Longest hours-Armaan Riddhima OS - Page 19

Originally posted by: lashyyy

oye hoye this is just sooo marvelous
so cute n adorable
the concept was really awesome
ok ridhz pov her pain is beautifully shown how she is craving for armaan his love
ar story is lovely
loved how ridhz is obsessed with armaan that she follow him everywhere kind of love at first sight but things turn out to be different
rahul ke phone se to i was also got confused but
at last armaan entry make it more worst for both ridhz n me
but finally armaan confession clear it all
omg he loves her too from the starting
its such a beautiful story with fully ar which i love the most
the end make smile n adore ar
cute story enjoyed reading hats off girl

Originally posted by: tanyaarora2912

First of all can u tll what were they talking in turkish...

Even I m curious to knw nt only ridhima...;) ;)

The OS u have written so far r unique...

N dis ws from ridhima's prospective which made it more appealing...

The way u expressed d insecurities of both d character was commendable!!!!

This series is cuming towards d end...!

We all knw dat but I want u to continue dis...!!!

It is very new as a concept or u cn even convert one of it into a FF...!!!

Please think about it...

If u have any other piece of writing do tll me kk...

N I m luking forward for the last OS eagerly so dat I cn knw what u have stored for us...

Originally posted by: phoo_honey

Okay first thing first... the story is from Riddhima's point of view and so whatever she thinks, understand, believe and also the things she doesn't understand are the thinks we as a reader have to think understand believe and we won't understand those things. That is why I haven't given the subtitles. But the conversation is between Armaan and his mom is about Armaan requesting Gloria not to tell anything as he wants to answer all her misunderstanding. And then Gloria ask him to give Krish to her as it will allow them to have privacy and no disturbance.

Secondly, thanks for the compliments, your appreciation makes me stronger I will definitely think of converting one of the os in FF or at least SS but right now my exmas will be starting and then I will be traveling so it might take some time. Also I am very sick nowadays thanks to the changing weather and my work on new OS isn't yet started for which I am extremely tensed.

Thank you for all the support. ..it means a lot to me

I can't explain how good and emotional the OS is

It was beautiful!

Beautiful!

Read all your OS and they are all amazing. You are an awesome writer. Please continue writing

Rinkykaur19 sweet_ashum chaitrika12 urvisaini zarakhanarlover blessed4

I so love the way you write. Your pieces have a certain calmness in them, like a lonely midnight. And I love it.

This piece was just so good. Riddhima's "Armaan likes it this way" was kind of heart breaking. You can just telk how desperately she wants a piece of his attention to herself.How she is trying to keep him happy. . .Her heels are paining her but she refuse to take them out because "Armaan likes it this way"

This Riddhima in this piece took my heart because she is so fragile so vulnerable so broken over the years and yet with all her broken pieces she loves Armaan and how. She loves him even though he doesn't acknowledge her and yet she loves him.Her undying love, her never ending hope may seem crazy to some people who likes to 'let go' and 'move on' but 'holding on'is tough and sometimes the only way to stay alive.

And Armaan finally did acknowledge her love in front of her when he felt she wouldn't love him anymore, that her feelings maychange coz of misunderstanding and that is something he couldn't take it and he confeesed.
Finally her love got the respect it deserved ^_^ Beautiful piece :)

I am sorry to be a bit late. And I would like to know your name :D

Chitra :)

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

I so love the way you write. Your pieces have a certain calmness in them, like a lonely midnight. And I love it.

This piece was just so good. Riddhima's "Armaan likes it this way" was kind of heart breaking. You can just telk how desperately she wants a piece of his attention to herself.How she is trying to keep him happy. . .Her heels are paining her but she refuse to take them out because "Armaan likes it this way"

This Riddhima in this piece took my heart because she is so fragile so vulnerable so broken over the years and yet with all her broken pieces she loves Armaan and how. She loves him even though he doesn't acknowledge her and yet she loves him.Her undying love, her never ending hope may seem crazy to some people who likes to 'let go' and 'move on' but 'holding on'is tough and sometimes the only way to stay alive.

And Armaan finally did acknowledge her love in front of her when he felt she wouldn't love him anymore, that her feelings maychange coz of misunderstanding and that is something he couldn't take it and he confeesed.
Finally her love got the respect it deserved ^_^ Beautiful piece :)

I am sorry to be a bit late. And I would like to know your name :D

Chitra :)