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chichu1

@chichu1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#571

Hai,

I read the update... felt nice... how arnav took care of khushi...n all... but i felt somethings a miss...like nothing happened... hope u will give as s surprise chaptr with lots of happenings soon.😉.. loveya

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kattu12

@kattu12

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#572

beautiful update!
khushi had a panic attack on learning about jayanti and arnav was there for her. glad that she broke down before him, told him everything. the hug the soothing was all too overwhelming, but though they are on talking terms again and share a comfortable companionship but khushi is still hesitant or scared to take their relationship to next level. and the stalker who took their photos, he doesn't seem to be a media person for a page 3 story since he was stalking khushi throughout the day or has he something to do with all these kidnappings? if the photos get published then its gonna be another scandal. let's see.
btw loved the last line about her snoring, cute!
plz continue soon

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1likeNoOther

@1likeNoOther

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Posted: 9 years ago

#573

Loved both updates!!!

Is it one person who is taking all these young girls or are there many of them. Hope Khushi finds them soon and brings the girls justice whether they are alive or dead - because I think that is how she feels she will be at peace

And Arnav is such a sweetheart. He could have easily hated Khushi like his mother, but he chose to be realistic and he constantly needs to remind Khushi to be a little realistic too, sure Khushi was with Anjali at the time she disappeared, but she was only 10 years old!! It's not your fault Khushi! Arnav was awesome in this update especially that last part ❤️

Btw - that description of tandoori chicken sandwiches made me really crave some and I just had lunch 😆

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smric

@smric

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#574

Amazing update!

Im happy to read that Khushi finally did what she feared to do. Visit the place where Anjali disappered. It hurts to see her in so uch pain even after all these years. Her struggle to lead a normal life is sad. And the panic attack. The way Arnav cares for her and the way he leaves the house to reach her shows that he is and will be her support in future. The understanding he shows towards her grief and inability to move on from Anjali is amazing.

Who is the guy with camera? Press? Or private investigator? Or someone who found Khushi while she was searching for answeres a while back jn police station? All these questions are confusing.

Also as the story is progressing we are finding out more childrens have been disappered from there. So the mystery continues.

I hope Khushi realises that getting away from Arnav causing her more pain. I wish to read more about their bond.

Thank you for the update.😊

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Dear thank you for pm.😛

I loved the update...🤗

Khushi still gets panic attacks... Poor girl...😭 Thank God Arnav came on time... Happy to know that Khushi is safe...😃

You have beautifully described the way Arnav-Khushi relation is... Its crystal clear that Arnav loves Khushi & Khushi loves Arnav...❤️

Arnav deeply cares for Khushi... He wants Khushi to overcome the past & live life in the present... Hope so Khushi gives their relation a chance... Waiting for love to blossom in Arshi's life with the onset of new phase in this story...

Someone is following Khushi...😲 Waiting to know his intention... Is he the one involved in Anjali's disappearance? ? ?

Please dear try & update quickly...

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#576

Sandhya, I loved this update.

The way you have written about his turmoil while driving to the temple, his tensions and anxiety, then his relief finding her safe in the car, all the emotions both of them went through, it was just beautifully written.

I read the update thrice and every time I felt goosebumps when he was waking her up or when she was narrating what happened at the temple.

There are few sentences which I loved and I am sure I would carry that with me long after you have completed this story like:

She took his hand.

It was solid. It was an anchor. It told many stories.

The tenderness of his hand as he took hers spoke volumes about his compassion, sensitivity and warm heart. His firm grip said he was strong of character, trustworthy and reliable. His calloused palm said that his wealth wasn't merely inherited but earned.

Words felt unnecessary as each sought solace in the other's presence.

Silence is the ultimate test of a relationship. Bitterness is said to lace the air during angry silence, denoting tough times for the people involved. Relationships are said to be in trouble, if constant conversation is needed to fill awkward silences in between. Comfortable silence on the other hand, is said to be the best kind. For, if one can enjoy another's company without worrying about filling the quieter moments with unnecessary words, their relationship can and will withstand the test of time. Or so, it is believed.

Above sentences for me just stole my heart. It is beyond beautiful.

The camaraderie shared by these two in the second update felt so soothing. Any person who would be watching them would think they have known each other for ages, they were so much in sync with each other.

Would Khushi let go of this rare connection she has with Arnav due to her own demons ?

It would be sad is she does it.

And how would Arnav feel if Khushi again distances herself from him ? It breaks my heart to see their hearts breaking. I wish Khushi takes a stronger stand this time. But lets see Sandhya, what you have planned for this couple.

And wow the story is taking a turn towards more mysteries now.

Who is the man who was following Khushi all day long and took pictures of her embracing Arnav ?

As Shailaja said, is he the man who was watching her in the train ?

And it was so sad to read about another abduction of a girl. So many kids particularly girls are getting kidnapped, why are the Police or the law enforcement authorities silent about it ?

Why is this not a big issue ?

Sometimes I feel the police are involved too. Khushi visited the police station regarding the kidnapping of Lakshmis daughter and I am guessing her troubles began from there.

And I am thinking what if the photographs reached the hands of mother Raizada. She is going to freak out. She not just hates Khushi, she loathes her. Too scared to think in that direction.

Will Khushi take up the job in Mumbai ?

If she goes to Mumbai, will she meet Anjali there ?

Though I want to say that I would like to read the next update soon, I totally understand how taxing asli duniya can be.

Take your time Sandhya and do keep passionate readers like us in your thoughts.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story for us.

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Arnav's concern and his affection towards Khushi speaks loudly, the four letter word.

Khushi calling Arnav to help in the need, doesnt it convey the message.

Though she tried hard to cover her feeling, its obvious for the third eye.

Arnav might be oblivious, but he is a smart man and he will figure it out

Who is the kidnapper?

Is Anjali and the other girls alive?

"Hands of time", if this is to be read in between the letters or to find the underline meaning, I would say, Anjali is alive.

Willbe back with more

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sivatharshini

@sivatharshini

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#578

It is a fantastic chapter. It's beautifully written. The way Arnav takes care of Khushi, the way he comforts her. Khushi is so brave, Arnav is totally right ! She is admirable. She deals with many problems and she manages to fight against the latter, it is simply surprising. The story is getting more and more interesting. Thank you for this superb chapter.

Edited by sivatharshini - 9 years ago

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#579

Sandhya, silences not beholden to words are the best. They speak of a rare comfort where one can just be. And that "You called" was simply beautiful. A myriad feelings expressed in those two words. Succor for her panicked heart, and sukoon for mine :)

And now I want to know who this guy with the camera is and who he's working for. Was greed so much greater than simple humanity? Did he not see fit to help?

You write of Khushi's tumultuous emotions so beautifully. Her fears, the faltering steps she takes to overcome them which receive blows even while they're in their nascent stage, all tug at the heart. How much more can she bear?

And Sandhya, you most certainly are a woman after my own heart ... "trimmed toast" and "diagonal cuts" ... the only way!