***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 6

wow super intro but humari phoolan aka naina kaha hai your story seems to be different frm the serial and thats gud cos we can read something new

Originally posted by: prathe

wow super intro but humari phoolan aka naina kaha hai your story seems to be different frm the serial and thats gud cos we can read something new

do continue soon dear😳

thanks prathe
phoolan abhi holiday pe gayi h [lol]
yuupp story line will be different form the serioul hope u all like

Originally posted by: RNforever

thanks prathe
phoolan abhi holiday pe gayi h [lol]
yuupp story line will be different form the serioul hope u all like

Originally posted by: RNforever

thanks millee
ur most welcome dear
naina ki kya jarurat humare raj ko toh hazaro mil jayegi ...jokes a part
abhi tih naina ek mystery h so plz wait der
yes i m very upset with u
apni fic toh tum update karti nhi ho
i m waiting for ur fic also yr

Don't be upset swthrt
I ll update soon
I dont know why bt now a days mah mind is nt working properly that what to write 😆

But yar tum ye kya kar rahi
Chocolete dikha ke apne pass rakh liya tumne toh
Intro ke baad no updates
Waiting yaar
Do update soon


Luv millee 😛

Originally posted by: prathe

acha hai holiday enjoy karle phoolan😛

par ab toh lagta h holiday khatam karna padega koi phoolan ko bohat miss kar raha h

Arti dear
intrzar mein mar jana maine kb ayenge apne love birds

Originally posted by: mylifereality

Arti dear
intrzar mein mar jana maine kb ayenge apne love birds

within 15 minutes just wait dear

***Ek Ajnabi Rishta ****


Part 1



Toofani raat me ek ladki pagalo ki tarah sadak pe bhagi ja rahi thi uski haalat bohat kharab thi kapde fate hue , sharer (body) pe jagah jagah chot ke nishan the...pairo me chapal nahi thi aur wo besud ho kar naghe pair pathrele rasto pe bhag rahi thi ...ser pe chot lagi thi waha se khoon bah raha tha par asa lag raha tha mano uss ladki ko koi farak he na pad raha ho un zakhmo se ...uska chahra khoon se bhega hua tha aakho me khof tha ek dar ...wo ladki bar bar peche mud kar dekh rahi thi mano koi uska pecha kar raha ho aur wo kisi se khud ko bacha kar bhag rahi thi ...par kisi aur kyu...




Ussi tufani raat me ek jeep me teelo log kahi ja rahi the ...


1 boy : arre aap jara samahal ke chalo jeep hume lag raha hai ki kahi kuch hone wala ...kesa khatar naak tufan h yeh...


2 boy : tum na kuch jada he dar rahe ho kuch nahi hone wala hai bas mosam kharab hai kal tak thik ho jayega



1 boy : nahi yaar hum sach kah rahe hai jab bhi asa koi tufan aata hai toh apne saath saath wo jarur kuch lekar aata ...bas ab jana yeh hai ki yeh ki koi acha khabar aati hai ya buri



3 boy : inse kuch bhi kahna bekar hai naveen ...chauhan sahab aur unki philosophy kabhi khatam nahi hoti



Nav : thik he kah raha hai tu raj ...abhi se toh kuch bolna he beckar hai (naveen driving seat ke bagal me batha tha)



Abhimanyu : aap dono ko lagta hai ki hum jhoot bol rahi h ...thik hai dekhte hai aaj iss tufani raat me kuch naya hota hai ya nahi (abhimanyu back seat pe batha tha)



Raj : (driving jeep)( raj thoda peche mud ke abhimanyu se baat kar raha tha) chauhan sahab yeh aap aur apki ki baate kuch nahi hoga dekh lena aap ...




Tabhi naveen chilata h ...



Nav : raj break mar...



Raj jasi he aage dekh kar break marta hai koi uski gaddi se takra jata hai...



Raj : (shocked) oh ! My god



Abhimanyu ; humne kaha tha na kuch toh jarur hoga



Teeno jeep se utar ke dekhte h toh ek ladki bure haal me zamin pe giri hue thi ...



Teeno ko samjh nhi aata kya kare
Phir naveen aage jaa kar uss ladki ko uthata hai ...jab wo ladki khadi thoti hai toh hum uski shakal dekhte hai wo wahi ladki hoti hai jo sadak par pagalo ki tarah bhag rahi thi



Nav : (hesitantly) oh ! God inko toh bohat chot aayi hai ...(to girl) ji aap thik toh h na ...



Wo ladki khoon bahne ki wajah se bohat weak ho gayi thi...laga tar bhagne ki wazah se uska gala bhi sukh gaya tha ...wo kuch bolna chah rahi thi par bol nahi pa rahi thi...



Kisi tarah wo ladki apni aakhe kholti hai aur naveen ko dekhti h...kamzore ki wajah se usse naveen ka chahra thik se dekhayi nahi de raha tha par najane kyu wo phir bhi naveen se ""Ek Ajnabi Rishta"" mehsoos kar rahi thi ...


Ladki darte hue bohat muskil se kuch bolti hai naveen ka haath pakad kar ...



Girl : please ...bacha lo mjhe ...wo log mjhe mar de gay...

Naveen raj aur abhimanyu teeno shocked ho jate hai ...unhe kuch samjh he nahi aata ki wo kya kahe


Itna me he kuch log waha aa jate hai dekhne me toh wo gunde lag rahe the ...
Un sab ki saas ful rahi thi aasa lag raha tha ki wo sab bohat der se kisi ke peche bhag rahe ho


Un me se ek gunda aage aata hai


Gunda : oye sunno apni khariyat chahte ho toh ladki hume do aur chalte bano yaha se...samjhe


Wo ladki un gundo ko dekh kar bohat dar jati hai aur naveen ka haath kas kar pakad leti h mano jase usse yakeen ho ki wo usse bacha lega in sab se usse...



Girl : (to naveen) please bachalo mujhe...

Itna kah kar wo naveen ke gale lag kar behosh ho jati h



Raj naveen aur abhimanyu phele ladki ko dekhte h uski halat dekh kar wo samjh jate hai ki kya hua hoga uske saath aur phir un gundo ko dekhte hai...



Naveen us ladki ko samhalta hai aur raj or abhimanyu ko un gundo ko samhalne ka ishara karta hai...



Raj : aur agar hum ladki na de toh



Gunda : dekh kyu apni maut ko bula raha h ...tum teen ho aur hum itne sare...


Abhimanyu : arre aap kya hume dara chah rahe hai ...agar asa hai toh hum apko bata dete hai ki hum apse bilkul nahi dare...



Dosra gunda : dekh hero hume ladki de de warna bohat bura hoga


Raj : acha kya kar lo gay tum hum bhi toh dekhte



Unme se ek gunga apne back pocket me se ek knife nikal ke raj aur abhimanyu ke pas aa rah hota hai unhe darne...



Raj : (darne ka natak karte hue) arre chauhan sahab yeh log toh hume mar de gay ab hum kya kare ...



Abhimanyu : (with style) arre darte kyu ho raj hum hai na tumhare saath (yeh kahte hue abhimanyu apni gun nikalta hai aur wo gunde dar jate hai kyuki unki pas sirf chaku (knife) tha gun nahi




Abhimanyu : ( to raj ) pata hai raj...humari sarkari nakar hai par yeh gun toh humari personal hai iski ek bhi goli ka hisab hume kisi ko nahi dena padta hum chahe kitni he goliya kyu na chala le



Wo sare gunde dar kar peche ho rahe the aur abhimanyu unki taraf badh raha tha



Ek gunda : dekho tum yeh thik nahi kar rahi ho wo humari shikar hai humne paise diye hai uske ...par agar tum chaho toh uske saath aaj raat maze le kar hume wapas kardo...



Us gunde ki yeh sunn kar raj abhimanyu aur naveen teeno ko he bohat gussa aata hai


Raj se uss gunde ko pakad ke marne lagta hai...



Raj : (marte hue) saale tum jaso ki wajah se he aaj humare desi me ladkiya surakshit nahi hau ...



Raj lagat tar usse mar raha tha aur jab baki ki gunde raj ko marne aate h toh abhimanyu unhe apni gun dekha kar peche kar deta hai...


Abhimanyu : raj aap apne apko kyu taklif de rahi hai hum abhi police ko phone kar ke bulate hai...



Abhimanyu police ko phone karke bulane he wala hota h ki sare gunde waha se bhag jate hai...




Raj : (angrily) bhag gay saale ...samjhte kya h khud ko...aurto ki izzat karna he nhi jante hai yeh log...




Abhimanyu : relax raj ...shant ho jaeyi...



Naveen : guys baat karne me time wast mat karo ...is ladki ka bohat khoon bah gaya hai hume ise jaldi he hospital le jana hoga



Phir teeno jeep me bathte h


Naveen uss ladki ko apne goudh me utha kar ...jeep ke back seat pe letata h aur phir khud batha hai...uska ser apni lap me rakh kar...




Raj jeep start karte hue

Raj : but guys hospital yaha se kafi dor hai ...agar tab tak ladki ko kuch ho gaya toh ...



Abhimanyu : ek kam karte hai inhe KMA le chalte hai waha shalini inka treatment ache se kar degi ...aur phir koi problem bhi nahi hogi...



Raj : but isse yaha le jana sahi hoga ...i mean BC se kya kahe gay ...



Naveen najane kyu uss ladki ki halat dekh kar darsa gaya tha uski andar ek ajeeb se hal chal ho rahi thi uss ladki ko le kar Ek Ajnabi sa Rishta mehsoos kar raha tha wo ...



Naveen : ( panic) chup ho jao tum dono ...raj car start kar aur jaldi se kma chal ...m bc se baat karluga ...


Raj : par naveen



Naveen : (shouting) yeh mera order h captain shekhawat yeh mat bhulo ki m tumhara senior hu...



Raj aur abhimanyu dono he naveen ke ase bartaw se shocked ho jate h...aaj phele bar naveen ne is tarah baat ki hai inse...

naveen raj abhimanyu teeno he ek saath kma se passout hue the par naveen in sab me sabse best tha aur wo best cadet bhi bana tha aur inse phele uska promotion bhi ho gaya tha ...
naveen major aur raj abhimanyu abhi bhi captain the...par aaj phele bar naveen ne apne seniority dekhai thi...



Raj aur abhimanyu ko naveen ka asa bolna bura toh nahi laga par wo samjh nahi par rahe the ki aakhir Naveen ko hua kya tha...




Raj kuch na bol kar jeep start kar ke kma ke aur chal raha hota hai...



Jab wo kma pouchte hai toh naveen jaldi jeep se utar kar uss ladki ko apni goudh me utha kar infirmary ki taraf bhag hai




Raj abhimanyu dono harani se naveen ko dekh rahe the aur phir uske peche chale jate hai ...



Kma me sab naveen ko dekh rahe the...abhi lights out nahi hue thi toh sare cadets aur faculty kma me he idhar udhar ghum rahe the...




Naveen ko raste me shalini milti hai aur wo Naveen ko dekh kar shocked ho jati hai...



Shalini : Naveen yeh kya hua kon hai yeh ladki ...



Raj : shalini phele infirmary me chalo iska ilaz karo phir hum btate hai...



Phir Naveen uss ladki ko infirmary me le jata hai aur shalini uska treatment start kar deti hai


Raj Naveen aur abhimanyu teeno infirmary ke bahar khade shalini ka wait kar rahi thi...




Jab waha unke best cadets aate hai ... jo inka teeno ka gurau hai...inke best five cadets jo second year cadets hai kma me...



Cadet yudi ,cadet ali ,cadet puja , cadet huda aur cadet alekh...



Ali : (to raj) sir sab thik toh hai na


Raj : cadet sab thik hai aap log ja kar aaram karye ...kal morning me aapki class hai na ...



Pooja : par sir mere mobile me yeh network catch he nahi kar raha ...yeh ladki kon hai aur ase is halat me yaha...



Abhimanyu : dekhiye cadet abhi hum kuch nahi kah sakte please aap log abhi yaha se jayeyi ...wase bhi lights out hone ka time ho gaya hai...



Phir alekh raj ki taraf dekhta hai aur raj usse jane ka ishara karta hai ...



Alekh : chali yaha se kai ko khali pili bhed laga rakhi hai chalo kal sir apun kogo ko sab bata de gay ...



Alekh ki baat sun kar sab jane lagte hai ki tabhi sahlini infirmary ka darawaz khol kar bahar aata hai ...



Naveen : shalini sab thik hai na ...




Shalini : relax Naveen m apni taraf se puri koshish kar rahi hu ... sab thik hoga ...( to pooja) wase acha hua cadet aap mjhe yahi mil gayi ...actually mujhe apki thodi help chaheyi thi ...aap please andar aayegi...



Pooja : sure mam...



Phir shalini pooja ko andar le kar chali jata h aur darwaz band kar deti hai



Tabhi waha ek orderly aata hai...



Orderly : ( to Naveen) sir apko aur baki ki dono sir ko brig.sir ne apne office me bulaya hai




Raj : lagta hai bc report pouch gayi



Abhimanyu : haa bhai jab bc ka mc yahi hai toh khabar pouchegi he na ...



Par Naveen kuch nahi bolta wo bas chup chap brig ke office ki taraf chala jata hai...




Raj abhimanyu Naveen ki khamishi notice karte hai par dono he chup rahna bahtar samjhte hai ...



Raj : (to cadets) jab tak hum na aa jaye yahi rahna ho sakta hai dr. Shalini ko kisi help ki jarurat pade...


Aur phir wo dono bhi bc ke office me chale jate hai ...



Jab teeno brig ke office me jate h toh dekte hai ki waha brig aur majar nair dono bathe hai...aur brig kafi gusse me lag rahe the...



Par brig Naveen ke kapdo pe laga khun dekh kar thoda pareshan ho jate hai



Naveen : may i come in sir ...


Brig : yes major


Phir teeno room me enter kar de brig ko salute karte hai



Brig : toh yeh kya tamasha hai major kon hai wo ladki aur apke kapdo pe yeh khoon kasa h




Phir teeno ek dosre ko dekhte hai aur Naveen bolta hai



Naveen : sir aap toh jante hai hum teeno delhi gaye the ek official kaam se ...wapas aate waqt yeh ladki humare jeep ke samne aa gayi achana se ...



Or phir naveen sare situation brig ko batata hai ...



Major nair : par aap usse kisi hospital me bhi toh le ja sakte the na major yaha kma me la kar tamasha karna jaruri tha kya apka ...oh ! m toh bhul he gaya aap teeno ko herogiri dekhane ka kafi shauk hai ...ab uss ladki ko bacha kar cadets aur yaha ke faculty members ke nazro me hero bana chahte hai aap log...



Teeno ko he major nair ki baat sunn kar gussa aa raha tha par wo kuch bhi bol kar situation aur kharab nahi karna chahte the ...



Naveen : ( to bc) sir hum fauzi hai desh aur desh ki logo ki raksha karna humara farz hai aur rahi baat us ladki toh hum usse waha marne ke liye nahi chod sakte the aur hospital bhi waha se kafi dor tha tab tak shayad wo ladki survive nahi kar pata isliye hum usse yaha le aaye...(to major nair) aur aap yeh mat bhuliye ki hum same post pe hai toh jara souch samjh kar baat kareye m apka junior nahi hu ab jo aap kuch bhi bole gay ...



Major nair(angrily) : par yeh ladki...

Major ki baat bech me kate hue brig bole


Brig : (strictly ) major nair sahi galat ka fasla karne ke liye m abhi yaha par hu aur mjhe nahi lagta ki in logo ne kuch galat kiya hai ladkiya humare desh ki izzat hoti aur usse bachana humara farz ...aur rahi baat rules ki toh kisi ki jaan bachane se bada koi rule nahi hota...(to Naveen) aap mjhe uss ladki ki report dete raheyi ga major aur hai is baat ka dhayan rahe ki uss bachi ko yaha kisi baat ki kami nagi hone chaheyi ...yeh mere orders hai ...


Naveen : (happily) yes sir...




Raj abhimanyu aur Naveen teeno he brig ki baat sunn kar khush ho jate h aur waha se chale jate hai ...




End of part 1 ...



Hope u guys like my first part agar kuch galat lage toh please give ur suggestions

Superb dear,
Intezar ka phal asa hota to main khungi ki acha hai hm ab everyday intezar krenge
Pr wait wait, jyada intezar bhi mt krwana.

Ek ajnabi rishta to naveen or naina abhi. Apne rishte se anjan hai phir bhi i like thr bond between them, the best thing i like in lrl is the love or naveen naina, how he record his voice just for naina and his last word naina meri pyari behan,

Never ever forget this,

Continue soon


Love

Shweta