The Distance Between Us - An AR FF (Link to TDBU#2 - Page 1)

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Posted: 7 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: DMGThings

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Posted: 7 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: Meraki.

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DMGThings

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Posted: 7 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: saniyapatel
Thnx very very much for the update,unexpected tha before may,I think shock n surprise dena apko bahot pasand hai n loved it very very much.
Frankly speaking,jb se story start hui hai lagta hi nahi tha its about our AR,pahle Sid n ab Tamanna,ab tk jitne bhi parts read kiye hai bs I thought ki kya sirf Nikki koi fark pada Armaan k na hone se bt is update ne mere saare doubts clr kr diye.
Atul ne itna suffer kiya Armaan k jaane se ki use saal ded saal lag gaye depression se bahar niklne k lie,n Atul n Ridz ka jo cute relation tha vo bhi suffer hua obvious hai vo us ladki k saath easily normal kaise ho sakta hai jisk ek decision ne usk bhai ko jeete jee maar diya ho.
Main rude sound karungi bt glad ki Nikki n Ridz ka relation pahle jaise nahi raha I think Ridz deserved this.
Muski usne to apne best friend aur pyaar dono ko kho diya tha.
Main DMG se hi Abhi ko pasand nahi krti thi bt ab to uspe pyaar aa raha koi aur nahi par vo to sensible hai usne us kamine,kutte,heartless Shanky ko convince kiya ye bahot badi baat hai.
Jo gng Sanjeevini ki jaan hua karti thi aaj usi mein jaan nahi hai.Armaan k jaane sb kuch bikhr gaya hai Armaan ne sbko joda rakha tha,want some moments of our gng n AR,plz plz sort out their problems,yaar ab AR ka distance saha nahi jaata,in sb k bich AR miss hai.
Ridz k ek wrong decision ne sbki life unstable kr di hai,aaj na vo kush hai n usk bina Armaan ne jeena to sikh lia bt uski zindgi adhuri hai,this part made me cry,ab aur door nahi dekha jaata Armaan Riddhima ko plz reunite them soon,usk baad bhi to baaki jo char hai gng se alg unpr focus kiya ja sakta hai na ye mera view hai.
Thnx for pm,eagerly waiting for next part n all the very best for ur exam

Hey Saniya !

So glad you liked it !

Baat toh sahi hai, Armaan was the most important member of the group . Usne hi sabko jod ke rakha tha . Toh jab woh chala gaya , aur jinn circumstances mein woh gaya , gang sambhal nahi paayi khudko aur sabki life bohot change ho gayi.

Iss sab mein, kisi ki galti nahi hai . Us waqt circumstances hi aise the. Dekha jaaye toh even Atul and Nikki are wrong to blame Ridzy , lekin they love Armaan too much. Uski absence se unki life bohot zyada affect hui hai.

And Abhi. Yes , itne saalon mein, when the gang was in shambles , usne sabko support kiya hai. Somewhere, he's taken the role of the caretaker/mother hen for the gang . Toh usko sabki fikar hai. He doesn't want to see the gang so lifeless. Isliye woh yeh sab kar raha hai .

And Shanky . Woh toh hamesha se hi aisa tha . He never liked Armaan. Ab usko aur mauka mil gaya hai Armaan ko blame karne ka toh woh thodi chodega ?

Talking about AR , unke Beech itna sab hua hai , obviously things will not get cured miraculously. Time toh dena padega na ? Toh , I'm working on it . Dheere dheere sab theek ho jaayega . :)

Thanks for the super long comment !

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Posted: 7 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: scorpiofazy
Yooo hooo finally an update but no AR scenes😕 but its ok since you have mentioned that next 2-3 parts will be about them... eagerly waiting for it...and ya i will love to read whatever you write...and about the parts its really beautiful... clearly described everyone emotions for ARMAAN what they felt for him and how they missed him in their life😭...and ye sadu dr shahshank abhi tak wo hi egoistic man hi hain...i really hate him😡... Continue soon... best of luck for your exam 😊

Hey! Thank you so much !

Don't worry , a lot of AR is on your way . I'm trying to include as many scenes as possible. AR and gang also . Ab dekhte hai , going forward how you guys like it .

Shanky toh hai hi khusat. Theek hai, yaar . Usko bhi dekh lenge .

Will update ASAP ! And thank you ! :)

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Posted: 7 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
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unres...

Awesome update dear...
I miss AR so much but still...
It was necessary to show every single person emotions...
After all they had meet after long seven years...

Wah kiya baat hai,
Abhi ne har kissi ke baare mein choti choti baat notice ki...
be it Nikki or Ridz...
Atul, Anjali or Muski...

Why not, sabke life mein Armaan itna important ta...
Aur uske and Niks ke relation mein bhi different aaye...
Same goes with her and Ridz relation...

Waise its to happen in Atul life when Armaan left...
Atul ke life mein koi apna hai toh woh sirf Armaan hai...
Aur Armaan Ridz ke wajahse gaye toh, woh apne pyar ke baare mein kaise soche jisse Ridz related hai...
Lekin yeh galat hai, Ridz ki bhi kiya fault ismein...

Ridz khud itni heart broken ta...
Woh apne shaadi koh nibane ki koshish ki lekin huva nehi...
Apne parents se bhi dur ta, woh unhappy ta Ridz se...
Ek ladki, kya kiya sehen karte ek saath...
Na pariwar samjhe usko, na doston ne...

Anyways looking forward...
Bas is shaadi ke beech sab clear hojaae AR ke beech ki ab Ridz single hai...
Aur Sid, baaki sabke saath milke yeh sacchai Armaan tak pochae...

Continue super soon...
take care :D
Love it...
Amazing...
Superbbb

Hey Rihooo !! Thank you so much!

Yes , Armaan ke jaane se , sab kuch change ho gaya . Sabki life kitni zyada badal gayi . Especially Nikki and Atul

Woh dono Armaan ke best friends the na . And for them, Armaan was the only family they had. Atul ka toh koi aur tha hi nahi and Nikki ke bhi apne ghar pe itne achhe relations nahi they after her parents' divorce . Toh woh log sabse zyada affect hue.

Yes , they're wrong in blaming Ridzy , but Armaan ke jaane ke baad , for one year , they have seen Riddhima in a seemingly happy relationship with Sid. They didn't like ki wahaan Armaan pata nahi kya haal mein hai and she's enjoying . Ridzy toh aise hi dikha rahi thi na , that she's very happy in her marriage, jabki woh jhooth tha. And, they know ki circumstances aise ho gaye ki sab gadbad ho gayi , lekin unhe koi toh chahiye tha na ? Blame karne ? Isliye Ridzy . Jaise Shanky sab cheezon ke liye Armaan ko blame karta hai , yeh dono ne Ridzy ko blame karan . Somewhere they also realize that they're wrong , lekin ab unhe aadat ho gayi hai . But , don't worry, that will change.

And it's not like Ridzy was alone. Sid aur Anjali ne uski bohot help ki. Muskaan aur Abhi ne bhi , jitna support kar sakte the, kiya . And it's not like Nikki aur Atul ko uski fikar nahi thi .

Shaadi se pehle hi sab clear ho jaayega. Dont worry . :)

Will continue ASAP! THANK YOU!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: friends_4dream
Omg omg omg
U updateddd finallyyy
Everyday when i visit IF my first routine is to come here and check for an update, well yesterday i wasnt able to but today when i came here bang...there was an update yipppiiieee

Well about the update, how much long it will be it will never staisfy me
The update what to say
1. Hate dr shashank more , common that oldie got not brain, i doubt how he became na doctor..stull blaming armaan well i would really love to see how armaan new friends will respond if anytime dr shashank insults him..that would be a blast

2. Loved the way u described everyones past, frankly saying i hated how in show nobody was damn affected from armaan's departure.

3.well ridhima also suffered but at the end it was her decision only , right now i dont feel her compatible for armaan maybe with coming parts i will come to accept ot( what to do i love armaan ssshhhooo muchhh)

Would love to see more new gang interactions woth armaan and old gang reaction to it...
All the very best for ur exams, u'll surely do great
But dont forget out update after that..will be eagerly waiting...

Tc
Alina

Hey Alina!

Thank you so much for loving this story! I'm really glad you like ot so much !

Yes, Shanky is still annoying. Lekin, he's Riddhima's father na. Somewhere , his anger is justified . Armaan ke aane ke baad , Riddhima's life became very different . Usme Armaan ki koi fault nahi hai, lekin for a father , it's enough na ki kisi ladke ke aane ke baad, uski beti ki life mein itne problems aa gaye. And actually , Shanky had a soft spot for Armaan , lekin annulment ke baad circumstances itne change ho gaye , ki Shanky couldn't help it. Riddhima ki toh life jaise barbaad hi ho gayi. And he blames Armaan for that cause he knows it all happened because Ridzy still loved Armaan . Agar woh nahi karti , toh she would have settled down with Sid. But woh nahi hua and people who don't understand the difference between annulment and divorce have tagged her a divorcee. Toh, itna sab hai isliye , he doesn't like Armaan .

Obviously , Armaan's departure affected everyone . I hated how they never showed it on the show . Isliye I definitely had to show it on here.

Ridzy will pakka prove herself to be worthy of Armaan . I promise .

Thank you for loving it so ! Will definitely update ASAP !

Thank you for all the wishes . :)

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Posted: 7 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: Prizi
after a long time u updated this one

such an amazing update
luvd how abhi closely observed everyone... nw he's my only hope

bcoz of ridhima's one wrong decision everyone suffered...

Thank you , Prizi!

Don't worry . Things will get better soon! :)

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Sara Haider

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Posted: 7 years ago

#408

Yayyy finally you updated this one. It was a happy surprise seeing an update. I hate that shanky. Come on the old man has no brains, 7 years have passed and he he is still blaming arman for every thing instead of sorting out his relation with his own daughter. It was so endearing to see that gang cares about Arman so much that his departure badly shocked them. The show totally over looked this. About ridhima she did suffered a lot but I can't feel bad for her ( because I am too biased towards arman). And it was all self inflicted because of her own stupid decisions. Abhi is such a sweetheart caring for every one. Would definitely love to read the scenes you were talking about. Will be waiting for the next part.

Take care

Sara

Ps: why I never get a reply 😒

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Posted: 7 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: sara.dmg
Yayyy finally you updated this one. It was a happy surprise seeing an update. I hate that shanky. Come on the old man has no brains, 7 years have passed and he he is still blaming arman for every thing instead of sorting out his relation with his own daughter. It was so endearing to see that gang cares about Arman so much that his departure badly shocked them. The show totally over looked this. About ridhima she did suffered a lot but I can't feel bad for her ( because I am too biased towards arman). And it was all self inflicted because of her own stupid decisions. Abhi is such a sweetheart caring for every one. Would definitely love to read the scenes you were talking about. Will be waiting for the next part.
Take care
Sara

Ps: why I never get a reply 😒

Hey Sara ! Thank you so much!

Yes, Shanky is an idiot. Har cheez mein Armaan ko blame karne ki puraani aadat hai usko . But , somewhere , deep down , he believes he is right cause jabse Armaan aaya hai, Ridz ki life mein bohot problems aaye hai , toh as a father , I can see that he truly feels Armaan is the reason for all this , ki Armaan has changed her so much ki ab woh ekdum alag Riddhima bann gayi hai.

And, yes, Abhi is a sweetheart . He's finally understanding how much Armaan meant to everyone . Show mein yeh dikhaya nahi toh I didn't like it . These people should have brought the gang from s1 back in 2. Bohot mazaa aata !

And, I reply to all the comments on my stories . Lekin fir bhi, if I missed yours, I'm sorry ! Will make sure not to do so in the future . :)

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Sara Haider

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: DMGThings

Hey Sara ! Thank you so much!

Yes, Shanky is an idiot. Har cheez mein Armaan ko blame karne ki puraani aadat hai usko . But , somewhere , deep down , he believes he is right cause jabse Armaan aaya hai, Ridz ki life mein bohot problems aaye hai , toh as a father , I can see that he truly feels Armaan is the reason for all this , ki Armaan has changed her so much ki ab woh ekdum alag Riddhima bann gayi hai.

And, yes, Abhi is a sweetheart . He's finally understanding how much Armaan meant to everyone . Show mein yeh dikhaya nahi toh I didn't like it . These people should have brought the gang from s1 back in 2. Bohot mazaa aata !

And, I reply to all the comments on my stories . Lekin fir bhi, if I missed yours, I'm sorry ! Will make sure not to do so in the future . :)

That's ok. But if you really want to make up for missing my comment than I want the next part a little longer. Deal?😃