Rajveer-Naina's Stories Updated PG 51 ON 11.8.2018

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Sakhi

@sakha_sakhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Jiya re... this is awesome... I think if it would have been like this in the original serial also... then probably it would have gone on different track at all... Loved this one

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Manveer

@ManVeer8495

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Ria!!! you are simply awesome amazing & superb writer 👏 ❤️
your writing brings a smile on face i can easily visualize the scene raina kitne adorable & cute lagte hai tumhare story me

Edited by npksk8495 - 9 years ago

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi
Nice OS the first one... Liked it... The way Naina boldly asked him questions...

Thank you so much 😊

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Very nice. Please continue soon

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi
Jiya re... this is awesome... I think if it would have been like this in the original serial also... then probably it would have gone on different track at all... Loved this one

Jiya re... this is awesome... I think if it would have been like this in the original serial also... then probably it would have gone on different track at all...

Yes I guess you are right ! 😊

Loved this one

Thank you so much 😳

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

This comes for your OS on jail scene which I read recently. I just loved that scene and I wish it would have happened in the way you wrote.

Superb work 👏 👏

Naina must have been there and their eye lock...hieee soch kar hi kitna khush ho jate hain na hum.

I hated when Raj behaved rudely with Naina without her fault. She even didn't understand why is Raj behaving like this with her?

I have a suggestion for you to write a OS in your style with two scenes Rumal and Watch; one is mud scene. I wish we would have got some extensions for that.

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
This comes for your OS on jail scene which I read recently. I just loved that scene and I wish it would have happened in the way you wrote.

Superb work 👏 👏

Naina must have been there and their eye lock...hieee soch kar hi kitna khush ho jate hain na hum.

I hated when Raj behaved rudely with Naina without her fault. She even didn't understand why is Raj behaving like this with her?

I have a suggestion for you to write a OS in your style with two scenes Rumal and Watch; one is mud scene. I wish we would have got some extensions for that.

I used the 'MUD SCENE' in the RNTMB. 😳 But i'll keep this in mind. May be someday I'll create an OS on this scene too 😳 Although I am not sure when! 😕 I still haven't completed with the DHAAGA OS 😉

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

I used the 'MUD SCENE' in the RNTMB. 😳 But i'll keep this in mind. May be someday I'll create an OS on this scene too 😳 Although I am not sure when! 😕 I'll still haven't completed with the DHAAGA OS 😉

Koi nahi do it aaram se. Vaise bhi kai saari acchi cheejin ek saath humara pet kharab kar sakti hain.

About RNTMB I want an extension of mud scene in a different way.

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Koi nahi do it aaram se. Vaise bhi kai saari acchi cheejin ek saath humara pet kharab kar sakti hain.

About RNTMB I want an extension of mud scene in a different way.

😳

do you have anything particular in mind? 😊

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Priya

@lovern

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Hiii Riya

One more OS on RAINA .

Superb writer u r u know that. 👏👏

Amazing dear. Seriously i just wanted to see something like this in LRL but all in our dream .

The bond between both of them is very strong u know. Woh ek dusre ka saath kabhi nahi chodenge.

Continue soon dear... waiting for update. 😊😊

And PM me too.

And one suggestion for u I just wanted to read the story after Rajveer tells her truth about Naveen from your point of view. Plzzz think about it if u can. Noo i know that u can do that.

Lots of hugsss & lots of love ❤️

Priya