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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER THIRTY-EIGHT OF THEIR LIVES: HEARTBREAK...

It was their last day in Goa...

Sharon was preparing her date with swayam...

Beside the beach,she placed a table and two chairs,she decorated everything with pink and white,she decorated the table with pink and white rose petals,and roses,a candle,some pastries,snacks,deserts... she placed the table in such a way,so that the waves of sea end at their feet,and while sitting they can get the feel of the calm waves...

She was finishing her preparation,when some1 appeared there...

Rey: wooohooo,I am impressed!!!!!!!! Ye sab kis liye?

Sharon: tere liye nehi hai,so zyada udh mat

Rey faking heartache: ouch,I am hurt!!!!!! Itna preperations koi khooobsurat ladki kaarein,aur wo bhi mere liye na ho,aise din dekhne se pehle mein maar kyun nehi gaya

Sharon: o god,rey,tu vicky ke sath itna mat reh,uske jaise dramebaaz ho gaya hai

Rey: chal thik hai,ye to bol,who is the lucky guy? Jo mere sharon ko mere se dur kar raha hai?

Sharon: pehle promise kar,ye humare beech hi rahega

Rey: arey haan meri maa,ab bol

Sharon(blushing): its swayam

Rey: o teri,ye kab hua?

Sharon: bas yaar,ho gaya,I really find him very sweet,and genuine,and mein uske liye jaise feel karti hu,waise ab tak kisi ke liye feel kiya hi nehi

Rey: areyy areyy,Sharon Raiprakash is in love,that's breaking news!!!! Jiske peeche adhe college ke ladkein padhe hain,she finally chose some1

Sharon: that's the irony yaar,jiske peeche itne ladke hain,jab wo kisi ko chahti hai,tab uuse yehi nehi pata ki ye ladka uuse pasand karta hai ya nehi

Rey: okay now I am confused,kya bol rahi hai?

Sharon(sadly): I mean,I still don't know wat swayam feels for me... he liked kriya,and now,they are friends but I don't know,whether swayam has really moved on or not,aur agar move on kar bhi chukka hai,what place do I hold in his life

Rey holding her shoulder

Rey: sharon,tu itni tension mat le,tu bahar se jitni hi fashionable diva kyun na ho,from inside u r like a sweet,lovely girl!!! And swayam,he is a genuine guy,he will find ur inner beauty,he will love u,for who u r...

Rey(making the situation light): aur waise bhi tere charm se koi bach paya hai kya

Sharon: achha bachhhu?

Rey: ofcrsee,ruk mein tujhe enact karke dikhata hu,swayam kaise karega,so u be sharon ofcrse and I am swayam for now

Sharon laughed

Rey: start!!! Be serious now!!

Rey: woooww,sharon ye sab tumne mere liye kiya? Itna sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi

Sharon: zaroorat kaise nehi thi,u r special!!!

Rey: really!!

Rey took a pink rose from the table,and came in front of sharon

Rey: u r also very special,and I love u too jaanemaan

Sharon laughed

Rey: chal stop laughing and now give me a big hug!!!

Sharon: kisein rey ko yaa??

Rey: hug sirf reyansh singhania ke liye

Sharon laughingly hugged rey,

Sharon: pagal!!!

Rey patted her back: I know!!

Sharon: waise swayam mujhe jaaneman nehi bulata pagal

Rey: abhi nehi bolta hai,to kya hua kuch dino baad bolega

Sharon smiled

Rey : swayam is very lucky,because u r a gem!!!!

Sharon: awww,my cutieee!!!!!!!

Rey: oyee cutie maat bula,mera ek reputation hain!!!

Sharon: ya yaaa,I knowww!!!!

Rey: chal ab alsi swayam ko date pe le aa,mein bhagta hu

Unknown to rey and sharon ,some1 was also witnessing all of these.rather a part of these... And whatever this person saw broke her heart...

On her way...

Neha: hey,tu itni der kaha laga di? Mera packing complete ho gaya hai,lets go and grab dinner,I am starving,aur phir wapas bhi jaana hai

Kriya: ahmmm,wo tu ja,mujhe packing complete karna hai

Neha: but tera to gaya tha packing

Kriya: bola na,kuch packing baaki hai,and I am not hungry,u go...

Neha: okay,whatever u say

Kriya went to her hotel room,sat on her bed,and drops of tears were coming out of her eyes,remembering the evening incidents...

Earlier,

Kriya: hey neha,mera packing complete ho gaya hain,mein zara beach se ghum ke aati hu,pata nehi fir se kab aana ho

Neha: yaa sure,tu ghum ke aaja,mein apna packing complete kar leeti hu tab tak

Kriya happily was strolling in the beach when she saw some decorations far away...

She went ahead to see wat that was and saw sharon

Kriya wondering: sharon yaha?

Then she saw rey playing with a rose and expressing his feelings for sharon...

Rey took a pink rose from the table,and came in front of sharon

Rey: u r also very special,and I love u too jaanemaan

Sharon laughed

Rey: chal stop laughing and now give me a big hug!!!

Sharon: kisein rey ko yaa??

Rey: hug sirf reyansh singhania ke liye

Sharon laughingly hugged rey,

Kriya was beyond shocked to listen to this,she turned around,and walked away with a broken heart...

On her way she met neha,who was talking about food and all,but kriya was not feeling hungry,infact she wasn't feeling anything,it was as if,her heart has suddenly become very heavy,and she cant take it,she wanted to be alone...

Present...

Small drops of tear were constantly flowing down her cheeks

Kriya (in her mind): this was all a joke to him,he always flirts with girls,and he was flirting with me too,why did I took his words so seriously,why did I misinterpreted his words... vicky also flirts with me,I never took his words in a different way,then why why did I took rey's words so seriously,his actions in a different way!!! Why did I thought that I am something more to him,more than a friend,I thought I hold a special place in his heart that no girl has ever took,but I was wrong!!!!!!!

Only one girl has been,and will always be special to him,its only sharon,and its always been like this!!! How could I be soo blind to this!!!! They have always been together!!!!! How could I let this happen,how could I get so vulnerable and fell for ...

Neha barged into the room

Neha: hey kriya ready?

Kriya hurriedly got up and turned around to hid her face,and rubbed her tears away

Kriya: hmmm

Neha: okay then lets goo,nikal te hain, mujhe jaate jaate kuch cheezein kharidna hain

Kriya: ya

Neha: u alright?

Kriya: hmm,chalein?

Neha; ya sure

They brought the necessities and got up in the bus,

Neha and kriya got in the bus,neha was going to sit beside kriya,when vicky called from behind

Vicky: and here I thought girls don't break promises

Neha: arghhh

Neha: kriya,wo u know na.,is stupid vicky se maine promise kiya tha and

Kriya: its okay neha,I am fine,tu ja

Neha grudgingly went to vicky

Neha(sarcastically): and my bad time starts now

Vicky(winking at her): tumhara bad time,aur mera good time

Neha smiled,rolled her eyes,and sat beside him

Meanwhile,

Sharon blindfolded swayam and brought him to the date

She opened the blindfold,and swayam was mesmerized by the sight,everything was heavenly,just like he ever thought his dream date to be,there was beach there was roses...

Swayam: sharon,ye sab

Sharon: this is for u swayam

Swayam: for me?

Sharon: ya,bcoz u r special, u r sweet,u r genuine,u r too cute,and I really like u,I don't know wat u feel for me,but I want to tell u that I have never felt this way before for anyone,u r the 1st guy,for whom I have felt like this... I know I am arrogant,I am sometimes snobbish,and its difficult to handle me,but I will try to change,I will try to be better,I will defntely try to be less problematic and ...

Swayam: sharon sharon please calm urself,can I say something? Will u promise to listen and try to understand

Sharon nodded her head...

Swayam: Sharon,I don't know whether u know this or not,but a few days earlier,I proposed kriya,I wanted kriya and myself to be a couple,but she didn't feel the same for me,and I almost lost our years of friendship because of my feelings... I don't want the same thing to get repeated again,I have found a really good friend in u and I don't want our friendship to face the same problems,that's why I asked u to understand me

Sharon (heart was breaking piece by piece): so u don't feel the same for me?

Swayam: sharon,I am just getting out of this feeling,which I felt for kriya for so long,I think it would be too early for me to commit for such a pure feeling. I am not ready yet... Before getting committed with some1 as special as u,I want to clear out all and any left out feelings... I like u as a a person,as a friend,and I would definitely want to know u more,I would like to get involved in ur life more,infact u also should know me more... We should both know about each other's lives,each other's likings,and after that we will get sure of wat we really feel for each other and whether we are ready to be a couple

Swayam: Will u help me in this?

Sharon nodded her head

Swayam lifted her chin: and sharon,don't u dare change urself,u have a very pure heart,u r sweet,lovely,delicate as a flower no matter how much u show urself to be arrogant... I like u just the way u r

Sharon smiled to him

Swayam: chalein? par kuch deserts kha ke jaate hai...Phir Mumbai jaake hum eek doosre ko jaanna bhi to hai

Swayam and sharon were coming to the bus,on the way rey met them

Swayam: rey tu abhi tak ghum raha hai?

Rey: nehi yaar,wo vicky ne kuch cheezein laane ko bola tha,wohi khareed ne gaya tha

Swayam : okay chalo ab,bus chodne waale hai kuch hi der mein

Rey: haan chalo

Swayam got in the bus

Rey held sharon back

Rey: arey hua kya,ye to bol de

Sharon told rey watever swayam told her

Rey: u r fine na?

Sharon: yaa I am,I mean kind of,I am still rejected u know

Rey held sharon by holding her shoulders: hey sharon,u r not rejected,swayam just wants to get ready so that he can choose u fully and wholeheartedly,it's a good thing,bcoz when he will love u,u will be the only one in his life,there will be no one else,just u,swayam just had borrowed some time from u,and u r stong enough to give him that,right?

Sharon(smiled): right

Rey: that's like my girl

Sharon laughed...

Rey and sharon got into the bus together,kriya watched them and averted her eyes and looked outside,she didn't wanted to break down once again

Swayam(smiled): Hey sharon,there is a seat here(indicating the seat beside him),u can sit here

Sharon gave a smile to him,and got seated beside him

Rey sat beside with kriya

Rey(in his mind): madam itni chup kyun hai,nahi kuch jhagda kiya,nahi koi sarcastic comments pass ki,infact she didn't even rolled her eyes,ajeeb ladki hain

Kriya(in her mind): kitna awkward behave kar raha hai,aur karega hi na,he and sharon are a couple,he was just flirting with me,and I took all of that seriously,par wo sab kya mazaak tha uske liye,wo mere pass aana,wo sab kehna,akele mein mera hath pakadna,mujhse woo baatein karna,how can this be all be a joke!!! Par jo maine dekha aj,wo bhi to sach hai!!! o universejee vishwas kaaru bhi to kis rey par!!!! And in this process,how could I let my guard down,how could I let him come so close to me,how could I fell in ... No no no,don't even let this word stay in ur mind kriya,it only breaks heartbreak,it only brings pain... and I have to be strong... And why r u fussign agar ye sach bhi hota fir bhi tu to haan nehi bolti,then wo jisse khush hai rahe uske sath,why r u getting so upset,why r u sad kriya!!!!

It was night time,the bus journey was going to start at some later time in night... Everyone was tired,they drifted off to sleep,kriya wasn't able to sleep... She closed her eyes,but incidents of rey and sharon were coming to her... Tears were brimming in her eyes,she couldn't take it anymore,she got up and stepped down from the bus...

Rey's sleep broke as kriya got down from the bus...

Rey (rubbing his eyes): ye kriya,bus se utar kyun gayi,15mins mein bus chodne waali hai,aur ye tehel ne chali gayi,is ladki ka screw sach mein kaahin gir gaya hain!!!

5mins gone by,and kriya didn't return

Rey got worried: kriya to bus miss kar degi,ye gaayi kahan,uuse utar ne ko kisne bola tha,itni irresponsible kaise ho sakti hai!!! gayi kahaan ye ladki?

NOTE: Guys,very very sorry!!!!!!! I didn't even get the time to open my desktop,there were interviews,then right from xmas to new year there were celebrations with friends!!!! That's why I couldn't even got the time to reply to ur beautiful comments,I thought that I should update first then would give my replies!!!!!! Thaaank uu guys for ur lovely comments,for waiting for me... Hope i could expresss their emotions,and justify it,hope u guys like this update... I know this update will make u a little sad,but sadness is also a part of life na,so don't worry,bad times will change...

P.S------- THAAANK UUU KRIYANSHMANAN FOR THE WONDERFUL COLLAGEEE!!!!!!!! I AM FEEELINGG SOOO SOOO HAPPYYY!!!!!😃😃😃

Edited by pia.raha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: KriyaanshManan

https://i.imgur.com/YR1XHEd.jpg?1


N this is a small token for your story... Actually image is not getting posted here sometimes... So check out in the link

O my goshhh,thaaank uuu thaaank uu thaaank uuu sooo sooo muchhh!!!!!!!!! Its not a smaaal token,its aa biggg token,infacttt i amm sooo sooo sooo happpyyy that u have thought of this and took time to create this wonderful collage for me😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Gosh! atlast 😃
And mee first to coment 😃 😃
okk, now coming to the update...
it was super duper amazing ⭐️ 👏
though it was sadistic, but I loved it 😃
and u know wht.. whn Rey said, "ofcrsee,ruk mein tujhe enact karke dikhata hu,swayam kaise karega,so u be sharon ofcrse and I am swayam for now"
I really had this feeling tht Kria might hear it 😳
and seconds later I got my fear correct.. she heard it
shoo sadd... poor Kria.. her heart broke[:"(]
Swayam ka reaction bhi maine kuch aisa hi expect kiya tha... after all the chaptet's name is itself "Heartbreak" 😆
Hope they get together soon 😊
and Rey bhi uski Kriya ko manale 😊
Aur unhe milane ke liye meri Pia di to hai hi 😛 😆
Kriya ko bus chhodne ke 15 minute pehle bus se utarwa diya😆
aur meri gut feeling kehti hai, ki ab Rey bhi bus se utrega aur bus unhe chhod kar chali jayegi 😛
and thn...maza aayega..bahut maza aayega 😉
update the nxt part soon 😊
Thnks fr the PM 😊
P.S. : Happy belated New Year dii 😃 😃
Edited by KriYaansh-ArSha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriyaanshManan

https://i.imgur.com/YR1XHEd.jpg?1</a><a href="http://imgur.com/YR1XHEd">


N this is a small token for your story... Actually image is not getting posted here sometimes... So check out in the link

The collage is really verryyy beautiful ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
belated happy new year di😊
fially u updated
update was really good and awsome as befor👏
but feeling sad for sharon💔😔i hope swayam jadi realise karle tat he also love sharon and become swaron for the life time ☺️
kriyaansh ke bich fir misunderstanding
o god kriya bina kuch jane kese rye par dought kar sakti he
but ab finally kriyaash ke alone scenes😉 and more cute scene😳milenge
update soon waiting for the our kriyaansh egrlly
thanks for the pm 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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1st of all a very happy new year🤗
Now on to the update😳
I totally loved Sharey today n this update😊
Sharon preparing everything for d date wit swayam😳
Rey and sharon enacting the date part too cuteee😆
Uh oh kriya misunderstood tshe shouldve listened to d whole thing
swayam-sharon convo was a good one👏
swayams pov s correct tooo😳
he wants to know more abt sharon and wanted to move on frm d feelings he had for kria😳
so a fresh start for swaron😊
and wer did kria disappear n d nite😲
hope rey goes and finds her😳
continue soonish😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Finally u Update
It's really long time u don't update
Now coming to the update It was awesome update
Par kriya aur Sharon dono ka heart break kar diya tumne
I hope rey ushe apni pyar ka yakeen dila paye
Waiting for your update iss bar jaldi update dena
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update dear...
Loved evrything...
Poor Kriya... But no worries...
Looks like there is going to be a night in the jungle...
Waiting for it... continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: pia.raha

O my goshhh,thaaank uuu thaaank uu thaaank uuu sooo sooo muchhh!!!!!!!!! Its not a smaaal token,its aa biggg token,infacttt i amm sooo sooo sooo happpyyy that u have thought of this and took time to create this wonderful collage for me😃

Your welcome dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYaansh-ArSha

The collage is really verryyy beautiful ⭐️



THANXXX😃

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