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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-28
[THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF HER DIARY]
inside caffe-
bade papa- tu yha baith main hmdono ke liye kuch le ke ata hu.
Naina- aap baitho na main lati hu
bade papa- nhi nhi tu gyi to phir apne doctor hone ka fayda uthayegi,isliye main hi launga.
Naina- ok baba aap hi jao.
Bp wha se jate hai or tbhi ek person wha aa jate hai.
Naina table pe baithi hoti hai .
Person - excuse me mam.
Naina- yes.
Person- can i sit here,actually wo ,yha sbhi tables full hai .
Naina- (idhar udhar dekhte hue)
sure .aap baith jaiye.
Person-thnk u actually main jyada time nhi lunga .wo main kisi ka wait kr rha hu.
Naina with a smile- no its ok koi problem nhi hai ,aap yha baith skte hai or ho skta hai aap jiska wait kr rhe ho uske aane tk koi table khali ho jaye.
Person smile,s .
Naina dekh rhi hoti hai ki person kafi nervous tha to wo finally puch hi leti hai.
Naina- don't mind ,aap kafi nervous dikh rhe ho,koi problem hai,khi apko ye to nhi lga rha na ki main apko table se bhagane wali hu
person finally relax with naina,s statement
person- actually ,main aaj usey propose krne wala hu.
Naina- really that's great ,phir aap nervous kyu.
Person- wo ,main kha se start kru
naina - first let me tell your name,ab aap mujhe itni important bat btane wale ho to nam to jan lene chahiye na
hii,m naina.and u
person - haha right,hii m vineet,
naina- ha to vineet ab btaiye aap .
Vineet- waise to hmari story bhot normal hai,main yha se thodi dur ek company mein kam krta hu to aksar lunch ke liye yha aaya krta tha.
Yhi per meri usse mulaqat hue thi.actually na ye table jis pr hm abhi baithe hai na mera fvrt hai or uska bhi ,to bs table share krte krte dosti ho gyi,or dosti kb pyar mein badal gyi pta hi nhi chla.
Naina- wow to kya wo bhi.
Vineet-pta nhi pr shayad ha,uski ankho mein dikhta hai,islilye finally aaj maine soch hi liya ab or wait nhi krunga.or isliye(wo apne pocket se ek rinf nikalata hai) ye laya hu ,agar usne accept kiya to main is duniya ka sbse khush insan bn jaunga or nhi to hm dost rhenge.
Naina ring apne hath mein leti hai.
Naina- its so preety vineet,or m sure ki wo accept jarrur kregi,ab agar koi itne pyar se puchega to kaun na khega.
(naina or vineet ki ye casual bat kisi ke liye casual nhi thi jo dur se dekh rha tha pr sun nhi pa rha tha pr jitna bhi usne dekha usey kuch or hi lga)
raj ye dekh rha hota hai ki tbhi alekh aa jata hai.
Alekh- maine tujhe pure mall mein dhoonda or tu yha khda hai wo bhi bahar ,
raj- don't pay attention to alekh and just look inside the caffe or ,and finally left
Alekh- are isse kya hua raj sun to kha ja rha hai,
then he looked inside or wo bhi thoda shock ho jata hai.
Alekh- to isliye yha devdas bnke khda tha ye pr ye naina yha kya kr rhi hai or ye kaun hai.
Ander jake puchu kya,puch hi leta hu.
Alekh naina ke pass jata hai and taped on her shoulder naina turn her face.
Naina- alekh tu yha,
Alekh- ha main to yha kuch kam se aya tha tujhe dekha to socha mil leta hu ,pr tu yha kaise or ye kaun hai(indicated toward vineet and gave a smile)
naina understand what he think
naina - no no ,alekh tu apne dimag ko thoda rest de,ye vineet hai actually yha koi table khali nhi thi to inhone mujhse yha baithne ke liye pucha.
Alekh in his mind-(oooh to isliye wo aeda yha se chla gya,chlo acha hai kuch din ase hi muh bnake ghumne deta hu)
naina- kha kho gya tu ,or yha akele aya hai kya.
Alekh- apun to akele hi aya hai tu kiske bare mein puchna chahti hai saf saf puch na.
Naina- nhi main to wo neelu ke bare mein puch rhi thi.
Alekh- achaaa
naina - ha tu jyada mt soch,acha hai tu mil gya actually tujhe invite krna tha,kl bade papa or maa ki marriage anniversary hai ,main tujhe call krne hi wali thi pr ab tu mil gya ,to tujhe bata rhihu
alekh - tu nhi bhi bolti to bhi apun chla ata waise akele aaun ki kisi or ko sath leke aaun.
Naina- alekhhh
alekh -apun to neelu ki bat kr rha hai tu kiske bare mein soch rhi hai.
Waise kuch help chahiye to bnda hajir hai.
Naina- philhaal to bnda bs hajir ho jaye itna kafi hai.
Then finally bp comes

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THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF HER DIARY]
naina ,naveen and his father planning for anniversary party ab aage.
Naveen,s father -kuch socha tm logo ne.
Naveen- nhi abhi tk to nhi or apne.
Nf- jb tu nhi soch paya to main kha se sochunga.
Naveen -kyu jb mujhe datna hota hai tb to apko ideas aa jate hai.
Nf-dekh tu ,abhi dat khayega.
Naina- bsss,kya ho rha hai ye sb ,ap dono yha ek dusre se ldne aye ho.
Naveen,s father -dekh naina yhi mujhse behas kr rha hai.
Naveen- dad ap jhut mt boliye.
Naina- ho gya aap dono ka ,ya main bad mein aaun.
Both together -are nhi nhi ,tu kha ja rhi hai ,hm to kuch soch nhi pa rhe tu hi bta de.
Naina- acha sochenge to tb na jb ldna bnd krenge,ab aap shanti se sunenge jo main khungi.
Naveen and father -haaa.
And then both sat down and start discussing their problem
naina -to problem kya hai.
Naveen -ye lo isey abhi tk yhi nhi pta.
Naina- bhaiyaaa
nf-tu jara chup rhega,
he makes a face -okk
nf-problem to ek hi hai,ki hm sudha ko bina btaye party ki taiyari kaise kre .ghar pr rhi to ho nhi skta,bahar party rkhna usey pasand nhi
naina -(think and think and think)idea mil gya rasta.
Naveen -kya
naina -bdi maa ghar pe rhi to party nhi ho skti tu hm unhe bahar bhej denge simple.
Naveen- (laugh)hahaha wah wah kya idea hai ,ye to hmne socha hi nhi tha ,dekha dad apki hoshiyar beti.
Bp-naina kya beta tu is nalayak ke samne meri nak kyu kata rhi hai .
Naina- aap logo ka ho gya to ab meri bat sunenge.
Naveen- ha suna de tera idea,isi bahane main thoda or has lunga teri hoshiyari pe.
Naina- ha ha very funny bhaiya ab agar chup nhi rhe na to main apko apne room se nikal dungi.
Naveen- tu asa nhi kr skti.
Naina- kr skti hu ,dikhaun kya kr ke(then she start shouting,badi maaa)
naveen- are are baith ja meri maa ,thik hai ab kuch nhi bolunga.
Naina- thats good .
Naina- ha to main kya keh rhi thi,agar hm unhe bahar le gye to unhe shaq ho jayega right.
Naveen- acha or abhi tk main kya urdu mein bol rha tha.
Naina- aap phir bole.
Bp- tu chup rhega ,ya phir main hi tujhe bahar nikal du.
Naveen -ok
naina- ha to main ye keh rhi thi ki agar koi or unhe bahar le jaye to unhe shaq bhi nhi hoga or hmara kam ho jayega.
Naveen and father -haa ye to hai pr kaun
Naina- wo sb maine soch liya ,aap log bs ab befikr rhiye or party ki planing kriye ,unhe bahar kaise le jana hai ye main dekh lungi.
Here in raj place-
raj apne room mein idhar udhar ghoom rha tha.
Joseph-baba aap baith kyu nho jate.
Raj- kyuki mujhe walk krne ka mann hai ,
joseph in his mind-(ye baba bhi aajkl ajib harkate krne lge hai)
tbhi someone come backside.
Alekh-or joseph ji kaisa chl rha hai sb
joseph -kya alekh tmne to hme dara hi diya .
Alekh- kya joseph ji itne bade monster ke sath rehte ho or mujh sharif insan se darte ho.
Waise ye kr kya rha hai.
Joseph -kya bataye kb se idhar udhar ghoom rhe hai ,kuch pucha to btate bhi nhi.
Alekh- are koi nhi ye to hota hai.
Joseph -kya hota hai
Alekh- kuch nhi aap ek kam kro ap mere liye kuch khane ko laiye tb tk main isko ghumata hu.
Joseph -haha acha hai hm to try kr liye ab aap bhi kr le .
Then joseph left and alekh intered inside raj room.
Alekh- kya bat hai maine suna ki koi ghumne jane wala hai.
Raj- dekh tu abhi mera mjak ka mood bilkul nhi hai.
Alekh- acha to tu hi bta de ki tera mood khrab kyu hai.
Raj- bhola mt bn tu janta hai
alekh-kya janta hu.
Raj- yhi ki.
Alekh- yhi ki kya.
And raj irritated goes to their bed.
Alekh- ab tu btayega tb to janunga na
raj- kya btau tune dekha nhi ,kaise bat kr rhi thi wo usse ,
Alekh- kaun or kisse, achaaa tu naina ki bat kr rha hai.
Raj -m serious alekh.
Alekh-,(trying to make a sad face)koi nhi raj ,ab kya kr skta hai tu ,jo kismat mein nhi hai uske liye .
Raj- alekh tu asa kyu keh rha hai,ho skta hai asa kuch na ho .
Alekh in his mind-(acha beta pehle khud hi bol rha tha ab mujhe santwana de rha hai)
alekh trying to being more serious -nhi yar ,dekha nhi tune ,wo ring ,jarrur uske liye laya hoga wo,or kitni khush bhi to thi wo .
Raj- pr.
Alekh- pr wr kya yar ab tu jyada mt sochthen cellphone rings.
Raj- hello .
Naveen- hii raj ,kaisa hai dost.
Raj in his mind-acha kaise ho skta hu teri behan rehne de tb to.
Naveen- hello raj ,hello. Kha kho gya tu.
Raj- haa khi nhi,tu bta kaisa hai tu ,or is time call kiya kuch important tha kya.
Naveen- actually ha important to tha ,tujhe invite krna tha,kl ek surprise party rkhi hai or tujhe ana hai
Raj- pr naveen
naveen- pr wr kuch nhi ,tujhe ana hai to ana hai samjha,thats it or nhi aya to main khud aa jaunga tujhe lene.
Raj- acha baba thik hai aa jaunga khush.
Naveen- ha khush,chl ab rkhta hu ,kl milte hai ,main wait krunga bye.
Call disconnected.
Alekh- kiska phone tha(janta hai phir bhi puch rha hai)
raj- naveen ka, kl party rkhi hai isliye
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PART-30
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raj ko naveen ko call ata hai or wo usey party ke liye invite krta hai ab aage.
Alekh- kiska call tha.
Raj- naveen ka kl koi party rkhi hai usme bulaya hain
Alekh- (trying to act) kya bol rha hai tu ye achank party kaisi.
Raj- kyu ab wo party bhi tujhse puch ke rkhega.
Alekh- apun ne asa kha kya,(then he became serious)
apun to yeh keh rha tha ki khi kuch gadbad to nhi.
Raj- ab isme kya gadbad lg rhi hai tujhe ,tu na apni jassuso wali filme dekhna bnd kr de,kl ko neelu agar shadi ke liye ha keh degi to bhi khega,ase kaise man gyi kuch to gadbad hai.
Alekh- thik hai beta uda le mera majak ,yha apun tere ko leke tension mein hai or tu meri hi band bja rha hai.
Raj- mujhe leke ya party ko leke.
Alekh- dono ko leke.
Raj- or wo kyu mera or party ka kya relation.
Alekh- party se nhi hai pr party wali se to hai na.
Raj-mtlb ab tu saf saf bolega.
Alekh- mtlb ye hai ki apun jo soch rha hai agar wo sach hua na to kl tere dil ke tukde tukde ho jayenge.
Raj- kyu asa kya ho jayega
Alekh- btata hu pehle ye bta naveen kya bola.
Raj- bola ki party hai bs
Alekh- bs ye nhi btaya ki kyu.
Raj- ha bol rha tha surprise party hai.
Alekh- acha to sala tujhe surprise dena chahta hai.
Raj- alekh.
Alekh- mera mtlb tha ki tera hone wala sala,mtlb ho skne wala sala,pr ab kya ab to wo tujhe surprise dega.
Raj- dekh tu ab point pe aa smjha,main waise hi bhut pareshan hu
Alekh- pareshan to tu kl hoga.
Raj- or wo kyu.
Alekh- kyuki apun ko lgta hai ki kl jarrur wo naina ki engagement announce krenge.
Raj with shocking expression- kyaaa bol rha hai tu
Alekh- yar whi bol rha hu jo situation ke hisab se lg rhi hai.
Dekh aaj hi us ldke ne naina ko ring ji mtlb jarrur propose kiya hoga,or naina ko to tu janta hi hai usne to ye sb family ko btaya hi hoga,and uski family to khush bhi honge,sb pyar jo krte hai naina se.
Raj- tu ye sb ,itne surely to ase bol rha hai ,jaise tujhe btaya ho sbne.
Alekh- nhi to,waise jo bhi ho kl party mein chl ke dekh lenge.
Waise abhi main chlta hu tb tk tu baith ke soch.
Raj- soch liya main nhi jane wala us party mein.
Alekh room se bahar nikalte hue in low voice-aayega to tu hai hi.
Here ,s naina house.
Naina dialed a no.
Naina- hello ,kya kr rhi thi tu.
Puja on other side - oye hoye tune is waqt call kiya kya bat hai.
Naina- tu samajh jati hai na.
Puja- bachpan ki dosti asi hi hoti hai.
Naina- to sun, and then she told something to puja which we cant hear.
Puja- ok done ,ho jayega.
Naina- thnx yar to kl mil party mein or ha ali ko bhi leke ana hai ,main usey bhi bol dungi.
In morning ahluwalia house-
badi maa kitchen mein hoti hai ,
or sbke liye nasta bna rhi hoti hai.
Bdi maa khud se-aaj sbke liye sbki fvrt dish bnaungi tb to sbko yad aa hi jayega ki aaj kuch hai.
Then ramu kaka inters -are malkin aap subah subah yha.aaj to apko kitchen mein nhi ana chahiye tha.
Badi maa in her mind- kisiko yad rhe na rhe ramu kaka ko sb yad rehta hai.(wo ye soch ke khus ho hi rhi thi ki ramu kaka ne bhi unki khushi pe pani dal diya)
ramu kaka- are malkin kya soch rhi hai jaiye ab aaj to aap garden mein naye plants lgane wali thi ,na to usme to bdi mehnat lgegi .
Badi maa- aap isliye mujhe ,kitchen mein ane ko mana kr rhe the kaka.
Ramu kaka - ji malkin or kya wajah ho skti hai.
Badi maa with little bit anger-ha to main lga dungi,nasta bn gya hai aap jara table pr lga de,sb aate hi honge.
Then naina comes.
-naina-Good morning badi maa
badi maa- good morning meri bacchi,uth gyi tu.chl aa nasta kr le dekh aaj mains sbki pasand ka nasta bnaya hai.
Naina- are wah kya bat hai,aaj kuch special hai kya .
Badi maa-haa ho bhi skta hai kuch kyu tujhe lga rha hai asa kuch.
Naina- (pretend to think)special special,are haa,main bhul kaise gyi ,sorry badi maa.
Badi maa- koi nhi hota hai ab yad aa gya na ab to wish kr de.
Naina- ha abhi kr ke ati hu,
badi maa- kha ja rhi hai.
Naina- wish krne ,aapne hi to kha tha meeta aunty ke padosi ke mama ki ldki ke bete ka aaj birhtday hai or hme unhe wish krna chaiye na,wrna unhe bura lgega.
Badi maa- :acha .
Naina- main bs abhi ayi aap nasta kro.
Then she left.
Badi maa- huh,meeta ki ptanhi kya ki kya ka birthday yad hai apni badi maa ki anniversary nhi.
Tbhi naveen or unke father jo ye sb dekh rhe the neeche ate hai or bolte hai.
Naveen - kya bat hai maa ,kispe gussa kr rhi hai aap.
Bm-( being normal now)
gussa kispe krungi wo to naina nasta kiye bina chli gyi na to usey hi dat rhithi.
Bp- oh ,waise kya bat hai aaj to bdi achi khushbu aa rhihai.
Bm- aayegi kyu nhi maine apne hatho se jo bnaya hai sb ap sb ke liye.
Naveen- wah maa kya bat hai,main soch hi rha tha ki kitne dino se apne mera fvrt khana nhi bnaya .
Or wo dono bhi nasta krne mein lg gye koi bm pr dhyan hi nhi de rha hai
Edited by mylifereality - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Wow!!
Your all the 3 parts were just amazing.
But, ek problem hai, they were too short...🤔
Anyways, if you update regularly toh koi problem nahin hai!!😊
Edited by Acad10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
very nice sare parts superb h
nice work
ase he ache ache update deti rahna
i will wait for ur next update

love arti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi
the ups are really good
so they wanted to throw a party for Naveen's father-mother anniversary but as bare maa doesn't like the word party so they all decided to give it a surprise .So as per their plan they all met in the cafe and their Alekh got to meet them .Really Alekh is too much but i like him .the way he irritates poor Raj awww
plz cont soon and pm me
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#47

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the ups are really good
so they wanted to throw a party for Naveen's father-mother anniversary but as bare maa doesn't like the word party so they all decided to give it a surprise .So as per their plan they all met in the cafe and their Alekh got to meet them .Really Alekh is too much but i like him .the way he irritates poor Raj awww
plz cont soon and pm me




Thnx dear glad that u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RNforever

superb parts
very well done dear ... keep it up






Thnx dear and sorry that m not able to upadte regularly on if
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Wow!!

Your all the 3 parts were just amazing.
But, ek problem hai, they were too short...🤔
Anyways, if you update regularly toh koi problem nahin hai!!😊





Thnx dear sorry for late reply and not pm u about the update actually me updated this story on lrl fanclub of facebook regularly thats why don't have time to come here, plz forgive
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Originally posted by: mylifereality



Thnx dear sorry for late reply and not pm u about the update actually me updated this story on lrl fanclub of facebook regularly thats why don't have time to come here, plz forgive

No problem!!
I am in a very good mood today as all my exams till now have gone great!!😃😃
Toh aaj koi problem hoga hi nahiin!!😉
Edited by .FlyingClouds. - 9 years ago

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