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Alternate Story Part 2


As the time comes when POINT 1857 becomes visible to them, the expressions of both Rajveer and Naina change. But surprisingly neither the new expression on their face is of excitement nor ecstasy! It is rather, shock!

To their left in front of them, at a far away distance stands Huda flirting with a female cadet of KMA.

"Tumhe pata hai kabse lana chahta tha main tumhe yahan...??",

asks Huda to the female cadet.

(Huda's background tune begins)

Rajveer and Naina slowly stare at each other in horror! Really, he knew about this place? Like seriously? Huda and his sweet lies!! They burst out into fit of laughter but a noiseless one, fully aware of the presence of all.

As they finish with the laughter, Naina realizes how stupid she is being, standing there? They must leave right away. Rajveer thinks the same but none could bring themselves to move an inch. They are shocked to the core.

While Rajveer was busy staring Huda's flirting, blushing in return, Naina pats him on his upper arm. Rajveer looks towards her and finds her looking to her right, she didn't even turn to look towards him while patting, he realizes.

Following her vision, Rajveer looks to their left, in front of them to get yet another shock! Ali and Pooja are staring each other intently, standing way too close to each other.

"Ye... humara Ali hai?",

asks Rajveer, whispering into Naina's ear.

The feel of his breath and the closeness, makes Naina to shiver. Whatever it is he must maintain some distance when they are at Point 1857, thinks Naina!

Getting a little away out of shyness, Naina nods her head, never meeting his eyes. It's then Rajveer realizes what he has done and how she must be feeling right now. But surprisingly unlike other times, tonight, he doesn't give heed to her comfort. He smiles looking at her shyness while Naina avoids to look towards him out of shyness.

(Slow Rajveer-Naina guitar tune begins as Rajveer stares at his shy Naina)

Smiling, Rajveer focuses back on his cadets that his eyes see in front of him, far away. How could he miss it? And how could he think Ali, Pooja and Huda would have come alone? Creasing his brows out of worry, thinking, how would Naina react to this? But of course he cannot keep it from her anyhow now! He knows eventually she'll notice.

Rajveer with a nervous look on his face, pats on Naina's shoulder. Naina looks towards him, thinking what's the matter. Nervously he turns to look towards her. Putting a little fake smile on his face, which vanishes with in seconds, he points in front of him at the far away point. Naina follows his indication and gasp in horror - Alekh and Neelu!!!!

What the hell???

"Kamal hai sub yahan hai par Yudi nazar nahi aa raha?",

asks Naina, casually.

And as she blurts out the question, it succeeds in skipping the heartbeat of both Rajveer and Naina. They look towards each other in horror and blurt out in unison,

"Dr. Shalini!!!"

With their hearts beating frantically, they try to look for Dr. Shalini and Yudi. Out of anxiety and horror, their vision become blur, they fail to notice Yudi.

Suddenly the sound of guitar strings catch their attention. And they find Yudi standing at a corner, playing guitar, alone.

Rajveer and Naina sigh in relief as they discover that Yudi is alone.

"Hello love birds!"

The voice makes Rajveer's and Naina's heart to skip a beat each!

Very slowly, nervously, they turn to find Dr. Shalini, standing behind them. Her arms crossed over her chest, tilting her head to the left, she gives them a naughty smile, which tells them how ecstatic she feels on catching them red handed. She must really be rewarded with a good prize on successfully discovering the two who keep going around the academy with these sweet smiles on their faces which shout that they are innocent and have no idea about what is going on between the two!

But how could Captain Rajveer think that he would be able to escape from the hawk eyes of Dr. Shalini? She must teach him a good lesson for inspite of having indirect discussions about the great Captain Rajveer and oh-so-innocent Cadet Naina, with Captain Rajveer, he never cared or considered of confining his true feelings to Dr. Shalini. And then he claims that she is his best friend?

Rajveer after coming out of the initial shock of getting caught; widens his eyes, blushing, looking towards Dr. Shalini, indicating her secretly to stop addressing them as 'love birds'!

If Rajveer is this much affected, then Naina is no where behind. She blushes profusely, lowering her eyes.

Dr. Shalini with a tease smile on her face, arches a brow, as a gesture of asking Rajveer, 'What? What do you want me to do? Stop teasing?'

Rajveer pleads silently, innocently to stop teasing them, Naina is yet not prepared for all this tease. He of course knows how much Dr. Shalini enjoys teasing friends and to what extent can she go when it comes to teasing! And also he wouldn't mind being teased! But not here; not now; not in front of her at least, oh please!

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"Ahmm... main wo actually wo...",

Naina in a state of embarrassment, tries to think of some excuse as to why instead of being in her room is she here at POINT 1857 that too with her mentor Captain Rajveer?

"Doc... Dr. Shalini aap... yahan..?",

asks Rajveer.

"Bura laga?",

asks Dr. Shalini, making a sorrowful face.

"Nahi... nahi kaisi baatein kar rahi hain aap? Bura kyun lagega?",

says Rajveer out of nervousness.

Naina and Dr. Shalini narrow their eyes on him. They understand that he is lying!

"Oh! nahi laga bura? Very good!",

says Dr. Shalini, smiling sweetly, in order to irritate Rajveer.

Rajveer mutters,

"Haan, aap hi ka to intezaar kar rahe the ki aap kab ayengi?"

Naina widens her eyes, staring Rajveer, indicating him not to say like that.

Rajveer shakes his head looking towards Naina, his expression gives away how he is not happy on discovering Dr. Shalini there!

"Waise Dr. Shalini, aap akeli ayi hain? Brigadier Chandok nahi aye apke saath?",

asks Captain Rajveer in a sugar coated voice.

Naina widens her eyes yet again. Creasing her brows she thinks, what is he saying? Has he lost it?

"Aur Brigadier Chandok hi kyun? Major... Major Nayyer? Suri ji?? I am sure wo bhi aa rahe honge apke peechey-peechey Lolita Ma'am ke saath!",

says a pissed off Rajveer.

Naina, not in a condition to utter anything out of so many shocks, stares him in shock!

Rajveer's eyes fall on Naina.

Indicating with his hand to stop it, he says,

"Koi zarurat nahi hai darne ki Naina...",

and before he could continue further, Dr. Shalini interrupts,

"Haan Captain Rajveer hai na apke saath. Jab Rajveer ho Naina ke saath, to Naina ko darne ki kya baat?"

Dr. Shalini's lines succeed in skipping Rajveer's and Naina's heartbeat.

"Ma'am wo... hum actually... ye log academy mein nahi the na, to inhe hi dhundhte-dhundhte yahan aa gaye!",

lies Naina.

Dr. Shalini turns to look towards Naina in shock. Captain Rajveer, as Dr. Shalini turns away to look towards Naina, gives expression that tells Naina, that he is impressed.

Staring her, with her mouth open, out of surprise, Dr. Shalini says,

"I can't believe Naina, ki aap dono itne agey barh gaye ho ki ek dusre ki baaton ko cover up karne lage ho? Ek dusre ka jhoot mein bhi saath dene lage ho?"

"Itne aagey? Kya... kya matlab itne agey?",

asks Rajveer, lowering his eyes out of hesitation.

Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness.

"Uffo aap log mujhey to bata sakte the? Main apki help kar deti!",

says Dr. Shalini, pissed off on witnessing their immaturity.

"Ma'am wo sub to theek hai, par ye log yahan kaise aa gaye? I mean humne to socha tha ki...",

Naina was about to blurt out, but thankfully Rajveer shouts at her, keeping his voice under check,

"Naina..."

It's then Naina realizes what she was about to say! This whole chaotic situation has surely taken a toll on her. Naina widens her eyes out of embarrassment and shyness.

Dr. Shalini tries to hide her amusement.

"Haan Naina please soch samjh kar bolo. Arey ek kaam karo, dekho I am sure aap dono ne abhi tak ye baat discuss to ki nahi hogi ki aap dono ki kon-kon si 'personal' baatein is worth sharing with all and kon si - kon si nahi?",

says Dr. Shalini, enjoying teasing them.

Where on one hand Naina keeps blushing, her eyes lowered. There on the other Rajveer, warns his friend Shalini to stop teasing them. And this time the warning doesn't come for Dr. Shalini, but for Raj's friend Shalini,

"Shalini...",

warns Rajveer, pointing his index finger.

"Ohhooo... aj to main Dr. Shalini se Shalini ho gayi?",

Dr. Shalini doesn't take his warning seriously. She knows he is trying to fake his anger. But what he doesn't know is, it wouldn't work on her. Or is it that he knows it very well, but just trying his lucks?

If that's the case, well Captain, you must know, tonight, your luck is fifty percent in your favor and fifty percent against you!

"Waise I wonder, konsi baat dusro se share karni hai wo to kya; aap dono ne to wo baat bhi ek dusre se share nahi ki hogi jo aap dono ko share kar leni chahiye ab tak?",

she asks the both. Then turning towards Rajveer, she asks, smiling infectiously,

"Hai na Captain?"

"Oopss... Raj!",

rectifies Shalini, arching a brow.

Initially Rajveer blushes with his eyes lowered. But soon he looks up towards Shalini, holding his waist from either side, tilting his head to his left, he asks her,

"Dr. Shalini, pehle aap mujhey ye bataiye ki aap yahan kya kar rahi hain?"

His question takes Dr. Shalini off guard!

"Wo... main... actually..."

"Haan... haan... kahiye... kahiye... I am all ears!",

says Rajveer, hiding his amusement on catching Shalini off guard.

Looking towards him, narrowing her eyes, Shalini beats Rajveer on his upper arm. It comes as a surprise for both Naina and Rajveer.

Rajveer winces in pain, as it was unexpected.

Naina blurts out,

"Ma'am!"

Rajveer turns to look towards Naina, amazed, all serious.

(Slow Rajveer-Naina piano tune begins)

Shalini turns to look towards Naina, trying to hide her amusement, arching a brow,

"Ohhoo... apko dard to nahi hua na Cadet Singh?",

she asks in a sugar coated voice.

Rajveer succeeds to understand yet again, her tease, but Naina.

"Dard? Mujhey kyun dard hoga? Apne... apne mara to inhe hai!",

she says, lowering her eyes out of shyness. Understanding perfectly, what Shalini meant!

Smiling infectiously, Shalini says,

"Mujhey aisa lag to nahi raha!"

Naina remains quiet out of shyness, her head bowed down.

Smiling, Shalini turns to look towards Rajveer and says,

"Captain main aj kal thodi busy hun, so maine jo ye apko mara hai na uski dawa to main de dungi apko... laga aap khud lena!"

Rajveer nods his head into positive.

"On second thought, apko mehnat karne ki kya zarurat hai? Cadet Singh hai na!",

her suggestion skips Naina's heartbeat. It has the same affect on Rajveer too. They look at her widening their eyes.

"Apki favourite student; apki favourite cadet; apki protegee; apki...",

she trails off the sentence intentionally.

"Dr. Shalini!",

says Rajveer, sternly, blushing.

Raising her hands, surrendering herself, she makes innocent face and says,

"Okay! Okay! I am behaving! I am quiet!"

Rajveer and Naina blush and this swells Dr. Shalini's heart.

"Hmm... situation kya hai?",

asks Dr. Shalini.

And before they could say anything, Dr. Shalini says, indicating towards Rajveer and Naina,

"Nahi... nahi... ye wali nahi... wo wali!",

saying so she purses her lips and quickly stares ahead to avoid looking at their angry glares. Naina she is sure, won't glare her, it would rather be a blush but Rajveer, well he might run to beat her like olden days for teasing him!

Rajveer shakes his head, blushing, looking towards Dr. Shalini, thinking - she knows no limits. Then she looks towards Naina. His prior smile vanishing gradually, as his stare becomes more intense.

(Rajveer-Naina slow flute tune begins)

Now even others have also accepted their relationship and here they are, not even daring to word their feelings in front of each other. But is it not how they enjoy their relationship? Silent, yet there! So who cares what the world want? They'll do what they want. They will keep it slow, they are in no hurry. When they are there together, for each other, so why worry? Giving a smile, Rajveer focuses back on the matter in their hands; Naina lowers her eyes, suddenly all her love for him comes rushing up into the top most point of her heart.

Getting back to their normal selves, Rajveer and Naina indicate her towards the cadets. Dr. Shalini looks at all the pairs of love birds in front of her; then her eyes rests on the lonely soul.

"Poor Yudi! I wish ye bhi kisi ko le aatein!",

says Dr. Shalini, looking towards Yudi, sweetly.

Rajveer arches a brow looking towards Naina. Naina blushes understanding what's going on in his mind.

Putting his strategies into action he communicates, looking towards Yudi, acting to be feeling sorry for him,

"Haan... bechara... kitna bura lag raha hoga na ussey? Itni romantic jagah..."

As Rajveer says this, Naina's heart skips a beat, she looks towards him, blushing. She falls in a dilemma as to what should she do - look at him, because he is looking so adorable at this moment or should she lower her eyes, as it becomes difficult for her to look towards him when he talks this way!

Rajveer, unaware of Naina's stare, says to Dr. Shalini, staring Yudi, he acts to be determined, creasing his brows,

"Shalini, maine soch lia hai, academy wapas jate hi apka rishta main khud lekar jaunga!"

Naina who couldn't resist herself any longer, laughs, and says,

"Main bhi chalungi, mujhey koi problem nahi hai!"

"Haan... haan... rishta lekar humesha pati-patni ek saath hi jatey hain!",

blurts out Shalini, totally oblivious, what she said.

"What?",

say Rajveer and Naina out of shock.

Where on one hand Naina looks towards Dr. Shalini in disbelief, there on the other hand Rajveer gives her a warning look. Taking it seriously, Dr. Shalini tries to cover up,

"Ahmm... nahi... nahi... mera matlab...",

then suddenly she remembers...

"Ek minute kiska rishta lekar jayenge aap Yudi ke liye?",

she asks, holding her waist from either sides and narrowing her eyes on Rajveer.

Naina tries to control her fit of laughter and looks anywhere but towards Dr. Shalini.

Rajveer widens his eyes out of shock. Oh no! she caught her at last. He looks towards Dr. Shalini, nervously, plastering a smile on his face.

"Nahi... main to bus aise hi...",

says Rajveer, covering up his last words.

Naina enjoys his current state.

"Nahi apne kuch kaha... maine suna...",

says Shalini, nodding her head, as a gesture to warn him, don't mess with me.

Caught and trying to find a way to escape the situation, Rajveer points towards Naina.

"Iska! Nai... Naina ka!"

This comes as yet another shock for both the ladies. But this time their roles get reversed. Naina looks towards him, her eyes wide open. How can he say that? He of all people?

Now this is something Shalini enjoys immensely. Pointing towards Naina; and trying hard to hide her amusement; her eyes twinkling with amusement; she stares Rajveer, and asks,

"Naina?"

Then she turns to look towards Naina, with her mouth wide open with shock! Shock, but a good one. She notices Naina's face turning red out of embarrassment. This she can make out by Naina's expressions that she hasn't ever faced such kind of an embarrassing situation ever in her life before! And that too, who caused it - Rajveer?

This comes as a shock for Rajveer too, his answer. Hell these two ladies! Why do they have to do this to him every time? And why still he has to run to them each time when he loses all his hope? He hates them for having such an affect on him. But hell he can't live without these two, too!

What a blooper! Why did he say that? Why can't he hold his tongue?

But what's said is said! And what's heard by Shalini is heard!

And knowing perfectly, to grab an opportunity, Dr. Shalini asks, mockingly,

"Aap lekar jayenge Naina ka rishta? Wo bhi Yudi ke liye?"

Naina shakes her head, her eyes cascaded down, out of shyness. She blushes throughout.

But no this can't go for long, she can't let him feel embarrassed. Determined to help him, Naina looks towards Shalini and asks,

"Ahmm... kyun nahi, iss mein badi baat kya hai?"

"Pehle bhi to ja chuke hain Huda ka rishta...",

she stops abruptly. Oh no! she didn't want to put herself and Huda in the same frame, knowing how Huda used to feel about her. She didn't want to hurt Rajveer by mentioning about Huda and herself. But what Naina fails to understand is, in such a situation like this one, with hurt comes jealousy! And what good is a relationship that too one which is developing gradually, without jealousy?

Shalini looks towards her in shock. Rajveer turns to look towards her, all serious. Naina stares him. He needs to understand that she is doing all this for him. She didn't want to hurt him. She wanted to save him from any further embarrassment. But hell how did the situation change suddenly?

(Slow Rajveer-Naina tune begins)

Lowering his eyes, Rajveer smiles sarcastically. It hurts Naina, she didn't want to hurt him. But now that unintentionally she has hurt him, she will have to mend the situation too.

Smiling, and keeping the matter up to them to solve, she smiles to clear the tensed air and says, determined,

"Anyways main inse deal karti hun!"

Her words drag Rajveer and Naina's attention.

"Aur kya karengi aap?",

asks Rajveer, plastering a smile on his face, in order to clear the tensed air prevailing there because of this latest discussion.

"Just wait and watch Captain!",

she shows off.

Naina and Rajveer look towards her smiling, blushing.

Shalini walks forth to deal with the cadets that something comes to her mind. She turns and pointing her index finger towards them, she says,

"Lekin ek shart hai meri!"

Rajveer and Naina look towards each other, nervously.

"Shart?",

asks Naina, turning to look at Shalini.

Smiling, Shalini nods her head in quick succession.

"Kaisi shart Shalini?",

asks Rajveer smiling, confused.

Forwarding her hand she demands his mobile,

"Mobile dikhaiye!"

"Mobile?",

asks Rajveer, quizzically.

"Haan mobile. Laye hain na aap? Kahin Naina ke saath yahan aney ki khushi mein aap bhul to nahi gaye mobile academy mein?",

she asks, arching her brow, an infectious smile stretches on her lips.

Knowing that she won't give up teasing, Rajveer with a smile on his face shakes his head and brings out his mobile from his pocket, staring Shalini throughout. Shalini keeps smiling too, looking towards him.

As he places his mobile on her extended hand, he remembers something and as she was about to take her hand back, Rajveer holds her had and says,

"Ek minute... apne ab tak nahi bataya ki aap yahan kya kar rahi hain?"

"Ji Ma'am aap yahan kya kar rahi hain? Wo bhi akele?",

asks Naina, pursing her lips out og amusement, after uttering her second question.

Plastering a smile on her face, Shalini turns to look towards Naina, and says

"Sub apki aur apke Rajveer Sir ki mehrbani hai!",

she emphasis on 'apke' and 'Sir'.

Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness.

"Aap dono ko bachane ayi thi apke pyare dost...",

then she turns to look towards Rajveer and continues,

"Aur apke pyare cadets se!"

Rajveer and Naina crease their brows.

"Apko pata tha?",

asks Naina.

"Maine sunn liya tha inko baat karte hue ki ye log POINT 1857 aa rahe hain. Main iss barey mein Captain Rajveer se baat karne gayi to dekha ki ye akele mein muskura rahe the!",

she tells them.

Rajveer blushes on hearing her. Naina blushes too as she realizes that it must have been her he was thinking about when Dr. Shalini saw him smiling.

"Tab mujhey thoda ajeeb laga. Socha, aisi kya baat ho gayi ki ye aise muskura rahe hain? Fir achanak mujhey ye realize hua, ki kuch dino se yein kuch zada hi muskurane lage hain. Kya baat ho sakti hai?"

Rajveer widens his eyes, he doesn't want her to continue. He doesn't want to feel embarrass.

'God Shalini! get some grip',

thinks Rajveer, getting nervous. His heartbeat picks up pace.

Turning towards him, she asks innocently, as if she really doesn't know,

"Kya baat ho sakti hai?"

Rajveer, lowering his eyes, blushes.

Then Shalini turns to look towards Naina and with a satisfactory smile on her face, she says,

"Fir iska jawab inhone mujhey de dia!"

Her confession skips not only Naina's heartbeat but Rajveer's too! Answer? When did he answer any of her non-asked question? Screw the question, when did he even talk to her before coming to POINT 1857 tonight?

"Ja...wa...b... de... di...ya...? Kya...? I mean...",

out of anxiety and nervousness, it becomes difficult for Naina to frame a proper question.

Rajveer sighs silently, out of anxiety. What is Dr. Shalini about to say?

Then he focuses on Naina - Is she nervous? The thought brings a naughty smile on his face! Naina's current state of nervousness, he enjoys so much that within moments, he doesn't care about what Shalini is about to say. All he cares right now is to gauge Naina's reaction after listening to Shalini. Because as far as he knows his best friend Shalini, this confession she is about to make will make the both - Naina and himself blush so hard! But he is ready to face anything to witness Naina's blush on his account, which is so precious to him.

Naina looks towards Rajveer, nervously, to get some hint about what he might have said? But he somehow manages to keep a straight face, giving nothing away.

Smiling, understanding Naina's current state, Dr. Shalini takes pity on her and tells her,

"Lately, Captain Rajveer kuch zada hi khush rehne lagey hain. Especially, jab se aap dono ke beech ki misunderstanding clear hui hain!"

This comes as a surprise for both of them, how does she know their current relationship status?

"Don't look at me like that guys? I mean come on, I am Dr. Shalini Singhal 'The gossip queen' of KMA",

she states, airing the inverted commas, blushing.

"So main samjh gayi the reason has to be Naina!"

Naina looks towards Rajveer, hesitantly. Rajveer sensing that she is looking towards him, looks towards Naina. They enjoy an eye contact, while Dr. Shalini turns away, and thinks about how to continue the story without blushing. She remains completely oblivious about what's going on behind her.

(Rajveer-Naina guitar tune begins)

"Aur tabhi maine inhe bolte hue suna 'POINT 1857'! Aur main sub kuch samajh gayi!",

says Shalini, with a naughty smile on her face.

Her confession succeeds in skipping Naina's and Rajveer's heartbeat.

Naina without failing remembers Rajveer and hers first conversation about POINT 1857 -

'Wo jagah bohot hi sacred hai! Bohot hi secret hai...!'

He said it's a secret place and here she is, Dr. Shalini, mentioning it with a naughty smile on her face. Thinking about it, Naina resist rolling her eyes.
Now all her near and dear ones know about this place! This place is still a sacred place, no doubt but secret?? oh let's not dwell into the question!

"Anyways ab mere shart ki bari!",

reminds Shalini with an infectious smile on her face, arching a brow. Rajveer had already left her hand while she was dictating the story.

Saying that she checks Rajveer's mobile, getting excited, but takes a deep breath trying to control her anger and forwards the mobile to him and scolds him mildly,

"Lock kholiye!"

Rajveer apologizes, blushing, on having forgotten to unlock his phone before handing it over to Shalini, as many things were running through his mind.

"Oh I am sorry!",

blushes Rajveer.

Taking it after he successfully unlocks his phone, Shalini goes to the photo gallery. As soon as she opens it, a sarcastic smile comes on her face.

"Pata tha mujhey ki khali hi hona hai!",

she says, sarcastically.

"Excuse me? Kya khali hona hai?",

asks Rajveer, puzzled.

"Apki photo gallery!",

says Shalini, rolling her eyes.

"Kaise aadmi hain aap Captain? Gallery mein ek photo tak nahi?",

asks Shalini, pissed off by Rajveer's innocence.

"Apni choriye... kamse kam Naina ki to rakhte?",

says Shalini, without any hesitation, what so ever.

This skips Rajveer and Naina's heartbeat. They look towards each other, completely surprised! As their eyes meet, they quickly look away out of shyness.

"Me...ri... meri pics inke paas kyun hongi?",

asks Naina, confused.

Ignoring her question, she continues flipping through the pictures. Whilst doing so, she says,

"Mere paas hain Naina ki kuch pics, I'll forward you as soon as we reach academy!"

Naina's heartbeat picks up pace.

"Aa...p... meri pics kyun...?",

she hesitates to complete her line.

Rajveer finds it shocking too.

"Exactly... aap... I mean... main khud...",

he says, puzzled. Unable to understand what exactly he wants to say!

His last words drags Shalini's attention. Looking towards him, she arches her brow, with a naughty smile on her face she asks him,

"Aap khud... kya karenge Captain?"

Trying to control her amusement, her eyes sparkling with excitement, Shalini says,

"I mean I won't mind agar aap khud Naina ki kuch pics click kar lenge... And... I really don't think that Naina would mind either! Hai na Naina?",

asks Shalini, turning to look towards Naina, with sweet smile on her face.

(Slow Rajveer-Naina flute tune begins as Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness)

Rajveer looks towards her, with a nervous smile on his face. He waits for her to answer, as if this answer won't be for Shalini but for himself!

Naina decides to play along! With a new determination in her eyes, taking a deep breath, she looks into Shalini's eyes,

"Of course I'll mind. Koi ladka meri pictures apne mobile mein kyun rakhega?",

she asks, knitting her brows.

Rajveer's heartbeat stops altogether.

Oh god! is she angry? Pissed off?

Widening her eyes, Shalini looks towards Rajveer to check his reaction. Rajveer does seem hurt. He lowers his eyes, smiling sadly.

"I... I mean...",

Naina realizes what did she just say. But god! she can't even rectify it! What would she say - 'Haan ye rakh sakte hain, par aur koi ladka nahi'?

Letting it go, Rajveer looks towards Shalini and says,

"Ab aap apni shart batayengi?"

"Oh! Haan!",

says Shalini, nervously.

"Alright to shart ye hai ki aj aap dono ek saath kayi sari pictures click karenge yahan jab aap time spend karenge! It's a deal! Done?",

asks Shalini, showing her palm, horizontally, as a gesture of seeking promise from him.

Naina shuts her eyes out of shyness on hearing her demand.

Taking a deep breath, smiling, Rajveer places his hand on Shalini's, promising her. Smiling with all her heart, she says,

"Now I'll go and deal with them. Mission 'RESCUE RAINA' here I come!"

And she leaves for the mission, leaving behind a suprised and blushing RAINA!

"RAINA??",

utters Rajveer and Naina together. They laughout, remembering their conversation that they had in Rajveer's room. He invented the name 'RAINA' but here it seems all the shippers of Rajveer and Naina have given the shipping name to this adorable and a beautiful pair as RAINA!

(Fast Rajveer-Naina flute tune begins)

While Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness, Rajveer smiles looking at a blushing Naina.

In a low voice, Rajveer tells her,

"Lagta hai subko kuch zada hi pasand aa gya hai ye naam RAINA!"

Naina looks towards him, blushing she shakes her head.

~*~*~

Reaching the group, Dr. Shalini says,

"Hi guys, how are...",

and before she could complete the line, she slips.

"Ma'am...",

shouts Yudi and runs to catch her, before she falls.

Rajveer out of afraid and nervousness that she might hurt herself begins to run for her that Naina holds him from his upper arm.

This comes as a total surprise for Rajveer. Why would she stop him from helping Shalini? Seriously, right now she is caring about their secret to get revealed? Can she be this much selfish?

Rajveer turns to look towards Dr. Shalini in horror to satisfy his urge to know that she is alright but what he finds succeeds in his brows to knit!

Yudi holds Shalini such that Shalini is bent backwards, downwards. If anyhow Yudi loses the hold on her, she'll definitely reach the ground with a thud, in moments. But that's not all that Rajveer notices!

Rajveer doesn't fail to notice the way Shalini and Yudi are staring each other. Both the pairs of eyes bear tension! Somehow Rajveer could understand that the tension isn't out of the fact that their secret has been revealed, it is rather a different kind of tension. Rajveer feels that this tension is similar to the tension he feels when he feels concerned about Naina! He knows exactly what are his feelings towards Naina! Oh he knows it too, what are Yudi's and Shalini's feelings for each other. So is this all because of that?

Then for god knows what reason, his mind drifts towards himself and Naina. Had they been in the situation where Shalini and Yudi are right now, how she would have reacted to all that? He knows she is a tough cadet but when it comes to him, to the bond they share, she suddenly turns fragile. And this is something he likes about her. She knows when to stand erect and when to turn fragile in his presence!

"Main tumhare saath koi pic nahi click karne wala!",

he tells her firmly.

His words succeed in sinking her heart. She somehow knew, this is coming, sooner or later, and now here it is!

But nevertheless, she can't let this happen. Not that she is craving to get clicked with him but the fact that he is saying so because he is angry at him, she can't endure it!

"Kyun?",

she asks, her voice lowered out of nervousness.

Turning to look towards her, with her brows creased, he asks her, taunting her,

"Tumhari? Tumhari pic main kyun rakhunga? Tumhare saath main photo kyun khichwaun?"

Naina's heart sinks a little more, oh no he is angry!

(Slow Rajveer-Naina guitar tune begins as Naina stares Rajveer, who is looking in front towards Yudi and Shalini but his attention is fully on Naina)

She needs to do something! She can't keep him angry when they are together at POINT 1857!

"Aur agar maine force kiya to? Photo khichwane ke liye? Mere saath?",

she asks softly, never drifting her eyes from him.

(Fast Rajveer-Naina tune begins as Rajveer turns to look towards her)

Her question comes as a surprise for him, is she his Naina? The shy one? A smile creeps on Rajveer's lips as he thinks about it. Naina blushes too but never ends the eye contact!

Now this is a test for her!

"Himmat hai, to koshish karke dekh lo?",

dares Rajveer, smiling infectiously.

Oh god! this wasn't something she was expecting coming! Where is her shy Rajveer? How can he dare her? In front of all she'll force him to get clicked? This is so not going to happen! Rajveer arches a brow, as he finds this damn exciting.

"Mujhey kitne tests dene honge aur?",

she asks out of blue.

"Tests? Kis cheez ke?",

asks Rajveer, creasing his brows? What tests? What is she talking about?

Naina doesn't answer and keeps staring him.

(Slow Rajveer-Naina tune begins)

With in moments Rajveer realizes what is she pointing towards! He looks away in order to calm down the rate of his heartbeat. Naina lowers her eyes too out of shyness, all serious.

"Main koi test nahi le raha!",

he tells simply, looking in front of him, avoiding eye contact with her.

Yudi's removing a particular tendril of Shalini's hair, attracts the attention of Rajveer and Naina. Yudi stares Shalini intently. Shalini lowers her eyes and shivers a little as Yudi's hand brushes her face during the process of removing the tendril of her hair.

Here Naina lowers her eyes and turns away, unable to bear this feeling that Yudi and Shalini together are giving to her. Rajveer looks towards Naina, who is standing with her face turned away.

"Kya hua?",

asks Rajveer.

"Mujhey wapas jana hai!",

says Naina, in a hoarse whisper.

Smirking, secretly, he asks,

"Kyun? Tum to yahan aana chahti thi! POINT 1857 par, mere saath?",

teases Rajveer.

His tease instead of calming her down, makes her even more vulnerable. Naina gives him a look that dares him to argue with her. Frustrated, Naina turns to leave but Rajveer holds her by her wrist right away and pulls her to him.

(Fast Rajveer-Naina revolt tune begins)

Naina tries to escape his hold but Rajveer maintains a firm hold on to it.

At first Rajveer takes it lightly, thinking, soon she'll quit trying to escape from his hold. But hell how could he forget that she is his stubborn Naina? He pulls her with him and takes her to the wishing pillar. Whilst all this, Naina doesn't quit trying to get away from his hold, but fails miserably.

(Fast Rajveer-Naina revolt tune continues)

Standing behind the wishing pillar, such that their Naina's back is against the pillar, Rajveer places his hand on either side of her face, hovering her. Naina finds it difficult to look away. Rajveer's gaze turns intense and intimate.

Naina unable to resist herself for the first time, very nervously, takes her hand to his face. She keeps checking, will he be angry? will he permit? will he be okay with her touching him? Rajveer anticipates her move, and waits for her to touch him for the first time on his face!

"Ali... Ali... nahi...",

laughs Pooja.

Her laughter reaches the ears of Rajveer and Naina. Pooja's laughter pulls Naina and Rajveer back to the present time! They were living in a different world moments ago. A world where no one existed but them.

Naina starts breathing heavily, feeling suffocated. She feels like running away from him, not because she hates him but because she hesitates to do the alternate! She can't hug him! Only a hug from him can calm her right now, she knows it! But does she know that the same hug he needs too, to calm him down?

"Kya hua?",

he whispers, hovering her, putting his hands on either side of the pillar.

"Main nahi chahti ki kisi ko bhi pata chaley ki hum yahan aye hain, ek saath",

she says hesitantly.

"Nahi pata chalega...",

he assures her.

Then adds further, joking,

"Hum keh denge ki hum alag alag aye the!"

He purses his lips to stop his laughter.

Glaring him, Naina asks him,

"Apko ye mazak lag raha hai? Kya kahungi main Pooja ko agar usne pucha main yahan kya kar rahi hun, wo bhi apke saath ?"

Smiling, taking a deep breath, he says,

"Keh dena ki usse dhundhne ayi thi tum yahan. Mujhey bhi saath le ayi"

They keep staring each other. Both drawing air from the environment deeply.

(Slow Rajveer-Naina tune begins as they talk to each other in hoarse whisper... low voice... to make themselves inaudible)

"Agar tumhe problem ho rha hai to chalte hain wapas",

he suggests, smiling.

Naina stares him, conveying him through her expression, how she doesn't want to go, yet.

Understanding that she doesn't wanna leave, he asks her,

"Hum aj yahan khul kar ghum nahi payenge. Tum time spend nahi kar paogi apni marzi se. Fir kyun nahi jana chahti wapas?",

smiles Rajveer.

Naina begins to lower her eyes but Rajveer places his index finger under her chin and warns her mildly,

"Aaj nahi Naina..."

Understanding that he doesn't want her to end the eye contact, Naina gives in, accepting his decision without any argument.

(Slow Rajveer-Naina guitar tune begins as they stare each other)

"Mujhey problem unke yahan hone se nahi ho rahi!",

she tells him, looking intently into his eyes.

Smiling a little, he asks her, never breaking the eye contact,

"Fir...?"

Blushing, she tells him,

"Mujhey problem apke mere itne paas hone se ho rahi hai..."

(Fast Rajveer-Naina tune begins as they keep staring each other, smiling little)

Gradually their smiles vanish and they turn serious.

"Kyun kya ho raha hai mere tumhare paas aney se?"

Naina's rate of heartbeat increases as he asks this question.

"Aur kya keh rahi thi tum? Pehle bhi to ja chuka hun tumhare ghar Huda ka rishta lekar?",

he asks further.

This is too much to bear. She already knew this she will have to face sooner or later, after blurting it out. But this would be the situation, she didn't know then.

Why is he doing this? Why couldn't he just let it go? Why did he has to bring up this topic?
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
AMAZING as always!
Can't wait to read more!
Please update soon!!
Becharay Rajveer and Naina phas gayye buri tarah!
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Fabbb...do more updates...n pm me too...😊
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Updated more 😊
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Originally posted by: Raj_Naina_LRL

Pati patni? What??

AWESOME UPDATE!!


😉 😆 read further

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
I read it! It was amazing as usual!
Oh god ab Naina ka kya hoga??? Rajveer uski kya halat karega alkele mein because she mentioned about Huda! O O I am waiting for that scene!
I cant get enough of your updates! I cant wait to red more please yaar update soon!
Sorry, I am being a little selfish but its because I cant wait to read more! You write way too wonderfully!
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Updated on 24.5.2017

Read from 'Tab mujhey thoda ajeeb laga. Socha, aisi kya baat ho gayi ki ye aise muskurane lage hain. Kya baat ho sakti hai?'
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Hey,
I had read this in wattpad...had not idea you were posting it here as well
It is such a good plot line...especially the alternative story
Thanks for the PM
Misha
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Originally posted by: RNgirl

Hey,

I had read this in wattpad...had not idea you were posting it here as well
It is such a good plot line...especially the alternative story
Thanks for the PM
Misha


Oh thank you so much! 😳

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