Phir Milenge (RajivAmna ff) last prt uptd - Page 34

Originally posted by: anam_mehrun

awesum part faru 👏 , i caught up with the story after a long time, its still so interesting i missed so much interesting part earlier but anyway, do post the next part soon, i wanna know k aage kya hoga will rhea will say yes???😕 aur rahul kaise sach batayega????? so many ques so do post next part soonnnnn me egerly waitin for it 😃

heyii mehrun thank u so much for ur comments.. Well.... rhea ka jawaab janne ke liye bas thoda aur intezar... 😳

Originally posted by: sun_423

faru yaar that was awesome..absolutely brilliant yaar... mazaa aagaya yeh part padkar..very very very well written.. i liked the baat cheet between hiten & rahuil..hiten apne bade bhai hone ka farz khoob ada karr raha hai.. phir rahul ka kehna jii..nahii..mera matlab hai kii... his fumbling kii woh hiten sw kaise kahe kii woh uski[hiten ki] chotti behen se pyaar kartha hai... lekin rahul ka aisa fumble karna , aur chori pakdi gayi hiten ke saamne..usse ehsaas hogaya kii rahul pyaar kartha hai rhea se.... then rahul aur surveen ke beech kii baat.. where rahul tells her kii woh rhea ko saari sachchayi bata dega..phir decision rhea ka hoga.. uska pyaar kitna pyaara hai... very achcha yaar..the way your story is progressing is damn good.. mujhe behad pasand aa raha hai..i like the dosti between rahul & rhea very much..the way rahul shows his care, concern & love for rhea is just too sweet..very damn cute.. phir coming to the last bit of the part..jahaan rhea ka getting sad thinking about rahul & tamanna..then rahul ka telling kii tamanna bas uski dost hai...then rhea ke woh dialogs.. listening to her talks koi bhii keh saktha hai kii she has fallen in love with rahul..last mein rahul ka poochna shaddi karogi mujhse..wow yaar this was highlight.. this is amazing..is baat pe talliyaan ho jaye... keep up the good work going... 👏 well shayad in the coming parts rhea rahul se shaddi karne ko maan jaayegi...and they will eventually get married.. shayad unki shaddi ke baad rhea ko patah chalega kii kunal ka usse durr jaane zimedaar rahul hai.. shayad unke rishthe mein aur unki dosti mein darrar pad jaayenge.. i think yeh sab hoga in the forth-coming parts.. so faru dear kya main hoon..batana mujhe zaroor... 😉 faru do post the next part soon.. me waiting for it eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

suriiii dear...thank u sooooo much for those wonderful comments.. Waise close guesses ha..😉 Il be posting the next soon...😳

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

hey faru.....great part dear as alawys... rocking.. after long time i read this fantastic part..👏.👏. i hope rhea ka ans yess ho .. n rahul ka sach mein rhea ko bta dega ....kahiin sach btane ke baad phir rahulll......😭😭...par don't worry agar rhea ne mna kar diay meri entry karwa dena hehehehe

thanks for the comments neha..., n yeah thanks fr tht offer too..😉 😆 😆, im sure rahul akele nahi rahega.....

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

suriiii dear...thank u sooooo much for those wonderful comments.. Waise close guesses ha..😉 Il be posting the next soon...😳

oyee faru thanku kyun boli..dosti ka rule bhool gayi kya..dosti mein kehthe hai no thanku..nosorry...chal take your thanku back..🤗ahaann close guess tha.. yeh tho achchi baat hai...😉😉😉

Originally posted by: golu_1677

wonderful part. its great u contd

thanks n im sorry fr the delays in updating..

Part-29

Recap-
Hiten Rahul se puchta hai ki kya wo Rhea se shaadi karega, jiska jawab Rahul nahi de paata.. Surveen Rahul ko samjhati hai ki use Rhea se shaadi ke liye ha kehna chahiye.. Rhea Rahul se uske aur Tamanna ke rishte ke baare mei puchti hai, jiske baad Rahul Rhea ko shaadi ka proposal deta hai......

Ab aage......

Rhea: i know this is very personal per kya tum aur tamannaa.... i mean i can be wrong per...
Rahul: {looks at her and smiles} ha rhea, you are right...
Rhea: what?
Rahul: main tumhe batane hi wala tha... hum dono kaafi time se.... per ab...
{rhea thodi upset si hoti hai per phir bhi muskurati hai, rahul uski taraf dekhta aur ekdum se has padta hai}
Rahul: rheaaaa.... kya ho gaya tumhe? Are baba aisa kuch nahi hai...Tamanna bas meri ek dost hai
Rhea: {smiles} rahullll... tum bhi na, mujhe laga jaise maine tumhe bhi kho diya
Rahul: kyun?
Rhea: bas u hi, kya karu ab tumhari adat si ho gayi hai na... bhool hi gayi thi ki tumhari apni bhi ek zindagi hai.... Kisi ek din tum bhi mujhe aur khwaish ko chod chale jaoge.... jaise kunal..... Anyways chale?
{wo palatti hai per rahul uska haath pakadta hai}
Rahul: Shadi karogi mujhse Rheaaa????
Rhea: rahul for god's sake aisa mazaak dubara mat karna.....
{rahul uska haath chodta hai}
Rhea: jaanti hu tum bhi wahi chahte ho jo baaki gharwale chahte hai per Rahul zindagi mie har kisi ko sab kuch mile ye mumkeen to nahi na.. Waise bhi tumhe to mujhse bhi achi ladki milegi jo tumse bahot pyar karti ho aur wo pyar tum deserve bhi karte ho... Shayad mujhe apne hisse ka ghum aur khushi mil chuke hai, jo bas mera apna hai... Meri zindagi u samjho ab bas kuch hi palo ki hai...
Rahul: aur agar main tumhara saath dena chahu to? tumhara humsafar banna chahu to?
Rhea: Rahulll....
Rahul: ha Rhea, kisi aur se ye baat tumhe pata chale iss beheter yehi hoga ki main tumhe batla du.. Chahne laga hu tumhe, per mera yakeen karo mujhe tumse koi humdardi nahi hai bas pyar hai... Nahi jaanta ki tum mere baare mei kya sochti ho, aur main ye baat tumse kabhi nahi kehta, per aaj jab mere saamne ye sawaal rakha gaya to main chahta hu ki sabse pehla faisla tumhara ho... Jaanta hu naa to main kabhi Kunal ki kami ko pura kar paunga aur naa hi uski jagah lena chahta hu, aur naa to tumhe sahara dena chahta hu........ main to bas tumhara saath dena chahta hu.... Jo hua use hum badal to nahi sakte, per apni aane wali zindagi zaroor savaar sakte hai.... Aakhri faisla main tumper chodta hu.. tumhara faisla chahe jo ho, bas ye yaad rakhna ki Rahul kal bhi tumhara saath tha, aur aaj bhi tumhare saath hai....
{rhea kuch keh nahi paati bas rahul ko dekhti rehti hai aur phir waha se chali jaati hai... Rahul ko iss baat ka darr tha ki kahi wo Rhea ko kho na de, per phir agle hi pal usi wo sachchayi nazar aa rahi thi jisse ab tak sab anjaan the... Waha Rhea samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki wo kya kare...usi waqt rhea achanak behosh ho jaati hai, per kisi ko iss baat ka ilm nahi tha.....
Kuch 2 ghante baad Nandini Rhea ke kamrei mei aati hai to dekhti hai ki Khwaish ro rahi hai aur Rhea wahi neeche behosh padi hai... Nandini ghabra jaati hai}
Nandini: rheaaaaa... rheaaaa utho betaa....
{nandini ki awaaz sun rahul aur yash waha aate hai)
Rahul: kya hua dadi?
Nandini: Rahul Rhea ko hospital le chalo ye behosh hai.....
{rahul fouran rhea ko hospital le jaata hai... Yash, Hiten ko inform karta hai aur wo log bhi wahi aa jaate hai....
Kuch der baad doctor rhea ko examine kar room se bahar aate hai}
Rahul: is everything fine doctor?
Doctor: Mr.Raichand arent u aware of her illness? She was strictly adviced for complete bed rest as its her last stage
Rahul: whaat???? ye aap kya keh rahe hai?
Doctor: ohh.., lagta hai aap ab tak iss bare mei nahi jaante... Rhea is sufferring from blood cancer since a long time...
Rahul: whatttt?????? {rahul was dead shock to know this and so were the rest of the family members}
Doctor: yes, she had requested me not to tell u anything about it... khair.. Rhea kaafi time se iss bemari se ladh rahi hai..., per uski kismat to dekho..jab tak use iska pata chalta tab tak bahot der ho chuki thi...
{ye sunkar sab itne hairaan rehte hai ki koi kuch kehne sunke ki halat mie nahi hota}
Doctor: i know its a very difficult time for u, but u have to face it... Rhea ke paas ab bahot hi kam waqt bacha hai...
Rahul: cannn... cann i meet her?
Doctor: yes, but only for some time... Take care..
{rahul bahot himmat karke room mei jaata hai, aur rhea ki taraf dekh uske aasu thamte nahi... har ek badhte kadam per use rhea ke saath bitaya hua ek ek pal yaad aa raha tha... Wo rhea ke kareeb jakar baitha hai aur bas use hi dekhta hai... kuch der baad rhea aankhei kholti hai aur rahul ko saamne dekh muskurati hai... Rahul ab apne aapko rok nahi paata aur uska haath apne haato mei lekar rone lagta hai...}
Rhea: ayee Rahul, kyun?
Rahul: tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi rhea, hum kuch kar paate the..... Why Rhea? kyun....
Rhea: kya batati.... jab tak pata chala tab tak bahot der ho chuki thi....
Rahul: tumhe kuch nahi hoga rhea, main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga... i'll get the best of doctors for u...
Rhea: Rahull.... ab kuch nahi ho sakta... aur tum u rote hue bilkul ache nahi lagte.... ab asu pocho aur sabko bulao... ek aakhri baar sabse milne nahi...
{rahul bina rhea ki baat sune waha se chala jaata hai... jaise hi kamrie ke bahar jaata hai sab uski taraf dekhte hai... }
Rahul: rhea... aap sab se milna chahti hai....
{aur wo waha se chala jaata hai... sur uske peeche jaati hai}
Surveen: sambhaliye apne aapko bhaiya...
Rahul: kya karu sur main... chahakar bhi Rhea ke liye kuch nahi kar sakta main...., bas use apni aankho ke saamne jaata dekh sakta hu... Why am i so damn helpless... kyun????
{tabhi tamanna waha khwaish ko lekar aati hai}
Tamanna: kam se kam apni beti ke liye hi apne aapko sambhalo rahul.......
{rahul chup hota hai aur khwaish ko gale se lagata hai}
Tamanna: rhea tumse milna chahti hai....
{rahul khwaish ko sur ko dete hai aur rhea ke room mei jata hai}
Rhea: dadi, papa.. main rahul se kuch baat karna chahti hu....
{yash kisses rhea on her forehead and then they leave}
Rhea: kal raat main tumhare saawaal ka jawaab nahi de payi... wo zindagi jo khatm ho rahi thi, tumhe uska hissa kaise banati? Mujhse pyar karte ho to uss pyar ki khatir ek wada karoge?
{Rahul just looks at rhea}
Rhea: Tamanna se shaadi karlo Rahul... aur meri jaan, meri bachchi khwaish ko main tumhare hawale kar rahi hu.... Aur isi naate maine tumhari wo galati jo tumse anjaane mei hui uske liye maaf kiyaa...
Rahul: Rhea tumm....
Rhea: ha rahul, maine tumhari aur sur ki baatei sun li thi aur usi waqt mujhe sab kuch sach pata chala... jo hua anjaane mei hua, per main jaanti hu uske liye tumne bahot kuch sahaa hai.. Mere liye tum apni family se dur hue, apna sab kuch chod diya sirf meri zindagi banane... Jo hua use bhool jao aur tamanna ke saath ek nayi zindagi ki shuruwat karo.... aur kunal ki baat yehi khatm karo, wada karo ki uss baat ka kisise bhi zikr nahi karoge...
{rahul rhea ko hug karta hai aur dono rote hai}
Rhea: acha ab tum jao aur mujhe aaram karne do... {aur wo rahul ke aasu pochti hai} aur meri khwaish ka khyaal rakhna... use main bas tumhara sahare iss duniya mie chod rahi hu.....
Rahul: rheaaa...
Rhea: sshhh.... jao ab...go...
{rahul waha se chala jata hai aur rhea phir roti hai... Rahul khwaish ko gale se lagata hai bahot rota hai}

2 din baad rhea ki death hoti hai aur usi ke saath rhea aur rahul ki wo adhuri kahani wahi tham jaati hai...

3 mahine baad Rahul Tamanna se shaadi kar rhea ko diya hua apna wada pura karta hai, aur wo dono Khwaish ko legally adopt karte hai... Tamanna se shaadi karne ke baad Lalit bhi Rahul ko maaf kar deta hai aur Rahul Tamanna aur Khwaish Raichands ke saath rehne lagte hai....
Tamanna ko apnane mei Rahul ko waqt lagta hai, per waqt ke saath unki duriya bhi khatm hoti hai... And then they lived happily ever after.........................

.............. THE END.................

comments awaited!!!

lotsa luv,

farheen