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BUCHIANU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

superb update...khushi is absolutely right in her stand...anjali is acting selfish..everything shld b perfect in her world...

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

loved the update.. surprised that Khushi confided with him of all people..

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afsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Life actually has very bad sense of humour

I agree

I hope she gets strength to go through this

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

nice part

arnav should have asked khushi directly to forgive him and to marry her

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maina95131

@maina95131

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Best update of this SS...you made my Wednesday morning!!!!

Anjali and Nani will do anything for their chote...I agree with Nani at least give him a chance.

Khushi is also justified that the way he went about it was wrong...how can u give a person like that a chance...

But everyone deserves a chance...hope she gives it to him but makes him work to regain her trust

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Can I give you a big big hug?

I loved the entire depiction of Khushi's disappointment, of knowing that at the end of the day no matter what Arnav did to her, and no matter how much the Raizadas were critical of his behaviour, he was and is their own and they will look out for him.

A lesson that is only natural, but something that she needed to learn - the last of her naivety that she needed to loose.

What I loved was that Khushi did not cave in, at least not immediately.

Though I must confess I was a wee bit dissappointed that she gave in to a momentary weakness and sought comfort from Arnav and let him hold her. She is essentially sending out a message that she still cares for him and that he still affects her despite what he had done. ...then it seems futile to get upset at Nani and Anjali's betrayal. ..because if you can forget and seek refuge in his arms, can you really blame the other two for wanting you to?

I admired Anjali honesty about the fact that her brother would come first for her every time even in comparision to her husband, no matter what ever her reasons. That should tell Khushi that she need not feel so bad about their duplicity. The woman would chose her brother over her husband, then who is Khushi? What it says about Shyam and Anjali's relationship is a different thing all together

I am so glad that you have not made Khushi capitulate just because she was asked. Raizada has a long way to go before she even begins to think of forgiving him.

And frankly, it is not about anyone else's pleas, Arnav has to ask for and earn her forgiveness. Forgiveness is not something that is obtained by proxy!!!!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 9 years ago

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Arshi2503

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Nice one.
Anjali and Nani were asking for a second chance to
Their chotey.Anjali's explanation about her unbounded
love for Arnav is beautifully written.
Though I am in favour of Arnav's repentance,
but true to ASR style 😉
Thanks for the pm

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Divya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

This was such an emotional update.. Its clearly understood that nani and anjali want their chotay's happiness.. their actions are justifiable. .. Khushi is so right.. just bcoz they ask her to forgive him that doesn't mean she should.. And I'm glad.. she didn't agreed completely. . khushi is definitely melting. . i feel like khushi's reactions are so rushed.. I really want arhi to be together. . bt not so soon.. khushi should genuinely forgive him for herself not for others.. I feel like anjali and nani are asking her to forgive him so soon.. instead of them it should be arnav asking for his forgiveness. . still he didn't. . he knows he hurt her immensely, then y is he not asking for her forgiveness. .?! is it too hard.. This arnav is just playing around instead of making things right. . i want him to ask for khushi's forgiveness. .Then too .. its upto khushi to forgive him..I for once want to see arnav waiting for her..

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honey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Yr its so unfair on their part to pressurized khushi for giving second chance to arnav I hate anjali right now so much

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peachygirl

@peachygirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

I'm in love with this story!!!

For a change, a strong and stubborn khushi and a repenting arnav! Why can't anjali be better too?? Even after everything, she wants khushi to give him a chance? Just because he is her chotte?? How pathetic is that???

And I love this nani the most!!! Asking khushi to consider giving him a second chance rather than assorting to emotional blackmail like anjali. Not that her argument wasn't emotional! But it was quite rational and I liked her approach..

Coming to your first 7 chapters, they were splendid!! Each and every character has a depth and strong personality!

A special mention of ram and his wife for such cute match making pursuits!! Awww, aren't they too adorable?!

Sim, pam and Lisa:@ Sheetal too!! Cut out of the same cloth.. WITCHES!!!

And arnav:@:@:@

Your payash pair is making me go all awww!!! Especially akash's kiss<3 He's quite the charmer, isn't he?? Atlest better than his bull headed brother! And his conversation with khushi was the most enjoyable one and had me in splits!

I could almost relate myself to your payal and that's why I love her too!!

Lastly, khushi.. THE KHUSHI!!! Her family's backbone! Each and every act of hers has been inspiring and appreciable!! I'm in awe of this girl's mental strength! Right from the beginning to where she urged shyam to sort his issues out with arnav and taking her stand in front of anjali, I love this girl dammit!!!

Bye for now, for My rantings will continue with each chapter of yours throughout this journey:-D

And not to forget, your writing is amazing!!!

Edited by peachygirl - 9 years ago