~TaaRey TS~ Milan.Part 4 updated Page 7

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TaaRey TS-Milan.

OK so guys!First of all a biggg sorry for having disappeared without updating anything! :P Aage se aisa nahi hoga I promise! Isliye I have this story for all of you with a happy ending! 😃 And yes I will update my TaaYam story in this week!.(If anybody remembers it?) 😛

It was a pleasant day,perfect for a day out.The D3 team reached the forests.They were yet to enter it and find a clearance to put up their tents.

"Rey main bohot excited hun!!"shrieked Kria holding Rey's arms.
"Hmm.."he replied back,lost in his own thoughts.Kria's face fell.

Kria had returned after her treatment.(No sara in this story.)But the truth of Kria and Rey's relationship was known to nobody.

"Rey are you ok?"asked Sharon concerned.Right from the beginning of the journey from his home to the forests,Rey had been silent.The D3 team did not pay much attention because all of them were too excited.
"Yes Sharon.Lets go guys.Its afternoon.We need to reach and set up camp before sunset."he said and all went into the forests.

Finally they reached a open space in the middle of the forests.But there was already a tent over there.The gang wondered whose it could be.Rey was still lost but he could somehow feel a calm come over his soul.The next minute everyone heard a familiar voice.

"Nhi Tara!!Paagal hai kya?"said a girl emerging from behind the tent.
Looking at her,Swayam and Rey's hearts began to beat wildly,threatening to pop out any moment!She too came to a halt.Her dark brown orbs showed a mixture of surprise,happiness and shock.

"TAANI!!!!"yelled Swayam,recovering from his shock.He ran toward his sister and embraced her tightly,not even giving her a chance to speak.Meanwhile Rey stood rooted to his place.Was SHE the reason for his restlessness since yesterday?

"Bhaii!Main saans nahi le paa rahi."Taani managed to speak.
"Oops!Sorry.Par tum yaha?Kaisi ho?Kitna samay hogaya tumse mile!"he spoke in one go causing Taani to giggle.
"Oho bhai chill!Main bhi apne doston ke saath camping aayi hun.Aapse milna toh expected tha hi nahi!!Kaise ho aap?"
"Waah chalo acha hai.Sab milkar maze karenge!Chalo sabse mil lo"Swayam said smiling widely.

Taani stepped forward when her eyes met HIS.She could not understand why there were tears in his eyes,but they reflected the same pain,longing and LOVE,hers did.

"Paas aaye dooriyan phir bhi kam na hui..ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi.Ishq sacha wahi jisko milti nahi manzilein."

Both instantly forgot their surroundings.Rey realised that the restlessness gnawing at his heart was only because she had been somewhere near him.

"Rang they noor tha..jab kharib tu tha ek jannat sa tha yeh jahan..waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa likhke chod gaya tu kahan."

Both needed no words.Their eyes communicated the love of their souls.Both the pairs were filled with tears,both hearts recollecting long-lost beautiful memories.
Unkowingly they were now standing close to each other.

"Hamari adhuri kahani..hamari adhuri kahani.(x4)"

Rey's hands were rising to wipe away Taani's tears when they both heard Vishesh's voice from the background.Taani and Rey were brutally pulled back from their world.Reality struck Rey and memories of Taani's engagement flashed through his mind.His hands never reached her cheeks.
Rey stepped back.Kria came and stood next to him.While Vishesh came beside Taani and called out to her.

"Hey guys!Tum sab yaha?" he asked the gang.

Taani continued looking at Rey who was now looking down.Her heart ached to see Kria's hand clutching his arms.She again realised he wasn't hers anymore.She wiped her tears away without Vishesh noticing it and vowed to stay from Rey till the time they left the camp.

But true lovers are never connected by any relationship.Their souls are bound in a pure and divine bond.Which can never ever be broken.

"I hope tu meri behen ko khush rakh raha hai Vishesh."said Swayam stepping next to Vishesh.
"Of course Swayam!"said Vishesh holding Taani's hand."Taani kuch bolo apne bhai ko?"
"Ji bhai.Mujhe koi pareshaani nahi hai."Taani said giving a small smile.

The sight itself pained Rey.His soul cried for Taani.His heart had no further capacity of taking anymore pain.He was pretty certain it would stop beating if it broke once more. But he had to bear it.For Taani.He could not make her uncomfortable.He had to make her believe that he was happy.

"Yaar Taani tu toh humein kisise mila bhi nahi rahi!"said Anya,one of Taani's friends.

Anya,Taani,Tara and Vishesh had come together.

The introductions were made by Sharon.
"And this is Kria.Our best friend and Rey's girlfriend."she completed making Taani close her eyes tightly lest tears fell from them.
"Waah Rey!Kaafi achi choice hai."said Vishesh.Rey gave him a small smile.
"Thanks Vishesh."he said.

Rey made a firm decision to not come in Taani's way for the entire duration of their camping.But fate had other plans.

The evening passed with Taani and Rey stealing glances at each other but staying away.Rey could not place the emptiness in her eyes..though she appeared to be smiling with Vishesh by her side,he knew her smile wasn't genuine.Taani was undergoing the same.She could feel pain radiating from Rey's soul.She could not understand why his eyes were this empty.Wasn't he happy with Kria?But the enitre gang was teasing them,save her brother who was silent.

The echoes of pain emerging from the estranged lovers' souls could not be heard by anyone.But destiny could,for she had decided to play the final part of the game.

At night,
Rey had walked off saying he felt too stiff.In reality his mind needed some peace.He had been unable to comprehend his situation.
One part of him wanted to take Taani in his arms and the other part remembered the barriers between them.he was unsure as to how was he supposed to survive after this encounter with her again.Helpless he had walked away from everyone.

About 1 hour had passed and Rey had still not returned.The gang was sitting around a fir and warming themselves.The night was cold but bright because of the the full moon and millions of stars' lighting up the sky.But everyone was worried for Rey.

"Swayam,Rey ab tak nahi laute!Mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai."Kria said.
"Haan yaar..we should go and search for him.Subah se kuch thik nahi lag raha tha."Vicky echoed Kria's thoughts.
Vicky's words worried Taani more.Her heart filled with fear for Rey's safety."Krisnaji,please mere Rey ko surakshit rakhna."she prayed in her mind.

"Guys lets divide ourselves into groups.Swayam,kria,bharat,and Vicky you guys come with me.Vishesh,Taani,Vicky and Simmi you guys be in a group.Amar,Anya and Tara tumlog yahi par camp mein rukhna."said Sharon and all of them set off in search of Rey,falling into the smart trap set by destiny.

Everyone walked on shouting for Rey.They could hear the skies thundering,which meant it would rain soon.

With Taani's group,
They were walking when Simmi stumbled on a twig and fell on Vicky who held the flashlight,their only source of light.Due to the impact of the fall the flashlight went off.

"Shit!!"murmurmed Vishesh.He frantically searched for his phone.He finally found it and turned on its light.But all of them got a rude shock.Taani had disappeared!!

With Taani,
After the flashlight broke,Taani had gotten seperated from her group.Now she was all alone,searching and calling out for Rey,praying for his safety.Suddenly it started raining.Taani spotted a cave.

With the rest,
Vishesh and group had come back and met with SwaRon's group.Swayam was shocked on hearing that Taani too had gotten lost.
"Shit!Ab Taani ko kaha dhunde?"asked Sharon to no one in particular.
"Dhundna toh hoga.Chalo."said a scared and tensed up Swayam.
But Vishesh held his hands preventing him from going.

"Swayam,please think practically.Its raining and we all are drenched.Aise mein agar hum taani aur Rey ko dhundne gaye toh ham sab bhi musibat mein phas jaayenge."siad Vishesh.
"Par Vishesh,Rey aur Taani ka kya?"asked Kria,fearing for Rey's safety as well as praying that Taani shouldn't find him.
"Mujhe bhi fikar hai unki Kria.Par aise raat mein,woh bhi baarish mein we can't go and search for them."replied Visesh.

"Ok,par suraj ki pehle kiran par hum unhe dhundne nikal jaayenge."Said Swayam,somehow feeling that Rey and Taani would be safe if they found each other,which he strongly felt they would.

All agreed and anxious,returned back to the camp.

So will Taani find Rey?What will happen between them if she does?Read on..in the next update! Next update ready hai.But I need comments and likes to update it!😳 Constructive criticism welcome.😃

INDEX

CHAPTER 1-Above
CHAPTER 2-PAGE 2
CHAPTER 3-PAGE 5
CHAPTER 4-PAGE 7



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Posted: 9 years ago
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me first *Dancing*


Swagat h Ji Aapka swaagat h :)
itne mahino baad waapis aaye aap *_*
dhanya bhaag hamare :D
*Note the Sarcasm* -_-

Teko to mein hike par dekhti hu...

OS <3
Starting se hi goosebumps aagaye mujhe :P

Taani
is There *_*

that Look-Look
tears :(
Vishesh -_-
Kria *Vomits*

TaaRey *_*

Jungle mein Mangal :P

Rey lost :O

Taani h na :D ;D

Taani bhi lost...Rey bhi lost :D

Mann mein phoita laddoo

Jaldi update kar :/


Edited by Muskan_TR - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aap aa gayi? ^_^ *Note the sarcasm*
You idiot gandi ladki! I hate you! >_< Koi story Complete nai karti apni.. :/
Tujhe to WhatsApp or hike pe dekh lungi 😡
Story! _ _
Kya chahiye behen? Itni achi story ko likhegi and beech me chod degi :'(
Rey lost :o but Taani bhi lost *smirking* we know your plan kala baby! :* wo milenge baharein khilengi _
Jaldi update nahi kiya to! 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome dear
sprb
amezing yr
loved it
taarey , taashesh,kriyansh, krishesh akhir hoga kya
update soon dear
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muski n angel of love :) bichari bachi ko Chod do... nai to story kon likhega apne liye.. awsome start... kriya n vishesh -_- huh dono jungle me gayab ho gaye... dono ek dusre ko mil jayenge yay... ab jaldi update krna.. nahi to. .. :@
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey super duper interesting story

amazing ⭐️
mind blowing 👏
fantastic ⭐️
story
really excited to read next part
😳

pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one..
hope taani finds rey soon..
plz update asap.. 😊
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TaaRey TS-Milan.

Part 2
Taani spotted a cave.But the sight of the figure standing at its entrance sent waves of relief through her heart.She ran and hugged him.She had found Rey!Safe and sound.

Rey staggered due to the force of Taani's hug.She was crying badly.

(Tum Hi Ho BGT.)

"Taani..shhh"Rey said embracing her.He ran his hands over her hairs,calming her down.

He forcefully broke the hug and made her look at him.He cupped her cheeks and wiped her tears.

"Taani relax..I am fine."He needed no explanations as to why she was crying.He knew she must have been hell worried for him.
"Aap paagal ho?Aise bhi koi chale jaata hai bhala?Jungle hai Rey..agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh?"she shouted at him pushing his hands away.
"Kuch hua toh nahi na?"he said again cupping her cheeks.

They both looked at each other.Taani and Rey were staring into each other's souls through their eyes.And their souls showed them the concern and the ocean of love they held for each other.

"Hum bheeg rahe hai..lets go inside the cave."said Rey breaking the eyelock and looking at the white clothes sticking to her drenched body.He too was completely drenched.He had removed his shirt and his vest was now sticking to his wide muscular chest.(Archi di control!! 😆)

She was conscious now under his intense gaze.She entered the cave with him and warmed herself in front of the fire he had managed to lit.

Few minutes later,Rey spoke.
"Ek baat puchun"he asked her.
"Ji."
"Kya tum Vishesh ke saath khush ho?"surprising both her and himself by his directness.
"Kya..kya matlab.Haan khush hun."she fumbled not looking into his eyes.

"Really?"
"Haan."
"Toh mujhe dekhkar kaho na."

She did not reply.

"Sach toh yahi hai ki tum mujhe dekh kar yeh keh hi nahi paaogi.Kyunki tumhe dar hai ki kahi main tumhare andar ke khaalipan ko pehchaan toh nahi lunga."he said shocking her.

"Yeh toh mujhe aapse kehna chahiye.Kria aapke saath hai par phir bhi apke aankhon mein koi chamak nahi nahi hai.Kyu Rey?"she countered his words.

"Whatever."he said standing up.
"Tum kyu jawab nahi deti?Pyaar nahi karti Vishesh se?"he asked her turning around.

"Meri personal life se aapko kya matlab?"she said standing up and facing him.

"Wow!Can you enlighten me what you mean by 'personal'?"Rey said his anger making him forget all his vows to stay away from her.He needed answers!

She looked away.

"Maine tumhe isliye jaane diya tha kyunki mujhe yakeen tha ki tumhari khushi mere saath nahi balki Vishesh ke saath hai.Do you have any idea how much it pains me to see this emptiness in you."he said taking steps toward her,making her take equal number of steps backward.

"Bolo Taani?Pura shaam observe kiya hai maine tumhe.Tum jaanti bhi ho tumhari khushi mere liye kitni important hai?Answer me dammit!!"he yelled at her holding her by her shoulders.

They were now outside,not concerned that they were completely drenched due to the heavy rains.

Taani was utterly shocked.She did not expect that..that she still mattered to him.

"Aap bhi toh khush nahi ho!Main aapko isliye chodkar gayi thi,kyunki mujhe laga ki main nahi hun aapke liye sahi.Kria aapke liye sahi hai..kyunki woh ek dancer hai.Mujhe bhi dard hota hai..aapko aise dekhkar."she told him.
It was Rey's turn to be stunned.The realisation that she had sacrificed his and her happiness just so that he could have a dancer for a life partner hit him.HOW COULD SHE??

His hands gripped her shoulders even more tightly,hurting her.

"WHAT?How could you..DO YOU EVEN KNOW YOU MEAN THE WORLD TO ME?Kya tum jaanti ho meri kya haalat hogayi thi tumse alag hokar?Main tumse toh alag hogaya par tumhare ehsaas ko apne aap se ek pal ke liye bhi juda nahi kar saka.KYU TAANI?WHY??WHY DID YOU TAKE THIS DECISION?Meri galti ke wajahse tum ne khudko aur mujhe itna dard kyu diya?WHY?Tum toh bohot kuch jaanti ho na pyaar ke baaremein.YEH KYU NAHI SAMAJ PAAYI KI PYAAR SAATH CHODNE KA NAAM NAHI HOTA?"he yelled at her.

Hot tears scorched their faces.He was hovering over her,their bodies touching each other's.

"I..I am sorry..So..sorry.I..I love you Rey..meri sirf aashiqui hi nahi,meri zindagi aapse hai."she said unable to bear the pain his eyes held.She was tired of running away from him.

Her words calmed his soul..touching the deepest core of his heart.She raised her hands to wipe his tears which made him shut his eyes.None was bothered about the rains drenching them.He pulled her toward him by her waist.


*Music* (Please start playing LAAL ISHQ from Ram Leela at this point.)(I could have chosen ang laga de too..but laal ishq gives this entire sequence a pure and divine feel.Plus TaaRey ka ishq laal hi hai!😛)

Their foreheads were touching each other's.Rey opened his eyes to look at her.Taani shivered due to his intense gaze which held pure love..
Her gaze met his.Both could feel the longing and love of their souls.The rains made the atmosphere even more serene and magical.

Yeh laal ishq..yeh malaal ishq..yeh aib ishq..yeh bair ishq..(x2) Ishq..Ishq..ishq..

Rey kissed her forehead and her cheeks.She shut her eyes and his tiny fists clutched his vest.

"Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa..raha na main fir apne jaisa..(x2)

He kissed her eyes and stopped to look at her.His palms ran down the length of her arms..goosebumps made their appearance on her arms,making them look like freshly bloomed flowers.

Mera naam ishq..tera naam ishq..mera naam ishq..tera naam ishq..mera naam ishq..tera naam ishq..mera naam..tera naam..mera naam ishq..

He bent lower and placed wet kisses on the nape of her neck and her earlobes..making her moan his name in pleasure.Though their bodies were cold due to the rains..but their souls were on fire.

Yeh laal ishq..yeh malaal ishq..yeh aib ishq..yeh bair ishq..(x2) ishq..ishq..ishq..

*Music*

He cupped her cheeks which made her open her eyes.She could feel the desires in his heart..more emotional than physical.She kissed his forehead..surrendering herself to him..telling him that she longed for him..desired him..just as much as he did.

Apna naam badal dun..ya tera naam chupa lun..ya chodke saari aag main vairaag utha lun..bas ek rahe mera kaam ishq mera kaam ishq..mera kaam ishq..mera naam tera naam mera naam ishq..Yeh laal ishq..yeh malaal ishq..yeh aib ishq..yeh bair ishq..(x2)ishq..ishq..ishq..

He smiled and scooped her in his arms,never breaking eye contact.Taking her inside the cave,he made her lay on the straw and himself lay atop her.

He kissed her shoulders and slid the strap of her top down.She opened the buttons of his shirt and kissed his bare chest..making him close his eyes tight.He rolled over with her atop him and placed kisses down her arms..simultaneously running his fingers over her velvety back..opening the doris of her kurti.

*Music*

Yeh kaali raat jhakad lun..yeh thanda chand pakad lun..ohhh yeh kaali raat jhakad lun..yeh thanda chanda pakad lun..

Soon their bare bodies mingled with each other..creating a divine path for the union of two souls.His lips caressed every part of her body..she reciprocated with the same passion.

Din raat ke yeh teri bhed ka..rukh mod ke main rakh dun..tujh sang bair lagaya aisa..raha na main fir apne jaisa..ho raha na mein phir apne jaisa..

He came atop her and cupped her cheeks and kissed her forehead and lips gently..

Tera naam..mera naam tera naam ishq..Yeh laal ishq..yeh malaal ishq..yeh aib ishq yeh bair ishq..(x2)

He entered into her..and kissed her lips to distract her mind from the pain..though this pain felt beautiful to her..for it signified her union with him.She was his now..both her body and soul were his.He had marked her as his..and he was now entirely hers too.

Both fell asleep in each other's arms..content after their blissful union.Taani lay in Rey's embrace..protected from the outside world.
Nothing could ever seperate them now..for LOVE HAD FOUND ITS WAY.
For their divine union had been God's own gift to their true love.❤️

The next morning,
Rey rubbed his eyes as the sun rays streamed into the cave.He looked down at Taani,His Taani sleeping peacefully on his chest.He smiled and caressed her hairs.

"Beautiful.."he whispered to himself."I promise you Taani..kabhi bhi tumhara saath nahi chodunga..aur tumhe bhi jaane nahi dunga."he said stroking her hairs,while his other palm was intertwined with hers.

But memories of last night slowly came back to him.He finally realized what had happened last night and how it would affect various lives..Of course,nothing had been a mistake..for last night was divine,pure and not an outcome of mere lust or desire.

But the impact??But how would Taani react once she would wake up?And Swayam??What about Kria..and Vishesh?? Rey's mind was swirling with questions when he felt Taani stirring.. destiny was about to play the remaining part of its game.

Ok!So that's it with this chapter.I know I suck at writing love-making scenes..but first time tha yaar!:P
So how do you guys think will Taani react??Will Rey and Taani seperate again due to Kria and Visesh?Will Taani herself again decide to go away from him?

Ab iska jawab jaan ne ke liye toh like aur comment karna padega!Joote aur tamatar bhi chalenge..for that crap love-making sequence I wrote..
😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update
Loved it
Romantic
I don't want separation
I want them to face everything together
Continue sooon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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HEY
it was just sooo beautiful .
sooo magical
so romantic 😳

n i so loved taani's dialogue when she said " meri sirf ashiqui nahi . meri zindagi hai aapse "
it was really touching 😳

pls pls update asap
u wrote it brilliantly 👏⭐️

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