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PART-15
[THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF
HER DIARY]
NAVEEN OFFICE-
harish- sir main apko kaise
bacha skta hu main to ek
mamuli sa employee hu.
Naveen-or agar tu mujhe nhi
bachayega to teri ye mamuli is
naukri bhi jayegi,isliye bacha
mujhe.
Harish-pr sir agar maine apko
bachaya ,or naina mam ko pta
chl gya to wo mujhe nikalwa
dengi.
Naveen -ha wo to tb kregi jb
use pta chlega na ,lekin mujhe
to sb pta hai to abhi tu meri
chinta kr .
Phir harish naveen ko kuch
bolta hai or naveen apna sir
pakad ke baith jata hai chair pr,
naina gusse se ander ati hai pr
naveen ko ase dekh kr uska
gussa shant ho jata hai,
naina-(naina with a tensed
voice)bhaiya ,kya hua apko .
Naveen-(ase pretend krta hai ki
jaise usne naina ko dekha hi
nhi.)
naveen-are naina tu kb
ayi,mujhe pta hi nhi chla.
Naina- pr bhaiya aap yha ase
kyu baithe ho, aap to mere sath
shopping pe jane wale the na.
Naveen-oh dekh na naina
achanak sir mein dard hone
lga,or main ja hi nhi paya wrna
main tujhe ase wait kra skta hu
kya.tu to bhut gussa hogi na.
Naina-ha thi to pr koi bat nhi
bhaiya,aap thik nhi the to kaise
ate.
Naveen -(naina ko hug krte hu)
kitni bdi ho gyi hai meri behan
or samajhdar bhi.
(Or phir wo bahar khde harish
ko thumbs up dikhata hai ,pr
naina ye dekh leti hai or samajh
jati hai ko ye sb naveen ka
drama hai.)
naina-waise bhaiya aap to ja nhi
skte or wo akshat mujhe drop
krne aya tha puch rha tha movie
dekhne chl skti hu.
Naveen -(bhadakte hue )kha hai
,kha hai wo namuna ,uski itni
himmat tujhe movie ke liye le
jayega.
(or wo window ke pass dekhne
ke liye jata hai ,or phir naina ko
dekhta hai jo usey gusse se
ghur rhi thi)
naina-apke to sir mein dard tha
na.
Naveen-(murmured,pakde gye )
ha wo to tha na pr bhai hu na to
behan ke nam pe sb gayab .
Naina- this is too much
bhaiya,kitna jhut bolte ho aap
,shopping bhi apki ,or wait bhi
main kru,or aap mujhe wha wait
krne ko bolkr bhul gye.
(Itna bolkar naina cabin se
bahar aa jati hai or naveen uske
peeche)
naveen-are naina sun to .
Naina-kuch nhi sunna mujhe
,aap hmesha mujhe wait krate
ho dekhna ek din main bhi apke
sath asa hi karungi,or aap
intezar krte rhoge pr main nhi
aaungi.
Naina phir aage jane lgti hai ki
tbhi naveen kan pakad kr
neeche baith jata hai.
Naveen naina ko dekhte hue-
maff kr de meri pyari behan last
time plz plz.
Naina-kya kr rhe ho bhaiya sb
apko hi dekh rhe hai .
Naveen-,to dekhne de ek bada
bhai apni ruthi hue behan ko
mana rha hai ,or jb tk tu nhi
manegi main ase hi rhunga ,or
log mera majak udayenge ,to
soch le tu yhi chahti.
Naina-acha baba thik hai maff
kr diya,ab uthiye(sbko dekhte
hue) .koi mere bhai pe hase
mujhe pasand nhi.
Naveen-ye hue na bat ab chl
shopping krne chlte hai .
At mall-
naveen bhot si shirts dekhta hai
pr usey kuch pasand hi nhi a rha
hota.
Naina-kya bhaiya aap kb se
dekh rhe ho pr kuch pasand hi
nhi aya apko.
Naveen-ha to tu meri help kr na
khdi kya hai .
Naina -ab ye bhi main hi
karu,aap ek kam kyu nhi krte jldi
se shadi kr lo ,to bhabhi km se
km itna to kr hi lengi.
Naveen-(blush) ha wo to main
kr lunga ,pr jb tk wo nhi aayi hai
tb tk tu hi meri help kr de meri
maa.
Naina-thik hai thik hai ,ye (do
shirts dikhate hue)dekhiye ye
dono mujhe pasand hai ,jaiye
try krke aiye.
Idhar naveen trial room mein
jata hai ,ki udhar koi phone pe
bat krte hue aa rha hota.
Alekh-pehli bar ,pehli bar tujhse
help mangi or tujhse wo bhi nhi
hua,kisi kam ka nhi tu.
Raj- ha to help bhi tere type ki
thi ,teri gf ke liye dress choose
krne mein bhla teri main kya
help kr skta hu.
Alekh- aana beta jb teri hogi tb
dekh lunga.
Raj-ha jb hogi tb dekh lena,abhi
to jo krne gya hai wo kr.
Alekh bat krne mein itna busy
tha ki usne dekha hi nhi ki wo
naina se takra gya.
Alekh-sorry, are naina tm yha .
Naina-ha wo bhaiya ke sath ayi
thi pr tm.
Alekh-(naina ko ek minute
rukne ke liye bolta hai) ek
minute naina,
or wo raj se kehta hai.
Raj-naina wha kya kr rhi hai.
Alekh - wo jo bhi kr rhi hai ,pr ab
tu ek kam krega.
Raj-wo kya.
Alekh-mere sath na aane ke
tere faisle pr pachtane ka
kam.,chl ab phone rkh.
Raj-are sun to ,alekh,alekh, (pr
call disconnect ho chuka tha)
alekh to naina-ha to main kha
tha.
Naina-mall mein 2nd floor pe.
Alekh-haha ha wha to pr main
tujhe ye bta rhatha ko main yha
kyu aya hu.
Naina-ha btao.
Alekh-wo main yha dress
khridne aya hu.
Naina-oh kiske liye.
Alekh-ab tujhse kya chupana
yar ,gf ko manana hai to dress
gift krne ki soch rha hu .
Naina-are wah bda hi nek khyal
hai.
Alekh-khyal to nek hai pr ek
problem hai.mujhe nhi pta usey
kaise dress pasand ayegi.
Naina -usme kya hai jo pyar se
doge acha hi hoga
alekh-asa nhi hai acha nhi hua
to mera breakup ho jayega,yar
plz ab tu hi meri help kr de.
Naina-acha thik hai pr mujhe
kya milega.
Alekh-jo tu mange.
Naina-thik hai main choose krti
hu pr kuch btao ki wo kaisi hai .
Phir alekh apni gf ke bare mein
kuch instructions deta hai or
naina choose krti hai
January 24 at 3:17pm
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#22
PART-16
[THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF
HER DIARY]
at mall-
mall mein naina ko alekh milta
hai ,or wo usey apni gf ke liye
dress choose krne ko bolta hai .
Naina usey uski gf ki pasand ke
bare mein puchti hai ,or alekh
usey bta rha hota hai,alekh ki
bat sunkar naina smile krne lgti
hai.
Alekh -kya hua naina tu smile
kyu kr rhi hai .
Naina-kuch nhi bs tmhari batein
sunkr kisi ki yad aa gyi.waise ye
dress dekho m sure ,tmhari gf
ko pasand ayegi.
Alekh-thnx yar,pr ab bta ki tum
iske badle mein kya logi.
Naina-ahhh abhi nhi phir kbhi
mang lungi.
Tb tk naveen bhi aa jata hai ,
naveen-are naina dekh na ye
wali shirt mujhe jyada pasand
hai,(phir wo alekh ko dekhta hai)
are alekh tm yha.
Alekh-ha wo kuch kam se aya
tha .
Naveen-acha hai chlo ab aa hi
gye ho to sath mein lunch krte
hai.
Alekh-thnx naveen,pr abhi
mujhe jana hai tmhara lunch
udhar rha.
Naina and naveen bid bye to
alekh.
Naveen-chl ab alekh na shi hm
dono to lunch kr hi skte hai .
Naina- ha bhaiya or mujhe to
ice-cream bhi khani hai,wo bhi
(naina bolto uske pehle kisi or
ne bola)
person- choclate.
Naina and naveen turns.
Naina- pujaaa .(and give a tight
wala hug to her)
Pujaa-oye missed call chl ye to
pta chl gya ki tere handset
mein mera no. Abhi tk save hai.
Naina-chup kr puja ki
bacchi,main tujhe bhuli kb thi.
Puja-to yad bhi to nhi kiya na .
Naina-acha baba maff kr de
aage se asi galti kru to mere
network jam kr dena .
Or dono ase hi bat krne mein lg
jati hai .
Naveen -excuse me beautiful
ladies,aaplog shayad bhul rhi
hai ye bechara bhi yha hai .
Puja and naina together-
bhaiyaa,
naveen- acha ab yhi khde hokar
bat krni hai ya lunch krne chle.
Insidd restra-
teeno lunch kr rhe hote hai.
Naina-acha to tune mujhe maff
to kiya na.
Puja-50%
naveen-hai puja ye 50% wali
maffi kaisi hoti hai.
Naina- ha puja bta na.
Puja-50% to maine tujhe maff
kr diya pr 50% tb karungi jb tu
mere sath show dekhne chlegi.
Naina- kaisa show.
Puja- romeo and juliet hmara
fvrt play ,ho rha hai aaj rat ke
show ki do tickets hai mere
pass, or tujhe mere sath chlna
hai bol chlegi.
Naina- oho ye bat hai abhi to tu
jan bhi mang leti main deti.
Puja- wo to main bad mein le
lungi philhaal ,tu itna kr de.
Naveen- thik hai bhai hme kisi
ne nhi pucha bhi nhi.
Naina- bhaiya apko play dekhne
ki jarrorat kya hai aapke pass to
khud ki juliet hai na.
Naveen - ha ha thik hai mera
bhi din ayega.
At night after show -
naina or puja show dekhkr
nikalti hai ki tbhi puja bolti hai.
Puja- naina wo dekh ,kitna
changa munda hai yar,hay ye to
mainu propose kr de to abhi
shadi kr lu.
Naina- puja tu nhi sudhregi na .
Puja- oye bina charger ki
mobile ab main sudhar gyi to
sare shehar de mundo ka kya
hoga.
Naina phif use dekh kr apna sir
hilati hai.or khi or dekh rhi hoti
hai ki puja phir bolti hai.
Puja- naina,wo dekh.
Naina- ha ,ha kitna changa
munda hai wo tainu propose kr
de to tu abhi usey bhaga ke le
jaye,yhi na.
Puja- hehehe naina progress pe
hai tu ,pr main tujhe koi munda
nhi kudi dikha rhi thi.
Naina- (shocking se expression
ke sath puja ko dekhti hai) puja
ab tujhe ldkiya bhi.
Puja- oye chup kr oye or apne
dimag ke virus mein antivirus
dauda,or meri bat sun, wo dekh
us ladki ko,(puja usey ek ldki ki
taraf turn krti hai)
naina- puja ye to mujhe kuch
kuch.
Puja- kuch kuch nhi ye to
sachmuch mein apni neelu hai.
Naina- ha main bhi to yhi keh
rhi thi na.pr wo ldka uske sath .
Puja- uska bf hoga .chl puchte
hai ,( or puja naina ka hath
pakad kr le jane lgti hai )
naina- are puja nhi ruk ja ,usey
bura lga to.
Puja- tu chup kr bura usey kyu
lgega ,wo to hme lgna chahiye ,
madam hmse senior ho gyi or
hme btaya tk nhi.
Phir wo jake neelu ke pass khdi
ho jati hai.or neelu ke shoulder
pe tap krti hai.
Neelu turn kr ke dekhti hai or
uska bf bhi ,or naina usey dekh
kr shock.or sb sath mein bolte
hai.
Neelu- puja ,tu
Naina- alekh tum.
Alekh- naina tum.
Puja ne rkha.
Thodi der ka silence or phir
explore.
Puja- oye tm dono ek dusre ko
jante ho kya ,or neelu ki bacchi
tu yha hai or kisi ko bataya bhi
nhi ,or ye mahasay kaun hai.
Neelu- are kitne sawal puchegi
puja tu ruk pehle mujhe puchne
de.
Neelu to naina and alekh- tm
dono ek dusre ko jante ho kya.
Alekh- ha btaya to tha tujhe
neelu yhi to meri wo dost hai
jisne meri help kri thi.
Naina- (tb notice krti hai ki
neelu ne whi dress pehni hai jo
usne chooss ki thi) ohh mtlb ye
tmhari .
Alekh- ji ha ye meri gf hai
neelu.
Neelu - tbhi main kahu iski asi
kaun si dost hai jo itni akalmand
hai.
Alekh- tu kehna kya chahti hai
mere dosto ke pass dimag nhi
hai.
Neelu- maine kb bola tu khud hi
bol rha hai.
Or here the chase begins.or
naina or puja bs khde hokar
dekh rhe hai.and finally.
Puja- chup krooo tm dono,
dono chup ho jate hai or puja ki
taraf dekhne lgte hai.
Puja- tmlogo ka ho gya to koi
mujhe btayega ,ki yha ho kya
rha hai ,or kaun kisko janta hai
or kaun kisko nhi.
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PART-17
[THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF
HEE DIARY]
after the play,outside-
uske bad alekh or naina puja ko
sb define krte hai ,and there,s
the scene end.
After two days,
naveen takes naina for a party.
,and when they reach the
venue.
Naina- bhaiya apko mujhe yha
lana jarrori tha ,main yha kya
krungi.
Naveen - maine socha akele
bore hone se acha tujhe leta
aaun ,plz kuch time ki bat hai
phir hm chle jayenge.
Naina- ok par bs thodi der.
Uske bad naveen busy ho jata
hai or naina ,usse kehkar ek
table pr jake baith jati hai,
naveen kuch time tk logo se bat
krta hai phir naina ke pass jane
lgta hai ki tbhi koi uske
shoulder pe tap krta hai ,wo
turn kr ke dekhta hai ,
naveen - shalini tm,tm yha
kaise,or kb ayi tm mujhe btaya
kyu nhi.
Shalini- relax baba kitne sawal
puchoge ,ek ek krke pucho.
Naveen- wo sb main nhi janta
pehle ye btao tm kb ayi or
mujhe bataya kyu nhi.
Shalini- main to subah aa gyi
thi,socha tmhe surprise du
isliye ghar pe call kiya tb ,pta
chla ki naina bhi aayi hai or tm
dono yha aaye ho to bs,m here.
Naveen - ohhh shal can't tell u
maine tmhe kitna miss kiya.
Shalini- wo sb to main jan lungi
pr abhi naina kha hai mujhe
usse milna hai.
( ye kehkar shalini aage jane lgti
hai pr naveen uska hath pakad
leta hai,wo turn krti hai)
naveen - naina se bad me mil
lene pehle mujhse to mil lo.
Shalini- abhi to mili na.
Naveen - bs itni der ,itne lambe
intezar ka bs itna inam.or ek bar
tm nains se mili to wo to hm
dono ko akele time dene se rhi.
Shalini- to.
Naveen- long drive pe chle.
Shalini- abhi is time ,naveen tm
bhi or naina ka kya usey yha
akele kaise rehne de, or asa
kiya to wo tmhe jan se mar degi
smjhe.
Naveen-(naveen kuch der tk
sochta hai ki kya kre ki tbhi
usko ek idea aata hai or ye idea
usey samne entrance se aane
wala insan ko dekhkr aya jisey
wo ab bakra bnane wala tha)
naveen to shalini- mil gya.
Shalini- kya mil gya.
Naveen - bakra,
shalini- ha kyaa.
Naveen- are i mean hmara
helper. Chlo mere sath( or wo
shal ko lekar raj ke pass jata hai.
)
naveen- hey raj.
Raj- hi naveen tm yha( ,pause
for a second)akele aye ho, and
then (notice shalini and thought
lgta hai gf ke sath aya hai)
naveen- are nhi yar akela nhi
hu,tmse ek help chahiye thi.
Raj- mujhse ,ha bolo.
Naveen - actually ye meri gf
hai,bhot dino ke bad ayi hai to
main soch rha tha ki hm dono
long drive pe jaye.
Raj- acha to meri permission
chahiye, ha ha kyu nhi ,ja
baccha le ja( ye sunkar shalini
hasne lgti hai or raj bhi)
Naveen- kya yar ek naina km
hai jo tm bhi mera mjak uda rhe
ho.
Raj- acha acha m serious ab
btao kya help chahiye.
Naveen- ha to main keh rha tha
ki hm dono ko long drive pe
jana hai pr ,naina bhi hmare
sath hai or main usey akele yha
nhi rehne de skta ,.to kya tu
kuch der ke liye usey company
dega ,hm jldi aa jayenge.
Raj thought- kya bhai hai yar
(raj yhi soch ke smile kr rha
hota hai ki tbhi naveen
interrupted )
Naveen- kha kho gya bol dega
yar.
Raj- waise to mushkil kam hai
tum to jante ho tmhari behan
thodi pagal hai ( naveen gives a
what u say wala look)
raj- joke yar , ok jao tm dono
main try karunga.
Naveen- thnx yar hm jldi aa
jayenge.
Raj- ha isse pehle ki wo mujhe
pagal krde plz aa jana.
Shalini and naveen both- haha
sure bye.
Naina kafi time se table pr
baithi idhar udhar dekhti hai pr
usey naveen khi dikh nhi rha
hota hai .
Naina- ye bhaiya kha chle gye,
mujhe yha akele chorrkar.
(Tbhi raj peeche se bolta hai)
raj- yha akele baith kr kisse bat
kr rhi ho.
Naina look up.
Naina- aap phir se, or ab ye mt
khiyega ki main apka peecha kr
rhi hu.
Raj-( raj baithte hue) haha nhi
khunga, waise kiska wait kr rhi
thi,
khi mera to nhi.
Naina- plz mere itne bure din
bhi nhi aye, main to bhaiya ka
wait kr rhi hu , pta nhi kha chle
gye.
Raj- ohh waise jb tk wo nhi aate
main hu na.
Naina - mujhe yha ane hi nhi
chahiyr tha ye business parties
hoti hi boring hai.
Raj-acha to achi parties kiski
hoti hai aap docotors ki .
Naina- aap kya hmesha mujhse
argue krte rehte hai or koi kam
nhi kya.
Raj- philhaal to yhi kam mila hai
.
Naina- kya
raj -kuch nhi,main keh rha tha ki
main drink lene ja rha hu tm
kuch logi.
Naina- main peeti nhi hu.
Raj- main soft drink ki bat kr
rha tha,well main hi lekar ata
hu.
Or raj drink lene jata hai or
wapas aakar naina ko ek juice ka
glass deta hai.
Naina - thnx
raj- welcome, ( ki tbhi raj ko koi
bulata hai )
raj to naina-main bs abhi ata hu.
Naina nodes in yes.
Raj us person se bat kr rha hota
hai ,or naina usey dekh rhi hoti
hai ,raj bhi ek bar peeche mud
kr dekhta hai naina apni najre
neeche kr leti hai raj smile krta
hai, or us person se excuse
krke naina ki taraf mudta hai ki
koi uske samne aa jata hai
,actually aa jati hai.
Girl- hii raj.
Raj- ritu tum ( yes she's ritu )
naina un dono ko dekhti hai or
ritu ko dekhar usey yad aata hai
ki ye whi thi jisey usne raj ke
sath dekha tha .
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Hi
The ups are really good😉
So Naina was waiting for naveen for shopping but he forgot aww like a typical man but for that he have to do so much of drama and finally he made Naina to forgive him and they went for shopping
Naina was helping him in choosing shirts a perfect sister and there she met with alekh who seemed help from Naina .Finally after the shopping they went for lunch and Naina got to meet her two friends Pooja andneelu but now the meeting of naveen with shaliny really turned well for us .Raj and Naina meet but what the hell that ritu doing there .just hope Raj Naina spend some time together
Z cont soon and pm me
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 9 years ago
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Thnx dear ,sure raj naina spend some time,they are the love birds
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Hiii shweta
Sorry yr itne time tak comment nhi kiya ...
M bohat bussy thi ...par ab free hu aur tumhare sare parts read kar liya h ...its fabulous yr great work keep going ...i love it
Ab plz raj naina ki live story start kar do
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PART-18
[THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF
HER DIARY]
raj ko party mein ritu milti hai
or naina ritu ko pehchan jati hai.
Ritu- hii raj
raj- ritu tm yha,
ritu- ha wo mujhe bhi invite kiya
tha,or acha hua main yha aayi
,kaise ho tm????
(ritu ko dekhkar raj ko bilkul bhi
acha nhi lg rha tha ritu ki har
bat se usey yad aa rha tha ki
kaise usne raj se engagement
tod di or ek bar bhi kbhi raj se
milne nhi ayi)
raj with a stern voice- m fine .
Ritu- oh thnk god raj ki tum ab
thik ho,main bta nhi skti ki
tumhe yha ase dekhkar kitni
khush hu.
Raj- really mujhe to lga ki tm
mujhe yha dekhkar bilkul bhi
khush nhi hogi.
Ritu- asa kyu bol rhe ho raj,i
know ki maine galti ki pr believe
me raj main hmesha bs tmhare
bare mein sochti thi,or
bhagwan se pray krti thi ki wo
mere raj ko thik kr de.
Raj - ha dekho bhagwan ne sun
li tmhari,main bilkul thik bhi hu
or apne pairo pe khda bhi.
Ritu- oh raj i can't tell u ,how
much i miss u ( or wo raj ko hug
krne jati hai pr raj peeche ho
jata hai)
naina ye sb dur se dekh rhi hoti
hai or raj or ritu ko dekhne mein
khoyi hue hoti hai tbhi party
mein se hi koi ek person uske
pass ata hai.
Person- excuse me
naina- ji.
Person- may i have the
pleasure to dance with u.
(Naina try to make excuse bt
person request her so she
finally give up)
,
(with lots of hesitation naina
floor pe chli jati hai par usey
dance krna acha nhi lg rha tha
or bar bar uska dhyan raj pe hi
tha)
or idhar.
Ritu- i know raj ki tm mujhse
naraj ho .
Raj- main tmse naraj kyu
hounga .
Ritu- really raj tm mujhse naraj
nhi ho,it means hmare beech
sb kuch.
Raj- tm galat samajh rhi ho
mere kehne ka mtlb tha ki main
tmse naraj kyu hounga,its ur
life or tmhe apne bare mein
sochne ka pura haq hai ,
ritu- raj tum ye kya keh rhe ho.
Raj- no ritu mujhe galat mt
smjho tmhare jane ke bad ha
main tmse nafrat krne lga tha
pr phir( wo naina ki taraf dekhta
hai pr naina wha nhi hoti or uski
najre naina ko dhoondti hai or
finally wo usey dikh jati hai )
raj- pr phir kisine mujhe btaya
or samjhaya ki nafrat krne se
kuch nhi milta ,maff krne se
sukun milta hai or ab dekho
kitna sukun hai meri jindagi
mein dost hai khushi hai ,or
ritu- or ,or kya raj
raj- or pyar ritu ,pyar bhi hai ,or
jb ye pyar hua tb jana ki jo pehle
tha wo pyar nhi tha kyuki jha
pyar hota hai wha ,dooriyan
,najdikiyan ,kisi ki kami ya khubi
koi mayne hi nhi rkhti.
Ritu- ohh kya main jan skti hu.
Raj- bta dunga waqt aane pr
sari duniya ko bta dunga,ki
rajveer in love.bt abhi time nhi
aya so u have to wait.and now
plz excuse me ritu .
Ritu- sure.
( or raj phir naina ki taraf dekhta
hai jo ki dance kr rhi hoti hai pr
usey acha nhi lg rha hota and
finally wo bhi floor pe chla jata
hai)
raj to person- excuse me.
Person- yes.
Raj- wo apko mr. Mehta bula
rhe the.
Person- oh (to naina) sorry,i ,ll
come.
Or uske jane ke bad naina raj se
kehti hai .
Naina - thnx ,( or wo wha se
jane lgti hai pr raj uska hath
pakad leta hai)
raj- bs thnx
naina- to ,apne help ki to thnx
hi bolungi na.
Raj- jarruri nhi .
Naina- mtlb
raj- kbhi kbhi help le badle help
bhi ki ja skti hai.
Naina- help apki or wo kaise.
Raj- ahhh mere sath dance
krke.(and pulled naina towards
him just like dance step
learning scene guys)
naina- dance or apke sath or
achanak apko mere sath dance
kyu krna hai.
Raj- bs abhi maine apki help ki
ab ap meri kre( or wo usey turn
ishara krta hai ritu ki taraf
dekhne ko)
naina turn krti hai or dekhti hai
ritu ko jo jealousy wale
expressions ke sath unhi dono
ko dekh rhi hoti hai.
Naina in her mind- kaun soch
skta hai ki kbhi jinhe main dekh
kr unki kismat se jalti thi aaj
mujhe unhe jalana hai .
(Naina ko khyalo mein khoya
dekhkar )
raj- kha kho gyi sirf dance krne
ko kha hai shadi krne ko nhi
naina- ahh nhi to khi nhi .main
to kuch nhi soch rhi thi.
Raj- ha ha i know ki tm
naina- kya main,kya
raj- yhi ki tm.
Naina- main kya ,
raj- mere bare mein hi soch rhi
thi kyu .
Here naina shock (and give a
chori pakdi gyi wala look ) look
down and blush( obviously wo
yhi to soch rhi thi.)
and then music start.
Sorry frnds raj naina ko dance
next part mein kra dungi.
January 27 at 8:19pm
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raj pulled naina towards him.
Naina- pr mujhe dance nhi ata.
Raj- koi bat nhi main Sikha
dunga.
Naina- pr ( naina kuch bole usse
pehle hi raj puts his finger on
her lips ,and they have an
eyelock,here,s the music start.
Female lines-Chup tum raho
,chup ham rhe.
( naina raj ki aankho mein
dekhti hai)
khamoshi ko khamoshi se.
Zindagi ko zindagi se bat krne
do,.
Male line-( now raj turned
naina)
chup tum raho.
Chup ham rhe.
Khamoshi ko khamoshi se.
Zindagi ko zindagi se bat krne
do.
(Music bj rha hota hai or raj
intensely naina ko dekh rha
hota hai ,naina feel shy and
asks.)
female lines- ankho mein kho
jaye aankhe.
Bole hath se hath.
Naina in middle of the dance-
aap ase kyu dekh rhe hai.
Male lines- bahon mein
chupkar.
Ankhon se jaise doley rat...
Raj- ahh actually kuch soch rha
hu.
Naina- kya.
Raj- yhi ki hm dono jb bhi milte
hai ldte kyu hai.
Naina - main nhi ldti wo to aap
hi.
Raj- acha or abhi yha kaun hai
wo jo start kr rha hai.
Naina-(lowers her eyes) acha to
kya socha apne.
Raj- kyu na hm ek deal kre.
Naina thoughts- (yha bhi
deal,huh typical businessman )
raj- yhi ki jb bhi hm milenge
ladenge nhi, so aaj se friends.
Naina with smile- friends.
(And here raj again turn and
naina and put her right hand to
his right shoulder,and left hand
to her waist.)
ungliyon ko ungliyon se.
Hosh ko shokhiyon se bat krne
do.
Both together lost in each
other,
naina-chup tm raho .
raj- chup hm rhee.
Raj- chup tm rho.
Naina- chup hm rhe.
Song end ho jata hai pr dono
without music dance kr rhe the
( obviously gusy apne captain
or unki cadet to bina music ke
bhi dance kr skte the)
pr phir everyone of the party
starte clap,and they came out
of their dream world and raj
shock.
(Are samne naina ke bhaiya jo
the jo clap to nhi kr rhe the pr
raj ko ghur jarrur rhe the)
naveen - ye kya ho rha tha.
Raj have no answer ( ab bechara
kya bolega).pr no fear if his
saviour is here.
Naina- wo hm to dance kr rhe
the,pr aap kha gayab the.
Naveen - ( bs itna sun kr
naveen raj ko bhul gya or khud
ko bachane ke tarike sochne
lga )
naveen - wo ,wo naina actually.
Naina- wo wo kya bhaiya btaiye
kha the aap,ek to khud mujhe
yha laye or khud khi or chle gye.
(Naveen look toward raj and
gives a bachale yar wala look)
raj- ab tm kuch bolne ka mauka
dogi tb to koi bolega na.
Naina- dekhiye aap.
Raj- friends remember naina.no
fight.
Naina- ha,ha main to bs puch
rhi thi.
Naveen - wo actually naina ( or
wo phir bina ruke sb bol deta
hai)shalini ayi thi yha.
Naina- what,wo yha ayi or aapne
mujhe btaya bhi nhi.
Naveen - main tujhe btane hi
wala tha pr,pr( aage kuch soch
hi nhi pa rha tha ki kya bole)
raj speaks- pr achanak uski
tabiyat khrab ho gyi
or phir unhe ghar jana pada,or
apke bhaiya unhe ghar lekar
gye.
Naina- really( till not convince ).
Naveen- ha to main jhut kyu
bolunga,or isliye to raj ko yha
bheja ki wp tujhe company de.
Naina- achaaa,tbhi main khu aaj
koi rasta kaise bhul gya tha.
Raj- (stare her and think) ye nhi
sudharne wali.
Naveen- waise ab hme chlna
chahiye .kafi late bhi ho gya.
Raj- ok.
Naveen - thnx raj meri absence
mein naina ka khyal rkhne ke
liye.
Raj- no need to thnx naveen.
(In his mind) ye to tune mujhpe
meharbani kri.
And finally the party ends.
Sorry guys update chotu sa hai
,or sbki parties ek din mein
khtm ho jati hai maine teen din
tk chlayi,or ha dance wala
sequence ke liye extra
sorry,aap sb to jane ho mujhe
ata nhi
sorry sorry.
January 28 at 7:11pm
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to finally party end and dono
ghar jate hai .
(Befor naveen and naina arrival
at ahluwalia,s house)
badi maa on phone-are
mrs.virani apne kaise yad kiya
mujhe.
Mrs.virani on other side- are
sudha ji main to hmesha hi yad
krti hu,pr aap to janti hai na
family ke aage hme time hi kha
milta hai.
Badi maa- ye bat to apne bilkul
shi khi,or btaiye ghar par sb
kaise hai.
Mrs.virani- sb ache or aap sb
kaise hai naveen,or naina.
Badi maa- hm sb bhi ache hi
hai.
Mrs.virani- sudha ji aap bura na
mane to apse kuch bat krni thi.
Badi maa- bura kyu manungi,or
apko kbse puchne ki jarrorat
pad gyi.
Mrs.virani- ji shukriya pr itne
saalo ke bad bat hue na to
bs.waise mujhe apse naina ke
bare mein bat krni thi.
Badi maa-* naina ke bare
mein,ha khiye na.
Mrs.virani- wo naina ko to
bachpan se janti bhot pyari ldki
hai,or aap mere bete ko to janti
hi hai,to bs main ye soch rhi
thi,ki agar hmari dosti ko thoda
aage badhya jaye.
Badi maa,- khyal to acha hai pr
aap to janti hai aaj kl ke bacche
kha shadi ke liye mante hai .
Mrs.virani- ji ha samjahti hu koi
bat nhi aap naina se puch le ,hm
yhi hai agar wo ha kr de to kl hi
dono ko milwa dete hai.
Badi maa- ye to badi achi
khabar sunayi apne ,chliye isi
bahane apse mulakat bhi ho
jayegi
mrs.virani- ji tb maim subah hi
call krti hu apko jo bhi naina ka
faisla ho aap bta djiyega.
(After the call disconnected
badi maa ko rishta acha lga or
ye sunke wo to bhot khush thi)
naveen ,s father-kya bat hai aap
bdi khush lg rhi hai.
Badi maa- bat hi asi hai aap
sunenge to aap bhi khush ho
jayenge.
Nf- asi kya bat hai jo hme nhi
pta,bataiye jara hm bhi khush
ho lete hai.
Badi maa- btati hu ,abhi kuch
der pehle,hi mrs.virani ka
phone aya tha.
Nf- mrs.virani mtlb whi tmhari
dost ,.
Badi maa-ji haa ,aap to jante hi
hai unko or unke gharwalo
kobhi.
Nf- ha to isliye aap itni khush
hai ,acha hai apki purani dost ne
aapko yad kiya.
Badi maa- are aap bhi na puri
nat sunte nhi hai ,pehle hi
khush ho jate hai,wo mrs.virani
ne apne bete ke liye hmari
naina ka rishta manga hai.or aap
to jante hai unka beta kitna
acha hai.
Nf- kyaa naina ka rishta,pr iski
kya jarrorat hai.
Badi maa- kyu jarrorat nhi hai
ab kya aap naina ki shadi nho
karayenge.
Nf- bat ye nhi hai,pr ase kaise
main apni naina ki shadi kisi se
bhi krdunga.
Badi maa- pr ldka acha hai or
hmdono usey jante hai.
Nf- hmare janne se kya hota hai
shadi naina ko krni hai .
Badi maa- ha to main kaun sa
shadi krne ko keh rhi hu milne
mein kya harz hai.
Nf- wo jo bhi hak tm naina ko
force nhi krogi agar wo nhi
milna chahe to.
(Tbhi naveen or naina aa jate
hai.)
naveen- kisko na force krne ke
liye keh rhe hai dad.
(Badi maa kuch bolne jati hai pr
nf unhe rok lete hai)
nf- are wo kuch nhi mai to
tmhari maa se ye keh rha tha ki
wo mujhe subah wall pe jane ke
liye force na kre
naina- pr bade papa wo to apke
ache ke liye kehti hai na.
Nf- acha baba thik hai tum sb
inke side rho .
Badi maa- naveen shalini mili
tujhe .
Naveen-( shock) ha maa pr
apko kaise pta.
Badi maa- mujhe nhi pta hoga
to kise hoga,hone wali bahu hai
meri ,mujhse hi pucha tha usne.
Naveen- (blushed) kya maa ap
bhi.
Naina to naveen- wah bhaiya
bhabhi to apse bhi jyada smart
hai direct high command ko
impress kr rkha hai,ab apka kya
hoga.
Naveen - chup kr bhot bolne lgi
hai tu ,lgta hai teri shadi krake
ghar se bhagana hi padega.
Naina- bhaiyaa ,aap kuch bhi kr
lo main khi nhi jane wali hu.
Badi maa- acha baba ab ladai
bnd kro or jakar so jao.
Badi maa to naina- or naina
mujhe tujhse kuch jarruri bat
krni hai kl.
Naina- kya .
Badi maa- aaj nhi kl abhi tu jake
so ja.
Next day morning -
naina - kaka main ja rhi hu aap
sbko bta dena.
Tbhi
badi maa- are naina ruk tu itni
subah kyu ja rhi hai.
Naina- wo actually aaj na mujhe
jldi jana tha.
Badi maa- pr mujhe tujhse bat
krni thi beta.bat important hai .
(Then naina dialed a no.)
naina- hello sister maria, mujhe
thoda late ho jayega to aap
room no. 20 ke patient ko
injection lga dijiyega,ok and cut
the call.
Naina- ha badi maa ab khiye.
Bm-pehle tu promise kr ki tu
mana nhi kregi.
Naina- pr bat kya hai badi maa
ye to bataiye.
Badi maa- nhi pehle tu promise
kr.
Naina- pr badi maa.
Badi maa- acha thik hai btati hu
,tu smriti aunty ko to janti hai
na.
Naina- smriti aunty ,wo jo apki
frnd ha.
Bm- ha whi beta unka kl phone
aya tha mujhe.,or wo chahti hai
ki tu unke bete se mile.
Naina- pr badi maa mujhe kisi
se nhi milna.or nahi shadi krni
hai
Badi maa- pr beta shadi krne ko
kaun keh rha hai main to bs
milne ko keh rhi hu.
Naina- no badi maa main kisi se
nhi milne wali hu ,plz.
Nf- jb wo keh rhi hai ki usey nhi
milna to force kyu kr rhi hai aap
badi maa- ha mt mil ,whi kr jo tu
chahti hai ,meri parwah hi kise
hai
Naina- asa nhi hai ,bhaiya aap hi
samjhaiye na.
Naveen- naina ab maa keh rhi
hai to mil le na ek bar.
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ahluwalia house mein naina ke
rishtey ki bat ho rhi thi,ab aage.
Naina- bhaiya aap bhi.
Naveen- oho naina mil le na ek
bar .
Nf- tumse kisne kha apni ray
dene ko.
Badi maa- aap chup rhiye ji,ase
keh rhe jaise hm to naina ke
dushman hai .
Naveen- ha naina dekh maa shi
keh rhi hai ab shadi to tujhe krni
hi hai kisi na kisi se to isse mil
le or ldka agar pasand na aye to
mana kr dena ,i promise tujhe
koi force nhi krega.
Naina- pr bhaiya.
Badi maa- pr wr kuch nhi tu
apni badi maa ki bat nhi manegi
,tujhe kya lgta hai main tere liye
kuch galat faisla le skti hu.
Naina- nhi badi maa.
Badi maa- to bs ab tu meri ye
bat man le ,meri bacchi.
Naina- (make a sad face)thik hai
aap dono yhi chahte ho to pr
sirf ek bar.
Badi maa- ha ha bs ek bar .
Naina- thik hai ab main jaun .
Badi maa- ha ja pr jldi aa jana
hme unse milne bhi jana hai
samjhi ,
naina- ha baba aa jaungi.
Doon hospital.
Naina talking to puja on phone-
ha tune shi suna .tujhe koi
galatfehmi nhi ho rhi hai.
Puja- mtlb sach mein teri shadi
ho rhi hai.
Naina- puja tu jyada sapne mt
dekh maine sirf itna kha ki
mujhe ladke se milna hai bs.
Puja- ha or pasand aa gya to
teri to ball balle ho jani hai .
Naina- puja ek to main itni
tension mein hu or tujhe mjak
sujh rha hai.
Puja- kyu.
Naina- are main usse bat kya
krungi.
Puja- whi jo tu sbse krti hai.
Naina- sbse mtlb ,kisse jaise
tujhse krti hu waise ,ya jaise
bhaiya se,ya jaise apne patients
se krti hu.
Puja- oye hoye naina ab tu khi
usse jake ye mt puch lena ki
apka blood group kya hai.haha
ldka to ye sunte hi farar ho
jayega
naina majal bnd kr ,waise idea
acha hai ,yhi puchu kya usse.
Puja- asa mt krna meri maa,tu
bs usse uski choices puchna or
kuch apni bta dena.
Naina- pakka na yhi bolna hai .
Puja- are ab mujhe experience
to hai nhi pr serials main to ase
hi hota hai .
Naina- tu or tere serials.
Puja- oye mere serials nu kuch
na bol,usi se to mujhe itne ache
idea milte hai.
Naina- ha ha thik hai ,chl ab
mujhe jana hai badi maa kitne
calls kr chuki hai .
Puja- ok to ja naina ji le apni
jindagi.
Naina- puja ki bacchi tera time
ane de tb btati hu.
,naina to the nurse- well sister
maine sbko check kr liya hai to
asi koi tension wali bat nhi hai
bs aap time to time sbko
medicines de dijiyega,mujhe aaj
ghar jldi jana hai to.
Nurse - ji doctor naina.
Uske bad naina ghar aati hai.
BM- aa gyi tu main kbse wait kr
rhi thi .
Naina- oho badi maa late kha hu
time pe to aa gyi .
Badi maa- meharbani teri ab chl
main tujhe ready krti hu.
Naina thought -( koi bachalo
mujhe ,badi maa to mujhe
purani fimlo ki madhubala bna
dalengi)
naina - ahh badi maa main khud
ready ho jaungi aap tension mt
lo.
BM- bilkul nhi ,taiyar to tujhe
main hi karungi.
Naina gives a terrified look to
naveen - wha to help ki nhi ab
yha to bachalo mujhe bhaiya .
Tbhi shalini enters.
Shalini to naveen s mom- maa
ap tension kyu le rhi hai main
hu na main ready krti hu naina
ko aa jaiye dusri taiyariya kr
lijiye.
BM- are shalini beta acha hua
tu aa gyi ,ab tu hi taiyar kr
isey,mujhse to ye manne wali
nhi,or wo chli jati hai.
Naina to naveen and shalini- ye
acha hai ek fasata hai to dusra
bachata hai ,pr bhaiya aap ye mt
sochna ki aap bach gye ,iski saja
milegi barabar milegi.
After two hour .
Sbhi log ek family restra mein
jate hai jo smriti ji ne booked
kiya hota hai .
Naina to shalini- bhabhi m
nervous.
Shalini- are ye kya hmari naina
or nervous,don't worry nervous
hone wali koi bat nhi hai , hm sb
hai na.
Naina- ha hai na aap char jisme
se sirf ek bade papa meri side
or aap teeno ek side ,kyuki aap
apni hone wali sasu maa ke
khilaf to jane se rhi.
Badi maa- tm dono aapas mein
bat krna bnd kro, or naina tu
yha pe koi masti nhi kregi
smjhi.
Naina- ji badi maa ( asa lg rha
hai jaise mein job ka interview
dene ayi hu,be serious ,don't
laugh huh aane do us namune
ko asa sabak sikhaungi ki
dobara yha bhulke bhi nhi
ayega).
Sblog ander jate hai ,or ek
dusre se milte hai.
BM to mrs. Virani- bhut acha lga
aap sb se milkar.
Mrs.virani- hm to bta nhi skte ki
kitne khush hai hm yha aap
sbko dekhke.
Naina in her mind- kash main
bhi asa keh skti ,.
Mrs.virani to naina- are naina
bete tm wha kyu khdi yha aao
na( naina unke pass jati
hai) ,kitni pyari lg rhi hai hmari
naina.
BM- apka beta nhi dikhayi de
rha hai .
Mrs.virani- wo bs aata hi hoga
wo usey kuch jarruri kam aa gya
tha to wo thoda late ho gya.aap
to janti hai aajkl ke bacche bhi
kam ke aage kuch sujhta hi nhi
hai.
Bm- ji ha ye bat to bilkul shi khi
apne ab hmari naina ko hi dekh
lijiye dus bar phone kiya tb khi
jakar samay se aa gyi wrna to
bhul hi jati
naina again in her mind-* ha
kassh ki bhul jati.
Naina- to shalini- kitna acha ho
na bhabhi ki inke bete ka jarrori
kam khtm hi na ho.
Shalini- sshhh wo sun lengi
naina dheere bolo.
Kuch der bad unka beta bhi aa
gya.
Aage ki bat hm kl krenge
January 30 at 6:52pm

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