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namratha

@NSB7

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#411

Was a few lines

But what it consisted of was a looot

This update deserves a benchmark and milestone in my head

The dude frankly asking and discussing something instead of just ignoring the issue

Wanting to clear some air about his connection with the incident?

And such a revelation of dude's trauma and the impact of the events from 5 years ago?

Is this what is called scarred forever?

An applause worthy update

Will read twice more and write again

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putti77

@putti77

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#412

Bang on Nisha.. 👍🏼

Only you can think of this...

The shame what Bhallas kids have gone through 😭

I feel very bad for all the three of them...

Yes the prank has gone ugly but the pain he goes through every sight of his in mirror is unbearable...

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Sonal Gupta

@sonalgupta2004

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#413

Bang on Nisha
His questions, his insecurities, his fears,
His shame of being a Bhalla
All bang on!!!

This trip of them will definitely be some eye opener 👏

But Nisha
"dil abhi bhara nahi"
It was too short
Ek aur please 😆

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#414

Nice chapter nisha I loved the way the dude directly confronted ii

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#415

Ok.. He was direct! But whats with this female?!?!?!

Why on earth is she skirting the issue?!?!?!?

JUST WHY???????

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blue5sky

@blue5sky

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#416

Inexpressive RnB and talkative II are both stunned into silence. He sees through her half truth and we learn of his shame.

Dad's are meant to be a kids hero.. Must be tough poor guy!

Agree with you Nisha sons can be different from their dads! Destiny is as much choice as DNA.

Nice Update Nisha.

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namratha

@NSB7

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#417

Do you think I was cheating on you? - he asked

Did I in the attempt to play a prank took onstep towards the old man's path? Did I fall down to causing an emotional trauma in the woman I love? Did I almost become the man I was afraid I would become if his blood would cause that trait in me? Did I do something I would hate myself for? - this is how it sounded to me

For him it must have been a blow we failed to notice

Because everything little thing related to the incident has until date be a big thing to him...hurt him...even the faintest connections bring back bad memories

How is it to walk like you have a tide heading towards you and dragging you into the huge sea but you are trying to swim against it?

How is it when every small mistake you make that in anyway gets connected to the incident feel like a sin to you?

Can he now ever be the same man he was? Can he ever take a conversation with any ex like a conversation and not an activity he does which would hurt his wife?

Some incidents change your perspective about everything in life

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Hsp.canada

@Hsp.canada

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#418

Hola people in the beautiful land of SoSy. I cant believe in another couple of weeks, it will be year of this story. Oh how mad some of us were, litreally spamming it. I had never written any reviews or connected with people with such ferocity and its startline to me. I have some friends for a lifetime, I think of them and very excited to see them on FB 😊. Love you all.

II and RnB were on my mind last evening as I saw this young couple yesterday, they were fighting in starbucks...it was cute, I have to sit close so I overheard. The baby is on the way and she just throwing a tantrum and this cute handsome guy just kept giving her smiles to her ranting 😳.

I dont where the story is but i was listening to this song on the radio, and I thought about my fav fictional couple.

Have a fun day and evening!

xoxo

100 Years

I'm 15 for a moment
Caught in between 10 and 20
And I'm just dreaming
Counting the ways to where you are

I'm 22 for a moment
And she feels better than ever
And we're on fire
Making our way back from Mars

15 there's still time for you
Time to buy and time to lose
15, there's never a wish better than this
When you only got a hundred years to live

I'm 33 for a moment
Still the man, but you see I'm a "they"
A kid on the way, babe.
A family on my mind

I'm 45 for a moment
The sea is high
And I'm heading into a crisis
Chasing the years of my life

15 there's still time for you
Time to buy and time to lose yourself
Within a morning star

15 I'm all right with you
15, there's never a wish better than this
When you only got a hundred years to live

Half time goes by
Suddenly you're wise
Another blink of an eye
67 is gone
The sun is getting high
We're moving on...

I'm 99 for a moment
And dying for just another moment
And I'm just dreaming
Counting the ways to where you are

15 there's still time for you
22 I feel her too
33 you're on your way
Every day's a new day...

15 there's still time for you
Time to buy and time to choose
Hey 15, there's never a wish better than this
When you only got a hundred years to live

The Scientist

Come up to meet you
Tell you I'm sorry
You don't know how lovely you are
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you apart

Tell me your secrets
And ask me your questions
Oh let's go back to the start
Running in circles; coming up tails
Heads on a science apart

Nobody said it was easy
It's such a shame for us to part
Nobody said it was easy
No one ever said it would be this hard
Oh take me back to the start

I was just guessing at numbers and figures
Pulling your puzzles apart
Questions of science; science and progress
Do not speak as loud as my heart

Tell me you love me
Come back and haunt me
Oh and I rush to the start
Running in circles, chasing our tails
Coming back as we are

Nobody said it was easy
Oh it's such a shame for us to part
Nobody said it was easy
No one ever said it would be so hard
I'm going back to the start

Oh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh

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EnVee

@EnVee

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#419

This is one chapter on insecurities and identities. R&B the directly affected and II the indirectly affected. Amazing how one action or incident can slash the trust that was built over many years and leave the looking glass forever tainted.

Reminds me of this poem by A K Ramanujan

Self-Portrait
by A.K. Ramanujan

I resemble everyone
but myself, and sometimes see
in shop-windows
despite the well-known laws
of optics,
the portrait of a stranger,
date unknown,
often signed in a corner
by my father.

Edited by EnVee - 9 years ago