ArShi Drabble: Heir of Darkness|Part 16|4/12/17| - Page 3

Originally posted by: -CrazySobtian-

This is so heart-wrenching and you have written it so beautifully *_*

I absolutely loved it and the ending made me tear up a bit. I hope no one has to go through what she went through. She never deserved it. RIP Pratyusha!

And I really don't get why people care so much about other people so much. Like if they want to be in a live-in relationship then let it be! Just mind your own business -_-

Why give them a hard time for no damn reason? -.-

Back to the drabble, I love how you have described her feelings so well. I think this has to be my favorite drabble! <3

AYE HAYYE! Kya Tariff! Dil Phigal Gaya Hamara Tho!

And about live-ins, RIP PEACE and minding your own business. Bhalai Ka Tho Zamaana Hi Nahi Raha! Tang Adana Bohot Pasand Hai Logon Ko!

Ayye, and this must be my favorite comment too!

Loved it loved it loved it loved it to infinity... Thats like something which is directed towards heart

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Really emotional and heart wrenching 😭

Beautifull written RIP Pratyusha hoping she get justice very soon

Originally posted by: princessm16

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Damn you gal 😡😡

u made me my tears to flow even without my knowledge😭

It ws so simple to read bt so heart wrenching 2 feel, dat beautifully u have written

a gal betrayed by her own peoples, her luv, finally engulfing darkness 2 feel free frm all d pain🥺

Not a supporter of suicide bt can understand life sometimes push us 2 d point where we feel nothing worth of living 💔 bt instead of givin up on dis lyf we should move on from d things n persons who made us feel dat we have nothing left worthy 2 live😡

i knw it's easy saying den doing bt givin up our lyf 4 those 2 whom we worth nothing wouldn't make any difference 2 dem bt emerging urself in strong way n showin dem dey r also nt worth of us is their biggest defeat.😡

all i cn understand frm d update Khushi is betrayed by her luv n own peoples wen she needed dem d most bt lukin fwd 2 knw d whole story 😳

Continue soonishhh

n yup i blabber a lot wen i am disappointed or too happy, so beware😆

Thank you so much! Me neither. I don't think suicide is a solution for anything but like you said sometimes those points come and then living becomes too courageous for one. Unlike people who commit suicide for something like failing an exam, this means a lot. This shows how we are failing at relationships and failing against combating depression.

I had no plans to continue this and wanted this to be a standalone piece but now since many want a continuation, I will think of a continuation. And I hope to never make you blabber in disappointment. KIKIKIKIKI

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

Thank you so much! Me neither. I don't think suicide is a solution for anything but like you said sometimes those points come and then living becomes too courageous for one. Unlike people who commit suicide for something like failing an exam, this means a lot. This shows how we are failing at relationships and failing against combating depression.

I had no plans to continue this and wanted this to be a standalone piece but now since many want a continuation, I will think of a continuation. And I hope to never make you blabber in disappointment. KIKIKIKIKI

txxx
bt i wudn't demand a happy ending 4 dis if u r goin 2 continue
yup I wud lyk 2 c Khushi gettin justice n starting a new lyf

bt nt wid Arnav if he was also d reason 2 push her into takin dis suicidal step
instead I wud lyk 2 c her movin on wid sm1 who understands her worth n support

Originally posted by: princessm16

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bt i wudn't demand a happy ending 4 dis if u r goin 2 continue
yup I wud lyk 2 c Khushi gettin justice n starting a new lyf

bt nt wid Arnav if he was also d reason 2 push her into takin dis suicidal step
instead I wud lyk 2 c her movin on wid sm1 who understands her worth n support

Definitely not with Arnav. I will die before showing that. I thought I will show just flashbacks and wouldn't show anything for future but maybe now I will reconsider my decision there.

OMG!! that was an outstanding start dear...loved it