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Posted: 18 years ago

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hey cont soon..luved it....... 👏

Awesome update

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Akanksha 😛




thank u so much dear. Will update soon

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Part-14

Recap-

Kunal Australia se laut aata hai. Rhea, Rahul aur Kunal hotel ke liye zameen finalise karte hai. Rhea, aur phir teeno kaafi acha waqt saath saath beetate hai. Kunal aur Rahul ki bhi kaafi achi dosti hoti hai.

Ab aage…….

Rahul office ka kaam khatm karke ghar lautta hai, per aaj wo kaafi khush hota hai. Roz ki tarah use na to kaam ki thakaan thi aur naa hi kisi baat ki chinta. Use u muskurata dekh Naina bhi khush hoti hai.

Naina: kya baat hai beta, aaj kaafi khush lag rahe ho?

Rahul: ha mama {smiles} aaj ka din wakaye mein bahot acha tha. {and he tells her everything}

Naina: chalo acha hai, isi bahane tumhe bahar jaane ka mauka to mila, warna to har waqt bas kaam kaam hi karte rehte ho.

Surveen: to kya baatein ho rahi hai?

Rahul: are Sur, kaha thi tum? Main kabse tumhara cell try kar raha tha per no response?

Surveen: {checks her cell} oh god! Battery khatm ho gayi thi. Anyways aapko kuch kaam tha kya?

Rahul: ha, soch raha tha ki aaj apni behen ko thodi shopping karvao

Surveen: what???? Aapki tabiyat to thik hai na bro? Mama zara dekhiye to inhe bukhaar to nahi hai na?

Naina: {laughs} tum dono bhi na. tum log batein karo main abhi aati hu.

{naina leaves}

Surveen: so bhaiya kahiye aaj achanak apni behen pe itna pyar kaise ha?

Rahul: oh ho, tum sawaalat bahot karti ho Sur. Bas get ready and we are leaving ok sweetheart?

{Rahul winks at her and leaves, while Sur just watch him go, whose still surprised at Rahul's behaviour}

Surveen: {to herself} yeh aaj bro ko kya ho gaya hai?

{she too goes to her room}

Kuch der baad Rahul ready hota hai aur Sur ko awaaz lagata hai. Bechari Sur, daudi daudi aati hai.

Surveen: kya bro, aap to thik se tayaar bhi hone nahi dete, {she suddenly stops speaking and just stares at Rahul}

Rahul: kya hua?

Surveen: are wah bro, u looking just too good today!

Rahul: kya matlab? roz acha nahi dikhta hu?

Surveen: nahi bhaiya, wo kya hai na ki hamesha aapko formals mein hi dekha hai aur aaj u casuals mein dekhkar kuch alag laga. Waise aapne bataya nahi ki baat kya hai? Aaj achanak u casuals, phir yeh shopping plan?

Rahul: wo sab chodo aur chalo, Rhea aur Kunal intezar kar rahe honge

Surveen: ooohhhh! Ab samjhi {smiles}

Rahul: {smiles} acha to ab chalo bhi…

{both leaves n reach the Saran house, where Kunal and Rhea were waiting for them. After a while they all go out. Rhea aur Surveen khub saari shopping karte hai, aur kunal bhi thodi bahot kar leta hai. Wo Rahul ke liye ek wrist watch leta hai jo wo use gift karta hai, per co-incidently Rahul bhi Kunal ke liye watch hi leta hai. Dono apni iss harkat pe haste hai per unhe gifts pasand bhi aate hai. Kuch der shopping ke baad, aur kuch ghumne ke baad wo dinner ke liye jaate hai.}

Rhea: {laughs} lagta hai ki tum dono mujhe bhool hi gaye ho. Dekho na Sur, dono ek dusre ke liye gifts lene lage hai, bas ek dusre se hi baatein karte hai, main to jaise inke liye hu hi nahi.}

Rahul: aisa nahi hai Rhea, dost to sab hi barabar hote hai. Aur tum to hamare liye bahot khaas ho. Yeh lo tumhare liye.

{Rahul use ek box deta hai}

Kunal: yeh meri taraf se

Rhea: {surprised} yeh kya hai?

Kunal: ab dekho to

{Rhea boxes kholti hai, aur yaha bhi dono mein teddies hote hai, per iss baar dono alag hote hai}

Rhea: wow! These are so sweet. Thank u so much. Per dekha tum dono ki to pasand bhi ek jaisi hai.

Rahul: shayad. {smiles} waise dosto ko thanks nahi kaha jata.

Kunal: bilkul sahi.

Surveen: helloo.. bro, mere liye kuch nahi?

Rahul: tumhara wala ghar pohoch chuka hai.

Surveen: sach. Thanks a lot! U know Rhea, I've got the best bro.

Rahul: {naughtily} thanks for the compliment.

Surveen: ha, aur naughty bro too!

{all of them laugh}

Kunal: acha Rahul, kal main jaa raha hu. But believe me,I had a great time.

Rahul: same here!

Rhea: oh god! Ab tumlog please yeh formal baatein karna band karo ok?

Rahul: ok mam. Acha ab aapki ijazat ho to chale?

Rhea: ha chalo

{after spending a great time they return bak home}

Raichand Mansion……

Surveen: bhaiya, ab itne din ho gaye hai, ab to usse keh do

Rahul: kisse kya kahu?

Surveen: oh come on bro, u very well know what im talking about. So tell me kab baat kar rahe ho?

Rahul: are baba pehle pata to chale ki kisse kya baat karni hai.

Surveen: thik hai, to main aapse saaf saaf lafzo mein puchti hu, aap Rhea se apne pyar ka izhaar kab kar rahe ho?

Rahul: what? Pyar??? Kya pyar ? main kisi pyar ko nahi jaanta. {smiles naughtily}

Surveen: oh ho, thik hai phir aap mat batao main hi use keh deti hu ki mere bhaiya tumhare liye pagal ho chuke hai.

{and she was about to go so Rahul stops her holding her hand}

Rahul: are main to bas mazaak kar raha tha

Surveen: pata hai. Main bhi to mazaak hi kar rahi thi.

{both laugh}

Surveen: so kahiye, kab baat kar rahe hai. Waise bhi aap kaafi waqt waste kar chuke ho.

Rahul: darhesal iss bare mein kabhi socha nahi, aur main usse kahu kya?

Surveen: oh god! Business mein aap jitne ache hai iss mamle mein utne hi bure hai. Ab yeh bhi main hi batau ki aap usse kya kahoge?

Rahul: well, jab sahi waqt aayega to main khud usse keh dunga

Surveen: aur wo sahi waqt kab aayega?

Rahul: bahot jald, acha ab tum so jao

Surveen: baat ko badlo mat.

Rahul: ok baba, bahot jald usse kahunga. Ab to khush

Surveen: {smiles} bahot.

Rahul: ab main chalu? I'm too tired

Surveen: ok, goodnite

Rahul: good nite

Next morning….

Rahul is all ready to leave for office, just than Lalit stops him

Lalit: Rahul

Rahul: ji papa

Lalit: beta aaj aapko Bangalore jana hoga.

Rahul: Bangalore?

Lalit: ha, darhesal waha ka kaam to Dev hi dekh raha tha, aur waha kuch problems ho rahi hai, so hum chahte hai ki aap waha jakar dekhiye ki aakhir baat hai kya

Rahul: per Papa aaj to mere kaafi meetings hai

Lalit: wo postpone kiye jaa sakte hai, aur hum nahi chahte ki Dev ko wapas bulana pade.

Rahul: ji Papa

Lalit: well, so here's your tickets. Flight 2 ghante baad hai.

Rahul: ji.

Lalit: good luck

{saying this Lalit leaves & Rahul too leaves for the airport}

Rahul: {to himself} aaj to Kunal wapas jaa raha hai.

{he calls him up}

Rahul: hey Kunal

Kunal: hi Rahul. Aaj savere kaise yaad kiya?

Rahul: darhesal kisi kaam ke silsile mien mujhe abhi Bangalore jana pad raha hai, to aaj to tumse mulaqat ho nahi payegi to socha ki phone hi karlu

Kunal: oh, kya kuch der ke liye bhi nahi mil sakte? Tumse kuch zaroori baat karni thi

Rahul: nahi, infact main abhi airport ke liye nikal chuka hu. Per baat kya hai?

Kunal: well, ab baat to… {he sees Rhea coming} nahi thik, yeh baatein phone pe nahi ki jaa sakti

Rahul: to thik hai phir, main jald se jald lautne ki koshish karunga

Kunal: ha, kyunki yeh baat shayad main sirf tumhi se pehle kar sakta hu

Rahul: ab aisi bhi kya baat hai?

Kunal: hai kuch khaas.., anyways you take care.

Rahul: ok fine, u take care too. Bye

Kunal: bye. {hangs down}

Rahul: {to himself} yeh achanak Kunal ko kya ho gaya..

{Yaha Rhea bhi Kunal ki baato se kuch confused hoti hai..}

Rhea: kya baat hai Kunal, aisi kya khass baat hai?

Kunal: hai kuch

Rhea: mujhe bhi nahi bataoge?

Kunal: zaroor batunga, per abhi nahi..shaam mein

{saying this he just walks off}

Rhea: per suno to…. Hmmm, yeh Kunal bhi na!

{its evening time now, and Kunal was about to leave for airport. Rhea was in her room,just then Kunal knocks}

Rhea: Kunalll, tumhe knock karne ki zaroorat kabse padne lagi?

Kunal: {smiles} Rhea, jaane se pehle aaj tumse kuch baat karni hai

Rhea: ha kaho

Kunal: {he just looks at her for a minute and smiles} wo main

Rhea: {smiles} kya baat hai?

Kunal: Rhea, main jaanta hu ki aaj main jo tumse kehne jaa raha hu wo shayad sunkar tumhe bada hi ajib lage, ya …ya.. I mean I don't know how u will react to this per…

Rhea: Kunal, ab bataoge ki baat kya hai?

Kunal: Rhea, main .. main, ….main tumse pyar karta hu. {saying this he just turns in the opposite direction} aur yeh pyar aaj se hi nahi balki bahot pehle se karta hu, per exactly kabse yeh nahi jaanta{smiles}. Tum soch rahi hogi ki main koi mazaak kar raha hu, per nahi Rhea yeh koi mazaak nahi mere dil ki sachchayi hai. Isse pehle bhi kayi baar tumse apne dil ki baat kehne ki koshish ki, per kabhi keh nahi paya. Iss baar keh hi di, {laughs} Dekho na aakhir dosti main pyaar ho hi gaya. {he turns towards Rhea, n just laughs to see her. She was just standing still, & just cudnt believe as to what she just heard}

Kunal: {shakes her} Rhea…

Rhea: Kunal tum…

Kunal: kya hua? Agar tumhe meri baatein buri lagi ho to I'm sorry.

Rhea: nahi, I mean, maine kabhi iss bare mein socha hi nahi tha, maine to hamesha se tumhe ek dost ki nazar se dekha hai.

Kunal: koi baat nahi, tum aaram se sochkar apna faisla mujhe bata dena, mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai. Bas itna yaad rakhna ki tumhara faisla chahe jo ho, hum kal bhi dost the aur aaj bhi dost hai. Main to bas apni baki saari zindagi tumhare saath beetana chahata hu. Main yeh dava to nahi karta ki main tumhe iss duniye mein sabse jyada pyar karta hu, per yeh wada zaroor karta hu ki tumhe puri tarha se khush rakhne ki puri koshish karunga aur apne hisse ki puri wafadari nibhauga. Tum chahe jo faisla lo, bas yehi yaad rakhna ki zindagi ke kisi bhi mod per jab bhi tumhe meri zaroorat padegi main hamesha tumhare saath rahunga, phir chahe tumhara humsafar bankar ya phir ek dost bankar.

{Rhea kuch nahi kehti, bas khamosh rehti}

Kunal: kya hua? Kuch to bolo

Rhea: main kya kahu, kuch samajh nahi paa rahi…

Kunal: main samajh sakta hu. Ab main chalta hu, tumhare jawaab ka intezar rahega.. {smiles} byee

{saying this Kunal leaves, leaving a still shocked Rhea behind}

………end of part 14………

Well, therez lot more to come, So stay tuned to know wat will happen next!!!

Luv,

Farheen 😊

Edited by starbellz_21 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey graet part...awesome.... 👏 hope rahul rhea se pyaar na karta ho...warna uska phir dil toot jayega 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part..........it was amazing!!!!!!.............plzz dont make rhea say yes to kunal.........plzzz.........dil to pagal hai ki tarah kar do ya phir........hehe......ki kunal goes n yahan rhea falls 4 rahul 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
just perfect part.......keep it up.....make it quick...

bhumi
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

hey graet part...awesome.... 👏 hope rahul rhea se pyaar na karta ho...warna uska phir dil toot jayega 😭
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thx for ur comments. Well, ab Rahul ke bare mein jald hi pata chalega. Just stay tuned for dat 😊 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

wonderful part..........it was amazing!!!!!!.............plzz dont make rhea say yes to kunal.........plzzz.........dil to pagal hai ki tarah kar do ya phir........hehe......ki kunal goes n yahan rhea falls 4 rahul 😆

thnks for ur comments vandu. well apka suggestion to bahot acha hai, per agar aisa hua to, phir milenge ka naam change karke re-make of dtph karna hoga 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_princess

just perfect part.......keep it up.....make it quick...

bhumi

thanks a lot! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago


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