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Sanya

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Posted: 20 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Night Maiden

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WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ...................COntinue............plz i am dying to hear what happens next.........😆

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

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Posted: 20 years ago

#52

Here we Go...

Dadi remained on the bench. She couldn't control her curiosty, she standes up and walkes upto Kripas door, she slowly openes it and sets one foot in, she looks around the same room only to find where Kripa was lying was a girl sitting on the edge. Smiling.....................................................

Dadi at once froze, could it be... the same long flowy hair with a few high lights, the cast around the face which Kriper had pacessed, a few hours ago. Is it...Is it...

Dadi(stuttering,frozen):Ka...Ka...Ka...Kripa (the girl looked up, now her smile had turned even bigger)...ta...ta tum zinda ho?

Kripa(laughing):Ha dadi, vishwass nahi hora ha hai,

Dadi(amazed):par...Docter neh tu kaha ta ki tum...

Kriper(smiling)ki meh margee te...right na, maine he toh bolata Docter ko.

Dadi(still shocked)...kyun beta?(her face screwed up)

Kripa(serious):Dadi...mujhe...mujhe, marni kilye ek sacheez kar gaya ta.

Dardi(even more shocked and crying):WHAT...KYA...KISNE.

Kripa looks down, a tera trickels down from her eyes.

Kripa(crying):NAINA

Dadi(angry):Meh jhannte te...voh gharree howe tee, par khun, aur NAINA. BETA, NAINA KI KYA HIMAT HAI, ABB TUM DEHKO KI MEH...

Dadi walks upto Kripa to give her a hug, Kripa ugs her back, crying at the same time.

Kripa(refusing):Nahi Dadi...yeh larrai mere aur Naina ki beech meh hai, meh khud ussko khatam karonigi, voh ye khud sab ki samne khabul karegi, ki ussne mujhe marni ki koshis ki ye te. Dadi uape rohye math meh teek ho, vas Docter ko mere chehre par illage karna hai, aur usske bhadd meh Naina ko khatam kar longi, Dadi uape mere ghallat mutt samjhe ye par meh Angad ko bh deckowonghi, khi jaab Kripa Sharma passa chahti, toh voh kaise kamhatt te hai, kya uape mere saath deinghi.

Dadi(smiles):Beta maine tum se vaada kiya te aur karti hoon ki meh haar waqt tumhari saath hongi aur ye kabhi mutt bullana, aur beta meh tumhari saath issle ye nahi derri hi, kyunki meine tum se vaada kiya, bhaal ke iss le yeh kyunki meh Naina ko haatam karna chahti khun, usske assli chehra DILIP, KARTIC aur Angad ki samne lah na chahti hoon!

Kripa(Happy):Thankyou Dadi, ur da best I Love You(she rans up and hugs Dadi)

Dadi:Vaise tum hara Plan kya hai.

Kripa(serious):Meh Kripita Senn, bhan kar..................................................

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Let the game BEGIN!

Luv ya Suerstars

Amazin nd Hot!

Edited by Amazin nd hot! - 20 years ago