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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivam...


i agree , more on lakshmila , pls make them the lead couple here

Any of your suggestions are not pressure in any way friends :) ... I actually thank you for giving them.. Yes and sure I will devote more time to the cutest LakshMila.. And ya if not in this I will write some OSs on them maybe a modern one or the traditional ones...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SenRazia

Any of your suggestions are not pressure in any way friends :) ... I actually thank you for giving them.. Yes and sure I will devote more time to the cutest LakshMila.. And ya if not in this I will write some OSs on them maybe a modern one or the traditional ones...


Sen will always be happy to read abt our lovely couples lakshmila. We will be waiting for yours OS but also a lengthy conversation in your FF😳. Karan and yukti made me fall in love with them madly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey,first of all sorry 4 the late reply😊 anyways,the update is awesome👏
Lakshmila and sira rocks👍🏼👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 24
"None of them are into their rooms. Even the doors are open. Where did they go?" Janak and Sunaina panicked around. The day after marriage all the couples went missing. What was wrong? Its not that they were irresponsible, but for the elders they were still children who hadn't GROWN up, as it is always felt by parents. "Have you checked in the lawn?" Asked Janak. "Come on, what will they do in the lawn?" Replied Sunaina in a questioning tone. "They could be," replied Janak. They rushed towards the lawn. And as Janak had predicted, they were there. Sunaina breathed a sigh of relief. "Good, they are here. No one even saw them!" Said Sunaina. "But where are Siya and Ram?" Janak said looking around. Shruti slept next to Shatrughan on a bench there. Maanvi and Bharat were asleep on a table next to the fountain. And Lakshman and Urmila in the swing hung on a tree in the lawn, slept peacefully in each others arms. Just then Siya and Ram walked in from behind and saw the elders looking at their siblings. Ram looked at Siya and smiled. Siya walked up Sunaina and wished her a good morning. Sunaina looked at her and Ram and asked her,"Siya, why are you all here?" Ram walked up to them in his fresh white kurta and said,"Actually we were together last night in our room. And then suddenly Urmila got the idea of coming out in the open and talking, saying she felt suffocated inside. So we all came here, were awake for a bit. And then everyone fell asleep, as you can see. Siya woke me up and after refreshing we were just walking around." Janak and Sunaina laughed. Janak said,"See this. It is their reception today and they are sleeping now. I guess its 7 am already. And the reception is at 6 in the evening. " "Don't worry, I'll get them ready," said Siya. Sunaina told them to come in for breakfast and left with Janak. Ram looked at them and said,"How nice they look isn't it?" Siya smiled and held Rams hand. "Yes", she said. " Shatrughan and Shruti are still pampered, Bharat and Maanvi are made for each other, and Uff! What to say about Lakshman and Urmila?! They are the energy of our lives. And even though they fight a lot, I know they live each other the most," said Siya. "More than me?" Asked Ram in a sarcastic tone. Siya laughed.
Lakshman rubbed his eyes as the sunlight broke in. He yawned and looked at the bright face next to him. Urmila. She looked most beautiful when she was angry, but now the pleasant smile on her face was the perfect way to start the day for him. He removed the hair from her face, which woke up Urmila. She rubbed her eyes and looked at him. She looked confused and then looked around. Siya and Ram were talking and the others were slowly waking up. "Lakshman!" She yelled in his ears. "Wake up! Oh god.. Did we fall asleep like this last night ? God, what must they have thought? I will die." Lakshman slowly got up and stood and said,"Don't worry. Everyone fell asleep here. And trust me, you look beautiful when you sleep." Urmila blushed and standing up walked away...

To be continued...
The long convo is next...
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sen, even though update is short i loved it the way u figured out 3 couples sleeping attire, thank you for LakshMila.the void of not having Lakshmila is going to be filled through your FF Thank you so much dear.
Will be waiting for your precap🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Spectacular!
And we have a long convo coming up
Update ASAP :P
C'mon get us like ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mantuamu

Sen, even though update is short i loved it the way u figured out 3 couples sleeping attire, thank you for LakshMila.the void of not having Lakshmila is going to be filled through your FF Thank you so much dear.

Will be waiting for your precap🤗

Ya sorry for the short one.. Yup LakshMila craze is on now!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LakshMila

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Spectacular!
And we have a long convo coming up
Update ASAP :P
C'mon get us like ☺️

Ya sure... Aww I love the emoji!! Now its inspiring me more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 25
"Bhaiyya, did everyone see us?" Asked an innocent faced Lakshman. Ram made a sarcastic face and replied,"Yes! And aunty and uncle saw you... My God.. They were so angry." Siya looked at him and bit her lip to control her smile. Lakshman looked at Urmila and frowned. Urmila whispered to him softly,"I'm gone. All becuase of you." Lakshman looked at her and said louder this time,"No! It is you who had the idea to come out." Ram cleared his throat, and brought them back to the present. Suddenly, he started laughing. Lakshman and Urmila looked at each other. Siya said,"He was joking. Yes, Mom and Dad came, but they didn't feel angry or anything. In fact they said you were looking cute." The youngsters breathed a sigh of relief. Lakshman looked at Ram with a child-like expression and said,"What Bhaiyya?! Such a bad joke in the morning!" Ram hugged Lakshman and patted him on the back. Siya looked at Urmila and said,"You still have to talk with Mom." Urmila made a fake cry and hugged Siya tightly. The siblings were sharing a beautiful lught moment.
After the breakfast, Ram got a call from the office at Delhi saying they would have to return to Delhi urgently for a meeting. Dashrath became upset. He intended to spend a little more time with Janak, but work had called. Kraanti and Sumitra, who were now staying at the farmhouse, too were upset. "But can't you postpone the work?" Asked Sumitra. "No Masi, sorry this time I can't. We will leave tomorrow morning." However, the girls were not very sad. Yes, they had to leave the house , but they couldn't wait to begin their new lives. Janak looked at Siya and thought,'I never thought I would have to leave you so early. But I have to. " Just then, Siya looked at Janak and saw his expression. She felt what he was thinking about. She knew how it felt to part with someone. But what could be done, she had to. The dilemmas of life. As everyone dispersed, Siya went to Janaks room and they shared a small talk.
Janak: Yes siya?
S: Dad, I know you are sad on having to bid me so early.
J: I'm not. I will not have your bidaai, I told you .
S: I know. And you know I will never leave you, na?
J: (eyes watering) of course.
Just then, Ram walked in. He saw Janak, and turned away, but Janak called him again.
J:You wanted to say something son?
R: Now that you have called me Son, Dad, I promise that we four brothers will keep your gems happy. I just wanted to day that you need to be sad that she is leaving early, we will come back after a week itself.
Janak walked up to Ram and placing his hands on his shoulders said,"I am proud to have sons like you and your brothers." They shared a hug.

"Urmila, won't you feel sad when youvleave from here?" Lakshman asked as he slept with his head on Urmilas lap. Urmila caressed his forehead and said,"I will, ofcourse. But then I am excited also."
L: Excited? For what?
U: For my new life.. What else?
L: Oho.. So you will live with me?
U: ( pulling His cheek) what is wrong with you? Why will I not?
L: No I thought you may not.. After all.. You hate me don't you?
U: Did you forget what I said yesterday night?
Lakshman recalled Urmilas truth answer from the game. "I had mixed feelings. Of love too," she had said. Lakshman got up and looking into her eyes said:
L: You know what?
U: What?
L: In my life, till a big age, I didn't have anyone whom I could confide in except my brothers. In college abroad, I got a few and that too because they we're not aware who I was, what position I belonged to. Many girls liked Me, the handsome as I am, but still, I never liked anyone.
U: so what can I do?
L: you have everything to do with this
U: What do you mean?
L: You are the first girl whom I saw and liked. Whom I saw and fell in live with. You are the only girl who can actually calm me down.
U: (blushing) Oh really? Then I'm lucky.
L: of course you are.
U: Listen. If you really love me, why do you fight with me?
L: Because I have been taught what you can only argue with people you love the most, because you care about them and want them to be good.
U: good then. You know I love you a lot, and you come as my first priority now.
L: ( holding urmilas hands): I know. But, I am bounded. After Kaushalya maa passed away, Ram Bhaiyya was my world. Bharat Bhaiyya was already born to Kraanti Maa, before her marriage with Dad from her first husband. So, my childhood was spent only with Ram Bhaiyya. He has been my emotional anchor. I am sorry, in life, you too have my heart, a big portion, but Ram Bhaiyya has just a little more.
U: I know. I understand and I respect your feelings. And I am also happy to see how you behave nicely with Kraanti Maa. That's one of the things which made me like you.
Lakshman hugged Urmila. She looked at the painting on the wall she faced. It was a painting, or a photo painting of her and Lakshman on their wedding night. Yes,maybe she wouldn't get all of him, but whatever she would, she would cheirsh it forever. Urmila hugged him tighter, when a voice came from outside, "Ma'am, Sir is telling you to have lunch and get ready. The programme will start early." She left him and went off to change. As she left, Lakshman looked at her and said, "My urmi, you don't know you happy I feel to be with you." As if a voice replied in his head, "I know."

Thanks!!!
#LakshMila rocks!!
Did it give you the blushes? ;)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u so much for considering our view and writing on LakshMila. 😳.will be waiting for your update..(Dont mind for giving this suggestion ,can u pen Romantic date of couples after marriage)..loved today update sen👏

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