Virika SS: You complete me! *Last Chap-Pg 8*

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Neetu

@alonelove

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Superb update
Loved the complete chapter
Viren is so damn cute
Continue soon akka

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

how are you

in chennai so much rain and all place and home are in danger so i asked

hope the problem solve soon

coming to the update

awesome update

loved it

loved the whole update

in the starting

virika cute talk it was amazing

it is true that the couple should think about the baby not the other person and their cute talk jeevika ke liye viren always free

and in the movie seeing viren was not wasting time at all

he was busy romancing with wife may be he didnt see the movie only

viren was not done the good thing may be he can told jeevika about hte dress and he can give to rima with out telling he should not to give her

i have one suggestion

in last jeevika saw viren was given dress to rima viren should not come to no that jeevika saw this they should solve their problem in the room not in front of rima

totally

amazing

superb

fantastic

mind blowing

splendid

continue soon

thanks for the pm

Edited by sushmakryan - 9 years ago

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sushmakryan
how are you
in chennai so much rain and all place and home are in danger so i asked
hope the problem solve soon
coming to the update
awesome update
loved it
loved the whole update
in the starting
virika cute talk it was amazing
it is true that the couple should think about the baby not the other person and their cute talk jeevika ke liye viren always free
and in the movie seeing viren was not wasting time at all
he was busy romancing with wife may be he didnt see the movie only
viren was not done the good thing may be he can told jeevika about hte dress and he can give to rima with out telling he should not to give her
i have one suggestion
in last jeevika saw viren was given dress to rima viren should not come to no that jeevika saw this they should solve their problem in the room not in front of rima
totally
amazing
superb
fantastic
mind blowing
splendid
continue soon
thanks for the pm

I'm perfectly alright dear...actually my area is not so affected by the floods...tnk u so much for ur concern...😊

N also tnx for d big comment😊

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urmil

@urmil

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Must say ur story goes different from my imagination...but loved it and that's the reason I am eager to read ur update...plz don't stop updating it coz sm r not responding...i know u writers put lot of effort but it also feels bad when fab writers like u stop updating...u shud also think abt the one who r liking ur work...now coming to update...loved the update but didn't like viren saying that color doesn't look good on jeevika...feeling bad for jeevika...i don't want jeevika to forgive viren easily coz its really a big thing...want viren to feel guilty for his behaviour...plz update soon

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

OMG CLIFFHANGER!!! 😲😲😲

This is gonna haunt me until you update next, so please do update soon!

Coming to the start of this update, I thought it was so cute how Viren told Jeevs they would wait till they were ready to have the baby

And I loved their romance, everywhere, anywhere!

But, omg, the ending 😕

I'm sure you have this all planned out

So I'll just wait here for you to unravel the suspense...

Again, please do update soon, lots of love! ❤️

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

oh my god
seriously
why
awesome update cannot wait
please hurry and update
SOON

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Amazing update!!
Loved the way viren explained to jeevika that theyre gna hav a baby wen they want n not wen others say
N the way he romanced wid her anywhere n everywhere was so cute!!
N the ending tho!!
Seriously cant wait til the update
Continue really soon
😊

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Mansi

@MyKryan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Loved the update!

Superb job!

The way he sets her concern down for having a baby is beautifully written.

Woah! Everybody hanging out together!

Loved the convo between the VV bros

Viren gave the dress to Rima? :-(

Jeevs saw them :o

You left us hanging in between! Update soon. The suspense is killing!

Now coming to my fav lines:

Viren: So Mrs.Vadhera when will you be ready?

Jeevika: Very soon!

She said blushing.Then they cuddled to sleep,hoping for a beautiful day tomorrow.

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Neetu

@alonelove

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Beautiful update as usual
Loved the virika convo in the beginning
Omg it's actually a bit shocking to know that viren gave that dress to rima
To be frank I want to see the jealous jeevika
Update soon