***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 93

Hii dear,

Originally posted by: Mrumi

<font color="#0000FF"><font size="4" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">Super duper update dear.. aapne koi charm nahin khoya.. aapki writing mein aaj bhi woh x factor hain..😉

Naina ke haathon Nair ki dhulai was mindblowing idea.. ab kisi ki himmat nahin ke jo koi Naina ko chede.. apni society mein bhi har nair ke liye humein aisi Naina ki jaroorat hain..

song selection is just perfect..

aur mujhe pata tha.. Naina ko purani Naina sirf Rajveer hi bana sakta tha.. I hope ke Naina samajh gayi hogi ke Rajveer ne woh sab kyun kahan...

update soon.. ab Navin ke reaction ka intjaar hain..😊

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thanka dear
yes nair jase ko liye humare society me naina jasi ladkiya toh honi he chaheyi ...
yeah yeah naina raj ko kase galat samjh sakti h ...
aakhir wo raj h or yeh naina ...Hehehe... galat kase samjhe gay 😉
wase apni story update karo yr m wait kar rahi hu jaldi jaldi

Originally posted by: Avinanda120

Hii dear,

Very good well done friend. The way u describe this part is totally mind blowing. Keep it up friend. U are back on track.

thanks buddy ...

***** Ek Ajnabi Rishta*****




Part 14



Recap ... Major nair ki dhulai..(Hehehe...)




Naina ground se seedhe apne room me gayi ...uske jane ke baad sare faculty or cadets bhi waha se chale gaye ...kuch oderly darte hue major nair ki help ki or unhe infirmary le gaye...




Aaj jo naina ne kiya uski sabse jada khushi shayad naina se bhi jada raj ko he thi ...raj ki he baato ne naina ko itni himmat de ki woh apni liye aawaz utha sake...




Pure KMA ne naina ko appreciate kiya ...usse uska khoya hua aatmawishvas milne ki khushi me badhai de par sirf raj he tha jisne naina ko kuch nhi kaha par naina usse toh sirf raj ki badhai ka intzar tha...



Asse he din nikal gaya ...par aab tak yeh baat BC ko pata nahi chali thi kyuki woh KmA me nhi the...



Next day

jab Naveen ne kma me entry hua toh sare cadets aur faculty usse ek badi wali smile ke saath dekh rahe the ...sab Naveen ko congrats bol rahe the ...Naveen ko kuch samjh nahi aaya ki aakhir sab itna muskura kyu rahe hain aur congratulations kis baat par bol rahi hain sab ...

apne room ki taraf jate hue raste me usse major nair mile wheelchair pe ..major nair infirmary se apni room me jaa rahe the ...unhe ek haath aur ek pair me plaster tha chahre pe chote ke nishan aur naak pe ek white bandage jise dekh kar Naveen ko hasi aa gayi ...

Naveen major ko iss halat me dekh kar jitna shock tha utna he khush bhi usse yeh toh nahi pata tha ki kya hua hain par itna jarur pata tha jo bhi hua hain acha he hua hain ...akhir major hain he kamina



Jab Naveen room me pucha aur toh room me sabhi baithe uska wait kar rahe the...
Jab Naveen ne naina ko dekha toh naina ke chahre ki chamak dekh kar woh bhi haran ho gaya ek alag he khushi thi uske chahre pe aakho me wo chamak jise dekhne ke liye Naveen kab se taras raha tha ...


Naina ne jase he Naveen ko dekha woh bhag kar gayi aur uske gale lag kar rone lagi ...par iss bar uske aakho ke aasu dukh ke nahi balki khushi ke the ...

Naveen bhi uske aakho ke aasu ke farak ko samjh raha tha ...usne Naina ko gale laga kar bas isse rone diya par Naveen ki najre sabko dekh rahi thi ...aakhir baat kya hain usse kuch samjh he nahi aa raha tha ...par sabki aakho me khushi dekh kar Naveen relax tha jo bhi hain acha he hoga jo sab muskura rahe hain...



Thodi der baad naina Naveen se alag hur aur sab sofe pe baith gaye


Naveen : koi mujhe kuch btayega hua kya hain yaha ek din me ...pura kma mjhe congratulations bol raha hain ...major nair tute phute wheelchair pe pade hain ...naina roo rahi hain tum sab muskura rahe ho...



Pooja : sir Naina ke network ne jhasi ki rani ka signal pakad liya hain...



Huda : oye jhasi ki rani nahi phoolan devi ka bol... Kal dekha nahi tha bilkul phoolan devi lag rahi thi ...



Yudi : dude na jhasi ki rani aur na phoolan devi mujhe toh kal naina ...mardani movie ki rani mukharji lag rahi thi ...full to mardani...


Shalini : arre nahi nahi Naina toh kal ...



Naveen bech me je bol pada

Naveen : (little irritated) arre kya bole ja rahe ho tum sab koi saaf saaf btayega mujhe



Abhimanyu : (seriously) woh Naveen actually kal major...



Naina : (hesitantly) bhai main apke liye pani le kar aati hu ...



Yeh kah kar naina waha se chali gayi woh Naveen ke samne phir se woh sab nahi sunna chahti thi...
Sab yeh baat samjh rahe the



Phir abhimanyu ne Naveen ko sab baata diya ...


Naveen : (angrily) himmat kase hue uski meri behan ko yeh sab kahne ki ...jaanse marduga main usse ...main yaha apni behan ko normal karne ki koshish kar raha hu aur woh janmuch kar naina ko yeh sab kah raha hain



Shalini : relax Naveen tum itna gussa kyu kar rahe ho ... Iss baat ko negative way me nahi positive way me dekho isse bahane naina ka khoya hua self conference wapas aa gaya ...hum sab toh usse phir se usse shell me bhej rahe the jise wo bahar aayi thi par raj he tha jisme naina ko motive kiya usse ladne sikhaya ...(smiling) ab dekho tumhari gudiya ne sharni ban kar kya kiya hain...




Naveen : (smiling )sahi kaha tumne shalini mujhe toh khush hona chaheyi ...(to raj) raj main kase tera shukriya karu mujhe nahi pata jo tune mere liye aur meri behan ke liye kiya hain main zindagi bahr nahi bhul sakta...



Raj : maine kisi ke liye kuch nahi kiya hain Naveen ...


Tabhi peche se abhimanyu ne raj ke kaan me bola


Abhimanyu : (in raj ear's)sahi kaha jo kiya hain apne liye kiya hain


Raj abhimanyu ko ghurta hain...


Naveen : kya hua


Abhimanyu : (apni smiling chupate hue) kuch nahi


Tabhi Naina pani le kar aati hain


Naina : bhai pani...

Naveen kuch nahi kahta bas pani pee leta hain...


Alekh : par apun sab ek jaruri baat bhul rahe hain
(Sab alekh ki taraf dekhte hain)

Alekh ; BC aa gaya hoga kma me wapas aur usse sab paa bhi chal gaya hoga ...woh jarur kuch action lega naina ke khilaf...



Naina yeh sunte he raj ki taraf dekhti hain par raj usse dekh kar ek smile deta hain aur himmat rakhne ka ishaa karta hain ...



Naveen : (confidently) meri behan ne kuch galat nahi kiya hain jo hum dare ...darna toh major nair ko chaheyi hume nahi...


Tabhi waha ek orderly aata hain aur kahata hain ki naveen aur naina ko BC ne office me bulaya hain...




Naveen naina ka haath pakde usse apne saath BC ke office me le jata hain aur saath he saath sab jate hain




Jab naina office me jante hain toh BC or MC dono phele se office me baithe the ...(major apni wheelchair pe he tha)



BC : ( strictly) maine yeh kya sunn raha hu major ahluwaliya...maine apki behan ko yaha rahne ki permission de the isliye kyuki jo bhi hua unke saath uske baad unhe apki saath ki jarurat thi par jo kal kiya hain inhone major nair ke saath uske baad maine nahi chata ki yeh ek pal ke liye bhi ab meri academy me rahe ...




Yeh sunn kar sab shocked rah gaye ...



Naveen : (angrily )sorry sir par mjhe nahi lagta ki meri behan ne kuch bhi galat kiya hain... Apne sirf major nair ki baat sunni hain naina ki nahi ke aakhir usne asa kiya kyu tha ...



BC : ab aap mujhe sikhaye gay ki kya sahi hain aur kya galat major maine jo phasla liya hain wo bilkul sahi hain ...
Aap apni behan ko yaha se jane ke liye kaheyi nahi toh mujhe majburi me koi strike action lena hoga apke aur inke khilaf... Apki behan ne jo kiya hain kal usse humari academy aur army ki reputation kitni kharab hue hain uska andaja hain apko ..


Raj kuch kahne wala tha ki tabhi naina ne kaha




Naina : (confidently) maine jo bhi kiya bilkul sahi kiya tha sir mujhe jara bhi pachtawa nahi hain apne action pe ...aur rahi baat reputation ki toh sir apko mujhe thank u kahna chaheyi ki maine koi legal action nahi liya major nair ke against warna aap bhi jante hain ki ek military academy me ek civilian ki saath ki gayi batamizi ki kya saza ho sakti hain ...
aur socheyi agar yeh baat media me pata chal jati toh apki academy aur army ki kya izzat rah jati ...apko toh mera shukriya aada karna chaheyi ki maine yeh baat yahi khatam kardi...

Naina ne yeh sab itni confidently kaha ki sab uski shakal he dekhte rah gay ...


Pooja : sir maine khud sunna tha ki major nair ne naina se kasi ghatiya baatein kahi thi ...


Yeh kah kar pooja ne brig ko sab kuch bata diya aur brig major nair ko gusse se ghur rahe the aur major ke chahre pe pasine chut rahe the ...




BC : yeh sab main kya sunn raha hu major nair kya apne sach me asi giri hue harkat ki hain ms.ahluwaliya ke saath



Major nair : ( haklate hue) woh ...sir ..maine ...woh ...



BC : bas bohat hua main sab samjh gaya major nair ...aap apna saman pack kar lijeyi kyuki ab ms.ahluwailya nahi aap jaye gay iss academy se bahar...maine apko vise principal ki post se nikalta hu...
Main nhi chahta ki apki harkato ki wajah se kma ya army ka naam kharab ho ...



Bechare Major nair ke pas aur koi option nahi tha woh chup chap waha se apne wheelchair pe chale gaye ...



BC : maine bohat sharminda hu ms.ahluwaliya jo bhi major nair ne kiya uske liye...



Naina : aap bade hain mujhse sir aap mafi magte ache nahi lagte ...wase bhi jo bhi hua usme apki koi galti nahi thi ...




Yeh kah kar naina waha se ek smile kar ke chai gayi aur saath me baki sab bhi




In mess



Sab baithe the ...
Orderly se le kar har cadet aa kar naina ko congratulations & thank u bol raha the ...

Congrats uska self confidence aane ki khushi me aur thank u un sabka major nair se phecha chudane ke liye ...


(Sare readers ko bhi congratulations kyuki ab Major Nair meri story se bahar h ...
A Special thanks to Major Nair for guest performance...lol...)


Naina : (happily) enough of this thank u & congratulations ...time to do some action


Alekh : yeh addi kya bol relli hain tu ...konsa action ab kiski band bajane ko magta hain tere ko



Naina : (in same style) yeh adde ...band bajane ka maan toh hain mera par kisi insaan ko nahi balki band baja wala band bajane ka ...




Abhimanyu : (confused)
Kya mtlab

Naina : mera mtlab yeh hain ki ...
(Yeh kah kar naina mess ke ek banch pe chad gayi) sunno sunno sunno ...specially Major Naveen Singh Ahluwaliya & Dr.captain shalini singhle ...main yani ki Naina Singh Ahluwaliya yeh chahti hu ki aap dono jald se jald shadi karo ... Isliye maine shalini bhabhi ki mummy se phone karke baat ki hain aur unhone kaha hain ki woh bhi chahte hain ki aap dono ki shadi jald ho jaye ...aur unhone shadi ka muhrat bhi nikalwa liya hain jo ki aaj se thik 15 din baad hain ...isliye time for action guys hume kitna sara kam karna hain ...(chilate hue) its time for marriage the preparation...



Mess me khadi sabhi log hooting karne lage shalini aur Naveen ke liye ...

Par bechare Naveen shalini toh sadme me chale gaye...


Raj : (Naveen ko hug karte hue) abye saale tu sadme me kyu lag raha hain ...teri shadi hone wali hain khush nahi hain kya tu ...



Abhimanyu : ( teasingly) kahi asa toh nahi ki kal aap delhi gaye the aur waha uss delhi wali se apki setting ho gayi ho ...aur ab apne shalini se shadi karne ka plan cancel kar diya ho ...


Shalini aakhe phad phad kar Naveen ko dekh rahi thi ...


Naveen : (with horror face) nahi nahi shalu asa kuch nahi hain ...woh toh bas main ..


Naveen ki shakal dekhkar sab hasni lage ...


Naina : enough of this leg pulling ...(yeh kahkar naina Naveen ke pas gayi aur usse side se hug kiya) ab koi mere bhai ko pareshan nahi karega ...wase bhi shadi ki baad inki band bajni he hain toh abhi ke kiye chod do ...
Yeh kah kar naina bhi hasne lage



Naveen : (making face) tu bhi mera mazak udda rahi hain...
Wase tune yeh sab kiya kab aur shadi itni jaldi kase hogi ...


Naina : (pulling his cheeks) come on bhai never ever underestimate Naina Singh Ahluwailya ...
Agar main yeh nahi karti na toh iss janam me toh shayad he aap kabhi shadi kar pate ... Wase bhi (emotionally) jab se main aayi hu aap apni life ke bare me sochna he bhul gaye hain ...toh kisi ko toh apke bare me sochna chaheyi na ...


Naveen : (kissing on her forehead) main tere bare me sochu ya tu mere bare me ek he baat hain na ...



Raj naina ko dekhe jaa raha tha ...


Raj : wase agar aap dono ka emotional sceen ho gaya ho toh ..kuch kam kare wase bhi kisi ne kaha hain(naina ko dekhte hue) its time for marriage preparation...


Naina : (smiling ) bilkul sahi kaha jisne bhi kaha hain lagta hain kafi intelligent bandi hain woh ...(yeh kaha kar naina ne ek badi wali bright smile ki)




Huda : chalo acha hain issi bahne ab hume kma ki training se kuch dino ki chutti milegi...


Naina : (with attitude) excuse me aap log apni training pe dhayan do...mere pas mere do personal assistant hain woh kare gay sara kam ...


Shalini : hold on hold on naina tum kya kiye ja rahi ho mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha ...
Tumne meri maa se baat kabki ..aur itni jaldi shadi ki date ??? Itna sara kam hain sab kuch kase hoga ...


Naina : oh! ho bhabhi aap na kuch jada sochti hain ...sab kuch ho jayega ...maine aunty se baad ki hain wo waha kuch taiyari kar rahi hain aur hum yaha ...shadi yahi hogi ambala me ...sare functions sab kuch yahi ho gay ...aur rahi baat apke aur bhai ke leave ki toh aap uski tension matlo maine BC se baat karli hain woh aap sabki kuch dino ki choti sensation kar de gay ...wase bhi shadi ke din sunday hain ...apke ghar wale shadi se ek hafte phele aaye gay ..aur ab bas hume unke rahne ka intzam karna hain ..aur marriage hall bhi dekhna hain ...wase aap tension mat lo apko aur bhai ko toh bas sab kuch enjoy karna hain sara kam mere dono assistant samhal le gay.



Abhimanyu : (confused) personal assistant ???? Kon hain apke personal assistant...



Naina : (with full attitude) capital abhimanyu rai chauhan & capital rajveer singh shekhawat ...(abhi &raj ko ishara karte hue) now both of u follow me bohat kam pada hain ...




Raj & abhimanyu dono muh khol kar khade the ...

Naina ne itne style ke saath dono ko order kiya ki bechare sach me khud ko naina ka PA samjh rahe the ...



Naveen : (laughing) saale kutto thode der phele tak mere khichai kar rahe the na ...ab jao kamino bano meri behan ke assistant ...ab pata chalega jab woh tum dono ko apni ungliyo pe nachayegi ...
(with attitude) aur hain shadi ki preparation me koi kami nahi hone chaheyi warna dono ki tankha (salary) kaat luga samjhe ...



Yeh kah kar Naveen bhi waha se full attitude ke saath shalini ka haath pakad kar le gaya



Abhimanyu : (still shocked) hume asa kyu lag raha hain ki yeh dono bhai behan hume pagal kar ke chode gay ...



Raj : (sigh) pagal toh kar diya hain yaar


Abhimanyu : (teasingly) haa bhai ab aap toh pagal ho gay he aakhir pyaar jo hain apka ...


Raj : (dreamily) haa ...(tabhi raj ko samjh aaya ki abhi ne kaha kya h) kya???? (With fake anger) chauhan sahab aap aaj kal kuch jada he nahi bol rahe hain ...


Abhimanyu : (innocently) hum ...hume kab kuch bola ...bas jo dekh raha hain wahi toh kaha hain humne ...

Yeh kah kar abhimanyu waha se bhag gaya aur raj bhi peeche peeche Naina ke pas chala gaya apni new duty join karne as personal assistant...


Raj : ( in mind) i love this duty (smiling) issi bahane kuch waqt milega saath me ...




Abhimanyu : (raj ke pas wapas aa kar) naughtily) aap kaheyi toh Naveen ke saath apki bhi shadi kara de woh kya hain paise bach jaye gay ...i mean ek he mandap me do shadiya ...

Yeh kah kar abhi waha se chala gaya.m.


Raj : (khud se) kash ...kash asa ho sakta (sigh) chal raj abhi jo ho sakta hain woh kar ...




End of part 14




Love Arti

Awesome and fantastic update

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Hii dear,

fantastic & awesome update!😊
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!😊

Fantastic ud.naina ki tho jawab nahi
Naina nd naveen ne kya attitude dikhaya raj nd abhi ko soperb
Eagerly waiting for raina romance
Abhi Jarrod petega raj ki haathon me