FAN-FIC WIV NEW TWIST K- REVENGE ON NAINA - Page 12

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Posted: 19 years ago
No one's continuing, so I'll continue.

At the scene:

Kripa: Who....
Angad: Kripa

Angad has tears of joy in his eyes. He touches Kripa's face and hugs her. Kripa feels so relaxed and happy.

Kripa: Angad......
Angad: Kripa....

Then ppl start clapping again. The couple is startled. ANd Angad takes Kripa's hand, before she cud say anything, and goes to his car. SHe drives them to an outhouse.

In the car:

Kripa's looking at him passionately. Then, eveything came back to her.

Kripa gasps: Angad, where r u taking me?
Angad: Jaha mai tumse akela baat kar sakta hu
Kripa: Par....
Kripa: Jaane do mujhse...issi waqt
Angad: Nehi

Saying this he has tears in his eyes. Before Kripa cud say aanything back, they arrive there.

Kripa:Angad....
Angad: Chalo mera saath

He gets out of the car, takes her hand, and goes into the outhouse. Once there:

Angad: Tum kaha thi Kripa?
Kripa: Who....tumhe zaroor kuch galat familee hui hai
Angad: Mujhe kuch galat familee nehi hui hai....mai acchi tara se jaanta hu ki tum hi Kripa ho
Angad: Achanak tum mera naam kaise jaanti ho phir?
Kripa: Who....maine tumhari photot dekha ek newspaper mei to...
Angad: Kya?

Kripa was willing to go home now. Angad was about to ask her more when:

Kripa: Mai Kripita Senn hu, aur ab tum mujhe ghar lenga
Angad: Nehi, tum Kripa ho

He breaks down and starts hugging her again. Kripa can't control her feelings anymore. She hugs him back tightly.

Then she pushes hm back.

Someone plz read the parts. 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue soon. i love these parts. 👏
you did a great job.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanx for replying! 😊 And reading my parts. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
love it. it's jo sooooo...........cute. please bring angad and kripa together and put something like angad's gonna help kripa to take revenge on naina. and please continue soon. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
cute story! 😛
cont soon...

Love
Soni
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok, i think i'll cont. another part.

Recap:

He breaks down and starts hugging her again. Kripa can't control her feelings anymore. She hugs him back tightly.

Then she pushes hm back.


At the scene:

Angad: Kripa?
Kripa: I am Kripita Senn, not Kripa, ok?
Angad: Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? I know ur Kripa
Kripa: Nehi mai Kripa nehi hu, mai Kripita Senn hu, got that?

Then she ran outside. Angad ran after her. When he caught up to her:

Angad: Kaha jaa rahi ho? 😕
Kripa: Ghar pe, ab mujhe ghar le jaao
Angad: Nehi

Then he held her arms tightly, and asked her again who she was.

Kripa: Maine kaha na ki mai Kripita Senn hu

She was trying to free herself, but unfortunately ended up slapping Angad. 😭 Inside, Angad was hurt really badly by this.

Angad: Kripa, yeh tumne kya kiya?
Kripa: Angad...who...i'm so sorry 😭

Tears were rolling out of her eyes. Angad had tears in his eyes too.

Angad: Dekha, tum Kripa hi ho.....tum mujhe tapad marne ki bar, roone laga
Kripa: Who.....mai......
Angad: Kripa, tum saach kyu nehi bolti ki tum mera Kripa ho? Kyu?
Kripa: Who......
Angad: Who kya?

Kripa then was in such a stress right now that she fainted.

Angad: Kripa? Kripa?

He carried her into the car, and drove her to the hospital. Whenthey got there Kripa was immediately taken into care. Angad was really anxious. He just didn't know what to do.

After several minutes the doctor came out.

Angad: Kya hua uski?
Doc: She is under a lot of stress, plz aap uski khayal rakhna
Angad: Ok.....but will she be fine?
Doc: Yes, aap chahta hai to aaj ghar le ja sakta hai uski
Angad: Ok, thank u doctor sahb
Doc: Sure

Angad went to see how Kripa was doing. When he got there she was asleep. He didn't want to bother her. Then he saw Kripa's eyes slowly open.

Kripa: Angad? Tum kaha ho?

He went to her.

Angad: Mai yaha hu Kripa. Tum aaram karo
Kripa: Nehi....meri paas aao
Angad: Mai tumhari paas hu Kripa
Kripa: Par mai to kuch bhi nehi dekh sakti
Angad: What?

Was Kripa turning blind?

That's all for now.


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Posted: 19 years ago

great ji marz ji! lub ju! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
love it! 😆 please don't make kripa blind she needs to take her revenge on naina. con. soon plz.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: can_gal


great ji marz ji! lub ju! 😳

Luv u too Soiniaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😛 Di

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Posted: 19 years ago
continue soon.
plz don't make her blind. okay

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