***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 59

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

great

Pl cont soon


Love and prayer
Yogini

thanks yogini

Originally posted by: mylifereality

Superb dear,naina ka past whi to main,soch rhi thi ki naina,ase hi kisi ka jaan,thodi na legi galti to rishi ki hi thi, bt yar shabbir,ko maine role mein imagine nhi kiya, bcoz i like him too, as in role of rishi,maine kahin to hoga dekha nhi or us time to rajeev ka craze bhi nhi tha bt kuch episodes dekhe the usme to rishi ko acha dikhate hai na or uski death bhi bhot emotional thi na,


Bt bt storyline was mind-blowing or apne naveen is time pe bhi typical bhai bnna bhule ni akhir naina ko dat hi diya,or raj wo to raj hai abhi se naina unki bat samjhne,bhi lgi or manne bhi lgi,

Too excited too know ki ab aage kya hoga kahani mein or naina ke sath,


Janne ke liye bne rhenge apke saath

Continue soon plz is bar to inteha ho gyi intezar ki,ayi na kuch khabar mere yaar ki,


Love
Shweta

thanks shweta
koi nhi ji aab jisi chao usse imagin karlo mjhe koi problem nhi h bas aap khush raho


hahaha... i love Naveen possessive side for her sister toh bas bana diya typical side ...
wase toh Naveen ka jada role nhi tha LRL pe par phir bhi mjhe pasand tha wo isliye kafi focud h mera uss para
hahaha... wait karo ji abhi time h next update me

Chapter 8
Rishi pta nhi kon coz i olrdy told u mjhey Rishi Garewal bht zyda pasnd hai coz Sujal ki jaan tha wo.. Usey nafrat nhi hogi mjhey..

I m impressed how u write abt attraction jisey loug pyaar ka naam de kr badnaam kr detey hai..Naina b isi galat fehmi ka shikaaar.. Love is totaly difrnt.. Uss mai pehley trust ata hai phir sacrifice.. Lust desire bht baad ki baat hai..
So Rishi is dead.. Naina ne maar diya usey.. Bt mistake dostu ki b hai.. Jinhoney Rishi ko uskaayaa..
Nice msg milta hai Hamey dost achey bnaaney chahye jo galti krne pr tokey naa ki badhawa de..
Update next soon..
Take care Aarti..
Love

Originally posted by: anju_panghal

naina's past is interesting...pyaar me kuch jyada hi pagal ho gyi..

i didn't like dis rishi...he's so disgusting..acha hua mar gya😆

kash uske 1-2 frnds b gir jate uske sath😆

naina k sath jo b hua bura hua..or abi to or b flashback baaki h..pta ni kya kya saha h usne..

par koi ni raj h na ..wo smbhaal lega..bt yar raj naina ki love story jldi se start kro na...

about overall story..m sirf itna hi bol skti hu its just wonderful...👏

aajtk maine jitni b RN based ff padi hn unme se ye pahli ff h jisme sirf 8 parts me 80 page ho chuke hn..it means everyone liking it..n i just love dis story..😊

so just keep writing n take care😊

thanks anju 😳
sahi kaha pyaar me jada pagal ho gayi thi naina tabhi yeh haal ho gaya uska 😭
sahi kaha khud mara saath ek do dost ko le kar marta toh acha hota ... 😉
next update me tum paka mjhe marne wali ho i m sure ...

thanks dear tum sab ke appreciation ka natija h jo 8 part me 80 page tak story chali gayi hope age bhi ase he bohat sara pyaar milta rahe mjhe 😳

Originally posted by: anju_panghal

nahi yar..m aap jaise kbi ni likh skti...m bs stories ko imagine kr skti hu..aapki tarah itna ache se feelings ko describe ni kr skti...bs aap achi achi stories dete rho hm padhte rhenge😛

sab asa he kahte h yr even m bhi same line bolti thi apne friends se jo fic lekhte h par jab maine lekhna shuru kiya dimak ne khud ba khud story build up karne laga ...try it u m sure tum acha lekhogi ...

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

Chapter 8
Rishi pta nhi kon coz i olrdy told u mjhey Rishi Garewal bht zyda pasnd hai coz Sujal ki jaan tha wo.. Usey nafrat nhi hogi mjhey..

I m impressed how u write abt attraction jisey loug pyaar ka naam de kr badnaam kr detey hai..Naina b isi galat fehmi ka shikaaar.. Love is totaly difrnt.. Uss mai pehley trust ata hai phir sacrifice.. Lust desire bht baad ki baat hai..
So Rishi is dead.. Naina ne maar diya usey.. Bt mistake dostu ki b hai.. Jinhoney Rishi ko uskaayaa..
Nice msg milta hai Hamey dost achey bnaaney chahye jo galti krne pr tokey naa ki badhawa de..
Update next soon..
Take care Aarti..
Love

thank buddy 😃
really sorry yr par maine phele he iss character ko imagin kar liya tha ...but koi nhi tum apne varun dhawan ko he imagin karo yr what's the big deal 😉
at the end of the part mar gaya rishi ab kisa he khatam karo uska ..

sahi kaha dost bohat soch kar banae chaheyi ...kyuki uska asar humoar bhi hota h ...
galat dost banane ka natiza rishi jasa he hoga h

Originally posted by: RNforever

thank buddy 😃
really sorry yr par maine phele he iss character ko imagin kar liya tha ...but koi nhi tum apne varun dhawan ko he imagin karo yr what's the big deal 😉
at the end of the part mar gaya rishi ab kisa he khatam karo uska ..

sahi kaha dost bohat soch kar banae chaheyi ...kyuki uska asar humoar bhi hota h ...
galat dost banane ka natiza rishi jasa he hoga h

completely fine with me.. Koi b Rishi ho waese b banda ek update mai tha..:p
yes dost se hm bantey hai aur dost hmse..

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Awww
Really u r such a sweetheart
Thank u so much maaf karne ke liye
Nd maine update Padh liye
It's really amazing dear
Luv u sooo much 😛

luv u too baby 😉
oye galat mat samjhna m bilkul sharif hu ...luv u too dost wala love h not wo wala 😆

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

completely fine with me.. Koi b Rishi ho waese b banda ek update mai tha..:p
yes dost se hm bantey hai aur dost hmse..

waah...what a line sir ji lagta h apni fic me use karna padega 😉

Nice ud dear.. so finally naina ka past clear hua.. ud was gud😊😊