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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever


thanks millee 😃
abhi clear nhi h ki wo naina h bhi ya nhi so just wait n watch 😉
thapad ...isse bahane kisi ladki ne chua toh sahi raj ko 😆
trust me tumhe ase tragic end me fasa kar mjhe abdi achi neend aati h 😆



Hmm so jao so jao
But av mai plan kar rahi hu tumhari ninden udane ki
Fir mai soungi or tum jagna 😡
Huhhh
Avi tumhare din h
Just wait n watch
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Milleegarg



Hmm so jao so jao
But av mai plan kar rahi hu tumhari ninden udane ki
Fir mai soungi or tum jagna 😡
Huhhh
Avi tumhare din h
Just wait n watch
🤔

hahaha... konsi planing madam jara hume bhi toh btao...kahi tum raj ko le kar bhagne ki planing toh nahi kar rahi ... 😉 let me tell u try bhi mat karna jaanse mar dugi 😡 wo sirf mera h 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi
the up is really good
so Naina became violent for not finding the tabiz and in order to stop her Raj got a slap hehe
Naveen find out that she is non other than his sister whom he lost in his childhood
but what Raj said can also be true
hmm getting interesting
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
After a vry long time new ff...
Awsm Superb
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
so Naina became violent for not finding the tabiz and in order to stop her Raj got a slap hehe
Naveen find out that she is non other than his sister whom he lost in his childhood
but what Raj said can also be true
hmm getting interesting
plz cont soon and pm me

thanks ria 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonadeepa

After a vry long time new ff...

Awsm Superb


thanks buddy 😃
hooe u like future parts also
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Posted: 9 years ago




**** Ek Anjana Rishta****




Part 5


Jab Naveen ne reports khol kar padhe toh uske chahre se kuch samjh he nahi aa raha tha ki report positive hain ya negative

Sab behsabar khade the Naveen se report ka haal jane ke liye



Raj aage aa kar Naveen ke samne khada hua


Raj : kya hua Naveen... Reports me kya hain


Naveen : (suddenly hugged raj) woh behen hain mere raj...wo mere gudiya hai...reports positive aayi hain...oh! God i m so happy raj .
...(with joyful tears) main khushhi se pagal na ho jau raj ...aaj mujhe mere behen wapas mil gayi...



Yeh sunn kar sabhi khush ho gaye ...par Naveen ki khushi ka toh koi thikana he nahi tha ...uske hontho ke muskan aur aakho me khushi ke aasu the ...



Huda : (happily )wah sir ji iska matlab ab toh conform ho gaya ki woh apni behen he hain ...iss baat pe toh party hone chaheyi


Sab huda ko dekh rahe the ...

Naveen : (smiling) mil jayegi party phele main mere behen se toh mill lu ..


Yeh kah kar Naveen apni family photo le aur infirmary ki taraf bhag gaya ...

Aur uske saath saath sab gaye




In infirmary



Naina uth toh gayi thi par kisi soch me gum thi

Naveen jab uski pas aaya toh woh thodi dar se gayi aur uth ke baith gayi


Naveen uske pas ja kar baith gaya

Naveen ne naina ko apni family photo de...
Naina ne jab woh photo dekhni toh uske chahre pe ek alag he Khushu cha gayi...wo Naveen ko ek nayi umeed bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi...


Naina ke maan me hazar sawal the par jase usse apni kismat pe yakeen na ho raha ho...



Naveen naina ki uljhano ko samjh raha tha
Naveen : (with tears) kaha chali gayi thi gudiya...pata hain kitna dhundha maine tujhe ...kitna yaad kiya hain tujhe...tujhe kabhi mere yaad nahi aayi Kya...



Naina jase Naveen pe bharosa he nahi kar paa rahi thi ...aaj achanak itni badi khushi mill rahi thi ki usse khud pe bharosa he nahi ho raha tha...
Ki yeh sach hain ya sapna...



Naveen bohat pyaar se naina ke ser pe haath rakhte hue


Naveen : ase kya dekh rahi hain gudiya pahchana nahi mujhe...pahchanegi bhi kase kitne bade ho gaye hain hum dono ... Yaad hain tujhe main kase teri choti khecha karta tha (thoda sa haste hue) aur tu jaa kar papa se mere shikayat karti thi ...kitne ache din the na woh ...(with tears) phir tu chali gayi sari khushiya he chali gayi humare zindagi se kuch bhi nahi bacha ...(apne aasu puchte hue) par ab tu aa gayi hain na dekhna sab phele jasa ho jayega ...


Naveen naina ke taraf dekh raha tha par naina kuch bol he nahi rahi thi...

Waha Khade sabhi bas naina ke muh se kuch sunna chahte the par woh khch nahi bol rahi thi...bas ek tak Naveen ko dekhe ja rahi thi...



Naveen naina ki khamoshi se bohat hurt ho raha tha ki ab bhi naina kuch bol nahi rahi




Shalini : Naveen usse thoda waqt do abhi wo sadme me hai ...kafi shocking hain uske liye yeh sab



Naveen : (with tears) par shalini ...


Sabko haran karte hue ..
Naina ne apna haath badha kar Naveen ke chahre pe apna haath phera...


(Guys aap logo ne kaho na pyaar hai movie me ritik aur uske bhai wala sceen dekha hoga same wasa he sceen h yeh)


Sab naina ko dekh rahe the...


Naveen ne jase naina ki baat samjh le ho usne bhi ussi tarah naina ke chahre pe haath phera...ab naina ko yakeen sa ho gaya tha ki Naveen uska bhai he hai...



Naina jhat se Naveen ke gale lag gayi ...



Naina baccho ki tarah Naveen ke gale lag kar rone lagi .. ...Naveen ne bhi naina ko khas kar hug kiya hua tha mano usse naina ke phir se khone ka dar ho...




Naina : (crying loudly) kaha chale gaye the bhai mujhe chod kar...apko mere yaad nahi aayi...kitni dar gayi thi main apke bina ...kyu chale gaye the mujhe chod kar ...


Naveen : (consoling her) bohat pyaar se uske baalo pe haath pherte hue ...)bohat yaad aayi tere gudiya...bohat koshish ki tujhe dhundhne ki par tu mili he nahi ...tujhe lagta hain ki tera bhai kabhi bhul sakta hain tujhe ...



Naina jor jor se bas roye ja rahi thi Naveen ke gale lag kar...jase apna sara dard apni sare tadap khud se dor kar rahi ho khud ko unn dhukho se aazad karne ki koshish kar rahi ho...jo wo sahti aayi thi itne waqt se



Dono bohat der tak ase he dono ek dosre ke gale lage rote rahe ...



Waha pe sab khade yeh dekh rahe the sabhi ki aakho me aasu the ..sab unka dard Mehsoos kar rahe the ...



Naina Naveen ke gale lage lage he behosh ho gayi thi..


Naveen : (panicked) baccha ...kya hua tujhe ...tu thik hain na ..


Shalini aa kar naina ko bed par sula deti hai aur Naveen aur baki sabko room se bahar bhej dete hai...


Shalini naina ka check up karne lagti hai...



Bahar sabhi pareshan khade shalini ka wait kar rahe the ...Naveen ki toh jase jaan he nikal rahi ho ...wo ab kisi kimat pe naina ko khona nahi chahta tha...

Raj abhimanyu dono Naveen ko samhal rahe the...



Shalini bahar aati hain


Naveen : thik toh hain na woh shalini ...kya hua usse ase kase behosh ho gayi woh...



Shalini : relax Naveen wo thik hain ...bas weakness ki wajah se behosh hue hain ...thodi der me hosh aa jayega usse


Yeh sunn kar Naveen ki jaan me jaan aayi...



Alekh : chalo phir toh acha hain apun log ab uska mast khayal rakhe gay ...jaldi thik ho jayegi woh ...aap fikar mat karo sir




Naveen : (little smile) haa bilkul ...


Raj : cadets ab aap logo ko yaha se jana chaheyi isse phele ki major nair apko ulti duniya ki saza de de...



Pooja : hayi rabba ...humare mobile me yeh muchad naam ka contact save he kyu kiya hai bhagwan ji ne...



Abhimanyu : (with smile) taki aap apni training pe jada dhayan de naki mobile pe...



Yudi : guys hume ab chalana chaheyi warna sach me bc ka mc hume nahi chodega wase bhi light out hone wali hai ...


Alekh : phatu sala ...chal



Aur phir sare cadets waha se chale jate hai ...


Naveen kuch kahne wala hota hain ki tabhi ek orderly aa kar kahta hain ki brig ne Naveen ko bulaya hain aur Naveen brig chandok se milne chala jata hain...



Shalini raj abhimanyu teeno mess me jate h coffee peene ...



Naina behosh the ...


In mess


Shalini : (tensed) mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha ...ab aage kya hoga ...



Abhimanyu : kya mtlab hain apka shalini ...aap khush nhi hain kya naina ke milne se...




Shalini : (angrily) main kyu nahi khush hogi naina ke milne se ...maine dekha hai Naveen ko apne behan ke liye tadpate hue...uski aakho ka woh suna pan maine dekha hain ...main bohat khush hu par dar bhi rahi hu dono ke liye...



Abhimanyu : (coffee pete hue) dar ???kis baat ka dar



Shalini : abhi hume nahi pata naina itne waqt kaha thi ..kin logo le saath thi ...aur phir jin halato me wo mili hai ..(with pause) naina Naveen ke liye pareshani ban sakti hai ...mera matlab hain ki...



Raj : Main samjh raha hu shalini tum kya kahna chahti ho par abhi sahi waqt nahi hain in baato ka ...hume abhi sirf naina aur Naveen ko support karna hain aur kuch nahi ...unhe jarurat hain humare...aur yeh mat bhulu ki tum Naveen ki takat ho.. bohat pyaar karta hain woh tumse aur
agar tum asi baat karogi toh wo tut jayega



Shalini : tum sahi kah rahe ho raj main sirf Naveen ki he nahi naina ki bhi takat banugi bohat kuch jhela hai uss bacchi ne ...par raj main kya karu ab jab bhi main Naveen se uss ladki ke bare me kuch baat karugi toh wo sirf woh ladki nahi hogi balki naina hogi Naveen ki choti behen...kase baat karugi uske bare me main kase btaugi Naveen ko naina ki halata ...woh bardash nahi kar payega ..




Naveen : (entering in mess)
happily ) kya baat ho rahi hai


Aaj Naveen ke chahre ki chamak he kuch aur thi ...aj se phele itna khush kabhi nahi dekha tha kisne Naveen ko ...



Raj : (changing the topic) kya baat hain Naveen aaj toh tere khush chupaiye nahi chup rahi hain...



Naveen : (happily) chupana bhi kon chahta hain iss khushi ko ...main toh soch raha hu ek grand party rakhu mere gudiya ke milne ki khuski me...



Abhimanyu : haa haa jrur rakheye kisne roka hain apko



Shalini : (seriously) bilkul nahi koi party nahi hogi



Raj : shalini tum yeh kya kah rahi ho ...tumhe samjhaya tha na maine abhi...


Shalini : arre tum log galat samjh rahe ho ...main sirf yeh kah rahi hu ki jab tak naina puri tarah thik nahi ho jati ase party karna sahi nahi hain... Woh abhi bhi shock me hain usse thoda waqt chaheyi...



Naveen : ok jasa tum kaho par maine decied kar liye hain aaj se mere behan mere room me shift ho rahi hain bas...



Shalini : par Naveen...



Naveen : nahi mjjhe kuch nahi sunna mere hote hue mere behen kisi infirmary me nahi rahegi woh apne bhai ke pas rahegi ...main uska khayal rakhuga ...wase bhi ab toh BC ne bhi permission de de hai...




Raj : kya mtlab ...



Abhimanyu : aakhir bulaya kyu tha bc ne apko



Naveen : bc ne mujhe gudiya ke bare me baat karne ke liye bulaya tha ...wo jana chahte the ki jo news unhone sunni hain woh sach hai ya nahi ...maine unhe sab bata diya aur DNA reports bhi dekha diye ...wo khush the ki itne saalo baad mjhe mere behen wapas mil gayi hain ...aur issi khushi me unhone mujhe pure one weak ki leave de hai... Taki main apni gudiya ke saath waqt beta saku aur ache se uska khayal rakh saku...




Shalini : wow...great one weak leave ...ab toh tum aram se naina ke saath waqt bita sakte ho



Raj : (making sad face) haa aur inki classes bhi hume lene hogi


Naveen : (cheerfully) koi shak


Phir sab coffee pee kar wapas infirmary me jate hain...
Naina ko ab hosh aane laga tha ...


Jab wo uthi toh room me koi nahi tha ...usse samjh nahi aa raha tha ki jo usne dekha tha jo uske saath hua tha wo sach tha ya sapna ...

Wo pareshan idhar udhar dekh rahi thi ki tabhi room me Naveen aur baki sab bhi aa gye ...naina Naveen ko dekh rahi thi par kuch bol nahi rahi thi ...wo ab bhi kash mo kash me thi ki jo hua wo sach tha ya sapna ...



Naveen uski uljhan ko samjhte hue aage aa kar bohat pyaar se uska haath apne haatho me lete hue kaha



Naveen : uth gayi gudiya ...neend toh ache se aayi na



Naveen ke gudiya kahte he jase naina ki saase tham gayi ho ...ab usse laga ki jo hua tha woh sach tha koi sapna nahi woh sach me apne bhai ke saath khadi hain




Naina : (hugged him) bhaiya please mujhe chod kar mat jana (rote hue) ...mujhe dar lagta hain woh logo phir se mujhe le jaye gay ...mujhe mare gay mere saath phir se woh sab kare gay please bhaiya mujhe nahi jana please mujhe khud se dor mat karna ...



Naveen ki aakho me aasu aa gaye apni behan ko yuh dar ke uske aage girgirate dekh kar ... Naveen ka dil he janta tha ki naina ko ase dekh kar kya beet rahi thi us par abhi wo sirf naina ko delasa he de saka tha ...


Naveen : (hugged her tightly) koi kahi nahi le jayega mere gudiya ko main hu na baccha ...apni bhai par bharosa rakh kuch nahi hoga tujhe


Raj abhimanyu aur shalini dono ko ase ek saath dekh kar bohat khush the...


Abhimanyu atmosphere ko light karne ke liye


Abhimanyu : arre bhai koi hume bhi milwa de apni ek lauti behen se ...


Abhi ki baat sunn kar Naveen naina ek dosre se laga hoti hai..


Naveen : (smiling) bilkul abhi aao main apni choti se gudiya se tum sabko milwata hu



Jase he raj abhimanyu naina ke taraf badhte hai woh dar ke Naveen ke peche chup jati hai...
Yeh dekh kar raj abhimanyu wahi ruk gaye...



Naveen naina ko samhalte hue



Nav : baccha dar kyu rahi hain ...yeh dost hain mere tujhe yaad nahi inhone bhi toh tujhe bachane me madad ki thi mere...


Par naina Naveen ke peche he chupi hue thi woh raj abhimanyu ke pas nahi aane de rahi thi



Shalini : arre wo dar rahi hain ...tum dono se ..wahi dor se he apna introduction de do tum dono


Phir Naveen phele abhimanyu ko naina se milwata hai ...par naina koi khas react nahi karti



Phir Naveen raj ko milwata hain


Naveen : gudiya yeh mere dost hai rajveer ...



Naina raj ka naam sunte he uski aakho me dekhti hai dono ki nazre milti hain jaha ek taraf naina apni nazre turant jhuka leti hain wahi raj bas ek tak usse dekhe ja raha tha ...


Naveen : wase toh iska naam rajveer hai par hum raj bulate hai ...yeh second best cadet pass out hua tha kma se ...captain hai hope jaldi major bhi ban jayega ...bohat kabil officer hain raj ...


Naveen ase he bolte ja raha tha jaha naina raj se najre chura rahi thi wahi raj bas ek tak usse dekhe ja raha tha
naina raj ke yuh dekhne se thoda ajeeb mehsoos kar rahi thi... yeh baat abhimanyu ne notice ki aur raj ke halki se kohni (elbow) mar kar hosh me laya ...
raj apne ase behavior se khud he sharminda ho raha tha...


Naveen : chalo bhai ab toh tum mere dono best friend se mil gayi ho ...ab main ek bar tumhe tumhari doctor se bhi milwa deta hu



Naveen : (shalini ki traf ishara karte hue) baccha yeh hai tumhari doctor... Dr.shalini ..kma me doctor hai yeh aur wo mere ...

Naveen ko samjh nahi aata ki woh kase apni choti behen se yeh kahi ke wo uski girlfriend hai...



Naveen :... Wo mereee...mere...dost hai


Naveen ko kuch samjh nahi aata toh wo shalini ko apni dost bata deta



Shalini jaha Naveen ko ghur rahi thi ki usne naina ko btaya kyu nahi ki wo naina ki hone wali bhabhi hai wahi raj aur abhimanyu ...Naveen ka sorry wala face dekh kar apni hasi control karne ki koshish kar rahe the ...




Shalini : (ignoring Naveen) chalo naina apna dinner kar lo..phir tumhe dawa bhi toh lene hain na ...



Shalini naina ka haath pakad kar usse le jane lagte hain par naina ne kas kar Naveen ka haath pakda tha ...woh ek pal ke liye bhi Naveen ko khud se dur nahi hone dena chahti thi


Naveen : (understanding naina) shalini ek kam karte hain ..tum mere gudiya ke sare medicine le kar mere room me chalo hum wahi dinner kare gay


(Naina ki taraf dekhte hue) wase bhi ab toh mere gudiya ko rahna bhi toh mere pas mere room me he hain ...



Naveen ne naina ko ek smile ke saath dekh aur usse side se hug karke thoda support dete hue apne room me le gaya ...


Naina jab Naveen ke room me gayi toh woh har ek chiz bohat dhayan se dekh rahi thi ...mano uss kamre ke har ek chiz se apna rishta jodne ki koshish kar rahi ho...



Naveen : (hold her from shoulder) ab se yeh tera kamra hain ...



Naina ki nazar table pe rakhe ek photo frame pe gayi ...
Naveen naina ki family photo thi woh



Naina wo photo apni haath me leti hain aur bohat pyaar se apni ugliyo se photo ko chuti hai ...uski ankho me ek chamak thi photo dekh kar



Naveen aage aa kar naina ke samne khada ho jata hai ...

Naveen : (with smile) ase kya dekh rahi hain gudiya...



Naina : (with little smile) bhai maa papa kaha hain ...mujhe milna hain unse



Yeh sunn kar Naveen ke chahre ka rang udd gaya ...woh ab kya btayega naina ko ki kin halato me woh dono aanath ho gaye ...
Kase btayi ki uske maa papa ab nahi rahe iss duniya me ...


Dor khadi shalini ne Naveen ko kuch bhi na btane ka ishaa kiya ...naina abhi ek aur shock lene ke liye taiyar nahi thi...



Naveen : (nazre churate hue ) gudiya maa papa bilkul thik hain ...tu yeh chod chal thoda aaram karle thak gayi hogi na ...




Naina bade dhayan se Naveen ke chahre ko dekh rahi thi...phir usne kuch asa bola ki Naveen aur baki haran ho gayi



Naina : (straight face) mar gaye na dono ...(Naveen aur baki sab haran ho gaye ki naina ko kase pata chala )


Naina : (ek kadam Naveen ke pas aate hue) mere wajah se mar gaye na dono ...maine chin liye na maa papa ko apse ...sab mere wajah se hua na bhai ...woh dono mar gaye naa


Naina yeh sab bina kisi emotions ke kah rahi thi ek berukhi se thi uske aawaz me ek sunna pan tha uski aakho me...



Naveen : nahi baccha ...asa kuch nahi hain ...tu asa soch bhi kase sakti hain ki tu zimadder hain in sabki ...(cupped her face) kuch nahi hua tere wajah se samjhi ...



Naina Naveen ke muh se aaj itne waqt baad apne liye ""baccha"" sunn kar emotional ho gayi aur jhat se Naveen ke gale lag kar rone lagi...



Naina : (rote hue) toh kyu chale gay woh hume chod ke ..main toh phir se akele ho gayi na bhai...



Naveen : (hugged her ) kisne kaha tu akele hain ...haa main hu na tere saath tera bhai ...toh tu akele kase ho sakti hain ...

Naveen yuhi kuch der naina ke chup karata rahta hain ...


Abhimanyu : (situation ko lite karte hue) arre bhai aap dono ka toh bar bar yeh milna milana start ho jata hai...hume bhukh lagi hai koi please hum bechare ke bare me bhi sochle...



Naveen naina abhimanyu ko dekhne lagte hai...


Raj : haa chalo kha lo warna chahan sahab humara ser kha jaye gay ...

Raj ke bolte he naina uski taraf dekhti hain par jase he raj usse dekhta hai woh apni nazre jhuka leti hain ...




Shalini : haa bhai ab toh mujhe bhi bhukh lagi hain ...



Naveen : (teasingly) tumhe bhuk kab nahi lagti shalini ...


Shalini Naveen ko ek danger wala look deti hain aur woh chup ho jata hain ...naina yeh sab notice kar rahi thi...




Sab baithe kar dinner kar rahe the aur Naveen woh toh bade pyaar se khud apne haatho se naina ko khana khela raha tha ...aur naina baccho ki tarah bade pyaar se kha rahi thi...



Dinner karte hue sab kuch na kuch bol kar naina ko hasane ki koshish me lage the ...

Par naina kuch bhi react nahi kar rahi thi ...par haa wo Naveen ko ek pal ke liye bhi chodne ko taiyar nahi thi usne Naveen ka ek haath kas kar pakda hua tha ...



After dinner

Shalini naina ko uski medicine deti hain ...


Shalini : chalo naina main tumhe sula deti hu ab tum thak gayi hogi na ...


Par naina toh naa he Naveen ka haath chod rahi thi na he kuch bol rahi thi ...bas ek nazar Naveen ko dekh rahi thi jase usse dar ho ki agar wo soyi toh Naveen gayab ho jayega ...


Naveen : gudiya jaa soo jaa aaram se main yahi hu kahi nahi jane wala ...( Naveen ne ek pyari se smile ke saath bola )


Naina Naveen ka haath chod kar shalini ke saath Naveen ke bedroom me jane lagi ...


Par phir kuch soch kar woh wahi ruk gayi ...

Naina halka sa Naveen ki taraf mudi...Naveen usse he dekh raha tha ...



Naina : aap mujhe story suna kar nahi sulaye gay jase bachpan me sunaya karte the ...pako pata hai na mujhe neend nahi aati apki stories sunne bina...

( naina ne itne pyaar se bola ki Naveen ki khushi ka koi thikana nahi raha uski behen ko aaj bhi uski stories yaadhai...aaj bhi woh unhe stories ko sunna chahti hain ...)


Naveen naina ke pass aata hai ...

Naveen : (happily) bilkul sunauga ...(to shalini) tum rahne do mai mere princess ko khud sula duga ...

Yeh kah kar Naveen naina ka haath pakad kar apne room me le gaya ...


Jate jate Naveen naina se punchne laga



Naveen : konsi wali story sunn hain tujhe yeh toh bata ...



Naina : (with little smile) mere favorite wala ...


Yeh sunn kar Naveen aur bhi jada khush ho gaya ...


Shalini Abhimanyu aur Raj bahar baithe Naveen ka wait kar rahe the ...


Kuch der bad Naina ko sula kar Naveen bahar aaya




Abhimanyu : toh kasa laga aaj itne waqt baad phir se story sunna kar ...


Naveen : bohat acha ...par sach kahu main toh nervous ho gaya tha ki main ab sunn pauga ki nahi ..ab practice jo nahi rahi mujhe



Raj : (teasing Naveen n shalini) arre arre Naveen practice jari rakho kyuki kuch waqt baad tum khud apne baccho ko story sunate nazar aane wale ho...kyu shalini sahi kaha na ...



Raj ki baat sunn kar shalini aur Naveen tamatar ki tarah lal ho gaye...


Par phir shalini ko kuch yaad aaya ...


Sahlini : (making face) mujhe kya pata main toh sirf friend hu naa


Yeh sunn kar Naveen ko khatre ki ghati sunai dene lagi usse uska futur khatre me nazar aa raha tha aur dosre taraf raj abhimanyu yeh scene enjoy kar rahe the...



Naveen apni jagah se uth kar shalini ke bagal me baith gaya ...

Naveen : arre baby ...tum toh


Tabhi Raj aur abhimanyu bole


Raj &abhimanyu : ooohhh!!!! Baby...


Iss baat ke shalino sharma gayi par Naveen ke aage jahir nahi hone diya ...


Naveen ne ek deadly look diya dono ko...mano kah raha ho dekh luga tumhe ...



Naveen : (to shalini) baby ab majn kya kahta ki tum mere girlfriend ho ...(making face) kya izzat rah jati mere ...meri behen ke samne ..abhi abhi toh mile hain woh mujhe ..sochti ki uska bhai kitna tez hain phele se he uski liye bhabhi dhund le ...



Shalini : (angrily) acha ???? Phele baat girlfriend nahi hu tumhari fiance hu main ..kuch mahino me hum shadi karne wale hain ..shayad aap bhul gaye hain ...




Abhimanyu aag me ghee dalte hue

Abhimanyu : shalini samhal kar hume toh lagta hai ki Naveen aapse pecha chudane ke chakar me hain ...



Jab abhimanyu aag me ghee dal raha ho toh raj kase peche rah sakta hai ...wo ussi aag se apne haath sekne me lag gaya ...



Raj : (with naughty expression) mujhe bhi kuch asa he lag raha hain chauhan sahab ... Kahi Naveen shalini ko damm karne ke chakar me toh nahi hain naa ...usse delhi wali ladki ke chakar me ...



Yeh sunn kar shalini ki toh aakhe gol gol hona shuru ho gayi ...delhi wali ladki ???? Ab yeh kon hain ...shalini toh bas Naveen ko pareshan karne ke liye natak kar rahi thi ...par ab yeh kya nayi kahani shuru ho gayi




Dosre taraf Naveen ki toh saase he ruk gayi...janab flirty hain ek no.ke jaha ladki dekhi wahi shure delhi headquarters me bhi yeh shuru ho gaye the ...Par nothing serious aadat se mazbur hain ...Naveen kitna bhi flirt karle par pyaar toh woh sirf apni shalini baby se he karta hain ...



Shalini apni gol gol aakhe kar ke Naveen ko ghur rahi thi aur Naveen bechare ki toh halat kharab thi...



Naveen : (to raj abhi) saalo kutto ...ghar basa nahi ki ujadne aa gaye ...dafa ho jao yaha se isse phele ki dhake maar kar nikalu tumhe ...

Naveen : (to shalini ) with puppy face ))) baby i love u...n only u sachi me...



Shalini : (angrily) don't call me baby samjhe ...



Raj : (maze lete hue) sunna nahi tumne don't call her baby...



Naveen : kamino tum dono abhi bhi yahi baithe ho ..kaha na dafa ho yaha se ...mere basta hua ghar tum dono mil kar ujad do gaye...


Abhimanyu : (making sad face) dekha shalini yeh kase hume be izzat kar raha hai ...jab ki hume toh bas phikar hain apki ...



Naveen ka toh maan kar raha tha dono ko jaan se mar de par bechara shalini ke dar se chup chap baitha tha


Shalini : tum un dono ko kyu kuch kah rahe ho mujhse baat karo ...kon hai wo delhi wali ...tabhi main sochu ki jabse tum delhi se aaye ho mujhe time he nahi de rahe ho ...phele laga naina ko kar pareshan ho par nahi tum toh uss delhi wali ke chakar me ho...



Ase he yeh sensela chalta raha shalini Naveen ko khare khoti sunati rahi aur Naveen bechara usse manane me laga raha ...aur samne baithe raj abhimanyu iss sceen ka pura maza le rahe the...

Naveen bech bech me dono ko deadly look de raha tha ...




At the end shalini ko kisi tarah Naveen ne mana he liya ...


Hiii guys important note
Main kuch months ke liye out of town ja rahi hu due to my studies... So plz may be i will not be able to send u pm...
Toh plz koi bura mat mana ...
Aap log khud he every Saturday or sunday mere update check kar lena coz m Saturday ya sunday me he update karugi once in weak ...hope u all guys understand my problem... I only need ur love n support...i will wait fir ur feedbacks...



Lots of love Arti


End of part 5


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amazing update. naveen n shalini hahaha sahi tha
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No problem have fun
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Continue soon
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