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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#951

Saiyu, first and foremost I must say, your story is awesome.

A few likes less or more, a few comments less or more should not bother you.

You know you are the best. So just keep rocking Begum saheeba. Dont worry about these petty things.

Coming to the update, my throat has been choked after reading it.

I agree it was wrong on Khushi and Shyam to keep their relationship a secret, but Arnav turned out to be a world class asshole.

If he had a doubt, why not confront them in front of just family and not the whole damn world.

Even if Shyam was cheating Anjali, who the hell gave him the right to take matter in his hands. If anything it was Anjali who should have been given the right to take any action.

Imagining Khushi's heart breaking into a million pieces, pierced my heart.

I hope someone slapped Arnav after Khushi left. Please tell me someone did.

I am so pissed off with Garima too. Her daughter is being abused and she stands just shedding tears. Damn this woman, could she not have come forward, slapped Arnav and told him and the world the bloody truth.

Now waiting to see what happened next.

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Divya

@..Divya..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#952

To be frank i was least expecting this update .. I thought like after few chapters we might get know what happened on the engagement day.. :p . Bt nevertheless... Finally Its out ... ASR is so cruel... The damage he done to khushi.. :( :( He robbed off her dignity.. :( Khushi.. :( My heart cries for her.. I somehow guessed shyam is her brother.. :) But whatever this guy is foolish .. instead of finding the truth he assumed Things.. sigh.. I loved the fact how khushi didn't say anything and said what exactly to be said.. just stating the fact .. Its such a Invisible slap to ASR .. as he stooped too low... She don't have to shout or make him believe ... Loved this chapter... Looking forward to next Chapter. .

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#953

so wat i actually guessed is right dat shyam is khushi's brother nd arnav without even trying to find out d truth blamed khushi of having an affair with him,,shame on him nd i loved it how u penned down d whole picture marriage night nd how arna in front of everyone betrayed khushi nd even said hell lot of bad things to her nd also called her characterless,,i am actually pissed off wth his thoughts,,they r utter sh*t actually 😡

i can feel wat khushi was going through while hearing everything from him,,the man who has made her life miserable nd also insulted her to bits nd pieces is d same one with whom she has fallen in love with but dat man crushed her dreams,,her love nd her everything in a mere seconds saying dat she is characterless nd gold digger,,how mean..! 😡

anajli,,i have grown so much respect for this woman nd how she supported her husband when her own brother was demeaning him nd shyam,,i am loving him actually,,his calmness,,his understanding nd his love for anjali is wat i am adoring d most in this story ❤️

lovely update 👍🏼

loved it

Edited by ara_000 - 9 years ago

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#954

show arnav his aukad...😡

don't let khushi melt a bit...

let this man know his aukad...

then make khushi melt...

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#955

God Rasgulla, this story is just getting better and better with every chapter. I dont know how you do it, but its surreal damn it.

I love how you write hindi words in between. It feels too god, so apnapan. I dont know what I am typing right now lol. The scene between Payal/Akash/Arnav and Khushi was adorable. It reminded me of K3G of course. But, I think your version is cuter than that.

Nice Shyam gave a piece of his mind to Arnav. Much needed. He seriously need to work on his ways and apologies. I mean wordlessly.

I am loving the equation between them, *ehem*

Arnav is not leaving a single chance when he gets her all akele. Packing scene was the highlight. Oomph!!

Cant wait to read the next chapter.

Love

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#956

I read somewhere and I will quote " a tongue has no bones but is strong enough to break a heart, so be careful with your words"
And this exactly what Arnav did to Khushi. He let his ego rule over above everything. He didn't even realize that he is not only mistrusting a stranger but also his BiLwhom he had known for years. Trust issues make you do this. Arnav with his own hands let his 'happiness' go. I for one, don't want khushi to give in easily. Whatever he said about her aukad and character, she should not see his face ever but since they are ArHi are meant to be and also he is trying to gain her apology she should. But someday not today.

Coming to the Shyam and Khushi relationship. It was expected that they were bro and sis but I thought there will be a twist. But I guess the full truth isn't revealed yet.?

Questions in my mind...
Anjali doesn't knew about ShYam connection with Guptas from the start right?

ShYam is khushi's brother? May be related to her biological mother?

Ram gautami kab aayenge phir se?

A message to Silent readers.: Please if you are reading then drop a comment it will make the author happy. Because if you are enjoying then she also deserves to enjoy no?

To author :
This story is amazing.period!

P.s that whole last sequence gave me goosebumps. I was mentally strangling Arnav. :x

Edited by Hot_Chocolate - 9 years ago

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claucrispop

@claucrispop

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#957

i just found this story...

it is great...

i cant wait to see what happen next...

please update soon

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#958

What an emotional update dear👏⭐️ i read this update with moist eyes..

Kushi's happiness as a girl getting engaged to the man she loved, the genuine and the jealous comments by the relatives, the understanding and promises of a brother and sister, and arnav as the person who is waiting to insult the girl whom he misunderstood and awake her to the harsh realities of this society and everything about this update is so amazingly written, you deserve a standing ovation for this update sayyu 👏🤗

But what arnav did is unpardonable... as a girl may be i can never forgive him for what he had done.. that was cruel indeed.. he had so many ways to know the truth.. but he was in so much haste, he didn't even think of asking his BIL whom he knows for past 10 yrs and is like an elder brother to him... kushi has every right to hate him or reject him.. he not only insulted her, he didn't even spare her family...

Is shyam garima's son from other marriage ??? even garima is at fault i felt.. what ever it was, atleast she could have accepted the truth about shyam before everyone and should've saved kushi from the insult.. for a mother, daughter should be more important than her own pride.. that's my opinion. . No offense 😊

Anyway the update was awesome at so many levels and thanks for the pm sayyu 😊

Waiting eagerly. ...