OS : Unconditional (A Love Story)

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Now leaving to comment for others...!!

You will be seeing me more or less but around.

Spamming or Not I don't know, though.

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

WOw so awesome Abhi👏👏👏

Loved it a lot

Chottu ,u have crafted it wonderfully,U have learnt a lot 😃😃

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Nripendra

@Abhisheking

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose
WOw so awesome Abhi👏👏👏
Loved it a lot
Chottu ,u have crafted it wonderfully,U have learnt a lot 😃😃

Thank You...😳

Sab Aap hi ka shikhaya hai... 🤣

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Nripendra

@Abhisheking

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

@sanju thanks for spamming... 🤣🤣

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

No need of thanks...!!!

Dono ka kaam hogaya..Mere post badh gaye, tere pages!!!

Ik Ik I am so Modest.

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Aww such a romantic shot ! First shot of superman , Congo for the first story ! 🥳 You have done a great job here ! First shot and this perfect ? 😲 You have got a lot of talent down there 👍🏼

Starting with the the characters . Just loved both of them . Meghana is a very cute charter and her and Yash 's love story is a very cute one ! 😳

Their love scenes . Aww and Yash is so cute. And the star ! I can totally imagine that one . 😆

Love the twist you brought there . And Yash with some other girl , it was like 🥱 I was keep chanting the *all men are the same* while reading that . 😆 But this shot is written by a boy so probably girl is at the villain stake 🤣

loved the perfect ending . 👍🏼

Anyways ! This is a great step to your writing career in IF 😆 and I m damn serious about that 🤓 keep writing more and more . Will look forward for many such stories in the future . 😃 Superman now time to fly towards writing from graphics . 😆

Sam

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Lepzy

@Leprechaun

Moderator

+ 23

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

The way of writing, the way of presenting and the whole write up...Kudos!! Nice job. From the comments I can learn its your first attempt. Its an awesome piece.

But my POV is psychologically an orphan that too a girl will be more self protective. I guess or so far I have encountered. This one was like "What the?" moment for me.

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Ranjini

@MFRanjini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

It's very cute love story Abhi, loved reading it ❤️

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Nripendra

@Abhisheking

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun
Aww such a romantic shot ! First shot of superman , Congo for the first story ! 🥳 You have done a great job here ! First shot and this perfect ? 😲 You have got a lot of talent down there 👍🏼
Starting with the the characters . Just loved both of them . Meghana is a very cute charter and her and Yash 's love story is a very cute one ! 😳
Their love scenes . Aww and Yash is so cute. And the star ! I can totally imagine that one . 😆
Love the twist you brought there . And Yash with some other girl , it was like 🥱 I was keep chanting the *all men are the same* while reading that . 😆 But this shot is written by a boy so probably girl is at the villain stake 🤣
loved the perfect ending . 👍🏼
Anyways ! This is a great step to your writing career in IF 😆 and I m damn serious about that 🤓 keep writing more and more . Will look forward for many such stories in the future . 😃 Superman now time to fly towards writing from graphics . 😆
Sam

Such a lengthy comment!!😲

Thank you for all those kind words. 😳

And ya,I always wanted to learn writing...😃

@edna di and ranjini di thank you...😃