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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Itz going superb manas! Like you have balanced well the interaction between 4 pairs of main characters. It's surely a tough thing. I personally like shrutkirti. All are slowly falling in love with their destined partners. When would ram's turn come ?


Ram Nd Maithili you have to wait it will be mind blowing
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Posted: 9 years ago

thank u Rakhi di😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

Superb update dear...
Thanks for pm dear...


thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Awesome,awesome,awesome going manas!!!loved every bit of it...the way each n every character turned out to be.I really found Bharat n Mandvi adorable.The innocence shared by kreeti n shatrugan has its own charm.And wat to say more,this concept of balancing love n career life is brilliant (its a serious issue in real life).Henceforward i see a lot of twists coming up!

Laksh-Urmi n Ram-Maithili have alwys been my favourite!:)
Sorry for late comments...


thank u mili😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

Nice update manas , you are raising the accurate questions of the nordern times
Definitely can we skip pur personal life for private lives ?
Well raised , well expressed
Shatrugans dillemma well displayed
Keep writing


will witness more difference of opinions😊
thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Had to read so many updates...finally read all of them😊

I am at loss of words to describe this wonderful piece of writing.

It's fantastic...awesome😳

👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for the PM.

Please do continue.
Edited by NEIRAlover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

PART THIRTEEN


DOES DREAMS EVER COME TRUE:

Manvi first calls Maithili and tell her that she proposed Bharat and now they are in a relationship Maithili congrats her, Urmi and Keerthi are shocked to over hear her conversation after she disconnects her phone they start beating her with pillows. Manvi says "Guys I am sorry I should have told you earlier but this realisation is all of the sudden." They all discuss about what happened. Soon after Maithili cuts Manvis phone call receives Rams's call, she lifts the phone and say hello, Ram first say sorry to call her at the late hour. Maithili replies "Its ok, Ram is everything ok??" Ram replies "i wanted to talk to you regarding our friends, now Manvi..Maithili interrupts in between "i know about Manvi and Bharat and I know you are so tensed how we will balance everything ? But don't worry Ram all are our friends are intelligent enough and are capable of taking their own decisions. We should understand them and give them some space." Ram is surprised "How did you know that i will ask you the same question, shall we warn our friends?" Its so simple Ram Maithili replies "you really care for your friends a lot, I realised it when you are about to tell me of Manvi and Bharat." Ram replies "What's wrong as a friend if i warn them?" Maithili replies " Ram we can't force our opinions on our friends they will surely join in achieving the dream of their life we should give them some time to tackle the changes in their own personal lives. Ram tomorrow you are not going to give any advice to them they will slowly come back to their routine." Ram says "ok Maithili i think you are right i will not discuss about this with them and thank you so much for helping me out when I am confused." Maithili replies "Ram you need not thank me, did you forget that we are friends please don't embarrass me saying sorry, first i too felt the way as you are thinking now, but then i just thought in their point of view. Don't over think now go to sleep good night. Ram says 'Good night Mithili" and hangs up the phone.

Laksh and Urmi are on phone the entire night talking random things. Manvi tries her favourite dress given by her mom as she is so happy,

Both are busy in their own world. Keerthi thinks to herself "what happened to my friends they don't seem the same anymore???Urmi our lady gangster who till yesterday disliked being girly is behaving like a girl and Manvi really has gone mad she had a bad accident yesterday and she needs rest but look at her as if nothing happened. I am confused why are they trying to change their own self??? I think i should shift to the hostel tomorrow or else i will go mad staying with these ones. Smiling Keerthi covers herself with the blanket and go to sleep.

Early in the morning Ram waits for his friends to begin their regular jog. Soon Shatrugan joins him but Barat Urmi and Laksh do not turn up. Maithili does her regular power yoga. After finishing their work out Ram and Shatrugan are talking Maithili sees them from terrace and come down to meet them.

At 7.30 Keerthi wakes up and is shocked to see Urmi fast asleep as she always goes on jog with others. There Maithili Ram and Shatrugan discuss about the first change in their friends behaviour.

All of them turn up at the college Laksh Bharat and Urmi say sorry to Ram and Shatrugan for not being at the morning jog session. Ram and Shatrugan replies "Its ok guys". The classes commence and heavy hectic schedule for the month is already pasted on the notice board in their class room and new professors introduce themselves and the lectures begin. Finally its lunch break all the friends have the lunch in the canteen. The second session beings after lunch break. Ram Maithili Shatrugan and Keerthi notice that their friends are missing from the class.

Laksh holds Urmi"s hand and they sneak out of the college campus and Bharat and Manvi too come out of college. Leaving their college both the couples ride off in their respective cars.

Urmi and Laksh reach Osho park in pune. The park is famous for different kinds of trees and is a nature spot. Urmi tells Laksh,"Laksh i am so exited this is the first time we bunked the college without even informing our friends." Laksh says " i should have atleast informed Ram what will they think about us. Urmi replies "oh! Come on Laksh they are our friends and of course they will understand us." Laksh asks Urmi" why are you behaving so girlish these days is it because of me, I am really surprised if a girl falls in love she will change herself to this extent." Urmi replies " if a girl falls in love then every thing matters to her is her boyfriend's happiness she will do anything for him." Laksh replies "is it "and pulls her close to him they are inches apart from each other lost in each others eyes. Laksh leans forward more closer to her Urmi can feel his hot breathe over her tender lips she suddenly pushes him back and runs away. Laksh follows her Urmi is all blushing.

Laksh calls out Urmi in a romantic voice to which she turn back and hug him tight. The nature over there witness a beautiful romance between Laksh and Urmi. They come more closer to each other and the waters underneath witness their illusion in them.

Image the song playing in background:

Mill jaao tum mill jaaye duniya

Aur na kuch chaahun main

Tu hi toh sab kuch mera

Aur na kuch jaanu main

Dil ki sadaa..

Sunle zara bekhabar

Sajde dil tujhe karta hai salamiyaan

Arziyaan, arziyaan..

Sunle dil ki arziyaan

Meri sab raahein hai tu

Chaahe jo bhi main chunu

Mere sang sang bas chale tu

Jo bhi sapne main bunoo.. (x2)

Pyaar tera hai bekhabar, besabar

Sajde dil tujhe karta hai salamiyaan

Arziyaan, arziyan..

Sunle dil ki arziyaan

Tera hi ab ho gaya main

Hoke tumse roobaroo

Main nahin hoon mere khud mein

Tu hi tu hai chaar su..

Dil ka mere tere bina na basar

Sajde dil tujhe karta hai salamiyaan

Arziyaan, arziyaan..

Sun le dil ki arziyaan

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osho garden Pune



Scene shifts to Vetal hill Pune. Manvi and Barat get down from their car. Bharat tells Manvi that this is the highest point in Pune city. Manvi asks Bharat "is it any place where lovers go for the first time. Vetal hill Bharat the place looks scary." Bharat replies "don't worry sweet heart i am here to save you"

Bharat and Manvi walk to the highest point, after sometime Manvi feels her head is paining. Bharat lifts her in his arms and climb the hill top. Manvi shouts I love Bharat so louldy as if whole pune can hear her. Bharat tells her Manvi "i am so lucky to have you in my life" Both of them hug each other. They both talk about random things sitting overthere till it is sunset. After sunset they travel back to home..

Imagine the song plays in background

Ishq ki dhooni roz jalaaye

Uthta dhuaan toh kaise chhupaaye

Ho akhiyaan kare jee hazoori

Maange hai teri manzoori

Kajra siyaahi, din rang jaaye

Teri kastoori rain jagaaye

Man mast magan, man mast magan

Bas tera naam dohraaye

Man mast magan, man mast magan

Tera naam dohraaye

Chaahe bhi toh bhool na paaye

Man mast magan, man mast magan

Bas tera naam dohraaye

Man mast magan, man mast magan

Tera naam dohraaye

Jogiya jog lagake

Makhra rog lagaa ke

Ishq ki dhooni roz jalaaye

Uthta dhuaan toh kaise chhupaaye

Man mast magan, man mast magan

Bas tera naam dohraaye

Man mast magan, man mast magan

Bas tera naam dohraaye

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Vetal hill Pune


Laksh and Urmi too reach home after their first ever romantic date. Its has been a beautiful day for both the couple.

To be continued...

Next Part:

Ram defines his opinion about true love to Maithili...

Will the friends try and resolve the differences in group

Distance gradually increase between friends...

Hope you guys liked it😊

Do share your comments

manas😊


Edited by sugunmanas - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NEIRAlover

Had to read so many updates...finally read all of them😊


I am at loss of words to describe this wonderful piece of writing.

It's fantastic...awesome😳

👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for the PM.

Please do continue.


thank u Aayushi for catching up with the story
u have to read one more part dear😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

this was just mind-blowing
I loved maithili to the core!
And I loved how Ram always looked towards maithili to clear out his confusions or share things!!
She was as usual adorable with her witty answers!!!

...captivating...great...phenomenal👏

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sugunmanas


Ram Nd Maithili you have to wait it will be mind blowing

Oh I can wait till eternity, sweetheart 😆 koi zaldbazi mat karna. I love slow burning romance. Let this be one such.

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