Virika SS: You complete me! *Last Chap-Pg 8*

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

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Mansi

@MyKryan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Res!

**unres**

Loved the update!

Too much romantic

Thank god! It was just a dream, I mean how can he do this.

Loved how he explained her about being always with her, just by her side.

Loved the convo between both the sis

Jeevika kissed him in front of Rima :p

On your face Rima..haha!!

Jeevika feeding him with her very own hands *_*

And then this

He bent to whisper something to his wife who's love was overflowing today.

She kissing his cheeks! :*:*

Mrs Vadhera acting like she's asleep just to make her husband carry her.

My fav lines:

He turned and saw Jeevika who was sleeping.

Rima: Oh!Jeevika has fallen asleep.

She was about to wake her up.

Viren: Shhh! No rima!Don't wake her up!

Rima: But she can't sleep in the backyard whole night.

Viren: Who's gonna make her sleep alone here all night?

Rima looked at him confused. In a swift motion he picked her in his arms,leaving behind an irritated Rima.

Also these...

Viren: Oh is it? Ok fine give me a kiss!

Jeevika had an expression of shock on her face.

Jeevika: Virenji...

Viren: Kya Virenji? If you can kiss me in front of Rima,then why not in our room where we are all alone?

He said moving closer.Jeevika was dumbstruck.

Again a cliffhanger??

What Viren is going to do? :o

Update soon!

Can't wait more...Also I want you to do a super long update for this long comment. ;)

PS~ This is my fav SS!

** I'M FIRST ONE TO COMMENT **😛

Edited by MyKryan - 9 years ago

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Neetu

@alonelove

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Wow!! What a chapter
This was the best so far
In love with ur writing
N the way ur gng with the story is just awesome
Continue soon
Can't wait to c their acting

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Mehak

@MehakGera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Superb story...
The jealous jeevika <3
Virika are love

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13toobaf

@13toobaf

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

wow! wht[ a nice chapter

well done keep It up...

update soon

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Awesome update!!
Wow ih was only dream
Bt the way viren was consoling jeevika was so sweet
N her acting tho!!
The way viren understood jeevikas action
He's just amazing!!
Continue really soon
Really wanna know wats goin on in virens mind
Thnx for the pm

😊

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

wow
totally loved naughty jeevika
viren totally romantic as usual
awesome update
loved it

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Omg it was just a dream!

there I was freaking out 😆

well well well, nice to see this bold side of jeevs

loved how she's able to do anything to show her love for her husband

hahaha, viren figuring out her pretend - sleeping was the cutest

I love reading about him from you

excited to find out what exactly he has in mind now

Thanks for another superb update 😃

continue sooon!!!

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urmil

@urmil

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Thank god it was just jeevika's dream, otherwise calling smone better than jeevika, be it for just a dress, is not like viren. Loved naughty jeevika...lawyer viren who knows how to make smone confess the truth...update soon...wanna see true colors of Rima... Still confused abt her character...thanks for pm