~Arhi FF~#4~The Hands of Time~Chp-15~P.129~Mar 13~Link to Th-5 on P.1 - Page 72

Interesting and intriguing! The story is certainly getting intense. As soon as I read your description of Shyam- I thought to myself - shit I hope this guy is not from the train. But he is ... How bad will the situation get ? Well I will patient and see where you take us :) loved it... I don't know why you thought it is boring when the story is getting interesting... Thoroughly enjoying every bit of it :)

awesome update.. the story is getting interesting and mysterious..
Shyam finally makes an appearance.. hope he does not turn negative in future...
and for whom is this photographer working? guess have to wait for the rest of the story to get all the answers.. 😊

Omg this is getting more intriguing...

OMG this is awesome.. I can read even part 3 without getting bored.. 😉

This story feels closer you know because well Bangalore! And nilgiris is one place which I have visited so often it's nice to get to know more see it in an entirely different light ..its beautiful.

Awesome update as usual Sandhya!! Loved it!! Why yaar why did you make shyam a cop, now how will I hate him. Love police officers lol, I am sure you have your ways to make me hate him :-)

Photographer is scary!

Fantabulous update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Amazing update:)! I'm so glad Arnav and Khushi admitted their love for each other and are looking forward together to face headon to any situation comes in their way:)! Please keep on updating regularly cuz we wait impatiently for your story:))!

Sandhya I can now understand why it takes such a long time for you to update while reading the first part I was so much impressed with the research you did and the details you gave about the police actions and all was remarkable. You are just not a good writer but an excellent story teller. Hatsoff ,very impressive.

Why do I feel that Khushi was the one that was to be kidnapped on the day Anjali was kidnapped? Because as in the other 2 kidnaps the girls are from lower middle class but Anjali was the only one from a rich family so I think there was a misunderstanding and a wrong girl was kidnapped.

Shyam , till now I think he is positive , there is nothing wrong in falling in love with a girl and dreaming about her. Anyone can do that and it is not wrong. So I will be open mind and will wait and see how his character unfolds.

The Scene between Arnav and Khushi was so romantic Aww atlast Khushi has accepted her feelings and confessed them to Arnav and also she shared her worries and insecurities with him. In any relationship trust , understanding and communication plays a pivotal role and these 3 are the main pillars of and successful relationship.

Wow Sandhya you can left us with a twist. Who is this client who wants to stay away from the police ? What is this spy going to do? I sense a lot of danger for Khushi because of this spy's made up stories.

Sandhya don't feel disappointed dear , we are all with you. I am with you and I promise that I will not stop reading your story no matter when you update, I can understand that some times our AD keeps us so busy that we wont get time to do anything else So keep smiling. Take care.