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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
romantic updated
nice yr i like it
raj naina ka dance superb
plz updated soon

love arti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..2of the most interesting plots are going side by side han...my favrt lrl n the grt twilight saga...enjoynng it too much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
hi
the up is really good
so all are going out for night out expect naina who is not well but Raj he came to see her
wow the song dance amazing yaar
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Hey kiran

Awesome update
Rn dance nd Raj shocked expression nd how naina can feel him its all amazing facts yar

Naina kaise raj ki shocked karke uska hath pakad leti h
Do update soon nd reveal all d truth behind Raj behavior nd his live for naina
How he know her either naina dont know him
Nt now plz reveal yar
Isn't Raj really a vampire or somebody else
Coz as u r taking time nd getting it suspicious . M start gaining some doubts that u ll do something different

Update soon

Love Millee 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
thanks millie nd i will reveal it soon that who is raj ..keep reading hehe ..thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
thanks so much all jinko maine mention nhi kiya coz aapke naam nhi pta but thnx for like my ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Read the part 1 nice beginning let's see how the story shapes further 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Read Chapter 2. Loved it! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi kiran
Different story

Nice one and interesting
Pl cont soon

Also PM me when u update next

Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
**Tum dena saath mera ..(a rn ff ) **

CHAPTER ...5

LOVE IS IN THE AIR

Misha andar aati hai nd dekhti hai naina abhi bhi hairian hokar khadi hai...

Misha: naina oh naina kya hua

Naina:misha pta nhi yr abhi koi tha fir se gayab ho gya ...

Misha : naina tu firse shuru ho gyi arre yr tu so gyi hogi tune koi sapna dekha hoga ...

Naina : ha yr ho sakta hai but mai ..

Misha : oh ho vo sab chod mai tujko kuch batai hu trip ke bare mai chal aaja

Naina abhi bhi vahi khadi thi misha usko khinch ke le gyi aur dono baith ke baate karne lagi ...

Udhar raj apne room mai tha vo ek window ke pass khada tha nd smile kar raha tha tab sherry aati hai uske pass...

Sherry : kya baat hai aaj koi bahut khush hai ..

Raj : oh tum tum kab aai

Sherry : jab tum akele ho ke yaha smile kr rahe the ...

Raj : sherry mai bahut khush hu yr aaj ...

Raj nd sherry bahut ache dost hai raj jo baat naveen se bhi nhi bolta vo sherry se bol deta hai ...

Sherry : mile the us se aaj

Raj : haa aur pta hai vo bhi mujse bahut kuch pooch rahi thi bahut confuse hai vo ...

Sherry : to kya socha tumne bata doge usko sab kuch ..

Raj : pta nhi kuch samaj nhi aa raha yr batau ja nhi vo samjegi ya nhi mujpar believe karegi bhi ya nhi ...

Sherry : raj saari baate tumko yaad hai usko nhi uska confuse hona jiaz hai jab tak tum usko bataoge nhi vo kaise samjegi ..magar agar tume bataya ho sakta hai vo tumpar yakeen na kare ja fir uski wajh se hum log kisi khatre mai na aa jaye ...

Raj : is liye to nhi bata raha tumne aur bhai ne mere liye bahut kuch kiya hai aaj agar tum nhi hoti to mai kabhi naina ko dekh bhi nhi paata ...tumari future dekhne ki shakti ki wajh se hi aaj mai naina ke pass hu ...

Sherry : par raj meri vo power bhi hamesha kaam nhi aayegi naina ko confront tume hi karna hoga uske sare sawalo ke jawab usko is tarah dene hoge ki vo samj jaye ...aur naveen ko tum jante ho vo tumko kabhi allow nhi karega ...

Raj ; janta hu fir tum kyu naveen ke khilaf meri help karti ho

Sherry : coz mai janti hu tum uske bina kabhi reh hi nhi sakte magar plz itna khayak rakhna ki kisi ko bhi koi pro na ho ..

Raj : dnt wry mai kabhi apne pyar ke liye apne dosto ko khatre mai nhi daaluga ...

Sherry :ek baat aur tumari classes ka time table mujko de dia brig ne so pyar ko chodo aur classes pe bhi dhyan do...

Nd both laughs

Sherry : ek baat aur raj huda naina ki taraf kuch jyada hi attract ho raha hai ...

Raj : dnt wry usko mai dekh lunga

Sherry ; oh hlo maarna mat usko bechara usko nhi pta vo kiske saath pange le raha hai

Raj ; dnt wry agar usko peetna hota tabhi peet deta jab usne pehli baar mujpe haath uthaya tha ...

Sherry : hmm good boy chalo ab mai chalti hu tumare angry bhai ko bhi mujko hi sambhalna hai is se phle usko pata chale tum naina se mile the mai usko kahi aur busy karti hu ...

Raj : ok take care aur suno vo kal class hai to usme ...

Sherry : ha ha samj gyi ab jau mai ...

Raj nd sherry shares a sweet hug nd said bye to each other ...

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Udhar naveen ground mai ghoom raha tha vo dekhta hai ki pass ke trees ke pass kuch shadow si dikh rahi hai...

Naveen : god yeh raj nhi sudhrega isko bola tha naina se door rehna magar yeh maine mana kia tha fir bhi...

Naveen dheere dheere vaha jata hai vaha koi couple hai jo ek dusre ko kiss kar rahe the ...

Naveen : tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho ...

Tab vo dono dar gaye nd naveen vo to mooh bna kar khada tha ...nd they are ali nd pooja ..

Naveen : tum dono
Pooja nd ali darr gaye aur naveen shocked coz usko laga tha ki raj hai ...

Naveen : vo m sry mujko nhi pta tha ki aap ho sry sry ...

Pooja : sir vo aap kisi ko mat batana vo hum to bas ...

Ali ; pooja aap rehne do hum baat karte hai ..sir vo hum doni bas ..vo jaisa aapne dekha vaisa kuch nhi tha ...

Tabhi sherry vaha aati hai ...

Sherry : m sry ali nd pooja vo naveen to bas aise hi ghoom rahe the we r sry ...

Pooja : vo aap kisi ko

Sherry : nhi hum kisi ko kuch nhi bolege ..naveen chalo jaha se ...

Aur sherry naveen ko lekae gyi vaha se ..aur alu nd pooja ko embarresment se bacha lia ...thodi door jake

Sherry zor zor se hasne lagi ...

Naveen : sherry vo mai vo mujko laga ki ...

Sherry still laughing

Sherry : kya laga tumko ki vo raj hai aur naina ke saath...

Naveen : ha vo mujko laga ki raj hai vo to mai usko rokne gya tha ...

Sherry : oh god tum na naveen pagal ho aur tumko kya raj aisa lagta ho jo aise sabke saame naina ke saath kuch karega hehehe ...

Naveen : sherry haso mat aur mujko kya pta ki vo pooja hai aur

Sherry : aur tumne unko romance karne se rok diya kya yr yaha ke sare couples ko romance karne se rokoge kya ..hahahahahahaha ..unka face dekhne layak tha vo bechare kiss kar rahe the aur tumne jake unko pakad liya ...

Naveen : ab muje kya pta ki yaha aur bhi love birds hai aurr yeh pooja nd ali kab se ...

Sherry : hume yaha aaye ek mahine se jayada ho gya to sab ke connections bhi kag gye pooja nd ali ka bhi ab sab romance karne se phle tumse poochne aayege kya ...

Naveen :ab mera mazak mat uadao tum m just concernd about my bro ...

Sherry : vo bro kafi bada hai tumara bass chale to tum uski kiss bhi rok doge bechare pooja aur ali ko kya pta tha ki unka romance bhang karne naveen aa jayega . ...

Nd sherry laughing hard ...

Naveen smiles and looks at her she is looking so cute while laughing nd she is so preety usne kabhi notice hi nhi kia tha ...
Sherry stops laughing naveen ko aise dekh kar vo ruk gyi ..

Sherry : what happend tum aise kyu dekh rahe ho kya hua ..

Naveen in trance : u r so beautiful

Sherry loudly : what

Naveen apni dunia se bahar aata hai ..

Naveen : ha nhi kuch nhi vo bas aise hi

Sherry : naveen tum bhi na chalo ab kisi aur ko disturb mat kro lets go

Sherry chalti nd naveen uske peeche peeche dono naveen ke room tak aate hai nd sherry usko bye bolti hai nd jati hai ..

Naveen room mai enter hota hai nd jakar apne bed par let jata hai ...

Naveen : yeh kya ho raha hai mujko kyu mai aise dekh raha tha usko ...ni naveen no she us just a good frnd

Raj : ha ha she is just a good frnd

Naveen jump marke khada hota hai

Naveen : raj tu kab aaya aur aisa kuch nhi hai jo tune suna vo to msi bas

Raj : ha ha aisa kuch ho hi nhi sakta mera bhai kisi ladki ke barr mai soch hi nhi sakta hai na .
Raj is grinned

Naveen raj ka ear pull karte huye ...

Naveen ; jyada smart mat ban samjha aur tu aaj aaya nhi tour par kaha gayab tha firse naina se milne gya ...

Raj is like a kid jisko chori candy khate huye pakad liya ho

Raj : mai vo brig ke pass tha na bhai mai kaise ja sakta hu naina ke pass aap bhi na acha mai chalta hu abhi aap socho jiske bare mai soch rahe the ...

Itna bol kar raj bhaag gya aur naveen idhar udhar dekh raha tha ...

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NEXT DAY MORNING

Aaj raj ko apni first class leni hai in sab ke saath so brig se permission lekar vo sabhi ko lekar forest mai chala gya aur uske saath ek major maj dutta bhi the ...ab ofcouse forest officer hai to forest mai hi class hogi na ...sab raj ke saath IMA ke pass wale forest mai gye ...aaj raj army uniform mai tha aur baki sab bhi ...naina raj ke is look ko dekhkae bahut hairan hui coz aisa raj to bas usne dekha tha to yeh yaha aise kyu ...

Naina : misha ye rajvir ko kya hua vo to aisa nhi tha na

Misha : arre naina mai tujko batana hi bhool gyi thi ...( iske baad misha ne naina ko uske behosh hone ke baad ki full story batai )

Naina : iska matlab us din mujko rajvir ne bachaya tha ..

Misha : ha yr varna aaj tu un jungli logo ka food ban gyi hoti ..

Naina thought "kon ho tum rajvir ek sapna ya ek hakikat ...ek baar saamne aate ho fir door chale jate ho us din tumne muje bachaya aur tumara real face bhi aisa hi tha to vo sab darama kyu ..aur kal kal kya hua vo sach tha ja nhi ...tumne bola tha tum mere sawalo ka jawab doge magar kyu nhi dete...kyu mai tumare saamne aakar kamzor ho jati hu .."

Aur naina raj ki aawaz sun ke apni thought se bahar aati hai .

Sab log line bnakar khade hai nd raj nd major dutta lead kar rahe hai unko

Raj : so officers as u all knw m a forest officer nd ek army officer ka half se jyada career office ki jagah forest mai aata hai so is liye har ek officer ko forests ki knowledge honi jaruri hai is liye aaj se aap logo ki forest tranning shuru hoti hai ...hamara first task hai route map ...aap sab ko ek ek map diya jayega nd aapko map ko navigate karte huye given postion pe pahunchna hai within 3 hours ...nd aap akele nhi honge balki two two ke pairs mai honge come .

Aap 25 log hai nd included me nd major 27 so major is puri exercise ke incharge honge ...

Major dutta : aap me se12 log aage aao nd yaha par se slips choose karo jiska name aayega vo aapka partner hoga ..
Sab aate hai nd slips choose karte hai naveen nd misha ka pair bna huda nd sherry ka pooja ka kunal ke saath ..ali ka alekh ke saath aise hi sab ke pair ban gye bachi naina ..

Major : lft naina aap bach gyi aap ko capt shikhawat ke saath jna hoga ..

Naina : ok sir


END OF PART ...CONTI IN NEXT PART

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL OF U

LOVE CRYSTAL

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