He smiled his killer smile and all these girls came and kissed him and gave him a hug. Then one girl spoke up.
"Angu, who is this?" She asked pointing to Alliaya. Alliaya felt like killing her. Who does she think she is? "My cousin, darling." Angad told her. "Best be! But whatever, she's too ugly why would a rock star like you want her when you can have me?" the girl said out loud.
Tears started to flow down Alliaya's cheeks and she turned around and left. Angad was angry he turned to the girl and yelled at her like there was no tomorrow. "And I'm not a rock star I'm a superstar but before that I'm a brother." He pushed her away and found Alliaya hugging a man. Angad instantly recognized him. "Hey bro!" Angad shouted.The man turned around and it was none other than Josh.

Angad walked up to Alliaya and wiped her tears. " My princess won't cry" He said. Alliaya smiled and told the two that he would give them a lift home and since that girl turned off his mood there would be no after party for the concert tonight but it would be tommorw.
Angad and Alliaya hugged and Josh looked at their brother and sister love and sighed remembering Kripa but then the sorrow growing up motherless came to him and he once again forgot Kripa.
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Kripa drove up to a huge mansion. The plaque outside the house said Dev Sharma. This was it she thought. She stopped at the gate and a guard came up to her. "You are?" he asked. "Kripa Sharma, I am Dev Sharma's daughter from America and I am excepted." She said. "I am sorry but he is out of town and his son isn't home therefore I can't let you in." he told her. "WHAT!"
Just then a man dressed in a butler's attire came up to Kripa and the guard. "What seems to be the problem?" he asked. "She claims to be Mr. Sharma's daughter" the guard said. "What do mean claims I am! Watch when daddy comes back I'll get you all fired!" She screamed. "Calm down Ms. Sharma, please come in" the butler told her. " Thank you! Mr….." She was cut off." Teddy, just call me teddy" he told her. "Okay in that case call me Kripa please. I hate the whole Ms. Sharma thing" She smiled at him and he smiled back which made her feel welcome.
Kripa parked her car in front of the house. The butlers picked up her luggage and brought it inside to her new room. She walked into her room and it was beautiful. She went out to her balcony and noticed that her room was facing the Khanna mansion. Oh how she hoped that the room across hers was Alliaya's. She went back inside unpacked her clothes and went in the bathroom to take a shower. She came out wearing something exactly like this:

She lay down on her bed thinking about how her meeting with Josh would be. Suddenly someone knocks on her door. "Come in!" she said. It was Teddy. "Ms….I mean Kripa please come and eat now you must be tired." He told her. "No thank you teddy I'm going to wait for Josh." She said. "As you wish" he said and left. When Teddy closed the door, Kripa just sat there shocked at what she had just said to Teddy. Eating with Josh? She was so confused. What if he didn't want to talk to her? She stood in front of the mirror rehearsing what she would say to Josh at dinner.
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A car pulled up in front of the Sharma mansion. Josh climbed out and waved goodbye to Angad and Alliya. They zoomed straight ahead parked there cars and went inside there house. Josh was also about to go into his own house when his saw the hottest Lamborghini ( Kripa's car) parked outside his house. He thought maybe his dad bought it for him since his birthday was coming up soon but then again his dad was in London so how could the car get here? He opened the door to his house and walked into the dinning room. He saw the table set up for 2 and he thought maybe his dad was back. He asked teddy, "Where is my dad?" "Sir is gone to London." Teddy replied."Then who is the table set up for and who's car is outside?" Asked josh."Sir, its for u and your sister Kripa and the Car belongs to her." Teddy said. Josh stood there in total shock. Kripa he thought. A sudden storm of emotions flooded him. How was he supposed to react?"I'll go call her" Teddy said."NO! I DON'T WANT TO HAVE DINNER WITH HER! IS SHE CRAZY? I mean no, I'm not hungry tell her to eat, I already ate""But…" "GO!" "Okay sir"
Josh stomped up the stairs and turned to look down the hallway when he saw a beautiful young girl standing by her door looking directly at Josh. Josh noticed the bloodshot eyes and the tears in her eyes that were flowing quite fast down her cheeks. Josh felt horrible of what he just said but then again, she can't change the fact that it was her fault her parents were separated. But maybe it wasn't her fault he thought. He was just confused and mad at her.
He looked away and looked at her again. He walked closer to her and her heart started to pound. He looked at what she was wearing and sudden urge to yell at her for the clothes she chose to wear. He stepped in front of her looked her in the eye and turned to the door of his room which was directly beside hers.
He slamed his door real hard, which scared kripa. She just simply stood there. Teddy walked up to her and asked her to come down and eat. She said she already ate and closed her door. The lights in her room were off. She liked the darkness, she related to it so well. An hour passed by and she just sat there in the corner of her room crying. She sat on her desk and turned on her laptop. She plugged in her ipod and thought about the day her dad left the house with Josh and then her mom left with Kripa. She was listening to daddy's little girl by Frankie J.

[Verse 1:>
He drops his suitcase by the door
she knows her daddy won't be back anymore
she drags her feet across the floor
Kripa hold back time to keep him holding on
and she says

[Pre Chorus:>
Daddy, Daddy don't leave
I'll do anything to keep you
Right here with me
Can't you see how much I need you
Daddy, Daddy don't leave
Mommy's saying things she don't mean
She don't know what she's talking about
Somebody hear me out

[Chorus:>
Father listen
Tell him that he's got a home and he don't have to go
Father save him
I would do anything in return
I'll clean my room
Try hard in school
I'll be good
I promise you
Father, Father
I pray to you

[Verse 2:>
Now she hasn't slept in weeks
She don't want to close her eyes cause she's scared that he'll leave
They tried just about everything
It's getting harder now
For him to breathe
And she says

[Pre Chorus:>
Daddy, Daddy don't leave
I'll do anything to keep you
Right here with me
Can't you see how much I need you

Daddy, Daddy don't leave
The doctors are saying things they don't mean
They don't know what they talking about
Somebody hear me out

[Chorus:>
Father (father) listen (listen)
Tell him that he's got a home and he don't have to go (don't have to go)
Father (father) save him
I would do anything in return
I'll clean my room
Try hard in school
I'll be good
I promise you
Father, Father
I pray to you

[Hook:>
Please don't let him go (don't let him go)
I'm begging you so (I'm begging you so)
There open his eyes
Need a little more time
To tell him that I love him more
The many thing in the world
Is Daddy's little girl

[Chorus:>
Father (father) listen (listen)
Tell him that he's got a home and he don't have to go (don't have to go)
Father (father) save him
I would do anything in return
I'll clean my room
Try hard in school
I'll be good
I promise you
Father, Father

She was Daddy's Little Girl


The song ended and Kripa just sat there crying remembering how her childhood was ruined when her father left. Kripa is suddenly startled when the thunder rumbles and she hears the rain. She goes over to her balcony door to close it when she realizes how big her balcony is and she sees the rain pouring down extremely hard. A huge smile spreads across her face when she sees the rain. Kripa had always loved rain so she steps outside in her bare feet and starts to dance and sing beautifully.
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Angad is in his room when he sees its raining. He hates the rain so he goes to close his balcony door when he sees a girls dancing and singing in the rain. He doesn't even realize that he is getting wet with the rain because he is mesmerized by her beauty and her innocence and her child like behavior. He smiles as he hears her singing and dancing in the rain:


Na pairo mein payal na haaton mein kangana
chali main chali main chali
ho na ankhon mein kaajal na maathe pe bindiya deewane ki dhundu gali

i wanna show my body groove the nite away
chahe bas chahe yeh dil dilbar ko paana re
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyaare
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyaare

main toh na jaanu kisko dhunde yeh nazar bekhabar(2)
ho jiski khaatir todu main duniya bhar ki rasmein
kare joh vaade pure nibhaye saari kasmein
kahin toh mil jaye woh chahe dil toot ke mujhko
rahoon na main bhi bas mein raahein na woh bhi bas mein

I wanna show my body groove the nite away
chahe bas chahe yeh dil dilbar ko pana re
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyaare
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyaare

aya kahin pe mujhko mera humsafar joh nazar
aya kahin pe mujhko mera humsafar joh nazar
mohabbat ki rahon par main hadh se badh jaaungi
main uske naam jawani kasam se kar jaaungi
mujhe hai itna kehna wohi hai mera gehna
agar bahon mein lele khushi se mar jaaungi

i wanna show my body groove the nite away
chahe bas chahe yeh dil dilbar ko pana re
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyare
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyare
halla re halla re halla re (x2)

"I want her" he thought "She's in Josh's house. Maybe there related. Whatever, even if she's related to Josh, I want her, I want her in my bed, I want her, and I'll get her" he thought. He went back inside and laid down on his bed looking outside at the girl dancing. He say her continue to sing and dance on her balcony smiling. He closed his eyes "I want her"

TO BE CONTINUED......


I didn't continue 4 a while so i made up 4 it i hope its long enough it was 8 pages on Word 😆 4 hours i put my hmk aside to work on this so plz comment 😊

kanwer 😳

Edited by hello64 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was a GREAT and LONG part.. but i cant believe how angad is thinking!!!!! thats disguisting!!!!!!



continue sooonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

that was a GREAT and LONG part.. but i cant believe how angad is thinking!!!!! thats disguisting!!!!!!



continue sooonnn



thank you VERY much for replying

see, my ff is suppose to show Angad as the non-loving type the only love he has is for Alliya and well i agree its disgusting liken kripa kuch kum nahin 😉 😆

thankz again 😳

kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~*MERA PYAR*~

Thank you to everyone who replies and 2 everyone who just read and don't reply, plz do because it builds my confidence and keeps me writing so plz reply
thank you
kanwer 😳
Edited by hello64 - 18 years ago

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