ARNAV KHUSHI FF: We Didn't Start the Fire! Chapter 4 Updated 26/11 pg4

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Hi Guys,
So I started this story, which is my first attempt at writing a FF, about 6 years ago. Since then, I finished school, left for university, got a degree and even started working, completely neglecting this piece of writing which was extremely close to my heart. Somewhere I guess, I was scared of the commitment I would have to make, to myself, and to my readers.

After starting a blog that actually got followers, I stopped updating three years ago. Since then I have returned to being a silent reader, until many many excellent pieces of work motivated me to listen to the voice inside me that has now made me jump off this cliff again, and so, here is the prologue, for you.

Also, the name is an homage to the greatest history song EVER: We Didn't Start the Fire by Billy Joel, because I LOVE history, and also because every person, every relationship has history attached to it. History especially plays an important role for Arnav and Khushi in this story.

The song to make your day:

https://youtu.be/eFTLKWw542g

SEE NOTE BELOW:

Also to provide context to this story, it traces Arnav and Khushi's journey over 10 years, moving back and forth in time. Might be disorientating at times, but reading it all together will make sense once the chapters are up one by one. Arnav and Khushi's memories over these 10 years form the main narrative that take the story forward. The present day is year 2017, when Khushi is twenty-five, and Arnav is twenty-six. Everything will be a few years back or forward from there, and I want you to view this as a present day journey, but with flashes of memories that will gradually unfold their story.

Index:

Chapter 1: Transitions and Confusions (page 1)

Chapter 2: Changing Equations? (page 1)

Chapter 3: Unexpected Bonds (page 3)

Chapter 4: The Past and the Present (page 4)

PROLOGUE:

"You are just so good at playing with people's feelings, aren't you?! Making everyone's life hell is your special hobby, and believe me, no one is as good at it as you are! Well done, Khushi Gupta, you finally excel in something." Unable to hear any more of the mocking, clipped tone, she hung up, hugging her pillow tighter as if drawing strength and solace from its lifeless form.

Distraught frenzy slowly gave way to annoyance, anger and then blinding hot rage. What had SHE done?

Grimacing in distaste at the incriminating instrument, she picked up the phone again to call her closest pillar of strength and support, Payal. "What did that dog do now? I swear, Khushi, I will personally chop him to pieces if he hurts even your fingernail again!" Comfort slowly seeping into her at the angry tirade, Khushi poured her heart out, breaking down as she came to the "playing with feelings" part.

A long silence on the line,followed by Payal's now-subdued tone- "You know, if I had been in your life then Khushi, I would have never let you break up with him.", was the last straw. With a terse "thanks, I'll call you later", she hung up for the second time that day and sat back down on her bed, her thoughts slowly going to THAT day. The day she noticed him for the first time.

10 years ago..

Lavanya had just walked out of the class to wash her hands, and she was waiting for her to return. Finally, this was where she belonged, she thought, turning the pages of her textbook, when suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder. Turning around, she looked at who had tapped her. Confusion slowly gave way to recognition. "Oh! The new guy. Right." she thought, as she quizzically raised her eyebrows at him, annoyed at the interruption to her thoughts.

"Erm... Is your friends name Lavanya or Lavinia?" Ignoring the sudden flash of indignation at his husky question, she forced a sweet smile on her face, and said "It's Lavanya." With an "Oh thanks", he turned around, and so did she, desperately trying to ignore the disappointing feeling that had crept in when he did not even bother to ask- "And.. what's your name then?" Laughing at her own childishness, she immersed herself in the textbook again.

Okay, what do you think? Would love to hear from you all! Please do like/comment, so I know whether I should continue. Thanks!


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Chapter 1: Transitions and Confusions

He got on her nerves. All the time. She successfully came to this conclusion after two months of sitting in front of him (NOT by choice, of course! ) Lavanya and him got along like a house on fire. She was better friends with Akash, who sat next to him. Despite being the son of one of the biggest industrialists of the city, Akash was extremely down to earth, and always sweet to her. As for HIM, well...

After about a week since he asked her Lavanya's name, they had barely even looked at each other. Flirting with Lavanya was his favourite pastime, it seemed. It angered her immensely, of course it had to! Lavanya was her best friend. It was her duty to keep her away from elements that could hurt her, especially spoilt brats like Arnav Singh Raizada that believed the world revolved around them and them only.

She found out he was called Arnav purely by accident. He was, as usual, off somewhere behind Lavanya, and Akash had gone up to the teacher's desk, when some girl had come to her. Her questioning "Arnav? Where is he" had grated on Khushi's ears, and she Khushi felt an immediate dislike this hair-brained creature who clearly had fallen for that flirt's charms.

"It's because of that extra short skirt! I mean who wears THAT to school?" She had convinced herself later, despite a nagging feeling in her brain that kept repeating "Arnav.. Where is Arnav?! How dare she!! ?"

She had successfully tried to keep herself out of his way,but alas, that was not to be for long.

She did not like the way the rest of the class kept tying the four of them together. Khushi-Akash and Lavanya-Arnav. The 4-some, they called them. She was exhausted trying to distance herself from the ridiculousness, attempting to show everyone that she had nothing going on with EITHER of them. And just when her classmates were beginning to accept this terribly difficult fact- HE had to spoil it all.

Akash and Lavanya were out, and so it was just the both of them. "So, Khushi, how did you do in the English test yesterday? Aman told me you usually top?" "Oh.. So you know my name!" she replied with indignation. "Oh Come on! There are just THIRTY people in the class. It is not a supreme effort to know even random girls' names, especially for Arnav Singh Raizada"

With that careless statement, the carefully constructed facade of indifference broke, and she whipped her gaze to him, fire in her eyes. "I would request you to then use your incredible memory to go remember the names of girls who actually give a damn about you, Mr whatever Raizada! I apologise for not remembering what you are called, you see I don't usually engage with names or people that don't matter!"

"I see that your manners have decided to stay at home today. What is your problem Khushi? I was just trying to make conversation!"

"I don't care for pointless conversations, Raizada."

"I have a name. It is Arnav."

"Oh you could be a dog for all I care. Here, Tommy!"

"You are the shallowest, pettiest girl I have ever had the misfortune to meet, Gupta!"

"Oh give me a break Arnav!"

"What the..!"

and so on and so forth.

When this this war of words turned serious, neither knew. The next thing she registered was that he bent down, yanked her shoe off her foot angrily, and threw it up in the air, only to land in the middle of a hushed classroom, wide eyed expressions directed at them from every side.

From the corner of her eye, she could see Akash and Lavanya at the door, with horrified expressions on their faces.

Some of her classmates started smirking. "I told you so", they seemed to be telling each other.

She groaned in frustration, too tired to react. Attention was the last thing she liked, or needed. And certainly not because of this... jerk!

One thing became two, and two became four. The little "happening" in class spread round the school like wildfire. And when Dhruv called her that afternoon, warning her not to get "too close" to Arnav, she decided she had had enough. Arnav was going to get everything back, every bit of it.

The next day in school, her eyes continuously searched for him, and when she did see him, she wished she had not. That arrogant smirk plastered acroos his face, his broken tooth making him look ..dare she think of it... adorable?! Shrugging off these mildly disturbing thoughts, she advanced towards him. With each step, her urge to slap that smirk off his face became stronger.

She reached him, and raised her hand, about to slap him, when she made the biggest mistake ever- of looking into his eyes. His dark hazel eyes held her stare, challenging her, it seemed, with their very depth, and the next instant she felt her hand dropping straight down without even touching him. As if things couldn't get worse, she distinctly felt a bright red blush creeping up her neck, rapidly spreading onto her face.

He grinned victoriously, turned around, and walked away. WALKED OUT. ON KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA! No one, no one had dared do that before.

With thoughts of revenge, she stayed awake all night, with disturbing visuals of him alternately burning on a barbeque skewer, and his eyes growing bigger till the fire died down, tormenting her all night.

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She herself didn't realise , when they started talking to each other like human beings. Never normally, though. It always seemed like there was this tension between them, every time they even as much as looked at each other. He then shifted to a house about 5 minutes from hers, and she couldn't avoid him as much as she tried. It was fun at times though. The games, the talks, his broken toothed smile, his slightly husky voice..

Her dislike of him slowly ebbed, leaving behind pleasant feelings she never quite understood.

It wasn't supposed to be this way at all. In school, Dhruv and her were supposed to be the next prospective golden couple in the making. Having liked each other for ages, Khushi and Dhruv seemed, well, just natural. Dhruv was the kind of guy she always wanted. Sober, down to earth, simple, not so good looking, but extremely intelligent. He was worlds away from the flirtatious world inhabited by Arnav Singh Raizada. Then why had everything suddenly turned so upside down? Arnav Singh Raizada had ALL the qualities she never wanted - He was an arrogant playboy, flirting with everything that was female and walked on two legs.

Then why...WHY did that irritating patch of red appear on her face everytime he said something to her??


Alright then, here is chapter 1! Please do LIKE or Comment, it literally takes 30 seconds, and it would definitely make my day!!


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Edited by saaw - 9 years ago
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79 views and no replies? Come on guys it takes a minute to reply or like! And it's just showing support, like it, hate it, please let me know at least? Anyway, here is chapter 2:
Just a key to the story, everything in the present (which is where the prologue starts) is in plain text, conversations are in bold, and the flashbacks are in Italics.

CHAPTER 2: Changing Equations?

Lavanya and Arnav were lately getting to her. After months of Arnav openly flirting with Lavanya, fixing his smouldering gaze on her from time to time, their equation had turned into "Oh god Khushi! We can't stand each other!" Their fights had escalated, leading to Khushi getting caught in the middle, forced to act mediator, adult and chaperone as the situation demanded.

Present day

It was that fight on New Year's eve that changed our lives forever. A tear slowly ran down the corner of one eye, and more followed, her vigorous attempts at brushing them off failing miserably.

9 years ago

New Years Eve 2008. That night would be forever etched into her memory. She stood on her terrace, shivering in the December chill, when she felt a heated gaze upon her. As she slowly turned, suddenly self-conscious about her short white halter dress, her eyes met burning pools of honey, darkening and brightening alternately. She raised a questioning eyebrow at Arnav, who simply came up to her and loosely wrapped his arm around her cold shoulders, his body giving her much needed warmth. His trademark smirk lit up her eyes, and for a fleeting moment she felt her world was right there in front of her, in the bright honey-green pools burning down upon her.

Somebody cleared their throat behind them, breaking the uneasy, but companionable silence that seemed to wrap itself snugly around Khushi and Arnav that chilly night. They turned to see Lavanya standing there looking slightly uncomfortable. Trying to figure out what had happened to Lavanya, Khushi did not fail to notice the hand that suddenly slid off her shoulders as if scalded. Arnav walked over to Lavanya and started talking to her, and feeling strangely left out, Khushi went downstairs to offer Dhruv company.

Loud shouting voices had brought them all running up to the terrace, and when Khushi stepped between them, as usual to mediate, Lavanya had stormed off, locking herself in Khushi's room for the better part of the night that followed. Arnav was being strangely distant, and he never really came back to what he usually was with Khushi, until that phone call from Akash.

Staring at the phone in her hand, Khushi wondered what it would have been like if Akash had never called that day. Cursing herself for letting the same old thoughts get to her, she couldn't help but relive those memories as if they happened yesterday.

"Khushi,call Arnav. Now." "But whats wrong?" "Its Lavanya. Him and Lavanya, again. It's a major problem this time, and Arnav needs you."

Already angry with Arnav's recently acquired distance and Lavanya's extremely moody behaviour, Khushi decided that she had had enough. Infuriated, she dialled the one number that, weirdly enough, she could recite in her sleep. "NOW WHAT!?" She exclaimed as soon as she heard his husky baritone, which made her think about his eyes, his lips.. Until "I really really like Lavanya" brought her crashing down to reality.

Fighting the tears that seemed to have suddenly sprung in her eyes, and ignoring the sinking feeling in her stomach, she tried to concentrate on what he was saying.

"Did you hear me Khushi?" "Yea...Yeah...Tell me what you want." "I want you to ask her out. For me. Look, your one of my closest friends, and you are Lavanya's best friend. I really need you now. You are my biggest source of strength. Please help me..." Those words were her undoing, and to her own wrath, she agreed.

Twenty minutes and an intense discussion with Lavanya later, she called Arnav. "Cut the excess and come to the point Khushi." His harsh, eager tone hurt her more than what he said.

"Congratulations Arnav." was all she could muster, hoping he would hang up and spare her the sorrow of now "sharing his joy" like the "true friend" she was. But she should have known better. It was her life, after all.

In between excited whoops of joy and "Isn't it greats", he seemed to have forgotten that the girl he had talked, flirted and called on for help for hours everyday, was present on the other end of the line, wanting to curl up and die.

And so the Lavanya-Arnav saga started, Khushi being made to feel, every moment, how much of a hindrance she was to the "lovebirds". She tried her best to walk away from their lives, to distance herself from Arnav, who in turn, was grew closer to her every passing day. Arnav's parents and Di seemed to love her to bits, and there were many a evenings when Khushi sat with Ratna aunty, gossiping over a cup of hot coffee. Di seemed to think that Khushi was the only one who wielded any power over her firebrand of a brother, and they spent hours sharing secrets and heart-to-hearts over ice cream and endless Bollywood films.

The reality of Lavanya and Arnav being together did not quite hit her, mainly because she refused to acknowledge it, until one day in her house. It was just the trio, watching Harry Potter. When she turned around to laugh at one of their inside jokes, the feeling of being out in the cold wrapped itself around her, chilling her to her bone.

Arnav had his head on Lavanya's shoulder, their fingers intertwined, him stroking her hand softly. Never had Khushi had heard such an explosion inside her. Never had she felt so alone, so broken.

She whipped her head back to the front, and tried to forget about what she just saw.

That night, her dreams had Arnav turning into Lavanya and the Lavanya turning into Dhruv. She didnt sleep a wink.

She had fnally accepted that she was over Dhruv, and into Arnav. So into him, infact, that there was no way out of there, try as she might. Arnav kept making matters worse. If only could he stick to his girlfriend and spare her his overwhelming presence, but no. Khushi was "very important" in his life, and his first call, always, was to her.

And then he went to Goa on a vacation. She missed him terribly. Akash tried to be funny, and was really sweet about it, but she found herself wanting to see that broken toothed smile more and more with each passing day, until his number flashed on her phone. He had a surprise waiting for her the next day at school, he said.

Now beginning to dread his surprises, she tried hard to stay home the next day, but in vain. It seemed as if she was God's personal entertainment, she thought angrily.

As she sat in the bus the next day, a hand popped out in front of her, holding a red bag with golden stars and hearts on it. She pinched herself to make sure this was real, when "Open it.. Go on." his husky voice somewhere close behind her ear made her turn, and she finally saw that smile she had being dying to see, her breath being knocked out of her with a whoosh.

"Go on", he said again, urging her to open the bag. She did, and caught her breath. Inside was the most beautiful shell bracelet she had ever laid her eyes on, lying there in a gorgeous red wrapping tissue that glinted in the sun streaming in through the window.

Chapter 3

Right, what do you think?


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Surprised to not see any comments here at all. I absolutely love stories that start with school (such a crazy beautiful time in one's life) and I certainly liked the way you've written it.

Looking forward for more. Cheers!
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Hi there,
Just read prologue and skimmed through first two chapters! WOW! You have "Started the Fire" here :)!! I generally browse through the forum for new writers and stories so this was a pleasant surprise!! I really really hope you complete this story with reasonable frequency of updates and don't leave us readers hanging!! If you promise that, I promise to stay committed to your story and comment regularly.

I have seen many new writers who post 1 or 2 chapters and never turn up here again...

Good luck and looking forward to this fire... :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I totally agree I LOVE IT !!!!⭐️
so shocked to see the amount of comments for a wonderful story like yours there should be pages full

can't wait 4 next update
please update soon😭
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Interesting ... But as I reading prologue about whom payal is talking about that she would never let khushi break with.. Arnav?... If that why he talking to khushi like that in prologue
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Originally posted by: -Reader-

Hi there,

Just read prologue and skimmed through first two chapters! WOW! You have "Started the Fire" here :)!! I generally browse through the forum for new writers and stories so this was a pleasant surprise!! I really really hope you complete this story with reasonable frequency of updates and don't leave us readers hanging!! If you promise that, I promise to stay committed to your story and comment regularly.

I have seen many new writers who post 1 or 2 chapters and never turn up here again...

Good luck and looking forward to this fire... :D




Hi!

Thanks for the comment! I have more than a few chapters already ready, which I will edit and post pretty quickly, but I definitely will do pretty much at least a chapter every week and a half! This has become too close to me to not continue now :)

Thanks for the lovely feedback!

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Originally posted by: Anarocksick

Surprised to not see any comments here at all. I absolutely love stories that start with school (such a crazy beautiful time in one's life) and I certainly liked the way you've written it.

Looking forward for more. Cheers!


Hey!

Thanks for the comment- comments keep me going ;) Updating the next chapter now-ish!

Cheers
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Originally posted by: jessbrownie

I totally agree I LOVE IT !!!!⭐️

so shocked to see the amount of comments for a wonderful story like yours there should be pages full

can't wait 4 next update
please update soon😭


Haha thank you for the super-kind words! Glad you're liking it! :)

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