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sujata5

@sujata5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#961

What an amazing writing skill!! You have nailed it...

I had guessed that they were siblings but do not know why they are estranged...

Waiting to find out more eagerly...Please continue soon...

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Inna076

@Inna076

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#962

The story is superb, and I like that Shyam's character is not negative and that they are siblings with Khushi. Arnav should really grovel to be forgiven, because I thought he got off too easy in the show, we never really saw him being remorseful for suspecting Khushi. Keep it up. Can't wait for next update.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#963

Finally managed to read all chapters ... I was lagging behind ...

If only Arnav Singh Raizadas anger could be leashed ... their

lives would not have been such a mess ...

So finally we get to know what happened on the day of the engagement ...

Shyam turning out to be Khushis brother must have been such a shock !

Am really happy to see that Shyam does not have a negative character

in your story ...

How is he going to woe her now ...

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rafiki84

@rafiki84

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#964

RES

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ASR is a complete, head-to-toe, too judgmental, too over-perceptive of A FOOL here. I never got his psyche. Even in the show, when he blamed his anger for all the wrong he did against Khushi. Her only then and now (in this FF) was to keep quiet for the sake of the families, again from both areas. He needs to grovel more and actually get on his knees and beg her to forgive him.

I often read redemption FFs and in all of them Arnav tries to "seduce" his way out of all the crap he puts Khushi through. Just because she is vulnerable to her feelings for him, does not give him the right to use that to his advantage. On a side note, the way you etched them , I was in LA LA land woman! My heart was actually doing these circulatory dips 😆. And I would love to read more such scenes as well, but what bugs me the most is him exploiting it. I mean of course she still has feelings for him, you never completely stop loving someone and when you meet them on such frequent occasions they are bound to hit you again and again.

He did the sensible thing of introducing them and giving the Guptas their much needed appraisal back. That was a smart move, but I just hope he does more grovelling, does more such magnanimous gestures to impress and get her back. I know this is fiction and not everything happens like it does in AD but some episodes of reality would nice too 😳 The selfish ba... sorry can't call him that, I still love him you know😉 the selfish a**hat should show the lady some love and I mean in the respectful way, not taking advantage of her dhak-dhaks and giving pappis left right and center 😉 (although who wouldn't love that 😆)

And don't feel bad about the last chapter, here is a wish from the love my life

It was great 🤗 as always!

Sorry for going off tangent, i tend to do that a lot😆

Chal take care and update soon okay ❤️

Edited by rafiki84 - 9 years ago

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rafiki84

@rafiki84

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#965

Oh BTW, love Ram and Gautami Shenoy.

#old.age.relationship.goals ⭐️

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#966

OMG!! What an update... that was such low point for arnav..for accusing khushi and shyam in such a way..without even trying to find out about the truth.. I feel so bad for khushi for having to face all this... for being called all the bad things.. and nobody cared to defend her.. not even her family who knew the truth..poor girl.. arnav really need to apologise to her ..

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#967

Brilliantly written
How can Arnav be so cruel
Demeaning the poor soul like that, it was heart wrenching
Scarred her for life and now he expects her to come back again to him
Of course she won't he has damaged her too much
I'm glad that before leaving Khushi cleared about Shyam and her relationship

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#968

Read your comment at the end of the update. I think this is an awesome story and I for one keep waiting for the next update.

Please do not discontinue the story. I just love the changed Arnav. Only wish Khushi doesn't give in too soon and Arnav truly has to redeem his mistakes. Though he has started by inviting the Gupta family over to his house and givng them royal treatment in front of the guests.

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#969

Finally caught onto the last two chapter Saiyuu...well kya kahoon... busy life and a new year resolution to stay away from IF as much as I can... so I am around... but may be late in reading the updates. Teri senti note about comments padh ke meri aankhon mein aasoon aa gaye! 😛

Everyone of the Raizadas simply adore Khushi and I can understand their greed to have her as their daughter-in-law. However, I wish they see her as a daughter... and then punish their son for his misbehaving. I dont know if I could ever forget and love a man, who would insult and demean me. Misunderstandings are fine, but words once spoken can never be taken back... they are always out there to haunt you and I can only imagine why Khushi has been trying hard to keep a distance from Arnav.

I absolutely loved the scene between Payal and Akash. They are so cute and innocent. I wish all our lives are always like this... less tainted and kept away from the harshness of life. Par kya karein... shit happens!! Shyam's reaction to the small peck of Akash, was so cute. Even though Anjali is just trying to patch things up between Arnav and Khushi, I really felt bad for Khushi to have landed in a spot... and if Arnav thinks that flirting with Khushi is the solution then, he is so wrong!

I can see that even though Shyam trusts Arnav, he is still hesitant to let him woo Khushi again. And fair enough... with the way her poor heart was broken I would not blame any brother. I really hope Arnav realizes that so many people trust and love him, that they are willing to forget his mistakes and give him a chance at winning back his love. The past was so painful and I cannot imagine what Khushi must have felt in that moment.

A dream broken, a heart shattered and worst was those hurtfult, demeaning words on her character. It was not only her, but hr entire family had to go through the trauma... and its sad the way Arnav did not even bother to confront either Shyam or Khushi personally, before making things public. I had guess Shyam was Khushi's brother... and I am keen to know what had followed this revelation... especially in the shatir dimaag wala ASR's head.

Will be waiting to see how Arnav plans to get his happiness back into his life... and fill hers with happiness as well! 😳

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dair10arshi

@dair10arshi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#970

Sorry for not being able to comment on the last few updates...Exams!
Arnav is so heartless. And yes I want you to make him suffer for doing all that khushi. I loved the scene between shyam and khushi. The sibling relationship is so beautifully portrayed!
I so wished to read the emerald isle tales by meera30. Redemption ffs are always a treat.
Can't wait to read about Arnav's next moves to win khushi!