#6:ArshiSS:Inciting Desires2/COMLETED:Ch17-18&Epilogue/NOTEPg131

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smat

@smat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Fantastic 👏

Thanks for the update 👍🏼

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akai

@akai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Wow dear wonderful, desirefull updates.

I loved the way Arnav was making her to see his POV.

Poor police men..

Lol I literally laughed at that..

The night followed was full of passion.

Both are totally in love..

Now what is with shyam?

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

it was a superb update mixed with romance emotions running high and passion at its peak arshi and rain always go together their fight and coming to terms with each other had to take place in the rain it was a high voltage drama for the public to watch

I really loved it.

Edited by abivicky86 - 9 years ago

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

loved chapter 17👏

wow wow wow arshi finally together☺️

thank you for the pm you will be sending😃

eager for the next part

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vijayalaxmib

@vijayalaxmib

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Hot, emotional n superb update.. Wen khushi left arnav place by accusing him as selfish n arnav got angry n went to search her.. I thought oh god, again another fight wat ll happen now.. But loved the way how arnav open up to her, even though in anger, bt he told her abt the things which she didnt know n abt his presence in her life n important days .. Police whistles seeing their war n love was superb n little funny too.. Arshi made love.. Loved ur style of writing abt their hot n romantic moments.. Arnav is in india , to encourage anjali to build her love life with arun.. Even khushi is coming back to india that to with uncle suki.. Arnav confessed abt their marriage to gupta's n raizada.. Aadi n payal is fixed even ahjali n arun's too , next is our arshi.. Waiting for next chapter.. Continue.. Thanks for pm in adv.

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Oh my my di let me cool down first..so much hotness to handle it..really need a cold shower in this brone crushing winter😆😳

Aww the fight that start with so much intensity ends with so much passion😳...

Arnav ne v apne dil ki bhadas nikal he diya..enough izz enough...nd ya in points amwith arnav bitwa dat if she was hurt by his action then he was also no less hurt by every tym a new accusation...

Oh my gossh the intensity with which khushi kissed him..

"Heere moti main na chaahoo...Main toh chaahoo samgam tera
Main na jaanu, tu hi jaane...Main toh teri, tu hai mera..."

overwhelmed by his confession...nd this tym thier is not going back..to show her by his action his intensity of love..his passion & desire for her...as actions speaks louder than word😉😳

finally they became one body and soul in true sense...that was so hawwtt sensual and passionate...☺️

"Adhoori saans thi, dhadkan adhoori thi, adhoore hum ...

magar ab chaand poora hai falak pe ... aur ab poore hai hum.."

as for arnav they r already a married couple with all the rituals...

Nd finally mr arrogant stale piece of resin confessed that 3 words in most romantic way..haye di u make me all blushy blushy through out the update😳😳

now waiting for arshi marriage in properway i mean infront of family and frnds...

Oh no agaye arshi k life me ghrahan...shyam snakewa..now what he wants...when after so ling anjali got her share of true love tav iss ko tapakna tha...😡😡

Not to forgot those poor police man...😆😆thier face r worth watching to get hold of arshi nd witness thier cute nok jhok...😆😆dat was damn hilarious di🤣thier face must b like this...oh not again😆🤣

Bdw di no mojo darling in this update..his this mojni missing him😆😉

Waiting for nxt..

Continue soonish.😃

PS:- oh di lovely edit of arshi...just eagrly waiting for them..uff abb intezaar he nahi hota...24 nov kyun jaldi ni aying...it gonna b 9 episodes mini series of only 10 min...huh..10 se kanha maan bharega di..bt phir b they r back itna he kafi hai...😳😳chahe 10 ka ho ya 1 min...uff when it cameto arshi we cant get enough of them...😉till then rabba vey

Edited by latersbaby. - 9 years ago

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Superb Update👏👏👏

Romantic ,but emotional.How much pain Arnav had is what grabbing me here.There is no doubt, Khsuhi's pain is far rom imagination,but Arnav's pain finally surfaced up and the way he explained it.😭 My heart ached for him.

Khushi sealed his lips understanding him finally.She wasn't aware of and now the way she took his pain away and he made the promise to take her pains away.👏

This is the BESTEST chapter ever .

So Sukhi uncle was with O'Conner 😆 and the way police whistling at them, I giggled .They are right Mad people and in Love with each other.

This is the longest comment I have ever made in my history on IF😆😉

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

I am speechless👏⭐️⭐️

will be back

BACK NOW

Faiqa, regardless how hard is to write a love making scene,but I think ,it is harder to write with absolutely such decency and delicacy.Love those small vivid points during their fight, their love and inciting rain, storm lightening , raging desires under these and raging eyes of the crowd.That touch is absolutely is like a master mind plan.

You always claim not to be a writer while many people claim that openly.Trust me, that is under statement.You are such a fine writer and you don;t even know.

I am in love with the part of Arnav and how he opened up so in anger,but made her realize what she wasn't aware of.He is the person who always been taken granted by his loved ones and the ones he loved.He made his point clear that she is equal half and equally responsible in everything in this LOVE.

I was missing this piece of information that how come Anjali and Nani never said anything to Arnav.I think there is always a hidden good behind things .Arnav's distance brought Anjali closer to Arun.
⭐️

This is what she did...She put a balm on his wounds today while kissing him when he was losing himself explaining her and I love her gesture ,not to let him finish those three words.This chapter of yours will be read many times .

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aK-QslYKrnw[/YOUTUBE]

SHOCKER: you are the biggest surprise👏 So Lavanya is Akash's wife.Never ever thought or could imagine this and all the fandom of this story was worried who is Akash's partner?😆 So Lavanya has equal shares of business and life partner of Akash and she is Christian.I am impressed with this part of the story.I read this morning and till then I have read this chapter more than 5 times.

A standing ovation to you👏👏👏

Edited by xZoyax - 9 years ago