~Arhi FF~#5~The Hands of Time ~ New Banner ~Sep 5 2020

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Part 2 :

When something goes wrongin the life's of the people whom we know we sometimes tend to act long with our emotions and that is what had happened with Khushi in Vijays case , she acted emotionally and confronted him rather than to dig more and then talk to him, That is the reason Vijay has kept himself away from all his activities so that Khushi cannot catch him.

When I was reading the scene between Shyam and Khushi , I felt that Shyam is really a very straight forward guy. I am liking him ofcourse after Arnav lol . He tried his luck but sorry Mr.Shyam Khushi has already been taken and yes you met the guy hahaha. I hope Shyam will nto be too heart broken when he comes to know about the truth of Arnav and Khushi.

Khushi and Arnav's scene was so beautiful I have no words to say , the way she tried to sooth his frustration and the way they understand each other , the way Khushi tells about her insecurities and the way he tries to push them away everything is very beautiful.

Quote

glimmernglitter

@glimmernglitter

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#242

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Why... Why... What a place to stop this chapter :-).

I liked Shyam's offer. Khushi will have all the info she needs and all official help. I am very excited about this new job offer for khushi.

Shyam has dug all info about khushi and her association with anjali. He seems to have guessed something is going on between A and K too. Let us see what he does next and how he behaves going forward. His character is intriguing.

Loved everything about arnav and Khushi... Their meeting, their talks, kisses and love.

Very besutifully wtitten chapter. I enjoyed reading it. I am sure I will read it few more times before you update the next chapter.

Quote

Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

Main Yahan hoon ... Yahan hoon ... Yahan hoon Yahan ... 😆

Quote

thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Thanks for the pm and for this long awesome update...appreciate all ur effort in putting this beautiful chapter which is written so well :)

Quote

VishMaram

@VishMaram

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Much happened in this chapter and much more is left - you are steadily building up the story arc to that place where nobody will be happy with where they are, question everything about their past, present, decision they made, incidents happening around them. Basically you've got them out of their inertia.

Akash lashed at his mother.

Aarti is made to question her decision to live for a daughter who is missing while ignoring her sons who are very much around her.

Lavanya is pushing the envelope by getting involved with a guy who is well beyond her social class and an alcoholic.

Khushi is groping for answers. The woman is an emotional wreck. She swings too hot with Vijay and it backfires and with Arnav she holds back for fear of deeply hurt and that backfires.

Shyam knows what he wants and he is a smart guy. He sets out to get what he wants. Very intelligent move from him to keep Khushi by his side. Only problem though, he doesn't know that the very thing he had set out to conquer is already taken.

Last but not least, Arnav. I love a jealous Arnav, and

you gave us him :)AM glad he's got Khushito go home to...but I can't help wonder, for how long? What'll happen when Aarti finds out?

Arnav-Khushi scene was little soothing, little funny, little emotional, little raw and little? hot :)

As usual, can't wait for more :)

Edited by VishMaram - 9 years ago