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Posted: 9 years ago

#991

Oh jeee!

I just came across this!

Don't remove it before I read!

Aaj raat mera jagran hoga for sure

Off to read

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arshisimple

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Posted: 9 years ago

#992

Just read chapter 6 and 7 and of course your notes and I am sure you won't believe me if I say this to you that I look forward to your notes as eagerly as the update 😉. Sorry not very regular on IF anymore, so missing lot of updates and so fewer comments😕😕!!!!!!

Khushi has really beautiful relationship with everyone in Raizada family and l am loving Payal and Aakash, very cute. You know your stories whichever I have read and as you mentioned in your notes, don't have any negative character but you focus on human emotions and behavior to make situation better or worse. And that's what happened here also. Arnav misunderstood Khushi and Shyam's relationship and he took his anger to speak. Well that might have worked in his business but he lost here. Anger can ruin one's ability to think rationally and Arnav didn't trust his own jijaji whom he knew for decade.

I am loving this redemption track and I am so glad that khushi is not giving in easily, she shouldn't have in show and that's why I am enjoying this story more 👏. Fantastic updates and now off to read next few chapters 😊

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 9 years ago

#993

WHATT?? WHY DID NOT I KNOW ABOUT IT BEFORE! WHY?

I was thinking, with longing, about the little of your stories that I've read...and then I found the link to A Fool.

I need to breathe AND read this SS.

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 9 years ago

#994

Chapter One:

The title? Interesting and how you related it to Arnav and Khushi is all the more interesting.

Interesting introduction to the main characters and to the events. It is amazing how many feelings your writing stirs in me.

I like how you gave a half of the chapter to each, and show some of their feelings and thoughts.

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 9 years ago

#995

Chapter Two:

Ram is a great businessman, who would not let professionalism and materialism harden his heart. I like your portrayal of Manorama Mami, even with her reckless tongue she is still better than the serial's.

Khushi had learnt the life lessons in the hard way and also that early. She is thoughtful and considerate.

Arnav's regret and concern is deeply felt, but he deserves that. And as you said both Khushi and himself were too easy on him in the serial and that was not satisfying, no matter how much we wanted to see them together.

The problem with reading a complete story is that you barely have time for guessing and speculating. Now off to read the nest chapter.

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 9 years ago

#996

Chapter Three:

Arnav and Khushi's reflections reminded me of some of the reasons that I love IPKKND. I like how you picked some significant days and moments and made them fit your story and characters. The memory lane makes us understand the characters better and solve some puzzles.

Aakash and Payal are so sweet.

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 9 years ago

#997

Chapter Four:

I liked how Arnav trusted Khushi. He knew that he wronged her before and knows from experience and from her virtuous character that Khushi would not do such a thing intentionally.

The whole dinner affair was an enjoyable read. Ram and Gautami are such a nice and cute couple. Their efforts in bringing ArHi together are commendable.

The poolside conversation, the flirt in Arnav, the peck...Awesome! He must have unsettled Khushi a lot. Poor she!

I like it when you describe Khushi's clothes. She has a decent and lovely wardrobe unlike her clothes on the show, which have not altered that much even after marrying The ASR!

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 9 years ago

#998

Chapter Five:

You know what I liked the most? Arnav boosting Payal's self-confidence. I hate it when people compare between siblings especially when it comes to looks. Those are the most insensitive and inconsiderate people.

Akash and Payal are fun. A Valentine date with Khushi! That was hilarious.

Incredible update.

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 9 years ago

#999

Chapter Six:

Payal acting all pricey! Hahaha! Teens.

I understand where Nani's concern comes from, but she should not pressurize Khushi.

Anjali's schemes and Manjari's timing, I like that.

Arnav is such a tease! The whole 'Karogi' part reminded me of the poolside's peck on the show.

Shyam has every right to be concerned and worried about Khushi after Arnav's mistrust and doubts even to him when he had never done something that would mke him a cheating husband. And Shyam just got to know his family after all those years, of course he would be the protective brother.

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1000

Chapter Seven:

It was hard to go through this chapter. How Khushi's hopes, dreams, expectations were crushed. How cruel Arnav was. At least Anjali trusted her husband.

I knew that Shyam and Khushi were related from the beginning, then could guess that he would be her brother.

That society is annoying. Their comments, gossips and judgments. Wise people should never listen to thier talk as they always find some faults, they are always envious when people get what they deserve. I like that Khushi understands that already.

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