***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread

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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Fantastic concept

Waiting for next post and naina's introduction

continue soon and thanks for the pm

btw whats your name

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hey dear good start. 👏 👏 👏

Continue soon

A suggestion for you that pls work hard on spelling errors. 😊 😊 😊

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janu2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

gr8 start...

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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1029644

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nice start 😊 ...continue soon

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Nice story..

Get start..

But where is Rajveer's Naina... U didn't mention anything about her...

Plzzz Continue soon...

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Milleegarg

@Milleegarg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

1st of oll thanxx for the new ff dear
U r such a swthrt
Bt 1 problm h ff pe
Yar tumne sabko intro kiya naina ko kaha chor diya yar
Thats nt good
Jav naina hi nai h toh bechara raj kya karega 😭
Usse v le aao jaldi se
Waiting 4 naina

Luv
Millee 😛

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

so story is abt Anjana Rishta...
Anjana Rishta of Captain Rajveer wid his frnds..? Or with his nation.. But wait a moment where is our herione Naina.. Hope Anjana Rishta is with her too..

Herione nu bulaawo...
Thanx for d pm dear..