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jeb1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Congrats on new thread
Fabulous update loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the double post
Edited by xZoyax - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Faiqa,👏

This is what I have now,
I think you will hear from me more than one time.traveling back home.

UNRES

What have you done here in this chapter ,very few writers do.I must say a Huge Thank You for bringing out the most awaited emotions , fire and eating up pain of Arnav.

He was only 10 when the night fell on him.His love , his mother left him with the responsibility of his sis.Since then he never cried, never said anything and was adding up piles of huge crap of this life on his shoulders.He had forgotten to smile even.

He didn't notice Khsuhi in Yales while she was there among the crowd ,but the moment she was standing at the terrace of that second floor , in the balcony, his mother's den, her bedroom.His eyes couldn't leave Khsuhi's sight.The intensity of his desire to have her just to talk to, or to see her in front of her, to keep her around started.The innocent wish changed and grew into protection when she was being attacked or whenever she was in danger.That protectiveness slipped under this possessiveness to keep her in his embrace ,to remove all of her pain after her opening up to him, telling him the biggest secret of her life.

He just embraced her ,but she kissed him in return.I still can't forget that innocent kiss.She recognized him and she wanted to be near him.Her pure heart found a companion in him who was ready to take her away from the cruelty of her life,but he never opened his wounds till now.The only person he was residing in left him, then accused him without knowing the truth.

I am so glad he is the one who expressed his own feelings by himself.

He is a man of action and I am glad you brought the moment , I can take you by dragging if I have to.He was determined ,especially after wedding.

Does Khsuhi really wanted to go through this wedding and why even though she had set up all as a drama?

So Lavanya is Akash's wife😲 That never came to me😆 Good one 👏


Nani and Anjali cornered him as expected and his distance brought a realization of loneliness in Anjali and that emptiness was filled by Arun.Very realistic approach here, our dependance on one breaks the silence when that one person goes away and we need to find one to fill that place up.Arun is the best choice of her.

Now in India, Aadi is there for wedding and Khsuhi is coming with two body guards who love to pulleys of each other.I am imagining and grinning.

Police and crowd cheer is really diluting the intensity.

Their first night reminded me off this song.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fRKYEq_Ty6M[/YOUTUBE]


Edited by Roop_P - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is the last update. It should be a happy ending. Than what is this Shyam doing here? Such a romantic update spoiled by his presence
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Awesome update arshi dear 👏 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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God it wass super hot and intense.how do u write so wel as if its happening in real.it was just tooo gud.love the whole scene witb arnav full of anger and rage and khushi for the frst time calm.😆
Lol whole audience was there to watch this crazy couple madly in love.it.
And the kiss and after that scenes.😳
I am still hyper ventilating.ufff.btw i guess this time u wrote in little detail about those stuff right.as far as i remember u used to write without much detail. Both ways u r sooo sooo gud.with/without giving details.he finally said her i love u.
They r going to be married again.😊
Hey y shyam again??😡he wil never let anyone in peace.

Dear i am very sure u wil continue writing stories after this end right.I can expect this frm u right?i am not sad about ending of this story bcoz i am confident enuf that u wil come back with another beautiful story.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...that was passionately gud!!
But man, to drag an ILU from Raizada is like tugging a toy from a child's hand...you have to pull n pull against an obstinate force...

Anyway chaddo...glad to knw they finally tying the knot...wid parents blessings!! Cant Shyamu take abreak like in the Antartic or some place like dat... he is tenacious as a rougue weed in a pretty garden...

As fr the story reaching itz culmination...I can only quote "Goodbyes are never the end...it just means take care till we met again"

Patting myself on my back!! 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey faiqa
that was super se bhi uper wala update
i loved it so so so much
very well written
Edited by enthusiastic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantabulous update
Loved it
Beautifully written
Plz continue soon
Congrats for the new thread
Thanks for the pm

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