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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever


waah...what a line sir ji lagta h apni fic me use karna padega 😉

kr lou ji kisney roka.. It's lyk Jo mera hai wo sbka hai.. Jo Sabka Hai Wo mera Hai.. Hehehehe.. N mai Sir n Miss hon.. Ishhh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Part 2

Kya baat h meri phoolan Devi
Romance Queen se sheedhe drama queen tragedy
M dam sure she is Naina naveen's gudiyaa
But jo bhi hua horrible h keep it up


Chandni


hahaha... so now i become drama queen cool man i don't mind to be ..
ab wo naina h ya nhi tmhe khud he pata chal jayega read it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

kr lou ji kisney roka.. It's lyk Jo mera hai wo sbka hai.. Jo Sabka Hai Wo mera Hai.. Hehehehe.. N mai Sir n Miss hon.. Ishhh


yaa right jo tera h wo mera h jo mera h woh toh mera he rahega 😉
n yes mjhe pata h tum miss ho par kya jaru ji line ki demand thi sir ji not madam ji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3
Omg omg omg
Bechari ladki
Yar yeh sab kyun hota hai
Is huda ki to use pata h ki us ladkus ladki k sath galat hua hai
Use samajhne ki jagah use pagal keh raha h
Actually galat nhi bahut galat hua h
Drugs bhi

Overall nice part but sad
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4
Awww Naina hi hai pata tha
Yeh Naina ne Raj chanta Mara very bad
Huda ko marna tha
But yeh kya abhi ne Raj chheda great yar pehli bar Raj ko kisi ne chhua hai wo b aise hahaha
Woww nice Salini DNA Kara diya smart ha reports to positive hi hofi
Great going
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever


luv u too baby 😉
oye galat mat samjhna m bilkul sharif hu ...luv u too dost wala love h not wo wala 😆


Haan toh mai v dost wala hi Bol rahi
Mai ekdum straight hu
Samjhi
Hurrr
Waise update kaha h
Aaj Tuesday Ho gya madam
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 5
Awsm update yar
Dhaashu tha
Happy for Naina n Naveen
Raj Naina ne ek dusre ki ankhon me dekha. Kuchh to h in dono k darmiyaan ek ajnabi ehsaas jo jald hi sach hoga
Shalini Naveen k cute fight aur usme Raj abhi k comments too good
I love trio of Raj Naveen n abhi
Great work

Chandni
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6
Great part yar awsmm
Naina ab theek ho rahi h sab achha ho raha h
M happy k Naina ab sab se baat kar rahi h
U know I always used to like the bond btw aalekh n Naina
Aur aaj b wo bond dikha
Too good
But ab Raj Naina k b ek aad scene dalo yr missing them

Chandni
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Posted: 9 years ago
I part 7
Kth wala rishi h kya
Wow Raj is always right
Naina kya bindas thi yr
Too good I can actually imagine what u wrote
Overall great dictation by Naina
Looking forward for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 8
Omg finally I read it full
Great yr u r doing well
Overall nice part
Naina ka past kafi cool tha to horrible b
Rishi kameena h
M.sure rishi k baap ne uski maut ka badla lene k liye Naina k sath bura kiya hoga

Cont soonnn yr can't wait to read further


Chandni

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