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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Hi There!

Waiting for the other part. I never count the days btw updates as long as the story moves and my author is not stopping i dont mind the frequency.

coming to your 2 qs

1. The moment you revealed the main plot- Anju khushi besties , one kidnapped one surviiving and the characters reaction to that...splendid

Basically when you laid the backdrop itself I fell in love with the story, it was not a regular love-hate bond,, it was more n deeper..

2. Skimming...no way read as much as i can😉

This chapter, glimpse on akash n lavanya was unexpected surprise and was superb...someday after being so neglected or in general unhappy due to various reasons... after so many years finding one person you can relate or be happy being with them is a god's gift, how many manage to find it and how many manage to hold on to them...i sincerely hope that akash, khushi , arnav , lavanya do that...I hope everyone gets someone like that someday...

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Akash was pathetic in this one. He needs help. His words to his mother were very hurtful. I liked lavanya for being so understanding.

I have one request though. It was difficult to read the note you have written in the third post. The color is too blurry and bright, it hurts my eyes. Hence I skipped that note. Please use any dark colors.

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Rarely I read Arshi less chapter with interest but this chapter is captivating. Waiting for next part eagerly . Today is 31st March and time is 4.58 IST , so if you update the next part as promised only few hours to go 😉 Eagerly waiting😳

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

I have been intrigued and curious to read more from the day you wrote the prologue. The mystery combined with romance is something I love to read.

That said, to answer your first question, couple of interesting and important happenings in this chapter.

First: Akash lashed out at his mother in anger and frustration - but I think his mother had to hear this and she definitely had it coming! She has been so caught up in losing Anju and has ignored her two boys. And part of the reason that Akash is an alchoholic and Arnav a recluse is because of that. Bitterness is an ugly monster and she has plenty of it.

Second: is that Akash poured out all his inner fears, insecurities and his past to Lavanya and took an important step towards going back to rehab. That itself is huge for an alchoholic!

I would never skim thru your stories - in fact, I like them because they are "wholesome" for lack of a better word :-) Your description of Ooty, and each one of the characters is just so interesting and makes you visualize it all!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Very nice update.. Loved La's dialogues here..

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Wohoo ... you've posted ... 🥳

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Awesome part 1 Sandhya!! Akash needs someone like Lavanya in his life to anchor him and stabilize and make him happy hopefully his mom. Will approve and they will not have any issues!! Cannot wait for part 2!!!!

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Part 1

Akash has delayed going to rehab , staying away from Alcohol for more than a week has taken toll on him . His mood is bad , felt very bad for Aarthi . Akash shouldn't have said that his sister is dead , his mother is living with the hope that her daughter might be alive somewhere . She is just convincing herself that this pooja & Homa will ensure her daughter's safety . Aarthi is distressed

By living in this illusion she has neglected her other two children . The result is her one son has become a alcoholic & is struggling to leave that dreadful habit .

Lavanya , the light in Akash's life . He deserves someone like her who will balance him better . She has lent her shoulders to unburden his worry . A person who stands by you during tough times is as precious as gems , Akash better not let this girl go away .

Lavanya's father is a heart patient , he needs a donor . Its truth & shocking that in a country like India which has the largest population , organ donation is a challenge .

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Definitely a storm is on the way

The fight was just the glimpse of the Strom

Your versionif Lavanya... I guess She is going to become my favorite

Arti:: she is the mystery in this story

Waiting for Part II

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Finally caught up with the last few chapters. They are awesome as usual! Your story-telling is amazing. The way you can weave the story around a secret and yet be able to hold on the suspense is just amazing!

There are many questions that come to mind. Is Shyam going to turn out to be the villain because of his interest in Khushi? How will Arnav's mother react when she finds out about Arnav and Khushi? And the biggest question of all, what happened to Anjali?

Will wait to read more...