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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Kripa rushes to the car

K: bhoot bhoot bhoot

Ra: kaha hey bhoot

K: vuss bungalow me

Bb: di kya app sach me bhoot dekhey kya, kaissa tha bhoot kya movies main dikatey naa vayise hi hey kya

Ra: bobby thu chup kar, pehle se hi teri di darr gayi hey aur thu bhi naa

Bb: maine kya kiya

K: shivering, radha jaldhi se ghar chalna varna

Ra: ok ok lets go

They reach home, and directly get into bed.

Angad is totally lost in kripa's beauty, someone shakes him and angad comes back from his trance and looks at the person, he turns back to face the person

We see a girl wearing mini shorts, a t-shirt,

Girl: what are you doing here

A: hiding the payal, hmmm nothing by the way where did you go

Girl: main tho khanne ka intezam karne ghayi

A: wow misthy you are great, tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe bhuk lagh rahi hey

Mi: oh oh ….oh kya hey na, trying to act shy tumhari hone valli biwi ne phone karke bholi hey and becomes angry

A: arey yaar gussa kyun hothi hey

Mi: gussa nahin tho kya karu, oh mujhe samjthi kya teri naukar har bar mujhe phone karke thang karthi hey

A: chill babes chill, abhi mujhe bhuk laghi hey chalo kathey hey

Misty and angad goes to the bungalow and have their dinner

After dinner

Mi: angad tujhe yehi ghar milla kya kardhine keliye

A: kyun kya huva iss ghar ko bahuth kubsurath tho hey

Mi: arey bhoot bungalow se kuch kaam nahin hey ye

Listening to the word bhoot angad starts laughing

Mi: kya huva kyun huss rahey ho

A: kuch yaad aghaya tha

Mi: arey bhol bhi tho sahi kya yaad aghaya hey

A: thu ane se kuch dher pehle ek ladki yaha ayi thi, maine soch thu thi aur and he tells her everything except about payal now misthy also starts laughing

Mi: bechari ko darra dhiya naa

A: arey maine kaha darraya oh tho kudh

Mi: ek abr apni shekal vu ss ayine main tho dekh thu kudh hi darr jayegha

A: hehehe very funny come on lets get back to work, but you know what she was so beautiful

Next day morning kripa and bobby goes back to their home, kripa forgets about nights incident

K: mama josh bhaya aghaye kya

G: abhi nahin aye beta

K: kya?????????, main vune nahin chodunghi ane dhijiye vune

Just then we see a figure entering the house, we see his lips and his hand saying gayathri to be quiet

G: atha hi hogha , shayad traffic main

K: haan haan har bar app vunki hi side lijiye apka ladla hey naa oh

Person: haan main nahin tho kya thu vunka ladla hey

Kripa turns back to face the person, its josh

J: bhol

K: main app se bhath nahin karunghi

J: tik hey teri marji, bobby iss bar thu bahuth hi lucky hey ye le sare chocolates tere liye

Kripa snatches the chocolate box from josh's hand

K: ye mere hey, aura bb jaldhi se fresh hojayiye mujhe gumne jana hey

J: ji huzur, jaise app kahey

Bb: di abb mujeh chocolate mileghi ya nahin

K: sirf ek mileghi

Bb: I wish ki apki shaadhi jaldhi hojaye thab sare ke sare chocolates mere honghey

K: bobbyyyyyyyyyyyy she runs back of him

G & j: bilkul bachi hey

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thats for today

hope everyone enjoyed it

luv all

sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
amazing part
haha dont worry bobby she will get married fast
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
hey awesome part.. n awww 'bhoot' thing woz funy 😆
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
the bhoot part was so hilarious
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
i hope a-k will meet again soon 😃 😃 😃
cont soon plz 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26

Thanks to everyone for writting comments

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Part 3

Kripa, josh and bobby gumne jatey hey

Bb: josh bhaiya patha hey kripa din e bhoot ko dekha hey

J: shocked, kya

K: bobby chup hoja

J: kripa ye bobby kya bhol raha hey

Bobby narrates the whole story to josh

Josh starts laughing uncontrollably

K: josh will you stop laughing

J: kripa iss zamane main bhi bhoot hotey hey kya, main nahin mantha tumhe jarrur kuch na kuch ghalath fayimi (misunderstanding) huvi hoghi

K: app mano ya naa mano mujhe kuch pharak nahin padtha

At the bunglow

Angad is looking at the payal, just then misty comes from back and snatches that payal,

A: misty, give me the payal

Mi: oh tho tum pyaar kartey ho vuss ladki se

A: shayad and he snatches back the payal from misty

Mi: lekin let me remind you something

A: what

Mi: I think sirf dho haftey bachey hey apki shaadhi ke liye

A: haan haan mujhe yaad hey lekin pyar hone ke liye koi khass samay tho nahin hogha naa

Angad cell rings, looks at the caller ID and smiles

A: hey darling kaisey ho

Other side: (worriedly) angad jaldi se ghar ajao

A: kya huva dadi sub tik tho hey naa

Da: jaldhi se tu yaha ajja

A: main abhi nikhal raha hun

And he disconnects the phone

Mi: hey angad kya huva sub tik tho hey na

A: patha nahin dadi bahuth gabra rahi thi, mujhe abhi jana hogha , kyat um mere sath avoghi

Mi: nahin I will stay back and do call me as you reach there

A: sure bye misty if you need some help call our friends

Mi: oh log tho atey hi honghey I already called them last night

A: ok bye misty take care

As soon as angad zooms off in his car we see another car approaching the building

Misty looks at the person coming out of the car, person approaches misty

Mi: (thinking) what a handsome guy

Person: hi I am Josh Sharma

Mi: hi I am misty kapoor

J: (thinking) wow what a beauty

And they both shake their hands

J: kya main ek bath puchu

Mi: haan puchiye

J: kya app iss banglow main rehtey hey

Mi: nahin main ek interior designer hun, iss ghar ko renovate karney ayi

J: tho apne yaha koi bhoot ko dekha

Mi: shocked, ji? App ko............

J: kuch nahin kal rath ko meri behen yaha ayi thi aur oh keh rahithi ki yaha bhoot hey

Mi: oh.....................(tho iski behen ko hi angad dekha tha )

J: tho kya apne bhoot ko dekha hey

Mi: oh actually mere ek friend hey oh bhi kal mere sath aya tha he was cleaning the house in the dark your sister saw him and thought he is the bhoot

J: ha ha ha ha JJJJJ I am sorry meri behen bhi naa

Mi: anyway app yehi rehtey kya

J: nahin yaha humare dada ji rehtey hey holidays main yaha atey hey

Mi: oh

J: app kaha ke rehney valle hey

Mi: Mumbai se ayi hun main

J: arey hum bhi tho mumbai main rehtey hey, hum kuch aur dhin yehi rehney valley hey so hope to see you around

Mi: jarrur vaise main bhi akhele bore ho javunghi,

J: bye

Mi: bye

Angad reaches Mumbai by evening

He enters the house but there is no one

A: kaka kaka

A old comes from kitchen, he is the servant

Kaka: angad beta sub log hospital ghaye hey

A: sub tik tho hey naa

Kaka: apkey hone valle sasurji ko heart attack aya hey

A: kuan si hospital

Kaka: city hospital

Angad rushes to the hospital and sees everyone sad near the ICU but doesn't see the main person the girl whom he going to be married, he goes to his dad

A: dad kya huva rao uncle ko

A'D: beta ajj subha rao uncle ke ghar se phone ayi thi ki priya (bride) gayab hey

A: shocked, what? Gayab kaise ho sakthi hey

A'D: oh kissike sath bhagayi hey, aur bath suntey hi rao ko heart attack huva tha

A: shocked, dad lekin oh tho iss shaadhi se

A'D: oh sirf rao ji key liye haan bholi thi

Angad doesn't know how to react, he his a lot happy inside but he can't show his happiness so he just goes away from their silently he sees a empty room around the corner of the corridor and dances and jumps just then a nurse comes their

Nurse: excuse me mister app yaha kya kar rahey hey

A: oh sorry, and goes back to his parents

A'D: angad beta kya tum ek bar yaha doctors se bath karoghey oh humko kuch nahin bhol rahey hey

A: main abhi aya and he goes to the recptionist

re: may I help you sir

A: i would like to meet your cardiologist

recepionist dials some number

re: sir someone has come to meet you

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re: may i know the reason sir

A: say him its Dr. ANGAD KHANNA

re: his name is Dr. Angad Khanna

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re: sir you may go and meet him, he is in room 341

A: thank you

he goes to room 341 and knocks on the door

a guy: come in

A: hello shabhir , how are you?

sh: hey angad nice to see you man, i am great how are you, aur tum yaha kaise, i heard you are getting married and on leave

A: haan lekin kuch emergency hey oh hamare rishtey dhar ko yaha admit kiya ghaya hey, he is in ICU now so I just wanted to know his condition

they talk for a while regarding rao's health and angad informs his family members that everything is fine and leaves from their and his ay back home

He calls misty on the way back

Mi: angad sub tik tho hey naa

A: misty you know how happy I am

Mi: for what

A: misty priya udanchu

Mi: kya?

A: misty priya bhagh gayi hey, abb mere pyar ko pane main koi nahin rok saktha mujhe

Mi: abb tum kaha ho

A: I am driving, I will come their in a week, can you manage

Mi: haan main karlunghi, you take care

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thats for today

i wanted to finish this bhoot thing, from next part its going to be interesting

promo:

will angad be successful in geting his love

luv all

sweety

Edited by sweety223 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
thank god tht kabab mein hadi is out now 😆
i hope a-k will meet soon now and angad will get his love 😳
cont soon plz 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
oooo intrestin part.. yay.. hopefuly angad WIL get his luv 😆
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
awesome part
kool the bride ran away 😆
now angad is free 😛
cant wait 4 a-k's official first meetin 😳
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
hehe i also feel like jumpin like angad did 😆 yes now he can have kripa 😃 lol good part cont sooon 👏

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