Phir Milenge (RajivAmna ff) last prt uptd - Page 32

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mz.jess

wonderful part!! 😳

heyi jessi.. so good to see u here..!! thank 4 ur comments.. I'm glad u liked it..

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Posted: 18 years ago
ple continue with your story.........cant wait to see more........

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Posted: 18 years ago

Gr8 part👏👏👏

Cont soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks again..!! Will be updating asap
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Posted: 18 years ago
just watched the vid & it was just amazing & after watching the vid m ragerlly w8ng 4 the next part plz try to cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-26

Recap-
Everthing was on normal terms at the Saran House.... Rahul ki wajah se sab kuch pehle jaisa hota hai... Rahul, Surveen, Rhea aur Khwaish Australia chale jaate hai...

Ab aage....
Yaha Kapoor's ka business kuch loss se guzar raha tha,per Rhea ki mehnat aur Rahul ke support se business phir pehle jaisa hone lagta hai.. Company saare financial loss recover karne lagti hai....
Zindagi ki raftaar badi hi tezi se badh rahi thi... Aur aise hi ek saal beet jata hai...
Surveen wahi apni padhayi puri kar leti hai, aur wo Rahul ka business join karti hai... Rhea ab Rahul pe itna bharosa karne lagti hai ki chahe apni zindagi ya business ka chote sa chota ya bade se bada faisla ho, Rahul ke bina kuch nahi karti thi.., Rahul ab uski zindagi ka ehem hissa bann chuka tha... Rahul ne bhi apne aapse
kiya hua wadaa puri imaandari se nibhaya.... Jis ek rishte ke liye usne apne baaki rishto ko peeche chod diya tha, uss
rishte ko usne dil se nibhaya... Rahul na sirf Rhea ka sahara, uski himmat bana per usne Khwaish ko ek pita ka pyar bhi diya...
Usne kabhi Kunal ki jagah leni nahi chahi, per uski kami ka ehsaas bhi nahi hone diya....
Beete ek saal mein kaafi kuch badal chuka tha... Mr and Mrs. Kapoor ke liye Rahul hi unka beta tha, aur isiliye Rahul aur
Surveen ab unhi ke saath rehte the... Rahul ne apne liye ek chotasa ghar bhi liya tha... per Mrs. Kapoor ke kehne per wo unhi ke saath rehta tha... Wo sab apni iss chotisi duniya mein khush the.....
Roz ki tarha Rhea aur Rahul office mein busy hote hai..... It was evening time. Rahul kuch files lekar Rhea ke cabin mein aata hai... Rhea seemed a bit tired today......
Rahul: Rhea
Rhea: hmmm....
Rahul: bahot ho gaya kaam, chalo kahi bahar ho aate hai
Rhea: nahi Rahul, bas thoda hi hai, phir ghar chalenge
Rahul: nahi... apne aapko dekho, u look so tired, aur phir tum kaam ka itna tension kyun leti ho?
Rhea: aisi baat nahi hai.....
{tabhi waha unke manager Mr.Mac aate hai}
Mac: mam, these are some urgent papers you need to sign them now....
Rhea: just two minutes, i'll go through them once and sign it
Mac: but Mam, they are urgent, clients are waiting for them....
Rahul: kya baat hai Rhea?
Rhea: wo maine in papers ko thik se study nahi ki hu,aur yeh keh rahe hai ki abhi hi sign karke chahiye.... per tum to abhi free ho na, toh just go through them...
Rahul: ok... Mr.Mac, just 5 minutes
Mac: ok sir.... {he leaves}
{Rahul saare papers dekh leta hai...}
Rahul: its fine...,
Rhea: good..... {she takes those papers and signs them without reading}
Rahul: are yeh kya,ek baar tum bhi dekh leti na
Rhea: tumne dekh liya hai na, phir kya problem hai
Rahul: ha, per phir bhi....
Rhea: oh come on Rahul, tum wo insaan ho jispe main aankhein band karke bharosa karti hu....
{she calls mr.mac and hands him those papers}
Rhea: emmm...., chale? aaj ke liye bahot kaam ho gaya
Rahul: hmmm.... chalo....
{aur wo dono nikalte hai... per Rahul ghar nahi per paas mein ek coffee shop mein le jaata hai}
Rhea: Rahul, yaha kyun?
Rahul: bas aise hi..., waise bhi yaha kaafi achi coffee milti hai
Rhea: {smiles} ok....
{they sit and have some coffee....., Rahul was lost in his thoughts}
Rhea: kya baat hai, kaha khoye hue ho?
Rahul: nahi..., bas aise hi
Rhea: ghar ki yaad aa rahi hai?
Raul: nahi, baat wo nahi hai
Rhea: main samajh sakti hu Rahul....., tumne mere liye, khwaish ke liye jo kiya hai wo thanks se bhi pare hai
Rahul: Rheaaa.... kitni baar kaha hai ki aisi baatein mat karo
Rhea: nahi Rahul, tumhare saath bina kuch mumkin nahi hota....
Rahul: maine jo bhi kiya hai apni dosti ki khatir kiya hai.... Per aaj wo dosti itni gehri ho chuki hai ki waha yeh thanks,
aur sorry jaise shab mayane nahi rakhte... aur phir khwaish se to ek ajib sa rishta ban chuka hai... {smiles} my little angel
Rhea: aaj agar Kunal hota to kitna khush hota, khwaish ko dekhkar.... {she had tears in her eyes} Per usne to Khwaish ka chehra tak nahi dekha... Jis bache ke liye din raat sapne dekhta tha uska chehra tak nahi dekh paya.....
{rahul ke zehen mein phir wahi yaadein taaza hoti hai... Wahi raat, tez barish..., kunal ki gaadi se takrana aur phir wo blast....}
Rhea: kabhi kabhi, iss baat ka bahot gussa aata... Kunal ne to kabhi kisika bura nahi chaha tha, per uske saath aisa kyun hua?
Mujhe yeh bhi nahi pata ki uss raat aakhir hua tha kya, bas bhaiya ne itna bataye ki accident hua.... Kisi ki ek galati ne
hamari zindagi tabah karke rakh di....
{rahul kuch keh nahi pata...., use lag raha tha ki wo usi waqt Rhea ko sab kuch bata de, per wo aisa kar nahi pata.... Shayad wo pyar jo usne barso se apni dil mein chupaye rakha tha, aaj uss pyar ko phirse khona nahi chahta tha....}
Rhea: Khair..., jo hua so hua.... Tum batao.. kya baat hai kuch pareshan ho?
Rahul: nahi.... kuch nahi, jo hua so ho gaya... use hum badal nahi sakte. Rhea tum bahot khushkismat ho ki tumhare paas Khwaish hai, jiske sahare, jiske
liye tum apni puri zindagi jii sakti ho... So now sab bhool jao, and just be happy
Rhea: {smiles} yes, acha parso bhaiya, dadi aur papa yaha aa rahe hai
Rahul: parso?
Rhea: ha..., Khwaish ka janamdin bhi hai aur Kunal ki.....
Rahul: {rhea ke haath per haath rakhta hai} kunal aaj bhi hum sab ke saath hai...
Rhea: hmmm..., ghar chale?
Rahul: hmm...
{rhea aur rahul ghar chale jaate hai..., jaha khwaish aur surveen unka intezar kar rahe hote hai. Khwaish was too much attaced to Rahul by now, jab bhi Rahul aata wo pehle uske paas jaati, and Rahul too use to pamper her a lot}
Surveen: acha hua aap dono aa gaye.. Khwaish kabse mama, chachu... mama, chachu kar rahi thi
Rahul: oh to aapko hamari yaad aa rahi khwaish.... acha chalo hum uper kamrein mein jaakar khelenge
Mrs.Kapoor: are beta tum abhi abhi office se aaye ho, pehle kuch khaa lo
Rahul: nahi aunty, abhi bhook nahi hai.... chalo khwaish
{and he takes her along to his room}
Rhea: rehne dijiye mama...
Surveen: Rhea, Aarti bhabhi ka phone tha, wo tumhare aur khwaish ke baare mein puch rahe the
Rhea: kaisi hai wo
Surveen: wo thik hai, kaha ki kam se kam unhe phone karne ke liye tumhare paas 5 minutes to honge na
Rhea: {smiles} use main abhi phone karti hu
Surveen: {smiles} ha,isse pehle ki tumse aur naraaz ho jaye tum unse baat kar lena
Rhea: ok, waise tumhara kaam kaisa chal raha hai
Surveen: good..., waise thoda hectic lagta hai per its ok...., i will manage it {her cell rings and so she excuses herself}
{time passes on,and today it was that day... Aaj wo din tha jaha khushi aur ghum dono the. Khwaish ka pehle janamdin aur
Kunal ki pehli barsi.... Hiten, Nandini aur Yash bhi india se aate hai... Khwaish aur Rhea se milne ki bahot khushi hoti hai
per iss khushi mien ek ghum bhi shaamil hota hai... Kunal ki kami ka...
Puri rasmo rivaaz se wo kunal ki barsi karte hai... Rahul uss din Khwaish ke haatho paas ke ek orphanage mien donation karvate hai...
aur aise hi yeh ek din bhi guzar jaata hai....
Shaam ka waqt tha aur Rahul kaafi time baad apne ghar aata hai... Wo yaha tab aata tha jab hi wo akele rehna chahta tha....
Apni beeti zindagi ke kuch palo ko yaad karta hai.... Tabhi use kisi ka phone aata hai}
Rahul: hellooo
Person: hi Rahul, kaise ho
Rahul: Tamannaa.....
Tamanna: chalo, kam se kam mera naam to yaad hai
Rahul: tumhe main kabhi bhool sakta hu bhala? kaisi ho?
Tamanna: thik hu, tum aur Sur kaise ho?
Rahul: hum thik hai..., waise iss waqt ho kaha?
Tamanna: wahi jaha tum ho
Rahul: what? Tum yaha Australia mein ho?
Tamanna: ha..., meri ek bahot hi close friend ki shaadi thi, isiliye aayi hu
Rahul: emm... to
Tamanna: kya hua?
Rahul: kya hum mil sakte hai?
Tamanna: yeh hichkachahat pehle to kabhi nahi thi,phir aaj kyun Rahul?
Rahul: pata nahi ab mera haq banta hai bhi ya nahi.., per phir bhi, ek baar milna chahta tha
Tamanna: {laughs} maine Dev se tumhara address le liya tha, kal aa rahi hu tumse aur Sur se milne....
Rahul: thanks
Tamanna: itna bhi paraya naa karo
Rahul: ok baba, tum milo to....
Tamanna: acha ab main phone rakhti hu... aunty bula rahe hai
Rahul: ok..., byee
Tamanna: byee...
{yaha rahul apni zindagi ke beete lamho ko yaad kar raha tha wo waha rhea ka bhi haal aisa hi tha...
wo bhi khoyi thi,aur use u gumsum dekhkar hiten uske paas aata hai}
Hiten: Rheaa...
Rhea: ji bhaiya
Hiten: itne waqt ke baad mil rahi hia..., tumse thik se baat bhi nahi kar paya
Rhea: kahiye na....
Hiten: tumhe u khush dekhkar bahot acha laga... ek sukoon mehsoos hua, tumhe aur khwaish ko dekhkar.. waise
aaj tumse ek baat kehni thi
Rhea: kya?
Hiten: meri baat ka bura mat manna Rhea, main bas tumhari aur khwaish ki khushi ke khatir keh raha hu
Rhea: baat kya hai bhaiya?
Hiten: main chahta hu ki tum phirse apni zindagi ek naye sire se shuru karo, i mean tum aur Rahul...
Rhea: bhaiya please... aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakte hai? Kunal ko gaye bas eksaal hi hua hai aur aap meri
dusri shadi ki baat kar rahe
Hiten: kisi ke jaane se zindagi to nahi rukti na... Rahul har mod per tumhara saath tha, usne na sirf tumhe
sambhala per khwaish ko ek pita ka pyar bhi diya, phir iss rishte mien burayi kya hai?
Rhea: nahi bhaiya, Rahul ki bahot izzat karti hu main, wo ek bahot acha insaan per usse shaadi.... nahi bhaiya...
Hiten: main tumhe kisi baat ke liye force nahi karunga... Main to bas yehi chahta tha ki khwaish ko pita ka pyar mile,
Rhea: nahi bhaiya, uske pita sirf Kunal the aur wo hi rahenge.... hum jaise hai khush hai
Hiten: jaanta hu, per zindagi ke kisi mod per kahi na kahi tumhe bhi ek saathi ki zaroorat padegi, aur Rahul se
acha aur sachcha saathi tumhe kabhi nahi milega.... bina kuch kahe hi usne tumhare liye kitna kuch kiya hai,
aaj wo tumhari zindagi ka hissa bann chuka hai, kya yeh sach nahi hai ki rahul ne kunal
ke har farz ko nibhaya hai.... tumhari aur khwaish dono ke liye usne kya kuch nahi kiya.... agar iss rishte
mein kisi cheez ki kami hai to wo bas ek naam ki.... tum ek baar iss baat pe phir sochna....
{saying this hiten leaves}
Rhea wahi rakhi kunal ki tasveer dekhti hai aur rone lagti hai... Aaj use Kunalki kami ka ehsaas hota hai...aur purani
saari yaadein phir taaza hoti hai

~~~song in background~~~

{saare sapne kahi kho gaye...... haaye hum kya se kya ho gaye...}*2

{dilse tanhayi ka dard jeeta, kya kahe hum pe kya kya naa beeta}*2
tum naa aaye magar jo gaye.... haaye hum kya se kya ho gaye...
saare sapne kahi kho gaye...... haaye hum kya se kya ho gaye...
{tumne humse kahi thi jo baatein, unko dauhraati hai ghum ki raatein...}*2
tumse milne ke din to gaye, hayee hum kya se kya ho gaye...

saare sapne kahi kho gaye...... haaye hum kya se kya ho gaye...

~~~song in background~~~

..........end of part26........

comments awaited...!!!

lotsa luv,
farheen

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Posted: 17 years ago
this part was wonderful loved it
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was simply awesum part as usual..wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 👏 great part...w8ing for nxt part plz post it soon hope rhea hiten ki baat maan le... n rahul n rhea.. w8ing for nxt part.... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
grt update dii..!! 👏
i hope rhea listens to wht hiten wants her to do.. that wud be so good to see rhea n rahul back.
by the way loved the song u've used in the end.. its really good.
update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
thank u so much guys..!! will update asap 😳

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