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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesomost chapter:)
Such a new twist!And a thrilling delight to read😆
Here you have,
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Awesomost chapter:)

Such a new twist!And a thrilling delight to read😆
Here you have,
❤️^1000
*hugs*


Awesomest 😆 I love this new word 😆😃😳
Mili !! 🤗❤️ ^ 1001 😆

Yes, everyone wanted an Urmila Haran too so I thought, why not a twist to the modern Ramayana 😆 And if anyone was to be kidnapped today (dont want anyone to be) they wouldn't be done so alone .. :P 😆

Thank you for supporting me always and being here !!! Thanks a lot!!


P.s. When are you writing stuff? 😆 Desperately waiting :)


Thanks again!


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SenAnu

Awesomest 😆 I love this new word 😆😃😳

Mili !! 🤗❤️ ^ 1001 😆

Yes, everyone wanted an Urmila Haran too so I thought, why not a twist to the modern Ramayana 😆 And if anyone was to be kidnapped today (dont want anyone to be) they wouldn't be done so alone .. :P 😆

Thank you for supporting me always and being here !!! Thanks a lot!!


P.s. When are you writing stuff? 😆 Desperately waiting :)


Thanks again!



Even Idk when.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Anu...nice updates...read last 3 parts...
Your story telling is very nice...able to connect easily...

I did not expect urmila haran as well...liked it...

Sita haran the most awaited part...waiting how you will potray..

What abt bharat?where is he after he left home?

Waiting for your update...lakshman and ram's search for them...interesting...update soon


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rati_pandya

Hey Anu...nice updates...read last 3 parts...

Your story telling is very nice...able to connect easily...

I did not expect urmila haran as well...liked it...

Sita haran the most awaited part...waiting how you will potray..

What abt bharat?where is he after he left home?

Waiting for your update...lakshman and ram's search for them...interesting...update soon


Thank you so much Rati!!!!! 😆😃🤗
It really is a lot for me that you regularly check out my FF and take the time out to comment on it.. This was the perfect way to begin my day 😊

Yes actually I thought of Urmila Haran because it would a bit unnatural if one sister was kidnapped and the other left simply 😆
Hence the idea.. I'm glad you liked it :)

I am writing the Sita Haran and I do hope you will like it :)
And Bharats part will be there after the Haran :)

Thank you so much again!! I am really blessed :)

I do hope. You will. Like the next parts :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

PART 86



Siya, sitting on the ground, got up and wiped her tears.


"Help Me!" cried someone from the outside again.


Siya went and sat on the sofa. Raghavan started banging on the grill.


"Is no one here ?! Help me!"


Siya stood up in a shot. Was it Ram or Lakshman? She moved from one place to another to ease herself, trying to ignore the repeated pleas, however, she being soft and gentle at heart and someone to ran to help another person at one call, she couldn't calm herself.


"I need help!" cried the person on the outside again. Siya understood it was neither Ram nor Lakshman. In fact, it was not anyone whose voice she had heard recently.


"Should I open the door to check?" she thought to herself. But reminiscing what Lakshman said, she stopped.


Raghavan tried to look through the eye hole in the door past the grills. He couldnt see anything, but for all he knew definitely was that Siya WAS inside.

But why wasn't she answering.


Raghavan moved back and with force kicked the grills, so as to intimidate her. Siya's heart throbbed harder.


"Maybe the man really is in danger and he is desperate for help." Siya mumbled. She wiped the streaks of tears on her face and proceeded to the door.

She gave into a strangers plea.


Siya peeped through the eyehole. All she could see was the faint picture of a man wearing a cap, and a white beard. It was an old man.


She felt guilty.

"Oh dear, I made an old man wait for so long! Im getting scared unnecessarily, Ram and Lakshman will be back soon with Urmila. Maybe the men outside confused the falling man as Lakshman and Urmila... I dont think anything could have happened to her. I.."


Raghavan knocked on the grill again. Siya broke from her self talk and opened the door.


Raghavan, who carried on his face till then an angry and disturbed expression, suddenly changed into a helpless and fragile man. It was evident to the observer of the whole scene that Raghavan was a really good actor.


Siya, however, felt something strange. The winds outside blew harder, and the kind of person she envisioned was not standing outside. The man opposite to her was atleast an arm taller than her. He towered her and his demeanour forbid her from seeing to any other side except at him.


Siya just stared at him through the grill. For some reason, there was this silent force that stopped her from extending her help to him. She just didnt feel everything was in place. Something was, out of the elements.


"Child," spoke Raghavan in his false tone, "Do you have some warm water?"


Siya continued to look at him in a blank stare.


"Child?" he repeated.


Siya was brought out from her trance.


"Sorry.. I.. what did you say Sir?"


"Child, I asked for some warm water. Please, I am thirsty."


Siya glanced at him from top to bottom and went back to her kitchen to get a bottle. Coming back, she stood on her side of the grill and said,


"Sir, please have this water," and extended the bottle through the grill.


Raghavan analysed the situation. Siya was in no way coming out. Unless she was COMPELLED to.


Raghavan moved ahead to take the bottle from her hand, hiding the small tattoo on his forearm with his other hand,creating the image of a weak person who can't even extend his hand on his own.


As he took the bottle from her grip, he deliberately placed his hand over hers.


The flash of lust in his eyes went unnoticed by Siya.

However, she felt a strong shock when he touched her. It was not like the usual touch of a person, she understood there was an intention behind it. And worse, she sensed having that kind of a sensation before.


The sudden shock made her drop the plastic bottle on the ground. The cap broke loose, spilling all the water out.


Raghavan cursed under his breath. But at the same time, he just saw a new way to get Siya out, or himself in.


Siya looked at the water and then at Raghavan. Though her intention was to help him, now she hoped that he would go away.


Raghavan looked up at her, this time his voice a little louder.


"Child, I asked for a little water. And you couldnt even give me that?"


Siya too looked up and was dumbfounded. Had it been any other sensible man REALLY in need, he wouldnt have reacted like that.


"Uh..Sir.. I ... I'll get another bottle."


As Siya turned to go, Raghavan picked up a sharp stone from the side path and scratched his other hand. Blood spurred and he threw the rock away.


"ARGHHH!!!!!" He yelled, making SIya turn around and rush to the grills.


"What happened Sir?" she asked frantically.


"Cant you see you stupid Girl?! I hurt myself!"


Siya gulped at his new tone. She seemed to have heard it.


Raghavan realised he was getting out of character. He got back to his old tone and said loudly,


"Child, dont just stand there ! Please help me!"


Siya tried to say about her situation but stopped. She didnt want to tell an unknown man everything that had happened earlier in the day.


"Sir.. How will I .. I mean.." she fumbled.


Raghavan was getting irritated. Usually, whatever he wanted to get done was done on the click of his fingers. This was the first time that he was doing a task like this on his own, and it was taking so much time solely because his target was stubborn.


Raghavan looked at her in the eye as the blood fell from his hand.


"Child, have the minimum courtesy to call an elderly man in. And specially in a position like this! "


"Sir i'll get you first aid here."


"You think I can do anything to myself in this condition?! Todays generation has become worse."


Siya sobbed lightly. She was not like this and it tore her heart to see someone in trouble in front of her. But her circumstances were strict now. She had no choice.


In between sobs, she said,


"Sir, I.. I am helpless. My husband, brother in law and sister are out... I ...am alone. The door has been locked from outside."


Raghavan smiled in his mind. He understood she was coming on his track.


"Listen, its not possible that your family just locked you out and went. You are presumably from a nice family. You must have an extra key."


"Sir I.."


Raghavan pressed his arm harder making more blood ooze out.


"Oh God," he yelled, " I will die today. God, take me !!"


Siya gasped seeing the man's worse condition. She felt so helpless and lost.


Raghavan was angry now. He fell on the ground on his knees, still with his head held high and said in an almost crying tone,


"God, take me ! I dont think anyone will help me here ! Let me be dead, and they will be cursed!"


Siya started crying. She banged on the grill like an insane person.


"Sir, please dont say th..this..!"


Raghavan yelled,


"If I die today, you too will not see your husbands face anymore you ..."


"NO!" yelled Siya.


Raghavan had hit her right at her weakness. He took a deep breath and sat there, waiting for her next move.


Siya couldnt take it anymore. To her, a curse given from a pained heart always was to become true, and she couldnt risk her husbands life for it.


She wiped her tears and said,


"Sir, I think a set of keys are kept under the flower pot. Please see and if they are, open the grill lock with it." She repented these words for the rest of her life.


Raghavan smiled under his false white beard. His mission was accomplished. He got back into character and casting a look at SIya look under the flowerpot and sure enough, Lakshman had kept the keys there. He was angry with the fact that Siya already knew that, but he resisted. His only motive now was to get her out of there.



Raghavan stood up slowly and opened the grill lock. Never had the sound of a lock opening been so victorious for him.


Siya moved back as Raghavan pulled the grill with his good hand. To her surprise, he did it quite easily. For the man who was groaning a few seconds back, it was peculiar. Yet, it didnt strike Siya then. She just focused on how to treat this man and get him out before Lakshman came in, or she would be scolded. She closed just the door and let the grill open.


Siya showed Raghavan the way inside and he went and sat on the sofa. He looked around and said under his breath,"Such a cheap place. Cheap people only could live here."


Siya brought a box of first aid and gave it Raghavan.


Raghavan looked at her and said,


"Child, Please, now that you've helped me so much, put it on too. And I am sor.."


"Its okay Sir. Its my mistake also. I'll put it on."


Raghavan smirked. He didnt say sorry completely and now, she was sitting inches away from him.


Siya hesitated to put on the medicine and hence put on the gloves. She put some ointments on the cut and rubbed it. She wasn't liking this exercise at all.

Raghavan looked at Siyas dense hair and smelled it, without her noticing. He gulped.


He had to control himself. Not now, he kept saying to himself.


"Done." said Siya and walked away with the box.


Raghavan stood up and said in his own tone,


"Game over."


The first aid box dropped from Siya's hand. She knew that tone so very well. Tears of anger, frustration and helplessness brimmed in her eyes all at once.


She turned around slowly at looked straight at his evil smile.


Raghavan ripped off his false beard and tore out the put-on prosthetics. It hurt him, but the lust and joy overcame the pain in him.


Raghavan roared with laughter. Years had passed, but Siya still detested that laugh more than anything else in the world.


Raghavan fell back laughing on the sofa.


"Oh sh*t ! I didnt know you are SO dumb! Let me in like an idiot and cried .." He continued to laugh.


With each roar of his, Siya felt a slap on her face and mind. Why, why had she given in ?!


Keeping herself strong, she yelled at him,


"Raghavan !!! You have been behind me and my family for a long time now. What is your problem you rascal ?! Why can't you leave us in peace?"


Raghavan stopped laughing and got up in a shot. He stood a few feet in front of Siya and said,


"For many years now, I have been waiting. A slap. I want to avenge a slap. As stupid as it may sound, I want to do that. And That Ram , that ... He interfered in my business ! MY GODDAMN BUSINESS ! It was enough, I had had enough. "


"Even you did worse than that to us, you idiot. You should be thankful that you're not behind the bars yet."


Taking a step ahead, Raghavan said,

"Im not going behind bars until and unless I have you on my bed, Siya."


Siya raged with all kinds of emotions at once. She had been hurt as a woman. Her esteem, her very existence had been hurt. In those moments, she called to God and Ram harder than she ever did.

Her eyes were red and burning. Her hand overpowered with fierceness like never before. She moved ahead and ,


SLAP! Right across Raghavans face.


"DO NOT TAKE MY NAME ON YOUR DISGUSTING MOUTH!"


Through both of their minds ran the incidents of the past. The same slap, but in totally different situations.


Raghavan looked back at her slowly. His eyes burst fire and his teeth were gritted against one another.


He pushed Siyas against one of the Kitchen walls and her back was towards him. Raghavan clasped her hands together and twisted them. Siya groaned in pain, but he had just become an animal.


He said over her shoulder, "I am taking you with me. Your sister is already under my hold. Let your imbecile Husband and brother in law find you two. They are miles away from here."


Siya turned around swiftly and punched him in the stomach, making him move back.


"How dare you call my husband and brother imbeciles?! You are not even a speck of dust in front of them !! You are an insect, a pest!!"


Raghavan came towards her and Siya, finding no other way around went on the stairs. Raghavan turned and followed her up.


Siya saw him coming up and jumped from over the 8th railing. It hurt her badly, but she got up and caught hold of her mobile.


She managed to call up Ram, for this last time.


R: Hello?


(gasping) S: Help Me Ram ! Come home !"


R: Siya! What... What.. Siya!!!


Raghavan came and threw the phone out of her hands. It was still running.




"Hello Siya?! Siya what happened ? Siya be with me here, dont cut the call.. Si..." Rams voice broke. He sensed something seriously wrong.


He and Lakshman had met and they were in the market place still.


He said to Lakshman,


"Laksh, Siya is in trouble, we need to go home right now, Siya is in trouble!"


"But Bhaiyya, I had locked the doors and.."


"Lakshman we dont have time! You stay here for Urmila, but I'm going."


"Ok Bhaiyya, Ill wait here you go fast."


Ram ran off, controlling his tears. He imagined the worst.





"Don't even try to call that Husband of yours," said Raghavan. "Its of no use."


Siya left everything and ran straight at the door. She opened it and ran out into the open.


Raghavan came behind her yelling and shouting .


Siya ran straight into the river side. She stood to catch a breath, when,


Three men tied her arms to each other and pulled her into the car that was waiting there. Raghavans car.


"No! No!" she yelled. Raghavan came there and shouted,

"Take her in right now! Not a moment to waste."


The men pulled Siya inside. Siya kept screaming, but no one listened. Except for one man.



Jaydev was coming towards the house to give Siya a few fruits, but he saw the door flung open and no one there. He dropped the fruits and ran out. To the corner of his eye he saw something happening. A few men and perhaps a woman. Focusing more, he saw that it was, Siya. Jaydev saw the men pushing her inside the car.


With a limp in his leg, he ran. He ran as fast as he could behind them. He went down and followed them on foot.


Siya was made to sit on the last seat of the black SUV with Indraneil who had a gun in his hand to threaten her if she did anything to reveal them.


Siya's hand and feet were tied up. She was crying with anger and yelling with frustration.


"RAM! RAM!" was all she yelled then.


The car sped off over the rocks. The jerks hurt Siya on the back, but she didnt feel anything.



Jaydev ran as fast as he could. It pained him, but his daughter like niece was being taken away. And he needed to stop them, even if it cost him his life.


"Stop you rascal! You can't take my Siya anywhere !!!"


He went on running for a long distance. Raghavan noticed him in his rear view mirror and asked the driver to stop.


He got down and stood in front of Jaydev.


Siya looked at Jaydev with hopeful eyes from eh rear window and seeing her in that state broke Jaydevs heart. He felt useless, not being able to be with her when such a thing happened.


He panted and said,


"You are Raghavan, if I am not wrong. Listen , I dont care how powerful you might be, but you cant take her away from here. I will not let you."


Raghavan laughed.


"You are absolutely right, Uncle," he said mockingly. "I am Raghavan. And I will take Siya away, you have no choice. So its better, get our of here."


Jaydev stood right face to face with him.


"Leave her, or you will not be spared.."


His sentence was cut off. Siya yelled from her car, but no one heard it. As Raghavan drove his knife into Jaydevs stomach.


"Told you to back off, but now I guess I'll meet you in hell."


Siya saw the despair and helplessness in Jaydevs eyes for the final moments. She looked down, crying and still taking Rams name.


Jaydev fell back and blood ran out from his head and stomach.


Raghavan left him there and got back in his car, speeding off.



Siya kept yelling Rams name from the window that was open on her side.



Ram heard his name, and Siyas voice. He looked to his left, and he saw a car moving away.


"SIya," he yelled as he fell on the ground.


Siya turned and saw Ram on the ground, sobbing . The real distance between them was of many metres, but the immaterial distance, beyond limits.


"Ram," she whispered before she fainted and fell back.


""""vvv"""




SO THAT WAS THE SITA HARAN!!!


I TRULY UNDERWENT A LOT OF EMOTIONS IN THIS PART MYSELF AND I HOPE I COULD CONVEY THE SAME !!!



REVIEWS ARE A MUST (HEHE) AS I WONT BE UPDATING FOR A WEEK NOW, SORRY :)



BUT I DO HOPE I COULD LIVE UP TO THE EXPECTATIONS !


THANKS FOR THE LOVE !!


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RES !!!!!!!!!! 😛😆😉
Edited by LakshmanMila..1 - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SenAnu

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Here U go - 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
Anu not like that !! 😳

See , first u long click the pic !!

U get a tab displaying Share image , copy image location , etc .

Click on copy image location.

Then , on IF , either on post reply or on quick reply , put it like this -


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Just don't put curved brackets while putting it, that's all and then post reply.

I have put the curved brackets because if i will post without curves , original pic will come , Like this - and if i write it wrongly, i mean , like putting brackets , it will put as it is.

Hope it help u !! 😳



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