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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Wonderful start
Loved it
Well written
Plz pm me for your updates

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

fantastic start:) loved it .. thanks for pm:)

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Saiyu, is this really you? Thanks, Zahra for sending the link

What an awesome start. I really like the telling of the same situations from 2 different POVs. Makes you connect to all the characters. Thank you , and welcome back!!

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coolpd93

@coolpd93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Hi..i read d intro:)well chapter1...the theme u hav chosen is justified:)felt fr both..he had gone ahead to expose d truth that he presumed..in this the damage is to the extent that cant be fixed...continue soon:)

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Welcome back dear. November is going to be great month. :-)

Coming to the story you have laid a beautiful plot. Just waiting for story to unfold further. Please PM me for next update. Thanks.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Ek aur Jashn after IPK jashn ke baad...Rasgulla_sp back...so good to see you back dear with a new story on the same place.

That's an excellent start dear...loving the intensity of the story. Is this going to be emotional ride dear. That's what I feel, but I am looking forward to enjoy this journey. So, your Shyam as always is a good person. And ASR misunderstood him. Chalo ab zayada dimag par boojh nahi dalteh. Will enjoy the ride as it comes.